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Green commented on Chapter 7 - Party, Party, Party - Part III on November 21, 2020 12:10am Liked

Now that was a whole lotta fun. They'll have to do it again sometime when no one is pregnant 😁.

Wonderful 💚

Author's Response on November 21, 2020 08:25am

i'm tickled pink you liked it. i was nervous how it would read - that it wouldn't come out the same way as i saw it. 

thank you, you've made my morning!!!

spoiler : the next chapter will be the wedding day... 

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fyreburned commented on Chapter 7 - Party, Party, Party - Part III on October 24, 2020 05:03pm Liked

Great job! 

Author's Response on October 24, 2020 05:53pm

thank you so very much for dropping a line! 

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Fluffypuppy commented on Chapter 7 - Party, Party, Party - Part III on October 24, 2020 09:16am

Lots of fun.   We all know faith would have won in a level field 

roll on the wedding 

Author's Response on October 24, 2020 11:26am

aw, thanks for the 'lots of fun' - that's what i was striving for, despite having a very long chapter of the actual races. funny fact - i had to look up to see if it was healthy for a pregnant woman to go-kart. and when i saw that it wasn't i felt i had boxed myself in where it concerns faith. initially she was much more of a contender in the races. so you're definitely right - faith would have definitely won if she'd been able to race. 

these last three chapters/the parties have totally kicked my arse. after i postedit (very early in the morning my time) i decided it was a good thing i'm writing two stories; it'll let me decompress before tackling the actual wedding day. and i haven't decided if i'm going to include the pedicure with all the ladies (minus willow who can't come due to work) or not ... so hopefully soon i'll finish off another chapter of FW and get back to the wedding soon! (fyi - i've already got the acrtual wedding ceremony itself already written ..)

thank you for dropping a line. my muse has been satisfied ... 

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magnus374 commented on Chapter 7 - Party, Party, Party - Part III on October 24, 2020 08:31am

Of course they would enjoy some go-kart . It was a lot of information about the races, but that's not a bad thing, it allowed us to see it perfectly. I had actually forgotten about what will happen to Willow but this is fitting. 

As always it is great to see so many people enjoy themselves.

Author's Response on October 24, 2020 11:20am

i debated long and hard about having that much information about the actual races, since the true importance was the togetherness. (and truth be told it took a while to plot the races. and i had no idea who would end up as the actual winner; the numbers gave it to buffy, and i was so very surprised.)

yeah, the willow part of it was kind of uncomfortable for me to face. i wasn't sure if i wanted to go down the route (showing her up and down behavior), or just leave it as a footnote of sorts. but i think my muse in the guise of faith and amy wanted to put in some foreshadowing. 

thank you, once again, for your lovely comment!

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Green commented on Chapter 6 - Party, Party, Party - Part II on September 29, 2020 08:08am Liked

Lol poor Dawn, Buffy scared her half to death with all her printouts 😁.

...not be Danica Patrick in my car,”  that's great 💕.

This all turned out really good and you had everyone there. 

I'm totally on board for a Faith/Jonathon relationship, she'd blow his mind 😉.

Wonderful 💚

Author's Response on September 29, 2020 09:43am

yup. and i just realized buffy did that on purpose, too. (she knew dawn wouldn't be able to resist snooping ...) and of course my muse didn't tell me that ... 

the main purpose of the poker game/paint and sip and belly dancing was to really show who was important to our spuffy, and have them interact, just a bit.  (the next part i think is gonna be the most fun to write, and the most challenging - more togetherness, but with more adrenaline (hint/spoiler : your second line isn't far off ...) 

well, i'm sorry that a faith/jonathan relationship of the romantic or sexual isn't in the cards. HOWEVER, spoiler -- just because it's you and i adore you - she'll chose him to be her lamaze coach. and they will become very close, friend-wise. but i gotta admit, if the later years hadn't been written, i could totally see a faith/jonathan relationship!!!! (and you're completely right - she'd blow his mind!!)

thank you so very much for leaving this sweet review!  my day will start off with such a warm fuzzy!!

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magnus374 commented on Chapter 6 - Party, Party, Party - Part II on September 28, 2020 12:22pm

Good to see Buffy and Dawn, you can easily find way too much information on weddings if you look for it. Buffy had really gathered a lot. 

I did enjoy the bachelor and bachelorette parties. The scenes was described in a good way, I especially liked the paintings. The interaction was really good to see and everyone had a good time. It was good to see all this.

Author's Response on September 28, 2020 10:34pm

i realized almost from the beginning of this fic that i would practically need to plan a wedding in order to be write about it. and you're definitely right - the more i looked the more there was, and the time got away from me. i can't even begin to calculate how many hours i've spent just researching ... 

i struggled for some reason with this chapter; i think part of it was streamlining the first parts of both parties, especially since it was the 'combined party/competition' (surprise for our characters) that i really wanted to focus on. i'm hoping i can get the pieces out of my brain!

and i'm feeling the warm fuzzies about your review - i really had to think about the painting subjects and how to 'just touch' on the paint and sip, the belly dancing and the poker games without getting ... too much.  i'm breathing such a sigh of relief!!!

thank you, so very, very much! 

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fyreburned commented on Chapter 6 - Party, Party, Party - Part II on September 28, 2020 02:25am Liked

 Looking forward to seeing where the remainder of this party is!

Author's Response on September 28, 2020 10:19pm

i have bits and pieces in my head, and i just need to put the jumbly mess in some sort of order and then onto paper (or word doc). hopefully i'll have it here in the next week (or maybe two)... 

thank you for taking the time to drop a line! 

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Green commented on Chapter 5 - Party, Party, Party - Part I on September 11, 2020 01:56am Liked

That was creative and fun, and Faith was a hoot. 💚

Author's Response on September 11, 2020 09:40am

thank you for that - the fun was what i was shooting for; the funny - that was all my muse's fault. she kept saying faith's lines in my head. and sometimes i was laughing too hard to type it correctly. 

 

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Fluffypuppy commented on Chapter 5 - Party, Party, Party - Part I on September 11, 2020 01:40am Liked

Looking forward to the party

love the email addresses 

Author's Response on September 11, 2020 09:37am

aw, you didn't have to review again since i accidentally deleted the first one, which again, can't believe i did that. 

but yes the party scene (possibly scenes) are being crafted as we speak. i hope it measures up ... 

thank you again! 

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imperialjade commented on Chapter 1 - Looking Back Now ... on September 10, 2020 02:20pm Liked

Another great chapter. Love the email addresses too. Will you do a separate AN to note who each email is for? Some I could figure out, but some I couldn't. Anyways, waiting for the parties to start!

Author's Response on September 10, 2020 05:02pm

thank you, thank you! and yes, i did update the chapter end notes to include the email addresses, to whom they belong and how i came up with them; you weren't the only one who mentioned it ... 

and i hope part ii lives up to the hype ... 

 

imperialjade Replied on September 11, 2020 01:18pm

squeeeeeeee! THANK YOU! heart

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magnus374 commented on Chapter 5 - Party, Party, Party - Part I on September 10, 2020 01:45pm

A lot of brainstorming for ideas and they did find some to choose. I did like the talking going on here, it was good and amusing. Speaking about amusing, good job on those email addresses. I admit that I wasn't totally sure whom everyone was but most of them I got, you did really well with them.

Author's Response on September 10, 2020 05:00pm

i'm elated you liked the first part - i have to admit i was actually as i was 'hearing' faith's comments. this tickles me ... pink (which doesn't make any sense - my favorite color is green). 

pleased, thrilled - they don't cover how i felt at your review of the email addresses. made my day!! oh, i went ahead and edited the chapter end notes for the email addresses, to whom they belong, and how i came up with them... 

magnus374 Replied on September 11, 2020 01:39pm

It was the not so common Buffy characters that gave me trouble. I could follow your logic when pointed out, so again I will say, "good job ".

Author's Response on September 11, 2020 07:22pm

you make me blush ... you're reviews are better than dark chocolate!!! or better yet chips and dip!!! (now i'm hungry ...)

oh, as i read back my initial response i was shaking my head - my brain wasn't in it's right place. what i was trying to get across was : i was actually hearing faith's comments in my mind as i was typing the brainstorming ideas for the parties.  (i hope that makes better sense...) 

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fyreburned commented on Chapter 5 - Party, Party, Party - Part I on September 10, 2020 06:10am Liked

Loved the email addresses!

Author's Response on September 10, 2020 12:29pm

glad you did - they were fun to write! 

(my initial thought was an actual chapter, not just the snipets it became - apparently my muse has a very obnoxious sense of humor, and wouldn't let me do anything else to it! but i have to say some of faith's lines still get me to chuckling - i cannot take credit for them - HERE MUSE-Y, MUSE-Y, MUSE-Y ... )

Author's Response on September 10, 2020 04:56pm

since i've received a few requests, i updated the chapter end notes to put in the email addresses and to whom they belong to (and how i came up with the email addresses) ... 

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Green commented on Chapter 4 - Let Them Have Cake! on August 19, 2020 12:07pm Liked

Yummy chapter with a side of playfulness and I'm with your muse about the chips 😁. 💕💚

Author's Response on August 19, 2020 12:45pm

i'm happy you liked the playfulness. (i was striving for yummy choices, and hopefully i achieved that part ...) and my muse finally sulked off after realizing i wasn't lying about the chips not being in the house. she's now hiding ... i

thank you, again, for stopping by and reviewing! my muse just peeked her head out ... 

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magnus374 commented on Chapter 4 - Let Them Have Cake! on August 15, 2020 11:04am

I liked seeing Amy's view, her nervousness but also all the work she put in. Also good to hear about Merrick.

Cake tasting would of course require several kind of cake to test and they did get a lot to enjoy. The design looks clean, the big flowers is giving it more life, otherwise it could have looked like a big candle. Nice to see Buffy and Spike being this playful during this. 

Adding more about Amy's experiments would give us more to enjoy but the chapter doesn't need it, so I'm happy no matter what you do.

Author's Response on August 15, 2020 11:17am

yes, i wanted to see more of the good amy (and not the amy from comics). and the merrick thing kinda popped into my head. i decided to go with the tv show merrick vice the movie merrick. 

and i agree about the cake - i wanted it simple, but i was afraid, without the flowers, it looked too ... stiff and boring. and you comparing it to a candle - that's a perfect description of what i didn't want. 

i just couldn't resist the playfulness - i really wanted to show them both having fun. and i figured spike would actually want to know these things (as opposed to using him as a voice to ask questions that readers may not know or want to know more about). plus, i figured the sensual words would still fit in with the rating. 

and your last sentence is basically what i thought too - the chapter doesn't need it. (i just couldn't get the thought of pecan sandies with butterscotch chips out of my mind ...)

thank you again for reviewing; they really do mean the world to me. (and my muse is hugging the computer now after reading your lovely words). 

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Fluffypuppy commented on Chapter 4 - Let Them Have Cake! on August 15, 2020 09:31am Liked

Now I m hungry.  Loving a light hearted interlude 

Author's Response on August 15, 2020 10:54am

oops, sorry this made you hungry. i was so focused on the details of making it sound yummy, my brain practically went on vacation to that final fact - IT'S FOOD, and i may leave the readers with the need for snacking ... 

i'm hoping this chapter wasn't too bad to read. 

thank you for dropping a line. my muse is now smiling at me. (it's kinda creepy, that smile...)

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fyreburned commented on Chapter 4 - Let Them Have Cake! on August 15, 2020 07:54am Liked

Ooh, those cookies sound wonderful! 

Author's Response on August 15, 2020 09:19am

for some reason this idea popped into my head while i was creating the chapter; it wouldn't leave my mind. i've never tasted a cookie like this, but for some reason butterscotch is my current go-to flavor. there are recipes out there for something like this. i think i'll give it a whirl. 

thanks for dropping a line. (and my muse is now craving those cookies; her favorite thing to eat are reviews, but now she's screaming in my ear about butterscotch pecan sandies ... )

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Green commented on Chapter 3 - Blackmail and Venues and Flowers, Oh My! on August 10, 2020 11:36am Liked

Oh Dawn I love her so 💕💕💕.

I think Nikki was the perfect choice for the flower shop owner. "And your husband is absolutely lickable,”  absolutely great 😁.

And again the bouquet is gorgeous. 

Wonderful 💚

Author's Response on August 10, 2020 12:46pm

you absolutely made my day with this!! 

i'm so glad you liked dawn's part. i was kinda nervous that the interaction was a bit too over-the-top. 

and it absolutely tickles my toes (in a good way) that you thought nikki was the perfect choice; i cannot tell you how much i agonized over it [when looking at the minor characters, i really wanted someone a bit older that our buffy, but someone who was still young enough that could be relatable to the point of feeling an instant connection. i thought kendra was too young, kathy too irritating, kennedy (too young AND too irritating), gwendolyn post (too evil), lydia (too ... stodgy), kate locksley or nina ash (don't know why but neither of them seemed a good fit for buffy)]

i remember reading that line somewhere in a fic (couldn't find it, though to give credit); i always loved that line (author, whoever you are, thou art wonderful). 

and since the focus was on the flowers, i thought it couldn't hurt to have the picture again. 

again, green, i'm so grateful for your kind words; you make me smile and make it all worth the worry of doing right by those that read/care ... 

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magnus374 commented on Chapter 3 - Blackmail and Venues and Flowers, Oh My! on August 08, 2020 09:25am

I liked how Dawn used some blackmail to get Hank to pay some money. He actually gave more than she demanded. I think he actually was somewhat impressed with Dawn. Buffy wanted a simple wedding but Joyce isn't letting her out so easy, rather are many things she has to deal with. We had another somewhat supernatural moment. They do feel a bit weird since I don't really know what to make of them. I did like the inclusion of Nikki Wood. 

All in all, I do like these chapters, they have a good feeling to them.

Author's Response on August 08, 2020 12:37pm

i wanted to get some comeupance for joyce and buffy. and it was time for hank to man up; who better than dawn who has never had a problem with voicing things that didn't want to get ... voiced. i admit, i had initially written a small scene afterwards were dawn calls him and thanks him and calls him 'dad'. but for some reason it didn't ring true, so i deleted. 

yes, joyce isn't letting her out to easy. ironically this buffy is learning what the other buffy in 'First Wives' has truly yet to accept. 

as for the 'supernatural moment' ... i wasn't really going for supernatural, so i guess i flubbed that up. i was really just going for ... a connection. so i guess i should re-work that portion. but i'm glad you liked nikki in this. (what i had in mind, but didn't voice yet -- not sure if i should or even how i should -- was have nikki speak to buffy as daughter to daughter as to the mother point of view, maybe driving home those very important points. but with buffy employing nikki, you have that little fine line..)

anyway, i'm so relieved and so 'warm fuzzied' that you like the chapters and even more have a good feeling when reading them. i'm always trying to de-sweeten them. ironic, since the title .. 

thank you, so very much for pointing out these things - the good AND the questionable. i know i've said it before, but it's no less true. 

magnus374 Replied on August 08, 2020 02:41pm

So not supernatural then. The reaction seemed so strong that I was sure it was supernatural.

Author's Response on August 08, 2020 03:40pm

I will definitely adjust that, cause I'm sure you won't be the only one with that reaction. Thanks again for pointing that out. You points always rein me back in when I go a bit too far. I am so grateful.

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fyreburned commented on Chapter 3 - Blackmail and Venues and Flowers, Oh My! on August 08, 2020 07:41am Liked

I'm DEFINITELY enjoying it! More, please! Thanks, again!

Author's Response on August 08, 2020 11:44am

i can't help the warm fuzzies this gives me.  as hard as writing is at times, i'm definitely having fun writing this addition. and i never would have had my muse -- who eats up reviews like a cat licks up cream -- hadn't yelled at me 'you just gotta do this' when she saw your review. 

and more you shall have. i had originally wanted to include the cake in chapter 3 but after finishing the flower segment, realized the cake should be it's own chapter. i''m debating if i should write the cake portion of this story first or start writing the next chapter of First Wives. i'll let my muse guide me there... 

thank you so much for your inspiration and your lovely reviews. like i said i definitely get warm fuzzies!!

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Fluffypuppy commented on Chapter 3 - Blackmail and Venues and Flowers, Oh My! on August 08, 2020 06:52am Liked

Gotta love how sneaky dawn hitting hank where it hurts

Author's Response on August 08, 2020 11:24am

yup, totally agree! at first i thought it would be joyce making the call to hank, but the more i thought about it, it seemed more of something dawn would do. in canon i always felt joyce and buffy were a smidgen more hurt than angry. then i realized if hank had basically ignored joyce's communications before and even buffy's (ie it took five tries for buffy to even speak to her dad), he wouldn't respond to joyce's request. but i can see canon dawn doing something like this AND getting the response wanted. but maybe it's just wishful thinking. 

thank you for reading and reviewing; the feedback is truly helpful and inspiring/motivating. 

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Silverwolf89 commented on Chapter 2 - Say Yes to the Dress on July 25, 2020 04:47pm

This is perfect. I want to know ALL of the wedding things. Reading about that journey and the feelings is where it's at. 

Author's Response on July 25, 2020 04:53pm

perfect?!? i'm blushing ... i'm overwhelmed in a good way you think it was just enough; i worried it would seem too rushed or too ... sweet. i definitely don't want the readers to get diabetes just from reading this fic (don't want it to be hazardous to anyone's health ... hehehe)

i haven't started writing the next chapter, but i have plotted it out in my mind ... sigh. i guess i should listen to that muse first (my 'first wives' muse is strangely silent - maybe she's eating the wedding cake i'm thinking buffy and spike will have ...)

thank you for your sweet words. (and for me too it's all about the journey ...)

 

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fyreburned commented on Chapter 2 - Say Yes to the Dress on July 25, 2020 07:07am Liked

Thank you SO much for following up on my suggestion!!! I'm floored! I'm definitely loving this! And definitely looking forward to the next chapter and more! 

Author's Response on July 25, 2020 01:24pm

once i read your reivew (and i do re-read them, too) my mind wouldn't stop imaging how i'd do this scene or that suggestion or what envisioned for them ... it started to write itself, and i'm just along for the ride. and i'm so glad -- more than glad -- that you are enjoying this - THIS IS FOR YOU! 

(the good news is i can't stop thinking of the next chapter of this story, when i should be focusing on writing the next chapter for 'first wives' ... hint : i think the next chapter of 'sweeter' is called 'bouquets and venues and cakes oh my!' ...) argh!! i need to focus on the other one too ... i do not know how other authors manage to write multiple stories without one or the other suffering ... 

thank you, again - first for the inspiration and for your lovely review.  

fyreburned Replied on July 28, 2020 03:12pm

You are VERY welcome! So glad to know there's more to the story! And, thank YOU very much!

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Fluffypuppy commented on Chapter 2 - Say Yes to the Dress on July 24, 2020 03:11pm Liked

Love the dresses and the lighthearted banter. So wanna see the wedding picture 

Author's Response on July 25, 2020 01:50am

i'm happy, happy, happy you liked what i thought was the main point of all this - the dress(es, but just as a side) and the interaction between the characters. i didn't want to drag it out, and i kept re-editing and changing, so your sweet and simple words really brought it home that i did what i set out to do.  thank you, thank you!!!

wow - the wedding picture ... hmm ... i'll have to see if i can find someone who can help with that because i am in no way imaging savvy enough to do it on  my own.... i'll have to get back to you on that one ... 

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Meavepagan commented on Chapter 2 - Say Yes to the Dress on July 24, 2020 01:11pm Liked

Cake tasting.  I am just loving this.  I can't wait for the next chapter.

Author's Response on July 24, 2020 02:27pm

yeah, that's what i was thinking of. now i'm just trying to think of ways not to induce a diabetic coma while writing the chapter ... 

your words just gave me a writer-happy! 

thank you so very much for your kind words; truly makes writing this tale worth it!

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Green commented on Chapter 2 - Say Yes to the Dress on July 24, 2020 10:38am Liked

💕 Love the dresses and the color choices per character and their day was fun and stress free, just how it should be. 

I say the whole 9 yards but it's your story, I'm along for the ride either way 😊. 💚

Author's Response on July 24, 2020 11:55am

yay, i'm glad you liked the selections. i just couldn't help it; the site had more colors for that same style dress (zapaka.com, if you're interested), and when i saw that i thought of her close friends and how much of a kick buffy would get out of it. other brides may not, but our buffy is different... and yes, i wanted to portray the day as something positive and fun, as opposed to an experience a lot of brides have when it concerns multiple people at the bridal shops ... 

awwww - you make writing this stress-free. i am beyond humbled by your kind words. and i truly hope i can live up to it ... 

thank you, thank you! 

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magnus374 commented on Chapter 2 - Say Yes to the Dress on July 24, 2020 07:29am

I admit that being a man and all, I don't care that much for dresses. I did still find this enjoyable though. It was good for them to get together and do this. I liked all the inrpteraction between the characters we saw. The descriptions of everything in this chapter was good to see, well done.

This chapter was describing in a good way, so I have no problem with seeing all those moments before the actual wedding.

Author's Response on July 24, 2020 10:23am

yeah, even as a female i don't do dresses; i get itchy mentally. but i know that buffy would and so would her friends. so it was fun to write from the interaction stand-point. 

'the small moments' in the planning is really what i'm going for with this fic, so hopefully it won't give one diabetes  ...

and you've started my day with a nice bang. thank you for that. (and now onto starting chapter 7 for 'first wives' ...)

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duke6665 commented on Chapter 1 - Looking Back Now ... on July 12, 2020 07:54pm Liked

Great chapter. Ugh as someone who has been married I can attest I hated all the planning. And I didn't have a huge one either but damn...never again.

Author's Response on July 12, 2020 08:00pm

thank you for the comment; my writer's heart is singing! 

i've never been married before, but i know from speaking with those that have, they stated what you just did - planning is hell. so i decided to try to do what a lot of people truly want to do - but i also recognize this'll probably only work in the fanfiction world. and i truly understand about the 'never again'. after planning this wedding, i'm the first person to say 'i'll never do this in real life!'. 

thank you, again for taking the time to send a  review. i'm thrilled down to my toes!

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Fluffypuppy commented on Chapter 1 - Looking Back Now ... on July 12, 2020 05:29pm Liked

Simple wedding is probably better 

will the cats be involved?  Or just the pictures 

Author's Response on July 12, 2020 05:35pm

yeah, i'm not knocking the large elaborate affairs, but for me personally, simple is the way to go. and i thought it would be the best way for buffy and spike to view their nuptials. 

huh ... i hadn't thought about the cats - inasmuch if they would be involved in the wedding or the party afterwards. but ... i think i could make it work. atleast in caritas. i'm not so sure a restaurant would allow cats ... but definitely food for thought ... i just didn't want to forget they are a part of the household and would have to get used to children and babies ... you've definitely put some lovely ideas in my brain ... 

thank you for the review!!!

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Green commented on Chapter 1 - Looking Back Now ... on July 12, 2020 02:35pm Liked

I'm happy to see this continued and looking forward to more. The dress, flowers and cake are gorgeous. Simple, pretty and bright 💕. Spike and Buffy's wedding idea is perfect, my kind of gathering. 

Wonderful 💚

Author's Response on July 12, 2020 03:04pm

awwww... now i'm a big puddle of goo. i'm so thrilled you like it so far. i confess this is basically my ideal wedding, so i projected everything into the buffy character, but it surprisingly seems to work. you've nailed the description for what i had in mind for this wedding. yay! i feel like sally field ... which truly dates me, but i can't help it ... 

thank you so very much for your kind and sweet words!

Green Replied on July 13, 2020 05:24am

My husband and I are talking about renewing our vows on our 30th (witch is in two and a half years, we had a justice of the peace wedding) and this is a great idea (minus the suit, my husband would laugh at me) our children, grandkids and a handful of close relatives and friends, casual, food and fun 😊. 💚

Green Replied on July 13, 2020 05:24am

My husband and I are talking about renewing our vows on our 30th (witch is in two and a half years, we had a justice of the peace wedding) and this is a great idea (minus the suit, my husband would laugh at me) our children, grandkids and a handful of close relatives and friends, casual, food and fun 😊. 💚

Author's Response on July 16, 2020 04:02pm

awwwww ... now i'm truly all gooey inside. CONGRATULATIONS ON YOUR UPCOMING ANNIVERSARY - 2 AND A HALF YEARS WILL GO BY SO QUICKLY!! 

(my computer is eating my emails - i'm convinced it's a vampire demon; i didn't see this response ...)

i hope you have a wonderful celebration - and it's the best knowing its simple but no less meaningful.  i'm so touched that i need to find the tissues ... where is the stupid kleenex??!? if i can't find it soon ... the computer will get it ... 

with these few words, my day is set back to rights again. 

thank you, thank you and i wish you many smiles and laughter and fun - and all that good stuff!!

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Meavepagan commented on Chapter 1 - Looking Back Now ... on July 12, 2020 11:49am Liked

I love this so far. I can't wait to see where you take it.  I need MORE.

Author's Response on July 12, 2020 12:11pm

I'm glad you like it. you were always so supportive for the original story, and i'm thrilled beyond speaking that you like this and even want more of it. 

spoiler : i've got the 'trying on wedding dress' sequence definitely circling... 

i'm curious - what did you think of the dress and flowers?  i wanted something simple but pretty for the dress, and i wanted bright for the flowers since it's a summer wedding. 

again, thank you so very much for dropping your thoughts on this!! it definitely makes me feel that it's worth pursuing ... 

Meavepagan Replied on July 12, 2020 04:33pm

Love the dress.  The flowers are pretty.  But wouldn't choose them for myself.  I prefer pastels.  But I am an old fuddy duddy and have always preferred pastels.  The choice is a good one if you want bright colors then you should do it.  This is your baby.  

Meavepagan Replied on July 12, 2020 04:33pm

Love the dress.  The flowers are pretty.  But wouldn't choose them for myself.  I prefer pastels.  But I am an old fuddy duddy and have always preferred pastels.  The choice is a good one if you want bright colors then you should do it.  This is your baby.  

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