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Joyce commented on Chapter 3 on July 17, 2020 10:31am

Re “new sword”. Glad that Buffy appreciates it given what Spike and Xander went through.

I like the way Anya thinks! Enjoyed this!

 

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Joyce commented on Chapter 2 on July 17, 2020 10:31am

I appreciate your putting in an offhand comment about workmanship from Xander. Very realistic. My mind tends to do that when I see knitted or crocheted items.

What the heck is a bazuki? I get that it’s a musical instrument but I can’t guess what type.

Love the R-E-S-P song!! Your version works too!

LOL re “comparing real to Memorex”!

Yiskok confirmed his knowledge of the sword’s history.

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Joyce commented on Chapter 1 on July 17, 2020 10:30am

Wondering why this was written in first person Xander?

I love that you are up on the Angel show references which I am not that Sebassis dude did stick out since his minions were even more obsequious than Glory’s minions.

This is my first time noticing that Spike and Buffy actually did get married. Yay!

Re the “misconcepting” LOL! It makes sense when they still produce other bodily ichor and such.

That was very stupid of Xander to do that after all that time rehabbing. He’s still effectively young and stupid.

Re payphones. I think they are still needed. Cell phones require charging and sometimes drain way too easily. What is one to do when in a lurch if that happens?

Finally Xander thinks first of Anya! It’s about time!

No wonder Spike is being so stubborn about that PARTICULAR sword!

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Sirya5117 commented on Chapter 3 on April 22, 2018 11:48pm Liked

So much fun to hear from Xander's POV! 

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magnus374 commented on Chapter 3 on December 25, 2016 09:02am

And this ends well, I really liked what we saw of Xander and Anya, I have greatly enjoyed his point of view.

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magnus374 commented on Chapter 2 on December 25, 2016 08:58am

It's  so great the way the story is written, the fighting, what is happening. Having Xander tell it does ad something.

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magnus374 commented on Chapter 1 on December 25, 2016 08:41am

Seeing things from Xander's point of view was good. I did like the way he is thinking and how he thought about Spike, and other things.

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