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To_the_end_of_the_world commented on Administrative Adhesive on March 07, 2021 10:04am Liked

Loved this!

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subchan commented on The Twinkling Moon Amid the Flowery, Rosy Sun with the Sandy Cat on May 31, 2020 06:18am Liked

Very hot and funny. Lol. Like the twist with what happened to Buffy and Spike.

Author's Response on May 31, 2020 08:23am

Thank you very much! 

(Sigyn)

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Msbs commented on Administrative Adhesive on February 14, 2020 09:59pm

Buffy trying to take Spike's pants off is priceless😂

Author's Response on February 15, 2020 10:58am

It was fun to write! 

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Atariuser commented on The Twinkling Moon Amid the Flowery, Rosy Sun with the Sandy Cat on October 25, 2019 09:04pm Liked

Fantastic 

Author's Response on October 25, 2019 11:37pm

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Lou commented on The Twinkling Moon Amid the Flowery, Rosy Sun with the Sandy Cat on September 04, 2019 03:15pm

That was so much fun!

Author's Response on September 16, 2019 07:28pm

Thanks for reading! 

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Green commented on The Twinkling Moon Amid the Flowery, Rosy Sun with the Sandy Cat on July 30, 2019 11:29am Liked

Wow 😍 a truly brilliant story 💚

Author's Response on August 06, 2019 05:05pm

Thank you.

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Green commented on Administrative Adhesive on July 29, 2019 05:32am Liked

Wonderful 💕💚

Author's Response on August 06, 2019 05:05pm

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Kittenshift17 commented on The Twinkling Moon Amid the Flowery, Rosy Sun with the Sandy Cat on July 20, 2019 09:55pm

That was great. I really enjoyed reading this story. 

Author's Response on August 10, 2019 04:10am

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Kittenshift17 commented on Administrative Adhesive on July 20, 2019 09:22pm

What a whacky concept. I can't imagine how you all managed to get so many authors collaborating on this, but I thoroughly enjoying it so far. 

xx-Kitten.

Author's Response on August 10, 2019 04:11am

DarkVoid worked REALLY hard getting us all together. Thank you! 

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JustWriter commented on Administrative Adhesive on June 06, 2019 06:26pm Liked

His startled and automatic, "Pardon me," was the best part, especially with the formal accent.

Author's Response on June 30, 2019 08:49pm

I love that bit 

(Sigyn) 

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Joyce commented on The Twinkling Moon Amid the Flowery, Rosy Sun with the Sandy Cat on June 05, 2019 02:25pm

One can guess where my mind went with “finding a rhythm with Spike was disturbingly easy” LOL! You wrote it and had to know this reaction would be elicited.

Why try on wedding clothes? The spell ended. They could have gone back to the dorm.

 

Author's Response on August 10, 2019 04:12am

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Joyce commented on Administrative Adhesive on June 05, 2019 01:52pm

One of my fave pleasures is seeing a writer or beta who can tell the difference between affect and effect.

LOL on “fruit rollup floreplay scenario”!

Woo hoo! A Laverne and Shirly fan!

Buffy was surprised at putting a skirt on over her head. Since I’m pear shaped, I have always put skirts and dresses on over the head and thought that was the norm.

 

Author's Response on August 10, 2019 04:11am

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bewildered commented on The Twinkling Moon Amid the Flowery, Rosy Sun with the Sandy Cat on June 04, 2019 02:50am Liked

The_moonmoth (scenes 10 & 11):

Oh sweet Moony. Literary references, a demonic aphrodisiac, and oodles of subtext and (U?)ST. It’s like you know me! <3 <3 <3 Even without counting the scenes, I knew two sentences in that this was you, and I loved every moment. You know very well how much your Spike voice delights me, and your stuck-in-denial Buffy, and, well, everything here. This is both poetic and shameless and utterly perfect. (And you wrote Spuffy again! For me! Even with everything else in your life! <3 I am in tears yet again!)

And yeah, Aristophanes might have been out for cheap laughs, but something about those split-up primordial humans yearning for their lost other halves had always moved him. Spoken to him. Echoed in his empty places. --this is SO SPIKE it hurts.

Twinkles (scene 12 & chapter banner):

<3 the banner! Confused Buffy, confused Spike, confused and terrified Xander… and smirky Willow, speaking no evil… <3

“But Spuffy got here before he could fertilise you.” This sentence should be memorialized.

I love Buffy’s building awareness, and Spike’s subtle and then not-so-subtle advances, and then Buffy’s surrender.

“I'm blaming the pheromones,” she whispered. Then she kissed him. WOO-HOOO!!!

Amid_the_flowers (scene 12):

Ahh! The door kissing scene is super super hot and I love how they’re both surrendering to temptation but still clearheaded enough to fight first. “Not like this”  is such a delightful non-rejection…. And poor Xander, all the demons coming to his yard… <3 I feel like I have fewer actual words than I should, but that’s because most of my brain energy is drooling over the lustiness of this whole part.

SzmattyCat (scene 13):

And yay! The farce part of this smutty farce! The fight scene is delightfully wacky, and I love that you gave poor blind Giles the victory over Willow. (I am super interested in why Willow chose to be a vengeance demon in this timeline! Questions unanswered! You should write a side fic!)

“Well, it's all yours! Good luck!” he intoned cheerfully before he blinked out of sight. D’Hoffryn’s brief appearance is just fantastic.  

And, well, horny Spike and Buffy double-teaming the Eroin demons is just wonderful. <3

EllieRose (scene 14):

I would like to have coherent words about this, but I honestly have trouble getting past FINALLY! But I do really like how even while they’re indulging their pheromone-enhanced lust (FINALLY!) we have Buffy starting to think and make some important realizations - because yeah, this is another of my Favorite Things, the emotional core of Spuffy, and you portrayed it so beautifully. Buffy’s inner conflict and her resolution and finally succumbing, without any magical influence whatsoever. <3

Sandy_s (scene 15):

Awwww! Shades of “drinking buddies” (another of my favorite canon scenes) and I love how you’ve made it into a bonding scene, both of them trying to get over each other and failing utterly, and finally giving in. Because while I love all the lustiness and the wack and the banter, in the end what I want is for them to have something real. <3 This is charming and heartwarming and a beautiful setup for…

Sunalso (scene 16):

There have been days when I have looked at my Gmail inbox, seen another update on an AoS fic, and wistfully wished you would write more Spuffy again. (Also days I have just gone ahead and read your AoS fic despite having never watched the show, but I digress.) I am so thrilled you came back to the Spuffy sandbox to play, and… wow. What a glorious scene. Hot and romantic and funny and moving and deftly wrapping up the threads of this story in a tight, beautiful love knot. Thank you so much.

Final notes for all: *bows down” I am not worthy! Seriously, this is the best present ever, and future birthdays are going to need to deliver something unbelievable, like a hot date with Matthew Gray Gubler or a pet cheetah, to even compete. I cannot believe I was oblivious to all the sneaky grilling you guys did to plan this, and I am so, so grateful and honored. Thank you!

 

(also... Sock With a Soul has been a member since November 2015? How? What? How?)

Author's Response on June 04, 2019 06:24pm

The sock signed up for an account as soon as he was sentient, of course! Or, I (Susan) backdated the account to show the same date Stitched Up was published. Either is a reasonable answer. innocent

Author's Response on June 05, 2019 07:22am

I really enjoy the thought of the sock s l o w l y signing up for an EF account.  Key by torturous key.  
-yellowb

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bewildered commented on Administrative Adhesive on June 04, 2019 01:53am Liked

First of all, THANK YOU ALL for this kick-ass birthday present! I was prepared for my birthday to be just another meh day of work, and instead I woke up to something truly glorious. I was literally in tears as soon as I figured out what was going on. You are all the absolute best, and there really are no words to express my gratitude.

 

That being said, I have reviewy words for all of you because an epic gift like this deserves an epic review.

 

Also, SoaringClaws! The banner is super fantastic! Thank you!!!!

 

Yellowb (scene 1):

 

“bitc— oww!” literally made me laugh out loud. As did ‘“Fuckety fuck fucking fuck,” explained Spike.’ It’s like you wrote this especially to delight me - oh, right, you did. <3

 

As always, your voices for Spike, Buffy, and Giles are fantastic, and the setup priceless. I don’t know who came up with “Spuffy joined at the hip” but it is awesome.

 

OffYourBird (scene 2):

 

You know, I had never considered that Spike, being a demon, should have been attracted by “demon magnet” Xander. One can presume that his engagement to Spuffy trumped the magnetism in canon… Yup, I’m sold.

 

“Xander’s fruit roll-up foreplay scenario” is a horrifying phrase. Also, “his body was disturbingly rock hard against hers” takes on new nuance when we later find out that the demons all want to mate with Xander… Good thing Buffy’s “always” got Spike “contained” because that could get ugly.

 

Pfeifferpack (scene 3):

 

Well, you know what I like, that’s for sure! Spuffy snarking at each other while Giles benevolently (?) rolls his eyes and tries to ignore them. Mmmm. I bet you never thought your “glorious” line would end up being a recurring theme for the whole story! <3

 

Susan (scene 4):

 

First of all, I am BEYOND honored that you dipped your toe into the writing waters for this! Even now, writing this, a day and a half after I first read the fic, I am tearing up. Also, you should totally write more, because this is awesome. I love the Giles-Anya interplay (“practically a fetus” is inspired) and Spike’s train of thought from hatred to lust to Laverne and Shirley is just perfect.

 

Dark (scene 5):

 

So, did you guys fight over who got to write which bits of be-catnip? Because Spike fighting in tandem with Buffy is one of my favoritest things ever, and you delivered fantastically. I love your cynical Spike PoV here; his asides on Buffy and the Scoobies are perfect. (And while I’m talking to you, THANK YOU for organizing this best of surprises!! You are sneaky and underhanded and completely awesome!)

 

Megan (scenes 6-7):

 

Oh, Spike tormenting Riley is another of my Favorite Things, and you have him in fine form. I love the way he oozes evil sensuality here, with that little undercurrent of denial at how much he’s enjoying Buffy’s closeness. Just beautiful.

 

Being flung back into him like a rubber band and sprawling indelicately all over his hard, tight…repulsive body, hammered their situation home, in an embarrassingly public way. No more Denial Buffy. The irony here is so, so tasty. Nope, no denial here. Really, I love how you have both of them consciously wallowing in hatred while their bodies and subconscious are telling a different story. Classic s4 Spuffy and I love it so much!

 

Angelic_amy (scene 8):

 

Ah, poor doomed Buffy and her even-more-doomed dorm room damage deposit…. I love the slow growth here of cautious almost-affection and definite familiarity, they way they fall in to camaraderie… almost lie they’re joined at the hip! Lol… I like how you gave them the same evidence as in canon but with different knowledge sets and thus slightly different conclusions.

 

Sigyn (scene 9):

 

Why am I not surprised that you are addressing the very real reality of being joined at the hip? Poor needing-to-pee Buffy…

 

“But there’s always workarounds.” Buffy stared at him in excitement. “Take off your pants.”

“Pardon me?” Spike said, his accent sounding oddly formal.

This moment had me cheering. And I love Spike going all Victorian in the moment, his crafted image slipping.

“Oh, god, Spike bits. Bits of Spike.”

“Do you always wear panties with little polka dots on?”

“Stop looking!”

“They’re right there.”

“They’re not for you!”

“Well, no, I don’t think they’d fit me very well. I have some other bits which -- well, as you observed--”

*dies*

I do love how Spike automatically falls into sympathy and rough kindness when he realizes Buffy is actually upset. He just can’t help it….

And….. cliffhanger!

A truly delightful first half. Now, on to part two….

Author's Response on June 04, 2019 10:18am

I kinda hate to take this off everyone's "unresponded" list -- but I'll just point out that OYB had the stuck-like-glue idea.  

And also, that there is a very obvious reason we all flocked to co-author this:  you are awesome, and spread much joy, as a person and as a writer.

Happy birthday!!  heart

Author's Response on June 04, 2019 11:19am

Oh, and I forgot to sign that, despite lots of practice with joint authorship...  That was me, yellowb.

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Cosmic Tuesdays commented on The Twinkling Moon Amid the Flowery, Rosy Sun with the Sandy Cat on June 02, 2019 10:18pm

Spike with some sort of parasol has long been a favorite imagining of mine, and it's only one of many things which made me smile here.

Author's Response on August 10, 2019 04:12am

Thanks so much! 

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tfranco99 commented on The Twinkling Moon Amid the Flowery, Rosy Sun with the Sandy Cat on June 01, 2019 03:49pm Liked

Love it!! So funny and adorable 

Author's Response on August 10, 2019 04:12am

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yellowb commented on The Twinkling Moon Amid the Flowery, Rosy Sun with the Sandy Cat on June 01, 2019 09:32am Liked

Okay,  I had put together a comment as I read for chapter 2, and then lost it.  I have put it together again... and I have to say, re-reading I am even more impressed by how this came together into a story.

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Besides, Aristophanes had them joined back-to-back and cartwheeling around all over the place.

OMG did we miss an opportunity.  

“Eases the way.” He shrugged, and tried to keep her in focus.

Uh oh...  PHEROMONES!

and smooth as silk, timed perfectly, they rose into the air, joined bodies an arc of energy over the demon’s head, and came down with a tuck and roll on the crypt floor behind it

Ah, this is lovely -- two glorious fighters moving as one...

Well, Aristophanes could fuck right off. 

You tell him, Spike.

They burst into Giles’ and halted as something thunked into the wall...

I just love that Giles doesn't let a little thing like blindness stop him from using a crossbow.

His eyes flared and he nodded against her forehead, pressing his groin firmly against her. “Bloody right they are.”

I'm not sure this is physically possible, but it's very amusing!

“A little help, here, Spike!” Buffy panted as she drove her booted foot into another demon’s ribs before it could get up. “You won't think I'm so glorious...” she ducked a clawed strike and punched a demon in the side of his head, “...when I'm all dead...” she hooked Spike by the elbow and used him to knock another attacking demon back down on the floor, “...and you're dragging my corpse around at your side!”

Buffy is a very creative fighter!  And that would be a bummer, even for a vampire. 

The shopkeeper grinned a little to herself. “I think I have what you both need,” she said, placing a bottle of Jack Daniels on the counter.

cheers

After handing back the bottle, Spike produced a giant umbrella from behind the dumpster and opened it, slinging it over his shoulder and taking her hand again.

So. Simple.  Why the hell don't vampires just go about their business during the day with parasols?  And I love that they end up in the Wedding Shop.  

This was sexier in my head,” he said as his fingers curled around her thigh, working their way towards her core. “It’s mostly a lot of fabric.”

As things so often are!  But I have faith in Spuffy...

And aww, a sweet thematic ending!  

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author's Response on August 10, 2019 04:12am

Wow! Thank you so much! 

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TheWickedTruth89 commented on Administrative Adhesive on June 01, 2019 07:26am Liked

Interesting start

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thenewbuzwuzz commented on The Twinkling Moon Amid the Flowery, Rosy Sun with the Sandy Cat on June 01, 2019 05:52am Liked

“Hey, Slayer, they teach you any Classics in that parochial little university?”
Hee :))

"You're not a man."/"No, I'm better."
He didn't miss a beat. Beautiful.

“You think that would work? Pissing off this Zeus guy? Because if there’s one thing you’re good at...”
Oh my God, did not see this idea coming

oh no, poor Xander! Go on, team, rescue him!

pheromones are fun, though :)

"Tits were worth fighting for."
:D

Haha, so slapping him in the face backfired :)

"The moment throbbed."
Nice line

"Eroins lay eggs"
O_O

"They burst into Giles’ and halted as something thunked into the wall; she shouted at him to drop the crossbow he was pointing blindly in the rough direction of the door."
Bless Giles.

OMG, Willow is a demon too now, and that means she's affected!

Yay! Go Giles!

"Just ‘cause he can see again, he has to notice everything."
:)

I liked the umbrella ^^

“There’s so much I want to do to you."
Spike has good ideas :)

"More than a week’s worth of nights."
Love the sound of this

Oh, nice final lines. :)

Author's Response on August 10, 2019 04:12am

Wow, thank you so much! 

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Lou commented on The Twinkling Moon Amid the Flowery, Rosy Sun with the Sandy Cat on June 01, 2019 03:53am Liked

It was a treat to read lighthearted fun - hot too of course!

Author's Response on August 06, 2019 05:07pm

Thank you! We worked hard on it. 

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thenewbuzwuzz commented on Administrative Adhesive on June 01, 2019 02:28am Liked

 I love that this exists!! Yay for collaborative creativity! <333

"mind my privates, you uncoordinated bitc-"
ahahahaha :))
(he said bitca)

dun dun dunn, are they... joined at the hip? :)

"“Fuckety fuck fucking fuck,” explained Spike."
"explained" XD

"or I’ll drag us both out into the sun and just brush away the ashes—”
oh man, that's fierce

I like that the demon magnet effect is working on Spike

"My SATs were really high"
She has a point. So does Spike, though, - he should know what vampires can feel.

Very nice callback to the Cruciamentum :)

"All his years? What about all my years? He’s practically a fetus.”
Shot's fired! :)

I liked that Anya narrated the fight to Giles :D

"Buffy looked over at him, seemingly flabbergasted at his kindness. The bint couldn’t see that he just wanted to get the fuck away from her Scoobies."
Great :)

"tone of meltingly sensual promise"
nice

"his amusement obviously misconstrued as friendliness"
haha :)

"his hard, tight…repulsive body"
:)

I like that the spell burned the carpet. Makes sense.

Ooh, maybe Willow is invisible!

"One, yes, their flesh was now so closely bound together that it no longer looked as if she could slide a piece of paper between them, let alone two thick pairs of jeans."
Oh shit! :D

Yay, bits of Spike!

"But nudity was something rather amusing to him. He’d been taking this like a joke. Now he realized, this was absolutely humiliating for her. To a lesser extent, this was the kind of shit Angel used to pull on some of the toys he brought home to play with before eating. Take off your clothes, force you to touch me, no, you can’t have privacy for the loo, you’ll do it right there in front of me."
Yay, he got it! <3

Aww, how good that he thought of the skirt!

Ooh, cliffie! :)

Author's Response on August 10, 2019 04:13am

Wow, thank you so much! 

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yellowb commented on Administrative Adhesive on May 31, 2019 08:13pm Liked

“They interrupted Xander’s fruit roll-up foreplay scenario,” Anya said with a huff.

Do I want to know?  No, I don't, I don't!  

Not necessarily literally glued to someone glorious

Kinda works out ... gloriously, in the end.

What kind of monster could hate someone who smelled like that? He convinced himself that his urge to head into the bathroom and toss off was completely unrelated to his thoughts about Buffy.

Spike, master of his own heart!  

It seemed a lovely bit of justice that his trousers were now one with the Slayer’s.

Ha, lovely phrasing.  And I love that in all possible versions of Something Blue, it seems Riley is in for a disappointment outside the wedding shop.

I love Buffy getting bounced out of her own dorm room by Spike's lack of invite, brilliant!

“Do you always wear panties with little polka dots on?”

 

I can totally hear exactly how he would ask this, like when he asks Joyce about the marshmellows.

flowersflowersflowersflowersflowersflowers

 

Author's Response on August 10, 2019 04:13am

Thank you! 

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Twinkles commented on Administrative Adhesive on May 31, 2019 06:42pm Liked

Bloody fantastic job everyone, this reads so amazingly smoothly that it's hard to believe it was so many different brains creating it :D

Alright, gotta do this section by section...

1) yellowb -

“Fuckety fuck fucking fuck,” explained Spike.  “Fucking magic.”

- Haha, I love this somehow perfectly worded response to the situation

I’ll drag us both out into the sun and just brush away the ashes—”

- Lolz, I guess that would work 😂

2) OffYourBird -

Love the last two lines so much, Giles and Xander. Delicious wording, and their faces are so crystal clear in my head :D

3) pfeifferpack -

used that often enough to get me to do what you wanted back when I still had my balls.”

- Exactly! She so needs to integrate this with her rote ideas of vamp emotions, because she saw it plainly without pausing to consider that it didn't match.

4) Susan - Squee! New author! Congratulations 🎉

“All his years? What about all my years? He’s practically a fetus.”

- This made me laugh so much :D

She glanced to her side and wondered if Spike was also weighing the after effects of their earlier argument and the implications of what he’d said.
Who do I have to fucking kill around here to get some blood? I’m fucking starving

- Haha, absolutely perfect!

he knew that would be a difficult activity to hide from or explain to his pseudo-conjoined twin.

- Hehe, it certainly would

5) DarkVoid116 - 

Excellent fight/discovery scene, love it!

The bint couldn’t see that he just wanted to get the fuck away from her Scoobies.

- Haha, nice.

6 & 7) Megan

Angel’s human twin

- Oh this is brilliant 😂

Love the wind beneath my wings reference! And the onlookers clapping, awesome :D

8) angelic_amy

He wasn’t looking at her...

- This paragraph, love! So very Buffy.

And the square one circle, lolz :D

9) Sigyn - wonderful opening banter :D

She always seemed so demonic to him, he forgot how human she still really was.

- Love this thought so much.

The whole nakedness and switch in mood is so wonderful, and I love Buffy's “They’re not for you!” so very much, exactly right.

Then the making him wash his hands too, that's somehow so adorable.

 

Author's Response on August 10, 2019 04:13am

Thank you so much! 

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srbeaver commented on The Twinkling Moon Amid the Flowery, Rosy Sun with the Sandy Cat on May 31, 2019 06:39pm Liked

 Awesome fun story!! You did a great job of writing this together. I enjoyed it very much.

Author's Response on August 10, 2019 04:13am

Thanks! 

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Fluffypuppy commented on The Twinkling Moon Amid the Flowery, Rosy Sun with the Sandy Cat on May 31, 2019 06:02pm

So funny. A wonderful collaboration 

Author's Response on August 06, 2019 05:06pm

Thank you! We had fun! 

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fyreburned commented on The Twinkling Moon Amid the Flowery, Rosy Sun with the Sandy Cat on May 31, 2019 04:14pm Liked

Well done, all!!! Really enjoyed this awesome li'l fic! And, Happy Birthday, Bewildered!

Author's Response on August 10, 2019 04:14am

Thanks for reading! 

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Meavepagan commented on The Twinkling Moon Amid the Flowery, Rosy Sun with the Sandy Cat on May 31, 2019 01:26pm Liked

Wow that was on hell of a story.  I enjoyed it immensely.  You even left it there could be a sequel.  Happy Birthday Bewildered.  I loved your prezzie.

Author's Response on August 10, 2019 04:14am

Thanks for reading! 

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magnus374 commented on The Twinkling Moon Amid the Flowery, Rosy Sun with the Sandy Cat on May 31, 2019 11:53am

It was a true joy to read this. As if they didn't have problems enough now they also had to deal with demonic pheromones. We had several amusing moments an erotic build up and some good sexy times at the end.

Willow was true to herself and didn't see that she had done anything wrong.

Author's Response on August 10, 2019 04:10am

Thanks! 

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magnus374 commented on Administrative Adhesive on May 31, 2019 09:10am

The scenario in itself is so amusing.

Being stuck together like this would create a lot of problems and would naturally be very frustrating. They did manage to get some good talking done. Spike is at least seeing himself as evil and would of course use this anyway he can. I couldn't help but like how he acted when they met Riley. He is also good at reading people and noticing that some parts of this was humiliating for Buffy, he tried to help.

Author's Response on August 10, 2019 04:10am

Thank you!

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