Shoutbox Archive
tempestt
This also allows for a discontinuous narrative. Think Tarantino style. This can be a dangerous approach and you really want to make sure the entirety of the story is tightly plotted, but if done well it can be very gripping. Good luck!!
May 31, 2014 08:30pm
This also allows for a discontinuous narrative. Think Tarantino style. This can be a dangerous approach and you really want to make sure the entirety of the story is tightly plotted, but if done well it can be very gripping. Good luck!!
May 31, 2014 08:30pm
tempestt
Flashbacks are iffy. They can really interrupt the flow of a narrative. If the flashbacks of hell are extensive you can try alternating chapters. Hell dimension one chapter aftermath the next and tag them at the beginning so the reader knows what to expect.
May 31, 2014 08:26pm
Flashbacks are iffy. They can really interrupt the flow of a narrative. If the flashbacks of hell are extensive you can try alternating chapters. Hell dimension one chapter aftermath the next and tag them at the beginning so the reader knows what to expect.
May 31, 2014 08:26pm
EffulgentEllie
Good point. I tough of doing flash backs then writing thE hell dimension bit as a prologue story for people who may be interested. Hm?
May 31, 2014 08:07pm
Good point. I tough of doing flash backs then writing thE hell dimension bit as a prologue story for people who may be interested. Hm?
May 31, 2014 08:07pm
tempestt
I think it depends on the story you want to tell. If its about the experiences of the hell dimension, that should be the concentration, but if the story is the aftermath and how the experiences effect character behavior then perhaps the hell bits should be told in flashbacks or dialogue & action.
May 31, 2014 06:16pm
I think it depends on the story you want to tell. If its about the experiences of the hell dimension, that should be the concentration, but if the story is the aftermath and how the experiences effect character behavior then perhaps the hell bits should be told in flashbacks or dialogue & action.
May 31, 2014 06:16pm
EffulgentEllie
Here's a quick question for anyone willing to answer. If your hashing out a dimension story, where the time spent is over 500 years, how would you go about it. Write the time spent in the dimension as one story then the return as another or with flash backs?
May 31, 2014 06:00pm
Here's a quick question for anyone willing to answer. If your hashing out a dimension story, where the time spent is over 500 years, how would you go about it. Write the time spent in the dimension as one story then the return as another or with flash backs?
May 31, 2014 06:00pm
knightowl
oops not your story moonmoth's (knightowl turns bright red and hides in the corner.)
May 30, 2014 09:41pm
oops not your story moonmoth's (knightowl turns bright red and hides in the corner.)
May 30, 2014 09:41pm
knightowl
I know your sequel got me to read fin amour. I love a happy ending so I'm looking forward to yours.
May 30, 2014 09:38pm
I know your sequel got me to read fin amour. I love a happy ending so I'm looking forward to yours.
May 30, 2014 09:38pm
pfeifferpack
Knightowl....if you want the story of Fin Amour to be continued (with authors permission) in a wonderful way check out the new WIP The Soul Lies Down by the_moonmoth. It will be featured soon but promises a happier sequel while faithful to the original.
May 30, 2014 08:48pm
Knightowl....if you want the story of Fin Amour to be continued (with authors permission) in a wonderful way check out the new WIP The Soul Lies Down by the_moonmoth. It will be featured soon but promises a happier sequel while faithful to the original.
May 30, 2014 08:48pm
sweetprincipale
Iambean, Midnight4SPike, Juggler, and Stuffandnonsense- aww! I will try to get my stuff together and edit the Sex and Candy Quartet (did you know there were 4 pieces, not three?) and get it on here. Thanks for the love, guys!
May 30, 2014 07:54pm
Iambean, Midnight4SPike, Juggler, and Stuffandnonsense- aww! I will try to get my stuff together and edit the Sex and Candy Quartet (did you know there were 4 pieces, not three?) and get it on here. Thanks for the love, guys!
May 30, 2014 07:54pm
knightowl
Just read fin amour. If you like happy ending do not read, on the other hand if you want a good cry go for it. I was crying like a little baby.
May 30, 2014 07:41pm
Just read fin amour. If you like happy ending do not read, on the other hand if you want a good cry go for it. I was crying like a little baby.
May 30, 2014 07:41pm
4
Hello tag! I don't jump on here often but I do still hang out a tiny bit. Glad you're all showing Susan the love. We would be a mess without her!
May 30, 2014 08:19am
Hello tag! I don't jump on here often but I do still hang out a tiny bit. Glad you're all showing Susan the love. We would be a mess without her!
May 30, 2014 08:19am
SoaringClaws
All kinds of love to you all! EF is awesome because of its wonderful staff and community.
May 29, 2014 05:23pm
All kinds of love to you all! EF is awesome because of its wonderful staff and community.
May 29, 2014 05:23pm
juggler
Thanks so much Susan, the changes look good. You here at EF are much appreciated, thank you to all the administrators !
May 29, 2014 05:02pm
Thanks so much Susan, the changes look good. You here at EF are much appreciated, thank you to all the administrators !
May 29, 2014 05:02pm
EffulgentEllie
Here, here!! Yay for Susan, the Administrators, and Elysian Fields!
May 29, 2014 05:01pm
Here, here!! Yay for Susan, the Administrators, and Elysian Fields!
May 29, 2014 05:01pm
Behind Blue Eyes
And let's not forget ALL OF THE ADMINISTRATORS for keeping this site running! Thank you!
May 29, 2014 04:36pm
And let's not forget ALL OF THE ADMINISTRATORS for keeping this site running! Thank you!
May 29, 2014 04:36pm
Susan
I've made some changes to the Challenges section based on feedback I got here in the shoutbox. Details below in the site news.
May 29, 2014 03:26pm
I've made some changes to the Challenges section based on feedback I got here in the shoutbox. Details below in the site news.
May 29, 2014 03:26pm
Susan
2-3 months was just a guess. I'm open to whatever timeline seems fair. I have no ides what other sites use, so if you have suggestions, let me know.
May 28, 2014 11:27pm
2-3 months was just a guess. I'm open to whatever timeline seems fair. I have no ides what other sites use, so if you have suggestions, let me know.
May 28, 2014 11:27pm
mii22y
I think that'd be fair, though 2-3 months is a bit short compared to other sites.
May 28, 2014 11:20pm
I think that'd be fair, though 2-3 months is a bit short compared to other sites.
May 28, 2014 11:20pm
Susan
Would it be helpful if I made it so people wouldn't show up in the active beta list if they haven't logged on to EF in a while (2 or 3 months?)? I'd guess that if they have been away that long, that they aren't interested in beta-ing for stories that would be posted here.
May 28, 2014 11:15pm
Would it be helpful if I made it so people wouldn't show up in the active beta list if they haven't logged on to EF in a while (2 or 3 months?)? I'd guess that if they have been away that long, that they aren't interested in beta-ing for stories that would be posted here.
May 28, 2014 11:15pm
SoaringClaws
I'm currently doing some beta work and can take on more. I'll fill out the beta profile so people can find me through the beta page.
May 28, 2014 11:02pm
I'm currently doing some beta work and can take on more. I'll fill out the beta profile so people can find me through the beta page.
May 28, 2014 11:02pm
pfeifferpack
Hi and a question to all of you who have allowed your names to be listed offering Beta help. Are you still willing to Beta for writers here? If you need your name removed (or wish to volunteer your services), please let us know. There is at least a couple of writers who have been looking for help
May 28, 2014 07:27pm
Hi and a question to all of you who have allowed your names to be listed offering Beta help. Are you still willing to Beta for writers here? If you need your name removed (or wish to volunteer your services), please let us know. There is at least a couple of writers who have been looking for help
May 28, 2014 07:27pm
juggler
The Sex and Candy trilogy is wonderful Midnight, they sound like what you were looking for. Enjoy~
May 28, 2014 01:55am
The Sex and Candy trilogy is wonderful Midnight, they sound like what you were looking for. Enjoy~
May 28, 2014 01:55am
knightowl
I'm a big girl Mea I'll survive as long as I get my regular dose of spuffy goodness.
May 28, 2014 01:24am
I'm a big girl Mea
I'll survive as long as I get my regular dose of spuffy goodness.May 28, 2014 01:24am
7948
Okay those stories sound great ill check them out
May 27, 2014 11:49pm
Okay those stories sound great ill check them out
May 27, 2014 11:49pm
lambean
Sweetprincipale....speaking of your Sex and candy trilogy, why haven't you shared those delightful tales with your EF audience? I'm sure there are readers here who aren't aware of your vast talent.
May 27, 2014 11:19pm
Sweetprincipale....speaking of your Sex and candy trilogy, why haven't you shared those delightful tales with your EF audience? I'm sure there are readers here who aren't aware of your vast talent.
May 27, 2014 11:19pm
sweetprincipale
Hi Midnight4spike- could it have been the Sex and Candy trilogy? That happens in one of the stories, either See You on the Flip Side, or Should Have Known Better.
May 27, 2014 10:10pm
Hi Midnight4spike- could it have been the Sex and Candy trilogy? That happens in one of the stories, either See You on the Flip Side, or Should Have Known Better.
May 27, 2014 10:10pm