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holetoledo commented on IV on July 05, 2019 05:08pm

Oh my goodness I love it so much

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MiseEnPlace commented on I on July 25, 2018 09:14pm

Dark, disturbing, gritty, and hot with an ending that starts them on the way to something better. 

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annamatte commented on IV on November 10, 2016 06:12pm Liked

Awww. hearts A sweet ending for a dark, beautiful story. I really enjoyed it! 

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annamatte commented on III on November 10, 2016 05:47pm Liked

 The fighting scene was amazing. And I loved the last part of the chapter. Well done!

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annamatte commented on II on November 10, 2016 04:44pm Liked

I loved the chapter. It was great to see Buffy in action. But it's so sad that the Army use her as a tool, as their lethal weapon.We can see that humankind can be more evil and fearsome than demonkind.

 

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annamatte commented on I on November 10, 2016 03:07pm Liked

Good start! This story is intriguing.I like the stories that fully exploit the potential of the Initiative's (or better the former Initiative's) evilness.

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Mya222 commented on IV on September 29, 2016 08:55am Liked

The Black Widow Buffy was written brilliantly.  It is so dark and dim in the beginning, but ends in such a sweet way.

 

flowers

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nojiri23 commented on I on August 08, 2016 07:38pm Liked

scared

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KayleeDiane commented on IV on February 03, 2016 09:46pm Liked

This was a serious mind trip, loved every second of it. It's horrifying to think that they could strip away her personality and just leave a shell like that behind. Loved that spike was able to break her out of some of it even before they removed the chip, loved this story!

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Tzigane commented on IV on January 31, 2016 07:46pm Liked

Nice twist on the series endings. I like the sweetness of their reconnection in contrast to her harsh persona beforehand. {applause}

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bewildered commented on I on January 29, 2016 08:13pm Liked

Mmmmm, love me some dark futurefic... I am torn between wanting more and thinking it's perfect at its current length. Which probably means it's the right length, but I need more of your writing. Don't know if you will ever get this, as it is ten years(!) since this was posted, but if this ever reaches you, THANK YOU!

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djellibabe commented on IV on January 28, 2016 01:56pm Liked

 Goodness! That was different and amazing!

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pfeifferpack commented on IV on January 27, 2016 06:34am Liked

Wonderful ending.  I can see her volunteering especially to protect the other girls.  Wankers with the Initiative would take it much further than she expected or agreed to.  Glad Spike found her and fixed it.

Kathleen

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eternallyec commented on IV on January 27, 2016 06:07am Liked

Perfect ending to a perfect story. Sigh. So many things left to be worked through, but it's still a perfect close. Gotta leave some things to our imaginations, after all. :) So bittersweet to think about all of the things she's gone through but it's comforting to know she has Spike on her side to help her get through everything. Thank you for sharing this tale, I truly love it! 

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eternallyec commented on III on January 27, 2016 06:02am Liked

Oh, this is just perfect. Poor Spike. Poor Buffy. I really love everything about this story--your attention to detail is just incredible! Their fight was great, the sex was hot and I just love love love that it was her words that made him realize who she was. And her reaction... Oh, my poor, poor girl. I teared up for her, and that last line... applauseFantastic!!

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eternallyec commented on I on January 27, 2016 05:52am Liked

I am just fascinated with everything about this! The set up is outstanding--just enough information to hook me but keep me wondering, so well written... and that opening. faint I am so bloody curious to learn more! Poor Buffy with a chip in her head--I bet Spike won't find the reality as amusing as he did when he cracked that joke! Love her reaction to his picture and can't wait for them to meet! This really is truly excellent!

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ScarlettDuck commented on IV on April 12, 2015 11:22am

This was good, but felt too short. Somehow doesn't feel finished.

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watcher125 commented on IV on April 05, 2015 08:58pm Liked

Wow! Cool!

But i think, it wants to be much longer and much darker.

I thought Buffy had submitted herself to Initiative after findining out how her friends ''spared her new shiny life from unnecessary

messing with by corrupted associates of Wolfram&Hart.'' Of course, no Rome and no ''Bloody Immortal''. It all was a plot of Council to ''protect her'', as she thought, from Angel spies.

 

 

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SoaringClaws commented on IV on February 26, 2014 03:02pm

That was intense! Very gritty, urban feel to the beginning. I loved it! I'm glad it had a happy ending too.

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magnus374 commented on IV on September 12, 2010 03:10pm Liked

Dark story, but the ending was happy.

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Kavien commented on I on June 27, 2010 03:01pm Liked

Love this story! I often redue my stories and add to it make it more complex, what if like with Spike the chip that they put in ment she couldn't hurt humans, cause she had gone off on some of the other solders... just thinking...

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slyn11 commented on IV on October 06, 2009 07:52am Liked

great story...not even the government can erase Spike....he is that special.  I love how you wrote this, you just thrust us into the heart of the action. We were right there with Buffy as she prowled the club and seduced vamps.

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syliao commented on III on May 14, 2009 04:49am Liked

This... reminds me of Dollhouse! Omg! Really great chapter.

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syliao commented on I on May 14, 2009 03:42am Liked

Ummm, soo good. This is fascinating, and I can't wait to see how it progresses! :)

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Anderida commented on IV on July 31, 2007 04:04pm Liked

Lovely dark fic but with a good ending.  Loved Buffy's Faithesque behaviour!  Thanks for sharing.

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Dolau commented on IV on June 06, 2007 09:48am Liked

Thank U so much for a brilliant reread. Love your style of writing this story. And great plot. Loved how some of Faith shined through as Slayer-traits. Just amazing all the way.. :-) *bows before thee* LOL

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Dolau commented on III on June 06, 2007 09:41am Liked

Heartbreakingly good.. Hot fight followed by the ally-sex. Just awesome... :-)

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Dolau commented on II on June 06, 2007 09:31am Liked

So caught up in this. Amazing description of her hunt and fights in the club. And love how her tsimplistic/basic houghtprocess shines through. The army really did a number on her. Looking forward to her finding Spike..

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Dolau commented on I on June 06, 2007 09:24am Liked

OMG, read this waayyy back, and just had to get me a reread...

Awesome powerful style of writing. Really feeling her excistence..

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Irina commented on IV on December 08, 2006 08:35pm Liked

What a powerful story, so wonderfully dark, and incredibly well written. Nice work!

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