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subchan commented on The Twinkling Moon Amid the Flowery, Rosy Sun with the Sandy Cat on May 31, 2020 06:18am Liked

Very hot and funny. Lol. Like the twist with what happened to Buffy and Spike.

Author's Response on May 31, 2020 08:23am

Thank you very much! 

(Sigyn)

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Atariuser commented on The Twinkling Moon Amid the Flowery, Rosy Sun with the Sandy Cat on October 25, 2019 09:04pm Liked

Fantastic 

Author's Response on October 25, 2019 11:37pm

Thank you! 

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Lou commented on The Twinkling Moon Amid the Flowery, Rosy Sun with the Sandy Cat on September 04, 2019 03:15pm

That was so much fun!

Author's Response on September 16, 2019 07:28pm

Thanks for reading! 

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Green commented on The Twinkling Moon Amid the Flowery, Rosy Sun with the Sandy Cat on July 30, 2019 11:29am Liked

Wow 😍 a truly brilliant story 💚

Author's Response on August 06, 2019 05:05pm

Thank you.

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Kittenshift17 commented on The Twinkling Moon Amid the Flowery, Rosy Sun with the Sandy Cat on July 20, 2019 09:55pm

That was great. I really enjoyed reading this story. 

Author's Response on August 10, 2019 04:10am

Thanks!

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Joyce commented on The Twinkling Moon Amid the Flowery, Rosy Sun with the Sandy Cat on June 05, 2019 02:25pm

One can guess where my mind went with “finding a rhythm with Spike was disturbingly easy” LOL! You wrote it and had to know this reaction would be elicited.

Why try on wedding clothes? The spell ended. They could have gone back to the dorm.

 

Author's Response on August 10, 2019 04:12am

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bewildered commented on The Twinkling Moon Amid the Flowery, Rosy Sun with the Sandy Cat on June 04, 2019 02:50am Liked

The_moonmoth (scenes 10 & 11):

Oh sweet Moony. Literary references, a demonic aphrodisiac, and oodles of subtext and (U?)ST. It’s like you know me! <3 <3 <3 Even without counting the scenes, I knew two sentences in that this was you, and I loved every moment. You know very well how much your Spike voice delights me, and your stuck-in-denial Buffy, and, well, everything here. This is both poetic and shameless and utterly perfect. (And you wrote Spuffy again! For me! Even with everything else in your life! <3 I am in tears yet again!)

And yeah, Aristophanes might have been out for cheap laughs, but something about those split-up primordial humans yearning for their lost other halves had always moved him. Spoken to him. Echoed in his empty places. --this is SO SPIKE it hurts.

Twinkles (scene 12 & chapter banner):

<3 the banner! Confused Buffy, confused Spike, confused and terrified Xander… and smirky Willow, speaking no evil… <3

“But Spuffy got here before he could fertilise you.” This sentence should be memorialized.

I love Buffy’s building awareness, and Spike’s subtle and then not-so-subtle advances, and then Buffy’s surrender.

“I'm blaming the pheromones,” she whispered. Then she kissed him. WOO-HOOO!!!

Amid_the_flowers (scene 12):

Ahh! The door kissing scene is super super hot and I love how they’re both surrendering to temptation but still clearheaded enough to fight first. “Not like this”  is such a delightful non-rejection…. And poor Xander, all the demons coming to his yard… <3 I feel like I have fewer actual words than I should, but that’s because most of my brain energy is drooling over the lustiness of this whole part.

SzmattyCat (scene 13):

And yay! The farce part of this smutty farce! The fight scene is delightfully wacky, and I love that you gave poor blind Giles the victory over Willow. (I am super interested in why Willow chose to be a vengeance demon in this timeline! Questions unanswered! You should write a side fic!)

“Well, it's all yours! Good luck!” he intoned cheerfully before he blinked out of sight. D’Hoffryn’s brief appearance is just fantastic.  

And, well, horny Spike and Buffy double-teaming the Eroin demons is just wonderful. <3

EllieRose (scene 14):

I would like to have coherent words about this, but I honestly have trouble getting past FINALLY! But I do really like how even while they’re indulging their pheromone-enhanced lust (FINALLY!) we have Buffy starting to think and make some important realizations - because yeah, this is another of my Favorite Things, the emotional core of Spuffy, and you portrayed it so beautifully. Buffy’s inner conflict and her resolution and finally succumbing, without any magical influence whatsoever. <3

Sandy_s (scene 15):

Awwww! Shades of “drinking buddies” (another of my favorite canon scenes) and I love how you’ve made it into a bonding scene, both of them trying to get over each other and failing utterly, and finally giving in. Because while I love all the lustiness and the wack and the banter, in the end what I want is for them to have something real. <3 This is charming and heartwarming and a beautiful setup for…

Sunalso (scene 16):

There have been days when I have looked at my Gmail inbox, seen another update on an AoS fic, and wistfully wished you would write more Spuffy again. (Also days I have just gone ahead and read your AoS fic despite having never watched the show, but I digress.) I am so thrilled you came back to the Spuffy sandbox to play, and… wow. What a glorious scene. Hot and romantic and funny and moving and deftly wrapping up the threads of this story in a tight, beautiful love knot. Thank you so much.

Final notes for all: *bows down” I am not worthy! Seriously, this is the best present ever, and future birthdays are going to need to deliver something unbelievable, like a hot date with Matthew Gray Gubler or a pet cheetah, to even compete. I cannot believe I was oblivious to all the sneaky grilling you guys did to plan this, and I am so, so grateful and honored. Thank you!

 

(also... Sock With a Soul has been a member since November 2015? How? What? How?)

Author's Response on June 04, 2019 06:24pm

The sock signed up for an account as soon as he was sentient, of course! Or, I (Susan) backdated the account to show the same date Stitched Up was published. Either is a reasonable answer. innocent

Author's Response on June 05, 2019 07:22am

I really enjoy the thought of the sock s l o w l y signing up for an EF account.  Key by torturous key.  
-yellowb

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Cosmic Tuesdays commented on The Twinkling Moon Amid the Flowery, Rosy Sun with the Sandy Cat on June 02, 2019 10:18pm

Spike with some sort of parasol has long been a favorite imagining of mine, and it's only one of many things which made me smile here.

Author's Response on August 10, 2019 04:12am

Thanks so much! 

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tfranco99 commented on The Twinkling Moon Amid the Flowery, Rosy Sun with the Sandy Cat on June 01, 2019 03:49pm Liked

Love it!! So funny and adorable 

Author's Response on August 10, 2019 04:12am

Thanks! 

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yellowb commented on The Twinkling Moon Amid the Flowery, Rosy Sun with the Sandy Cat on June 01, 2019 09:32am Liked

Okay,  I had put together a comment as I read for chapter 2, and then lost it.  I have put it together again... and I have to say, re-reading I am even more impressed by how this came together into a story.

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Besides, Aristophanes had them joined back-to-back and cartwheeling around all over the place.

OMG did we miss an opportunity.  

“Eases the way.” He shrugged, and tried to keep her in focus.

Uh oh...  PHEROMONES!

and smooth as silk, timed perfectly, they rose into the air, joined bodies an arc of energy over the demon’s head, and came down with a tuck and roll on the crypt floor behind it

Ah, this is lovely -- two glorious fighters moving as one...

Well, Aristophanes could fuck right off. 

You tell him, Spike.

They burst into Giles’ and halted as something thunked into the wall...

I just love that Giles doesn't let a little thing like blindness stop him from using a crossbow.

His eyes flared and he nodded against her forehead, pressing his groin firmly against her. “Bloody right they are.”

I'm not sure this is physically possible, but it's very amusing!

“A little help, here, Spike!” Buffy panted as she drove her booted foot into another demon’s ribs before it could get up. “You won't think I'm so glorious...” she ducked a clawed strike and punched a demon in the side of his head, “...when I'm all dead...” she hooked Spike by the elbow and used him to knock another attacking demon back down on the floor, “...and you're dragging my corpse around at your side!”

Buffy is a very creative fighter!  And that would be a bummer, even for a vampire. 

The shopkeeper grinned a little to herself. “I think I have what you both need,” she said, placing a bottle of Jack Daniels on the counter.

cheers

After handing back the bottle, Spike produced a giant umbrella from behind the dumpster and opened it, slinging it over his shoulder and taking her hand again.

So. Simple.  Why the hell don't vampires just go about their business during the day with parasols?  And I love that they end up in the Wedding Shop.  

This was sexier in my head,” he said as his fingers curled around her thigh, working their way towards her core. “It’s mostly a lot of fabric.”

As things so often are!  But I have faith in Spuffy...

And aww, a sweet thematic ending!  

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author's Response on August 10, 2019 04:12am

Wow! Thank you so much! 

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thenewbuzwuzz commented on The Twinkling Moon Amid the Flowery, Rosy Sun with the Sandy Cat on June 01, 2019 05:52am Liked

“Hey, Slayer, they teach you any Classics in that parochial little university?”
Hee :))

"You're not a man."/"No, I'm better."
He didn't miss a beat. Beautiful.

“You think that would work? Pissing off this Zeus guy? Because if there’s one thing you’re good at...”
Oh my God, did not see this idea coming

oh no, poor Xander! Go on, team, rescue him!

pheromones are fun, though :)

"Tits were worth fighting for."
:D

Haha, so slapping him in the face backfired :)

"The moment throbbed."
Nice line

"Eroins lay eggs"
O_O

"They burst into Giles’ and halted as something thunked into the wall; she shouted at him to drop the crossbow he was pointing blindly in the rough direction of the door."
Bless Giles.

OMG, Willow is a demon too now, and that means she's affected!

Yay! Go Giles!

"Just ‘cause he can see again, he has to notice everything."
:)

I liked the umbrella ^^

“There’s so much I want to do to you."
Spike has good ideas :)

"More than a week’s worth of nights."
Love the sound of this

Oh, nice final lines. :)

Author's Response on August 10, 2019 04:12am

Wow, thank you so much! 

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Lou commented on The Twinkling Moon Amid the Flowery, Rosy Sun with the Sandy Cat on June 01, 2019 03:53am Liked

It was a treat to read lighthearted fun - hot too of course!

Author's Response on August 06, 2019 05:07pm

Thank you! We worked hard on it. 

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srbeaver commented on The Twinkling Moon Amid the Flowery, Rosy Sun with the Sandy Cat on May 31, 2019 06:39pm Liked

 Awesome fun story!! You did a great job of writing this together. I enjoyed it very much.

Author's Response on August 10, 2019 04:13am

Thanks! 

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Fluffypuppy commented on The Twinkling Moon Amid the Flowery, Rosy Sun with the Sandy Cat on May 31, 2019 06:02pm

So funny. A wonderful collaboration 

Author's Response on August 06, 2019 05:06pm

Thank you! We had fun! 

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fyreburned commented on The Twinkling Moon Amid the Flowery, Rosy Sun with the Sandy Cat on May 31, 2019 04:14pm Liked

Well done, all!!! Really enjoyed this awesome li'l fic! And, Happy Birthday, Bewildered!

Author's Response on August 10, 2019 04:14am

Thanks for reading! 

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Meavepagan commented on The Twinkling Moon Amid the Flowery, Rosy Sun with the Sandy Cat on May 31, 2019 01:26pm Liked

Wow that was on hell of a story.  I enjoyed it immensely.  You even left it there could be a sequel.  Happy Birthday Bewildered.  I loved your prezzie.

Author's Response on August 10, 2019 04:14am

Thanks for reading! 

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magnus374 commented on The Twinkling Moon Amid the Flowery, Rosy Sun with the Sandy Cat on May 31, 2019 11:53am

It was a true joy to read this. As if they didn't have problems enough now they also had to deal with demonic pheromones. We had several amusing moments an erotic build up and some good sexy times at the end.

Willow was true to herself and didn't see that she had done anything wrong.

Author's Response on August 10, 2019 04:10am

Thanks! 

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