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Meavepagan commented on Chapter 5 on July 09, 2020 12:57am

Oh I  muss this story so much.  I hope everything is okay in your world. I await the next update  with bated breath.

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magnus374 commented on Chapter 5 on August 27, 2019 01:15pm

 Things are moving along well, that party looks like it will be very important. 

Author's Response on August 27, 2019 02:43pm

Thank you for taking the time to read and review every chapter 

the events of the party and the fall

out will be in chapter six

 

hoping to have it posted soon 

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magnus374 commented on Chapter 4 on August 27, 2019 12:55pm

Time is speeding up now but we are showed some things to make us see what is happening. I do enjoy seeing all the different characters. We of course had to have a variation of the classic dream from the show.

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magnus374 commented on Chapter 3 on August 27, 2019 12:46pm

A lot of different interaction going on. I like how we are getting many little pieces from the people's lives and are learning more about them.

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magnus374 commented on Chapter 2 on August 27, 2019 12:24pm

It's always enjoyable with Joyce and Dawn liking Spike and Buffy hating the fact. We did have some good interaction and got some hints about some characters.

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magnus374 commented on Chapter 1 on August 27, 2019 11:43am

Good start, we have met the important people and Spike and Buffy has started out in a bad way. It's everything we need for a story like this.

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Meavepagan commented on Chapter 5 on August 26, 2019 10:12pm Liked

Oh a cliffhanger . *G*  That just makes me want to read it even more .  I can't wait for the next update 

 Maybe if she catches him red handed Buffy will kick his arse in front of everyone.  I just wish Buffy and Spike got along better so he could help her move on from Angel. 

 I really loved this chapter. 

Author's Response on August 27, 2019 02:17am

I’m glad you enjoyed it

 

the next chapter is going to be in two parts. I’m hoping to have the first part done and posted tonight

 

its all going down!

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daria22 commented on Chapter 4 on August 26, 2019 10:08pm Liked

You've created great tension in every aspect of the story. 

I was laughing at how Spike treated Buffy. He acted like five years old boy, oblivious to nature of his passion. But as always dreams can help to understand ourselves.

Poor, Darla! Now I am afraid of Angel. I am nervous about this party in the mansion.

Relationship in  Chelsea's family is awful. I can't understand how parents can choose one child over another. Even if a child is a problem one or another is suitable for your expectations. Every kid has to feel love and be cherished.

 

Author's Response on August 27, 2019 02:15am

The way Spike treats Buffy at the moment is bravado and covering up how he actually feels for her. We are going to see a more caring side to him in the next couple of chapters 

one way or another Darla will have her revenge but it’s not going to be for a while yet

 

infort that’s the reality for some children. Hopefully we will have that rectified soon 

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Meavepagan commented on Chapter 4 on August 26, 2019 09:51pm Liked

Oh what a wonderful chapter.  I had a great time reading it. 

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daria22 commented on Chapter 3 on August 26, 2019 10:06am Liked

 Buffy believed Angel of course facepalm Now I am really worried about Buffy. But I hope luck will be at her side.

l like that you made Spike total gentlemen. It is so cool that he was honest with Zoe 👍 

 

 

Author's Response on August 26, 2019 12:43pm

She is too in love to see what he’s doing and one of these days it’s going to blow up in her face

 

chaoter four and five are ready I am just doing the last checks on them and they will be posted tonight and tomorrow

 

i am working on chapter six which is going to be a two parter

 

 

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Meavepagan commented on Chapter 3 on August 26, 2019 06:22am Liked

I sure hope Buffy doesn't find out the hard way what a dickhead Angel is. I can't wait for more 

Author's Response on August 26, 2019 08:01am

Thank you for reviewing hun it means a lot

 

the  next chapter will be up tonight and I am working on chapter 6 and seven tonight.

 

its a two parter

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daria22 commented on Chapter 2 on August 26, 2019 06:07am Liked

 Better and better! Characters are recognizable, but you've left some space for interesting turns. 

I am afraid there will be a really dark thing about Angel, but a good story needs a good villain.

And such passionate bickering between Spike and Buffy was true entertainment applause

Author's Response on August 26, 2019 08:00am

Thank you for reviewing

 

there will be more posted today or tomorrow 

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daria22 commented on Chapter 1 on August 25, 2019 06:41pm Liked

The start is good. I like all human stories and I am glad to see a new one.

I am intrigued by how (if) Buffy will join her classic Scooby gang. So I am definitely waiting for continuing popcorn

Author's Response on August 26, 2019 02:58am

Thank you for the review

 

buffy will eventually be in the Scooby gang however it’s a while off yet 

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