Things are moving along well, that party looks like it will be very important.
Thank you for taking the time to read and review every chapter
the events of the party and the fall
out will be in chapter six
hoping to have it posted soon
Oh a cliffhanger . *G* That just makes me want to read it even more . I can't wait for the next update
Maybe if she catches him red handed Buffy will kick his arse in front of everyone. I just wish Buffy and Spike got along better so he could help her move on from Angel.
I really loved this chapter.
I’m glad you enjoyed it
the next chapter is going to be in two parts. I’m hoping to have the first part done and posted tonight
its all going down!
You've created great tension in every aspect of the story.
I was laughing at how Spike treated Buffy. He acted like five years old boy, oblivious to nature of his passion. But as always dreams can help to understand ourselves.
Poor, Darla! Now I am afraid of Angel. I am nervous about this party in the mansion.
Relationship in Chelsea's family is awful. I can't understand how parents can choose one child over another. Even if a child is a problem one or another is suitable for your expectations. Every kid has to feel love and be cherished.
The way Spike treats Buffy at the moment is bravado and covering up how he actually feels for her. We are going to see a more caring side to him in the next couple of chapters
one way or another Darla will have her revenge but it’s not going to be for a while yet
infort that’s the reality for some children. Hopefully we will have that rectified soon
Buffy believed Angel of course Now I am really worried about Buffy. But I hope luck will be at her side.
l like that you made Spike total gentlemen. It is so cool that he was honest with Zoe 👍
She is too in love to see what he’s doing and one of these days it’s going to blow up in her face
chaoter four and five are ready I am just doing the last checks on them and they will be posted tonight and tomorrow
i am working on chapter six which is going to be a two parter
I sure hope Buffy doesn't find out the hard way what a dickhead Angel is. I can't wait for more
Thank you for reviewing hun it means a lot
the next chapter will be up tonight and I am working on chapter 6 and seven tonight.
its a two parter
Better and better! Characters are recognizable, but you've left some space for interesting turns.
I am afraid there will be a really dark thing about Angel, but a good story needs a good villain.
And such passionate bickering between Spike and Buffy was true entertainment
Thank you for reviewing
there will be more posted today or tomorrow
The start is good. I like all human stories and I am glad to see a new one.
I am intrigued by how (if) Buffy will join her classic Scooby gang. So I am definitely waiting for continuing
Thank you for the review
buffy will eventually be in the Scooby gang however it’s a while off yet