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MaggieLaFey commented on Harrison on November 09, 2020 06:39pm Liked

Ok, so first of all, please tell me that by the end of the fic Riley has found Sam and fallen for her and they've started their HEA. Because I need this hero to be happy for ever. Thank you. 

THAT SAID, Spike is a lovely flower of good will and I love him. And kinda think Buffy must be REALLY zoned out to think he'd just accept those two brief texts at face value. Haha makes sense, alas! 

As for Buffy herself, I can't imagine how she could go to WORK like that?! Poor baby!! She gotta treat herself! And man, do I hope a certain asshole gets his ass locked in prison.

Thanks for sharing!! I can't wait to see how sweet it'll be when Spike and Buffy will be safely together again (even though I suspect there'll be hell to pay before then). <3

Author's Response on November 11, 2020 07:28am

Ahahaha bless him! It's not his show but he's chill, I think. 

Ahhh yes bless him - and Buffy was SOOO out, poor lil babbi - they're both such babies and awkward at this so it might take em a little while longer to find their feet.

Ugh, right!? I think she's already had a lot of days off so she kinda needs to get to it I guess - and sitting around hasn't really been her thing, especially not now her house/security has been breached.

No worries! Eeeee hopefully they'll sort out their shit soon!

Author's Response on November 11, 2020 07:28am

Ahahaha bless him! It's not his show but he's chill, I think. 

Ahhh yes bless him - and Buffy was SOOO out, poor lil babbi - they're both such babies and awkward at this so it might take em a little while longer to find their feet.

Ugh, right!? I think she's already had a lot of days off so she kinda needs to get to it I guess - and sitting around hasn't really been her thing, especially not now her house/security has been breached.

No worries! Eeeee hopefully they'll sort out their shit soon!

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magnus374 commented on Harrison on November 09, 2020 12:40pm

As I mentioned before, I get some kind of kick out of seeing Riley being this kind of good person. He is acting really well here. I was worried that Spike would do something rash but it does seem like he is thinking things through. Still with everything going on, the secrets they have are in danger.

Author's Response on November 11, 2020 07:13am

Yeah, bless him! He's a good lad.

Fingers crossed Spike will stay smart and stay safe! 

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MaggieLaFey commented on Secrets and Shattered Trust on November 04, 2020 07:21pm Liked

Soo good to see an update to this!! Yay!! <3

Although I gotta admit that I really don't understand Buffy here... like, seriously don't haha. I thought they were going for honest communication :c I guess old habits die hard and all that... though I'm still hoping she'll eventually be honest and open with Spike and he won't have to discover all of this by finding her and Riley alone. That would be just devastating and I can perfectly imagine these two insecure babies just lashing at each other instead of explaining the situation, if it happened... 

Anyway, Riley remains the undisputed hero of the story. *swoons* lol he's just such. A. Good. Person.

As for Mr. Pratt, is it too much to hope for Riley to figuratively slapping Spike and Buffy on the head and just calling the police already? Please?? IT'S THE HERO WE ALL DESERVE. 

Seriously, stoked to see you back to updating. :) Hope more is coming soon, but even if not, thanks for sharing!! 

Author's Response on November 05, 2020 07:57am

Yay! Sorry it's been a hot minute! I didn't wanna release this part unless I knew I'd have time to follow it up, since it's violent and tense etc. 

 

I get what you mean about not understanding Buffy - I thought she would be doubting her instincts a little, not wanting to interfere or exacerbate the situation, and I think also she's scared of ruining the relationship since it's kinda new. But I'll try to explain motives etc better from now on eeeek. It's hard bc as much as we say we wanna change we also sometimes backslide and run from growth if we're feeling threatened etc. 

Ahaha bless Riley! Poor thing just doin his best to do the right thing.

Yep we defs need some police at some point, to sort this bs out

 

And sorry again for disappearing! Uni is still nippin at my heels! 

 

I hope you're well xx

MaggieLaFey Replied on November 05, 2020 08:57am

Do not apologise for disappearing!! I do it all the time with messaging, let alone with STORIES that actually take TIME AND EFFORT to write haha and besides, this is a gift you're giving us!! Nothing is owed and I'm just thankful to get more of it <3 That said, I do appreciate that you waited until you had a follow-up to this particular chapter haha.

as much as we say we wanna change we also sometimes backslide and run from growth if we're feeling threatened etc. -- You're absolutely right and honestly, I was trying to remind myself of that as I read. It's just hard to keep this in mind sometimes, especially when your own approach is the complete opposite of a character's haha.

I'm definitely looking forward to the time when the police will arrest the shit out of that asshole. >:)

Thank you again! 

Author's Response on November 08, 2020 11:07am

Thank you for understanding!! And yeah I should have it ready tomorrow :) 

 

It's so true! My top value is truth, so writing someone who isn't living that way has been both infuriating and super helpful. It is one of the things that frustrated me a lot watching Buff as well so I'm glad that has kinda translated to the story by accident hehe

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magnus374 commented on Secrets and Shattered Trust on November 04, 2020 02:08pm

Well the only good thing us that Spike's father isn't aware how deeply they are involved.

Riley has so far showed himself as a good person but this will raise questions and that can be troublesome.

Author's Response on November 05, 2020 07:59am

Agreed! Good that the dad doesn't know about their affair/relationship.

 

Mmm Riley surely will complicate things.

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Maybin commented on Secrets and Shattered Trust on November 04, 2020 08:18am

Oh Buffy. Stupid stupid Buffy. That’s not going to end well. Why call Riley. She could call the cops and say it was random vandalism.  

Author's Response on November 05, 2020 07:58am

Heheh I feel your frustration! I'm glad her stupidity/poor choices under pressure translate. 

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magnus374 commented on Sleepover Club on September 23, 2020 05:44pm

It was something sweet about him just wanting to make love. The rougher things are great to see but it is good that they are trying to just be them, to not always play.

Author's Response on September 24, 2020 02:41am

Love that - best of both worlds! 

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magnus374 commented on Back in Business on September 23, 2020 05:37pm

I like that this Riley is a good man without the badness we usually see. It is something enjoyable with that.

Author's Response on September 24, 2020 02:37am

Yeah I'm enjoying having a nice Riley too!

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MaggieLaFey commented on Sleepover Club on September 23, 2020 12:37pm Liked

Hey! Now I wanna know who the caller was and whether it was important!! 

Aaanyway. So sweet. I loved this so much :) especially the moment when they fell asleep together... ahh, my feels. :3

Author's Response on September 24, 2020 02:31am

Eeeee she finally did the sleepover thing! Yeeeeeee she feels safe! 

 

Ahhh good pick up on the call heheh

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MaggieLaFey commented on Back in Business on September 23, 2020 11:26am Liked

'The bell will ring soon. But I’m more in love with you every moment.’ *dabs at happy tears* These big doofuses better get their shit together before their "secrets" come back to bite them in their admittedly very bitable arses. Poor Will and his doubts... but he really SHOULD know better. Especially since she's risking so much staying with him and not waiting for the year to be over. Seriously!

As for Riley... I just him to myself. He's such a sweetiepie, I gotta hug him better. <3 So glad to see that Buffy was honest with him though, he really didn't need to be led on and this is what's right. (Of course, God only knows what's gonna happen once he discovers just who this "old acquaintance" is... but really, I don't wanna think about that too much or I worry about my sweet Spuffy loves haha)

Loved this update! 

Author's Response on September 24, 2020 02:30am

Yeeeeeeee bless the two of them!

 

Ahh yes omg Riley, ples be my boyyyy!! Gosh I adore him so much eek. Not normally but this Riley canon is fun. And yes I'm so glad she finally kinda told him to let it go and was pretty decisive for him. 

MaggieLaFey Replied on September 24, 2020 02:51am

Oh yeah, it's super fun! You took the best Riley had to offer from the show and developed that instead of the rest, and I LOVE it. <3

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magnus374 commented on A Move in the Right Direction on September 15, 2020 12:19pm

 It was nice seeing them having this good time with the packing and unpacking. I'm not sure if I just expect something bad to happen but the thing with the phone gave me a bad feeling. Well, we will see.

Author's Response on September 16, 2020 01:50am

Hmmmmm we shall see if something bad does come about! Fingers crossed, things will be okay. 

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MaggieLaFey commented on A Move in the Right Direction on September 15, 2020 03:36am Liked

Ohh, Buff... you dumb dumbo, you. This will most definitely come back to bite them both in the ass when his parents will eventually discover about them, and Buffy should've told Spike right away about it. :/ I hope she comes clean with it before that happens and that Spike's newfound caution about the two of them won't strain the relationship until then.

Thanks for sharing, it was lovely to read about them having such a good time packing and unpacking everything. <3

Author's Response on September 16, 2020 01:49am

Ahaha dumb dumbo :') she's super silly sometimes ahaha

 

Bless their fun planning heartsssss - I love having them feeling just so pumped to be with each other at last. 

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magnus374 commented on Home again on September 14, 2020 10:57am

Spike is starting to think on the very important question on when they can date openly. That is something that will be problematic for them even after some times has passed. At least the teacher was the female, that will make it a bit easier, but still problematic for our pair.

Author's Response on September 14, 2020 11:12pm

Yes it's a tricky dynamic, hey! I'm not sure if it would ever be easy to reveal, as even if they wait there's always that question of when did it begin etc etc.

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MaggieLaFey commented on Home again on September 14, 2020 03:30am Liked

These two are so adorably insatiable. I love it. >:D

I can see that Buffy's still feeling a bit of her insecurities (makes sense), but he'll prove her wrong about every single one of them. Can't wait to see how happy they'll manage to get once they're past this! 

Author's Response on September 14, 2020 11:11pm

ehehe gosh yeah - obsessed with each other :') bless 'em to hecc

 

Ahh yessss, get pumped for the tables of insecurity to turn a little in coming chapters... soz not soz hehe

 

Keen for their happily ever after too! 

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magnus374 commented on Last Days on Earth on September 10, 2020 02:00pm

They must return to reality soon and that can of course be irritating. The plan for Spike moving to his own place is on.

Then it is time for some smut again. I really do like these dominance things we can see, good and hot.

Author's Response on September 10, 2020 11:57pm

Yea reality mightn't be the most fun for the lovebirds!

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MaggieLaFey commented on Last Days on Earth on September 10, 2020 12:18pm Liked

God, that was fucking hot. DEFINITELY thanks for that haha! You're giving me unreal wishes for any kind of sex life I might one day have, lady haha. 

And the two of them planning Spike's move was quite lovely too. Also good to know that Buffy can at least count on some monetary help from her father - although I gotta admit that hearing her think of him as "Hank Summers" was definitely a less-than-pleasant surprise. :(

 Thanks for sharing as always <3

Author's Response on September 10, 2020 11:56pm

Ahaha I'm glad you liked! It's fun to have some phresh smut with them dating - I actually was so delayed writing this chapter mostly bc I skipped ahead to write a later smut chapter oops haha

Yesss I'm so looking forward to having him out of the house -hopefully it's as smooth as they expect. 

You're so welcome! I love writing these two but often it's my excitement for you to read them that motivates me! So thanks for enjoying. 

MaggieLaFey Replied on September 11, 2020 02:43am

*flutters eyelashes* Please do feel free to write AS MUCH SMUT as you want. And possibly some more. >:)

Aw, that's so sweet to hear <3 I'm just glad I'm having an impact in getting more of these two! 

Author's Response on September 11, 2020 11:15am

Haha I'll make sure the next chapter is smut central too, hehe

 

<3

MaggieLaFey Replied on September 11, 2020 11:39am

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magnus374 commented on Back on Track on September 09, 2020 02:04pm

I'm not sure if it's cute or obsessive the way she was checking in on him, probably a bit of both.

This chapter was looking toward the future, looking for an apartment, talking about college.

Author's Response on September 10, 2020 11:20am

Haha yea she's pretty concerned! I think both, two. A bit of anxious care there.

 

I hope the future focus is good for them, since current dynamics are a little messy. 

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MaggieLaFey commented on Back on Track on September 09, 2020 03:11am Liked

They're so darn sweet. And Spike is so incredibly understanding about her need to sleep elsewhere... :') although I do hope that that will soon change. 

I guess I am wondering how exactly an eighteen-year-old might be able to afford such an apartment, though haha or, you know, how a teacher can afford her own PLUS this one untul he can get on his feet... I mean, Sunnydale is no NY, but damn, I almost wanna live there too if real estate is so cheap lol. 

I hope Spike's dad is done with hurting him, and that his mum is going to take example from her son and get the hell out of dodge too. Can't wait to read on!! <3

Author's Response on September 10, 2020 11:23am

Hopefully the money thing makes sense more in this next chapter I just put up (I'd thought I had previously mentioned Hank's money and Spike's trust but I might have just done that in my head!) 

 

But yay that you're enjoying their dynamic! And yeah I hope things go okay and as smoothly as they expect once they're out of their bubble and back in the ol Sunnydale!

 

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MaggieLaFey Replied on September 10, 2020 11:41am

Oh, it's also perfectly possible that you did mention it and I forgot... lol. Sorry in that case! And thanks for the explanation, can't wait to read your next chapter :) 

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Tabcat commented on Love, and other tempting things on August 31, 2020 02:49am

So pleased you are back updating this story...have been missing it...hope all is ok with you. 

Author's Response on September 08, 2020 09:15pm

So sorry for the gap! I can probably only update once or twice a week at the moment, because life is busy with uni and the like, but all is well apart from that!

 

Thanks for checking in x

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MaggieLaFey commented on Love, and other tempting things on August 29, 2020 12:38pm Liked

Well, that went as well as it could've. Loved it :D can't help but be right there with Buffy with the idea that Spike just doesn't have the same amount of experience as she does (I mean, facts), but we gotta admit that she really doesn't have much of a leg to stand on, considering that ultimately her reaction is "you can't possibly love ME" haha. So glad to see the COMMUNICATION trend keeping up :') and to see the Harm thing finally (actually?) settled.

I want to hug these two so much. 

Thanks so much for sharing! <3 

Author's Response on August 30, 2020 01:48am

Hehe yeah he is young and she has seen more! His poor little feeling soul just so strong tho ahaha - he's probably more awake to feelings, just as she is to logic!

Yeet to communication!

And byebye Harm!

You're welcome! If I finish an assessment tonight I get to write another chapter as my reward so wish me luck, haha eek

MaggieLaFey Replied on August 30, 2020 04:33am

Haha definitely hope you finished that assessment, new chapter or not! ;) 

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magnus374 commented on Love, and other tempting things on August 29, 2020 07:38am

 There are indeed some issues to deal with but that's life, at least they are talking about them.

Author's Response on August 30, 2020 01:46am

Glad they stopped dancing around things together! 

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MaggieLaFey commented on Part Two, Chapter One: New Beginnings on August 29, 2020 01:31am Liked

Oh, I loved this chapter SO MUCH. A few examples of why:

Spike caught her on her 15th, 18th and 45th head check, and called her out on the 46th. - You just make me laugh out loud so very easily, you genius. 

The whole Harmony and Riley conversation. What a joy to read how these two are dealing with actually TALKING and really communicating for once. 

Spike wondered if a few hours of being in a relationship with her was enough to profess his love for her. - PEAK Spike moment right here. Jesus, I love this batshit crazy guy.

Buffy dozing off as she kneels beside him, touching him as she can. My heart just grew a couple of sizes at that. 

‘In a few days, we can see if you feel like sticking it to me from behind, ey? I’m not going anywhere near your head or torso for a long while, I’d say.’ 'Sounds like a plan.' - THIS wonderful, CHARMING exchange. And they say romance is dead! I LOVE IT.

Buffy being ready to truly act for his well-being but without wanting to be his provider. I mean, as we've already said again and again, this is something I wouldn't conceive as possibly healthy in real life, but here? I JUST LOVE IT. They're finally as good to each other as they can be, which promises to be a lot!!

And then of course, OF COURSE he tells her he loves her... I mean, I'm scared of just how much she'll freak out because of this, but what else could she possibly have expected from him after THAT speech? My Spike needs so much love T_T I really hope this won't undo all this good we got to see here... and the worst part is, I'm starting work right now and can't read the next chapter! WOE IS ME.

Thanks so much for coming back with such an enjoyable chapter!! Loved it!! (Just in case it wasn't patently obvious haha) <3

Author's Response on August 29, 2020 05:41am

I'm so glad you loved it! I always worry when I write so much dialogue that y'all will be bored or get sick of their vibes so it's lovely to hear that that wasn't the case!

 

Bless them trying to truth-tell and work through their shit! Transparency is the name of the game, and any kinda sneakiness or omission will defs trip them up :') 

Ahaha their little casual sex ref made me chuckle to write. :D such a strangely awkward then safe then awkward dynamic they muddle through.

 

Absolutely love reading your feedback! What a joy.  <3 <3 


 

MaggieLaFey Replied on August 29, 2020 05:53am

Eh, I love dialogue when it's something I find interesting and lemme tell ya, these two airing out their issues is HELLA interesting to me haha. So maybe I'm just biased :P

Transparency is the name of the game - words to live by! 

<3

Author's Response on August 30, 2020 01:50am

Hehe I'm so glad! And I guess it's even better because their chats are so so long overdue :') love any bias that works in my babies' favour! 

Yeah I'm doin my best to put it into practice in life too! 

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magnus374 commented on Part Two, Chapter One: New Beginnings on August 28, 2020 11:55am

They really did need some honest talking. We could see the strong feelings here and they are making plans for the future, which is good to see. There are many complications and problems, so thinking about the future is good.

Author's Response on August 28, 2020 11:45pm

eek, yea, it'll be pretty messy if they don't have these chats! 

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Starrynight7 commented on Part Two, Chapter One: New Beginnings on August 28, 2020 12:49am Liked

Welcome back!

💫 

Author's Response on August 28, 2020 11:44pm

Thank you so much! 

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subchan commented on Receipts on June 05, 2020 01:28am Liked

I'm so happy for this chapter! I know this is where it will probably get harder but least they know they like each other.

Author's Response on June 05, 2020 01:22pm

Yasssss 

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magnus374 commented on Receipts on June 02, 2020 06:14pm

 This seems to be what was needed in order for Buffy to really realise what she wants. It has been building for a while but being scared made her see clearly. 

Author's Response on June 05, 2020 01:23pm

Thanks for your comment! Glad to have finally scared Buffy into action!

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magnus374 commented on ...til someone gets hurt on June 02, 2020 06:07pm

Buffy has realised that she wants more than just fucking and they actually got some serious talking done. I liked how Spike was trying to build up her confidence, and then the accident. Now she has learned one of Spike's closely guarded secrets.

Author's Response on June 05, 2020 01:23pm

Ooh yeah, big growing for miss B

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MaggieLaFey commented on Receipts on June 02, 2020 10:40am Liked

Aww... these two. :') I gotta admit that I'd actually forgotten about Buffy's fear of staying in a bed with a man throughout the night until she mentioned it in her rambling speech, but it was sweet to see her overcome that fear. Hopefully she'll manage to stick to her courage even when he'll technically be able to leave the bed haha.

As for the rest, I just love it. :) This story is managing to make me forget about what I'd consider even remotely acceptable/healthy in real life and it's just a joy to experience this hehe. Thanks for sharing!! Can't wait to read more! 

Author's Response on June 05, 2020 01:24pm

Oh yeah she still a messy b ahaha

Fingers crossed she stays feeling safe!

 

And thanks again for making it even more fun to write and share!

MaggieLaFey Replied on June 05, 2020 05:16pm

Thank YOU for sharing! It's a pleasure :D I can never get the balls to start posting before I'm done writing but I gotta admit that it must be cool to share the journey with fans <3

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MaggieLaFey commented on ...til someone gets hurt on June 02, 2020 10:29am Liked

Oh my God, my heart. MY HEART. I'm so glad you published two chapters at once, because leaving it like this would've been absolute torture...

Meanwhile, can I just say that Buffy thinking "bloody" is super endearing because it really goes to show how much Spike's affecting her. Her decision to really talk to him and do the friends thing is also incredibly endearing... buaahh! I hope he's all right soon and that this gets him to finally leave his toxic family asap. :'(

Also, now I get why you mentioned the hospital, way back when... you sly thing, you. 

Author's Response on June 05, 2020 01:22pm

Ehehe yeah I didn't want to leave you hanging and I have mad uni work to do so I thought the hiatus would be better placed after a kind of resolve!

 

Aw yeah bless! They're in each other's heads and hearts now for sure!

 

Hehe sneaky af

MaggieLaFey Replied on June 05, 2020 05:15pm

hearts You're such a sweetie, THANK YOU!! I really appreciate you taking time out of your uni studying to share this story with us heart hope you get some relax time soon! 

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MaggieLaFey commented on It's all fun and games... on May 26, 2020 06:27pm Liked

Can you believe I actually squealed out loud and did a little on-the-spot dance when I saw the email about this update?? Just, YESS!! I had a very crappy day health-wise today, but reading this chapter sure was a hella good time, so thank you. :D (Never mind that my brother interrupted me - TWICE, the little bastard. I managed to get back into the groove after all haha) 

I loved every bit of this. And I just adore how forward and creative and ready to try stuff together these two are... the bastards are meant for each other, never mind the age difference and unacceptable power dynamic haha. I love them so much! And I so loved, aside from the hot steamy sex, the fact that they shared some tenderness too here and there... *happy sigh*

Also, how cool is Buffy's arsenal? And can I just say that she's got to have invested A LOT of money to have all this cool shit? Hahahah she's a role model, I swear! Particularly liked the glass dildo, and the idea of keeping it into a glass of water for temperature play... and mhhh, don't get me started on the collar + leash combination. Gah. Also: In came Spike, her puppy, her plaything, her sub. Dude, like, SERIOUSLY. HOW HOT IS THAT??

Oh damn, I love this. Also loved his modesty in going to the garden in his b-day suit... love it all. And the whole idea of her wanting to make the canvas to leave it to him is just so incredibly heartwarming. My heart!! <3

Really can't wait to read more :) I wanna know how these two get along even outside of the crazy sex! And yes, Little Spike has indeed earned some rest haha. Thanks for sharing! 

Author's Response on May 27, 2020 03:58am

ahaha I can believe it! I felt bad it had been such a long time between chapters, but it took me longer than usual to write all the sex scenes ahah

 

I'm glad it was a good distraction for you in a crappy time/day! Silly brother, but glad you still enjoyed!

 

Yass I love that they can be open and fun together with this kind of stuff - hopefully in the next chapter we can see them doing openness in the emotional intimacy bracket too! 

 

I'm so glad you're enjoying the Spike the sub stuff! And how cute and awkward he can be even though he puts on quite the show for his buds at school :') bless him.

 

Thank you so much again! And I'm still thinking of you often - I hope you get some good health days in amongst the crappy! 

MaggieLaFey Replied on May 27, 2020 06:03am

hugheart You're the sweetest, thanks for the reply and especially for your thoughts and good wishes!

And yeah, definitely looking forward to that more of that lovely openness in the emotional side of things. :D

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magnus374 commented on It's all fun and games... on May 26, 2020 01:46pm

 It was indeed a lot of smut. Buffy seems to have an almost endless supply of toys and clothes and they are putting them to good use. They got to play out several scenarios here. Since Spike is new at the sub thing it make sense that Buffy would make sure that he is comfortable with this.

Author's Response on May 27, 2020 03:59am

Lots of testing the waters there! Thanks for your comment :)

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