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pfeifferpack commented on Chapter 6 on September 08, 2019 12:29am Liked

Buffy should have kept Angel from his bullying of Spike. All that crap about Dru was just cruel.  Then she kissed him. YUCK.

Glad she's at least realizing Spike's feelings are real.

Kathleen

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pfeifferpack commented on Chapter 5 on September 08, 2019 12:22am Liked

Unexpected turn. Have to see what the Doctor has to do with it.

Kathleen

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pfeifferpack commented on Chapter 4 on September 08, 2019 12:18am Liked

At least Tara is sensible.

Kathleen

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pfeifferpack commented on Chapter 3 on September 08, 2019 12:14am Liked

Interesting. She has memories of being with Joyce in heaven. The Scoobies were pretty out of line in their reactions.

Kathleen

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pfeifferpack commented on Chapter 2 on September 08, 2019 12:05am Liked

Wondering who the daddy is. Glad Spike isn't going to let her leave alone.

She'd better tell more than just Dawn because they'll assume Spike kidnapped her. Dawn is being abandoned and that's not fair. She has no one and even Spike won't be there.

Kathleen

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pfeifferpack commented on Chapter 1 on September 07, 2019 11:49pm

Interesting opening. She's clearly not okay. Likely would be a good idea for her to fess up fairly soon.

The vampires seem to know something about what's going on with her. Surprised Spike hasn't figured out whatever they have.

Kathleen

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duke6665 commented on Chapter 6 on August 30, 2019 04:31am Liked

He was interrupted by Buffy's lips on his. Angel wrapped his arms about her waist and kissed her back.---Oh gag bad Buffy!! lol

"You wanna dance, hot dog? Come on!” Wesley pulled out a gun. “Say hello to my friend ...PISTOL!" he screeched as he shot the demon right in his eye.-----Now that alone made this whole chapter perfect lol

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magnus374 commented on Chapter 6 on August 29, 2019 01:47pm

With all the worries Buffy have, it does seem strange that she was inviting Angel in that soon. I can understand her anger at Spike and Angel fighting though. Drunk Wesley was enjoyable too.

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Mary Marsters commented on Chapter 6 on August 29, 2019 07:22am

Very good chapter, hope she will be more friendly with Spike 😁

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vicdave99 commented on Chapter 6 on August 29, 2019 02:45am

heart

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Meavepagan commented on Chapter 6 on August 29, 2019 01:10am Liked

Loved the bar scene. What a riot. I needed a good laugh. Excellent chapter.  I can't wait to see where you take it next.. I am thoroughly enjoying this story. I await the next installment.

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magnus374 commented on Chapter 5 on August 26, 2019 04:04pm

They really need the visions earlier if they are supposed to actually do something about it. Well it is a good way to involve Angel into the story. Buffy is so very worried and scared for the baby, which makes me wonder if there is some kind of force involved. I do have a suspicious mind. Not to be nitpicking, but should a metal pole be able to kill a vampire like this? Well, It's not important. The important thing is that there's twins, nice.

I must say that I love how Buffy and Spike sat together, watching tv, eating popcorn. And here's Angel of course Spike would start to taunt him some, but what will happens now. 

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Meavepagan commented on Chapter 5 on August 26, 2019 04:18am Liked

Twins??? I didn't expect to see that. Lovely chapter. I can't wait to see where you take it next in the next installment.

Author's Response on August 26, 2019 12:45pm

I didn’t plan to write it originally but I have a brainwave before writing this chapter and thought why not?

 

next instalment will be along soon

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JustWriter commented on Chapter 4 on August 26, 2019 03:02am Liked

I think that she has more than one child inside her or that the one is further along than she had known and was resurrected with her.

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Fluffypuppy commented on Chapter 4 on August 23, 2019 07:00pm

Let’s hope spike gets to buffy in time

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Meavepagan commented on Chapter 4 on August 23, 2019 02:51pm Liked

Oh my God... Will Spike get to her before the bad guys do their evil deeds?  Oh I sure hope so.  Excellent chapter.. I can't wait to see what happens next..

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Amayuscula commented on Chapter 4 on August 23, 2019 11:30am Liked

applauseapplauseapplause

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magnus374 commented on Chapter 4 on August 23, 2019 07:48am

It was nice to see them settling in and It's very good that she is writing to Dawn, that is good for both of them. I can't help but wonder if Buffy and Spike will get the chance to go to Comic-Con😀 

Naturally there would be dangers anywhere, but Buffy is the Slayer. 

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vicdave99 commented on Chapter 3 on August 22, 2019 01:11pm Liked

heart

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Fluffypuppy commented on Chapter 3 on August 22, 2019 11:43am

A few spelling mistakes do you have a beta? The concept is good just needs tightening up

 

keep going you are doing great 

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Lscheffer87 commented on Chapter 1 on August 22, 2019 08:08am Liked

Love it

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magnus374 commented on Chapter 3 on August 22, 2019 07:37am

As we can see, Buffy is not thinking clearly. She is acting way too fast, she should at least have given it a couple of days to think thing through, make preparations and prepare the others. Considering the situation we can't really expect her to think clearly though.

She should have talked with Dawn separately, the fact that she was told same as the others is for Dawn another sign that Buffy doesn't want to be around her and she will lose Spike too.

Anyway it will be interesting to see where they will settle down.

 

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magnus374 commented on Chapter 2 on August 22, 2019 05:39am

 Now Buffy knows but the big question is how and perhaps what. I have several possibilities running around in my mind but we will see.

This pushed Buffy into panic mode, which I hardly can blame her for. Abandoning Dawn seems a bit strange but again panic mode, and there are other people who can take care of her after all.

Author's Response on August 22, 2019 07:14am

Thank you for reading and reviewing magnus

 

she isn’t herself and isn’t exactly thinking of dawn in this situation 

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magnus374 commented on Chapter 1 on August 22, 2019 05:24am

We can see that something has happened to Buffy. I don't remember how much time actually passed from the ressurection until OMWF. For now I will assume that this has something to do with Willow's spell.

It is nice to see Buffy liking Spike's softer side.

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efffi2117 commented on Chapter 2 on August 22, 2019 01:16am Liked

i like it.Look forward to the rest!!

But I think Buffy would not want to leave Dawn. Maybe she can go with them? Wouldnt it worry her to leave Dawn alone on the Hellmouth? Without Spike the scoobies are not much of a protection

Author's Response on August 22, 2019 03:53am

Thank you for the review it means a lot 

dont forget buffy has just come back from the dead so she isn’t thinking as she should be

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vicdave99 commented on Chapter 2 on August 21, 2019 06:19pm Liked

Love it. heart

Author's Response on August 22, 2019 03:54am

Thank you for the review

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Fluffypuppy commented on Chapter 2 on August 21, 2019 04:44pm

How can buffy be pregnant? What has willow done?

dont want Riley to be a jerk

 

 

Author's Response on August 21, 2019 04:50pm

Thank you for the review

 

riley will be nowhere in this fiction as far as I have planned at least 

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Fluffypuppy commented on Chapter 1 on August 21, 2019 04:40pm

Like this. Can spike help buffy

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