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Melissanelson1975 commented on Chapter 28 – Green Hell on May 30, 2020 07:46pm Liked

This chapter rocked it was awesome 

it was so long and so good I love it when you make the chapters long like that 

I can’t wait for the kicking of asses to begin 

another great chapter “chefs kiss” moooha 

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Fluffypuppy commented on Chapter 28 – Green Hell on May 30, 2020 07:20pm Liked

Loving this so much fun

just wait until it’s dusk s turn 

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Hexah commented on Chapter 28 – Green Hell on May 30, 2020 06:17pm

Awesome update. 

Can't wait for more. 

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tfranco99 commented on Chapter 28 – Green Hell on May 30, 2020 05:19pm Liked

Yessssss!!! Yessssssss! The best one is back!! I love this story so much!!! This chapter was amazing!!!! I can’t wait for the 3 of them to finally see how the Lady is!! It will blow their minds!! I love love love LOVE this story!!!! Pleaaaaaaase more 

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rkm commented on Chapter 28 – Green Hell on May 30, 2020 05:01pm

Wow, xander has truly allowed his shadow self (or his evil side, whichever one wants to call it) dominate his life – how he thinks about anya and even worse or better (depending on the point of view) how he actually talked about her – it’s a combination of denial, hatred and jealousy, and let’s not forget self-righteousness!!  And he still called her his fiancé, and worse expected that to impress his co-workers!   His hutzpah is unbelievable!!!

Its rather odd that they’re all experiencing this on their own – they’ve managed to be outmaneuvered and isolated. I almost feel sorry for giles, but having a hard time having the same for xander and willow. Xander’s meanness is truly his downfall, and as for willow her arrogance in her own power and smarts will be hers.

And xander just keeps getting worse – he’s saying someone else is a loser when his poor excuse of a life is actually more apt to the loser category…

Go Cordy for her first attempt at thrilling…

Will spike actually kill xander, or will he leave that to dusk? (and xander was stupid to hit spike, but if xander’s defense – gag, ack – he didn’t know spike’s chip was no longer …)

This chapter may not have seemed  like it had much action, but … it  had the importance of establishing willow, xander and giles completely alone, overwhelmed with the suckitude of their lives and trying to make it one day at a time. And all this with spike, cordy, and faith playing with them. How long will it be until dusk shows up and really lays down the why’s etc before she completely … deals with her ex-friends???

I’m on pins and needles, and they don’t feel very well …. So looking forward to more!!!

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imperialjade commented on Chapter 1 - Dirty window on May 30, 2020 04:00pm Liked

I have been waiting for the update for this story. I don't remember if I told you, but I really am enjoying and loving this one. I feel bad for Giles a little, but in truth, they've all taken advantage of Buffy, Spike, Anya, Tara and Faith. Retribution to Xander and Willow is well deserved. Giles, making him a broken man will hurt. So glad Buffy is standing up for herself and her true friends and they stand together.

Also, I love the "tick tock" from Spike. I adore it in John Wick. That you had it in this chapter? Totally AWESOME!

Can not wait for the next update!

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Jos771 commented on Chapter 28 – Green Hell on May 30, 2020 03:45pm

Xander’s probably going to end up in the asylum he is building, maybe Giles and Willow too. I can’t wait for the big reveal, the Scoobies are going to freak!!! Great chapter!

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salice commented on Chapter 28 – Green Hell on May 30, 2020 03:22pm

Kill them.

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Angelsheart1 commented on Chapter 28 – Green Hell on May 30, 2020 02:08pm Liked

Great chapter!  Can't wait to read more!

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Darkangel16 commented on Chapter 28 – Green Hell on May 30, 2020 02:07pm

That was a long one, thanks for the update! I love it when Spike is master of Sunnydale

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All4Spike commented on Chapter 28 – Green Hell on May 30, 2020 12:26pm Liked

Delicious, individually tailored punishment for each of the human Dawn-killers.

I have to admit it reminds me a lot of Angelus and his treatment of Drusilla before turning her.

And yet... not one of them can figure out why it's happening to them. Perhaps if they meet up and compare notes, they might figure it out....

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Allison42 commented on Chapter 27 – My Judas on May 27, 2020 10:56pm Liked

I love, love, love the tender, protective way you wrote Spike with BB. And I love how Dusk immediately felt the same way. BB has been such a victim in all of this and didn’t deserve it and I’m glad she is with them now. I always love the way you write her and now I love the way you are writing Buffy and Spike’s reactions to her as well. The Giles and Willow parts were fun, but the very best was Xander seeing Anya! Fuck you, Xander!

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lifesazoo commented on Chapter 27 – My Judas on May 26, 2020 07:43pm

Just to let you know I absolutely adore Dusk coming into her own. Along with Spike, of course. Tara & Faith are brilliant and complement each other so well. Of Anna getting her organisms is perfection. 

cant wait for the next update... revenge is a dish best served cold and savored slowly... Dusk is enjoying every morsel

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pfeifferpack commented on Chapter 27 – My Judas on May 26, 2020 01:52am Liked

The vengeance is getting juicy. 

Giles is pretty pathetic and I MIGHT feel a tiny bit sorry for him but (as the avengers themselves have pointed out here) he has had NO remorse for what they did to Dawn and to Buffy.

Willow in a straight jacket is a lovely thought LOL. I do want her to lose every bit of her powers though. 

Xander is a first class jackass who has learned nothing but he will. SLOW learner indeed.

Nice use of dirty cops. They'll to well in SunnyD.

LOVE that they are helping the Bot. Belle deserves a life and I'm glad she'll have one. Love that Spike was protective of her too. Treats her like a being not a thing as is right.

Love that Spike knows Buffy will care about the killing even if Dusk doesn't and he knows that Buffy is still in there at the end of the day. He spares her and it's an act of love.

Great updates.

Kathleen

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jackson commented on Chapter 27 – My Judas on May 21, 2020 10:01am Liked

Great great story!!! Can’t wait for more. Thank you for sharing your talent d84;a039;

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Lou commented on Chapter 27 – My Judas on May 14, 2020 10:06am Liked

Ooh loving all the action and the plans coming to fruition... it rocks!

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madspuffyfan commented on Chapter 27 – My Judas on May 13, 2020 05:21pm Liked

Loved it.

That's all three out on the street. I don't think Xander will get that hotel room. Giles I don't know where he will stay and Willow will be running about Sunnyhell trying to hid from the voices.

 

George

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madspuffyfan commented on Chapter 26 – Laying down the law on May 13, 2020 04:47pm Liked

Loved it. It's funny that demons and vamps know what family means and that her ex friends don't

 

George

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madspuffyfan commented on Chapter 25 - Revenge comes in small doses on May 13, 2020 04:28pm Liked

Loved it. What are they going to do with the bot when they are finished with everyone?

 

George

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madspuffyfan commented on Chapter 24 – Unforgiven. Unforgotten. on May 13, 2020 04:11pm Liked

Loved it. Dawn's archangels what a great name. Wonder how long it will take them that Dusk/Buffy is in town?

I agree stay home and only let one person walk the dog.

 

George

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gabelou1991 commented on Chapter 27 – My Judas on May 13, 2020 01:12pm

J'adore Jenny ris encore .

Giles se fait expulser et arrêter magnifique le pire est qu'il aurait pu se douter vu que le conseil a disparu. 

Willow aussi magique car elle vivait comme si la maison lui appartenait et et non ma fille elle était à buffy.

Harris vu la connaissance de ses parents il aurait pu le virer sans cette situation. 

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PrettyGirlBPD commented on Chapter 27 – My Judas on May 11, 2020 11:39pm Liked

Mmmm, revenge really is sweet! It’s nice to know this is just the beginning too. I also really enjoyed both Spike and Dusk being protective of the Buffybot.

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Melissanelson1975 commented on Chapter 27 – My Judas on May 10, 2020 04:50pm Liked

Oh I loved the end with anya being his boss heck yeah the whole chapter was perfect 

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All4Spike commented on Chapter 27 – My Judas on May 10, 2020 12:21pm Liked

I love how Spike rescued BB, and was then protective of her. And Buffy allowed her to choose her own name as they gave her her independence.

And each of the Dawn-killers receives the come-uppance they deserve. Very satisfying.

I like how Spike took responsibility for Rack's death from Buffy. He knew how that would have haunted her later.

And then the sweetest thing was that he called her Buffy. And she didn't protest.

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Fluffypuppy commented on Chapter 27 – My Judas on May 10, 2020 12:20pm

Payback time

spike is still looking out if buffy

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Geybl commented on Chapter 27 – My Judas on May 10, 2020 12:59am Liked

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podothedruid commented on Chapter 27 – My Judas on May 10, 2020 12:55am Liked

Love it. 

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MythMagykFae commented on Chapter 27 – My Judas on May 09, 2020 08:56pm

Seeing Xander in this chapter feels great, even in the show, he was an absolute prick to Anya so it's really satisfying to see her happy with someone else, and him miserably watching it happen.

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Wjoy commented on Chapter 27 – My Judas on May 09, 2020 08:46pm

 I love the ending of this chapter.  Xander is getting what he deserves. 

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letitia commented on Chapter 27 – My Judas on May 09, 2020 07:59pm

Buffy and Spike taking in BB.  I just thought she could have been more given the chance.  And to have everyone just getting a taste of what is to come is great.  Love the humanity still in Spike when called for.

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