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Fancyflautist commented on Part II on January 17, 2020 10:43am

How is it that every time I tell myself to be ready for there to not be more of a WIP I always forget and get super into it? Holy wow this is so so so good, and I'm dying to see his reaction when she shows back up. I hope to see more of this someday!

Author's Response on February 09, 2020 12:45am

Tell me about it. I'm so bad for starting fics and not finishing them in a timely fashion, and doing the same with my reading habits. 

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Darkangel16 commented on Part II on December 26, 2019 12:42am

Are you going to continue? I like where its headed.

Author's Response on February 09, 2020 12:43am

I do plan to, yes. Thanks for taking the time to read and review. xx

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Jos771 commented on Prologue on December 21, 2019 07:02pm

What a great story, I really can't wait to see more. Loved it!!!

Author's Response on December 25, 2019 05:38pm

Thank you so much! I'm so pleased you like it. Hopefully I will have the next chapter written and ready to publish realy soon. 

xx-Kitten.

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qt_pi_24_7 commented on Part II on December 03, 2019 08:21pm

I need more of this!!!!

Author's Response on December 25, 2019 05:38pm

Thank you so much! I'm so pleased you like it. Hopefully I will have the next chapter written and ready to publish realy soon. 

xx-Kitten.

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NatL commented on Part II on November 10, 2019 02:53pm

Love this!!

Author's Response on November 23, 2019 08:39pm

Thank you so much. I'm so pleased you like the story, and I hope you'll be back to read more as the new chapters are posted.

xx-Kitten

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Connie_3D commented on Part II on November 04, 2019 09:48pm Liked

Lovely scene.  Excellent pacing.  The beat of action and response handled perfectly.  Having Angelus and the crew there certainly upped the ante.  This Spike, while definitely not Buffy's Spike, still showing so much of his character that he could sooth some of her pain while she teased and pressed all his buttons.  The journey on this one looks so promising.  Mark of excellent work, can't wait to see what happens next!

Author's Response on November 07, 2019 05:00pm

Thank you so much! I'm so thrilled you're enjoying the story so far. 

xx-Kitten

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Anaelyssa commented on Part II on October 27, 2019 12:46pm Liked

Intro was long, but necessary.

This chapter was nice. Loved their encounter.

Author's Response on October 28, 2019 06:17am

The intro was a bit long, but I didn't want to just dive right in without any kind of context or explanation. I'm thilled you enjoyed their meeting. More to come. 

xx-Kitten

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2Shay commented on Part II on August 01, 2019 08:42pm Liked

Love it. I can't wait for them to meet again...somewhere in time.

Author's Response on October 03, 2019 04:57am

Thanks so much. I'm so thrilled you're enjoying the story. xxx

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ecroeser commented on Part II on July 18, 2019 02:03pm Liked

OK loved this. I was worried that she was going back to human Spike, and I've never been able to get into those. But, I like this and am wondering/hoping that Buffy will drop in more often throughout his life. I'd like to see your version of how he evolves and changes throughout his life. 

Author's Response on July 21, 2019 02:25am

I did think about going back to Human Spike, but he was such a delicate Mama's Boy in those scenes we saw before he became a vamp that I couldn't bring myself to take him back to that. LOL. I plan to have Buffy drop into his time-line all over the place, before getting back to the present, but it is going to evolve a few things slightly differently for how his canon timeline played out. =) Thanks for taking the time to read and review my fic!

xx-Kittenshift17

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ecroeser commented on Part I on July 18, 2019 01:48pm Liked

As soon as I saw on your Tumblr that you were posting some chapters here, I immediately logged on to find this fic. I normally don't like Buffy time travel fics, but I love all your HP pieces, love your original work, and just love getting new chapters from you so I'm hoping this turns into the first time travel Spuffy fic that I like. 

Author's Response on July 21, 2019 02:27am

Thank you so much! I didn't even realise that posting about this on Tumblr would lure anyone over to this site. thinking I very much hope it will be a time-travel Spuffy you will like, too. 

xx-Kittenshift17

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efffi2117 commented on Part II on July 15, 2019 08:48pm Liked

I love the banter and the way she interacts with him. Very well written, I was totally in the scene, couldn't put in down. 

Looking forward to more!

 

Thanks for sharing!

efffi

Author's Response on July 21, 2019 02:29am

Hi Efffi!

Thank you so much. It's such a wonderful compliment to be told that the scene was engaging hearts. I hope you enjoy the rest of the story.

xx-Kittenshift17

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Babyzekat commented on Part II on July 10, 2019 02:17am Liked

Ahh. More please!! Fantastic first of the ten moment's!  Not one thing I disliked. You definitely pushed the scene perfectly with grit, smugness, and Buffy being the best way I like her. 

Author's Response on July 21, 2019 02:30am

Thank you so much. This is the first Spuffy fic I've published, and I've been really nervous that I would butcher the characters or the dialogue and make people unhappy, so to hear that so far, I'm balancing it well it very reassuring.

xx-Kittenshift17

Babyzekat Replied on August 14, 2019 03:55am

devilhearts

Doing great. Keep checking back to see if you have posted more. Can't wait, literally, for the next chapter. 

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pfeifferpack commented on Part II on July 08, 2019 02:33am Liked

I really loved this first meeting. William is so very intrigued and I can't see him forgetting a moment of their encounters or the taste of her blood.

I love how she just disappeared. He will be haunted by this meeting.

Excellent update.

Kathleen

Author's Response on July 21, 2019 02:31am

Hey Kathleen!

Thank you so much. I'm so flattered that you're even reading this, oh my god! Spike is definitely intrigued after their first meeting, but he's gonna have to wait another 16 years before they meet again. Mwahahaha!

xx-Kittenshift17

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Foxypet commented on Part II on July 07, 2019 09:56pm

I'm really enjoying this!!

Author's Response on July 21, 2019 02:32am

Thank you so much!

xx-Kittenshift17

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Green commented on Part II on July 07, 2019 07:26pm Liked

Now that was BRILLIANT 💕💚

Author's Response on July 21, 2019 02:32am

Awwww, thank you! I'm thrilled you like it!

xx-Kittenshift17

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duke6665 commented on Part II on July 07, 2019 06:24pm Liked

Damn so glad I gave this one a chance. I have never been a fan of Pre-Sunnyhell Spike fics. But I gave it a chance because I AM a huge fan of time travel fics. Just mostly time travel BACK to SunnyHell lol. But damn this is soooo good. Love cocky Buffy teasing past Spike

Author's Response on July 21, 2019 02:34am

There will definitely be time-travel throughout the post-Sunnyhell years, too, but I really wanted to force Buffy to face what a completely ruthless monster Spike is during the years before he meets her for the sake of testing the resolve of her love once and for all. Thanks so much for reading. I hope you'll continue to enjoy the rest of the fic as I share it. 

xx-Kittenshift17

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Green commented on Part I on July 07, 2019 05:11pm Liked

Awesome chapter 💚

Author's Response on July 21, 2019 02:34am

You're such a gem for commenting on every chapter. Thank you.

xx-Kittenshift17

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Green commented on Prologue on July 07, 2019 04:39pm Liked

Looking forward to more 💚

Author's Response on July 21, 2019 02:35am

Thank you so much. I can't wait to write and share more, too.

xx-Kittenshift17

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magnus374 commented on Part II on July 07, 2019 08:16am

 I liked all the descriptions here on what Buffy saw and felt. She got to see some things while traveling backwards in time but the moments she stays are the ones that will let her see the most.

We could see that she intrigued Spike from the beginning. The way she reacts to him makes him curious and the "dance" they had will keep him thinking about her. She has created an interest in him.

This was good.

Author's Response on July 21, 2019 02:36am

Thank you. I find Spike to be something of an obsessive, despite his short attention span, so I really wanted to capture his attention with Buffy right from the off, you know?

xx-Kittenshift17

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Meavepagan commented on Part II on July 07, 2019 07:42am Liked

Oh. My. God.  That was one hell of a chapter.  I can't wait to see where you take it next.  I await the next installment with bated breath.  I loved it.

Author's Response on July 21, 2019 02:39am

Thank you so much. I'm scrambling to try and get the next chapter finished and edited for sharing, lol. I'm thrilled you like it so far.

xx-Kittenshift17

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Fancyflautist commented on Part II on July 07, 2019 07:39am Liked

Oooh, I love seductive future!Buffy! Can't wait to read more!

Author's Response on July 21, 2019 02:40am

LOL so does Spike! More soon, I promise.

xx-Kittenshift17

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Nadia22 commented on Prologue on July 07, 2019 06:57am Liked

Such an awesome story! Love your dialogues and I can’t wait to read more hearts

Author's Response on July 21, 2019 02:40am

Thank you so much. I'm thrilled you like it.

xx-Kittenshift17

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Spikelover88 commented on Part II on July 07, 2019 03:50am Liked

Great chapter can't wait till the next one 

Author's Response on July 21, 2019 02:40am

Thank you so much!

xx-Kittenshift17

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lurkeronly commented on Part II on July 07, 2019 01:52am

Amazing ,writing! Can't walt for the next chapter!

Author's Response on July 21, 2019 02:41am

Thank you so much! I can't wait to get the next one finished so I can post it.

xx-Kittenshift17

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Hexah commented on Part II on July 07, 2019 01:41am Liked

Awesome update, thanks.

Author's Response on July 21, 2019 02:42am

Thanks, I'm pleased you like it

xx-Kittenshift17

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Pencilcomet commented on Part II on July 07, 2019 12:43am Liked

This is such an amazing chapter!

Author's Response on July 21, 2019 02:42am

Thank you so much! I hope the next one will be just as good!

xx-Kittenshift17

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mypalal8907 commented on Part I on July 01, 2019 06:39am Liked

So great! Can’t wait for more!

Author's Response on July 06, 2019 10:41pm

Thanks so much for reading. I hope you enjoy today's new chapter. xx

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fyreburned commented on Part I on June 21, 2019 02:43pm Liked

Interesting start, but then, I love time-traveling fics. Looking forward to seeing where you take this.

Author's Response on June 30, 2019 03:15am

Thank you so much. I hope you'll enjoy the rest of the story as it progresses. 

xx-Kittenshift17

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magnus374 commented on Part I on June 16, 2019 05:05am

 Now we are after Spike's death and Buffy is in great pain because of it. I found it extremely disturbing, that Buffy hunted a peaceful demon child killed it and plan to use the heart for a spell. This really points out how much Buffy is suffering after Spike's death.

Spike had a long life and several small changes during that time could change things in a big way. It will also be hard for Buffy to see Spike when he is fully evil. In the few years Buffy knew him he changed so very much, but before that.

Anyway it will be interesting to see how you make this and if Willow's spell will go wrong (since she actually learned things with the coven, it doesn't have to go wrong).

Author's Response on June 30, 2019 03:16am

Thank you so much. I hope you'll enjoy the rest of the story as it progresses. 

xx-Kittenshift17

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Hexah commented on Part I on June 15, 2019 11:09pm

Thanks for the update. 

Author's Response on June 30, 2019 03:16am

Thank you so much. I hope you'll enjoy the rest of the story as it progresses. 

xx-Kittenshift17

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