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spuffy_spark84 commented on Chapter 2 on September 30, 2020 08:00pm Liked

If Buffy is a tease then so is this lil WIP. LOL. Off to a great start, would love to see it continued & see where it goes from there. Is Buffy not a slayer also in this? I know it’s been awhile but I’ll be waiting, hoping for an update someday if you ever get back into it

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NickaML commented on Chapter 2 on May 28, 2019 03:05am

Glad to have you writing again .Great start

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OffYourBird commented on Chapter 2 on May 23, 2019 11:42pm Liked

Spuffy's dynamic here is so fascinating, with Buffy as far more prey than predator, but still standing up for her morals (and with a sixth sense that *knows* a predator when she sees one...). And Spike is already caught in her net biggrin Loving this!

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_BiteMeSpike_ commented on Chapter 2 on May 15, 2019 05:43am Liked

 Great chapter!

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FandomsOfAGrrrl commented on Chapter 2 on May 14, 2019 02:21am Liked

Liked! Lol

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pfeifferpack commented on Chapter 2 on May 13, 2019 02:16am Liked

I love how this all turned around on Spike. He was planning to have a quick bite of a pretty girl but he's found himself smitten enough to change what he wants from her.

I love the attraction between them and that it's mutual.

I have a feeling Sheila is history now.

Really hot kissing. I liked him backing her up with Pete and Larry.

Enjoying the story!

Kathleen

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Meavepagan commented on Chapter 2 on May 11, 2019 10:45am Liked

Oh my,  it sems as if Buffy's vampdar isn't working properly. Am I to take it this is before being called? If it is that could make for a very interesting premise.  I am thoroughly enjoying this one.  I cant wait for more.

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magnus374 commented on Chapter 2 on May 10, 2019 02:07pm

Things are different but Spike and Buffy are still very much as we are used to at their core. Spike is evil but he can be fascinated and Buffy do fascinate him. It was a very heated situation between them. I liked how Buffy could sort of feel the danger from him.

Now Sheila is in danger but maybe Spike will leave her alive (not sure why though) or Faith will turn up to save the day.

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Redwoman commented on Chapter 2 on May 09, 2019 08:49pm Liked

Love the update!! Hot spuffy action <3

But poor Shelia. Faith will be crushed to lose a friend. 

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EllieRose101 commented on Chapter 2 on May 09, 2019 08:44pm Liked

Spike is a very bad man. devil

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Green commented on Chapter 2 on May 09, 2019 08:01pm Liked

Man I was hoping Sheila wasn't going to die, Faith will be crushed and out for revenge. Best thing Buffy did was run. Awesome chapter 💚

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Spikelover88 commented on Chapter 2 on May 09, 2019 06:30pm Liked

Great story great chapter can't wait till the next one 

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Versheenah commented on Chapter 2 on May 09, 2019 06:04pm Liked

Omg, omg, I really really don't want Sheila to die. She and Faith are so perfect, ugh, Faith will be devastated,  oh no!

But Spuffy were amazing and hot and brilliant and all around awesome!!! :D

Thank you so so much for this chapter!!! It was glorious and I can't wait to read more!!! :D

squee

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Pencilcomet commented on Chapter 2 on May 09, 2019 03:53pm Liked

Bye bye Sheila! Excellent chapter.

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Behind Blue Eyes commented on Chapter 2 on May 09, 2019 03:40pm Liked

squeeLove nasty, rotten Spike!

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SusanMarieR commented on Chapter 1 on May 01, 2019 04:30pm

And yet I'm still hoping for a buffy isnt a slayer... Yet

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amidtheflowers commented on Chapter 1 on April 30, 2019 08:36pm Liked

Interesting! Spike’s perception of Faith and vixen versa was fun to read smile I’m always intrigued by non-Slayer Buffy stories and this one didn’t disappoint. Excited to see what happens next! 

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EllieRose101 commented on Chapter 1 on April 30, 2019 12:29pm Liked

*chuckles at your author notes* 

Normally, I wouldn't be into such a story, but seeing as it's you... devil

Seriously, though. This is good. More please! 

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Megan commented on Chapter 1 on April 24, 2019 01:37pm Liked

 Very intrigued by this switch and the window into a little bit more of poor, unfortunate Sheila's life before she bites it.  I totally buy that she and Faith would be friends.  Looking forward to seeing why Spike ends up seeing more in Buffy than a nummy treat!

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JustWriter commented on Chapter 1 on April 23, 2019 06:11am Liked

Haven't read yet, just posting Webster's 1828 definition of hypocrite for you, which basically boils down to this: someone who pretends to be what they aren't, but his is more slanted towards this: someone who pretends to be right, whole, but isn't, particularly the witty comeback Jesus throws at the Pharisees about them being mausoleums, pretty and pristine on the outside, but filthy, grotesque, and dead on the inside. The Pharisees focused so much on how they appeared to others, that they never took care of their own spiritual growth; that's probably down to the Greek influence on Israel, though I'm certain the Pharisees would balk at the comparison (the Pharisees were an offshoot of the movement that overthrew their Greek Empire overlords). The Greeks were so obsessed with how their community viewed them, but cared not how things went on behind doors and this shows in their architectural achievements as well. The acropolis in Athens for example and the construction of the temple of Athena. There was a monument to the unknown god among other statues of gids at the acropolis, almost like they were afraid of how it would look if they didn't have one. The Athenian temple was built unevenly, but it looks straight because of optical illusion. Take careful notice that hypocrite is a noun. I like looking up words, especially when they end up not meaning what I thought they would. I was surprised by this one, although I wonder if hypocrite may come from the Greek name Hypocrites.

Hmmm... just read it and I can't tell if Buffy is a slayer or not, but I suppose that little bit of intrigue was intentional and I applaud you. Having Faith there early really spices up your plot.

It seems as though Buffy is friends with Cordelia as she originally intended. That makes me a little concerned for her, as she either rejected their friendly overtures or are dead or worse.

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pfeifferpack commented on Chapter 1 on April 22, 2019 09:33pm Liked

Delighted to see you writing again! 

You fell in love with her hemline.  You certainly didn’t fall in love with her scintillating conversational skills.  Have you even met a sixteen-year-old girl, much less spoken with one?   Perfect perspective on Angel's "Love" there.  Loved the whole intro in the notes.

Oh, this holds a lot of potential.  Buffy is not the Slayer but Faith is and you Faith voice rings true.

I have a feeling Sheila is going to be lunch as she was in canon. I love her being Faiths bestie.

I like the vampire politics at the root of Spike's Slayer hunt. It's all about keeping Dru safe. You make the Annoying one and his group a bit more of a challenge than in canon and that's good. Spike will have to watch his back as well as his front.

Great start.

Kathleen

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Green commented on Chapter 1 on April 22, 2019 04:46pm Liked

Oooooo I like it 💖💚

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Ubikoctober commented on Chapter 1 on April 22, 2019 04:14pm Liked

I'm really liking this! :)

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Beachtallulah commented on Chapter 1 on April 22, 2019 03:02pm Liked

Sheila and Faith... Of course that make great bids. This is a great start

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Behind Blue Eyes commented on Chapter 1 on April 22, 2019 02:04pm Liked

squeeI'm so excited to see this story hit the light of day!!!

Hope all is well with you, and I'm so glad we didn't loose you to the frozen north! hearts

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Redwoman commented on Chapter 1 on April 22, 2019 01:35pm Liked

Omg I never thought someone would respond to this challenge! I've always wanted to read a semi-canon fic where Buffy isn't the slayer and Spike is still his evil self. I'm a horrible writer so I proposed the challenge in hopes someone would take it :D

Amazing start!! I love the idea of Faith and Sheila being friends and Buffy not only a normal girl in this world, but also, one who is distanced from the supernatural world xxx

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kimothyschma commented on Chapter 1 on April 22, 2019 01:30pm Liked

Super interesting start, I can't wait to see how it unfolds!

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Versheenah commented on Chapter 1 on April 22, 2019 12:43pm Liked

OMG YES!!!! I never knew I needed Faith/Sheila friendship this bad unil this moment! It's perfect, so so perfect!!

And as much as I hate Bangel and all its grossness, Spike being upfront and honest does change things significantly for me, too, so I'm all in. I bet Buffy will have Spike whipped in no time! Ahah, I can easily see him getting the Gem of Amara just so he can carry Buffy's bags from the mall, lolololol. :D

Also Spike/Faith confrontation was 100% true to their characters and totally awesome! 

This is a brilliant start of a brilliant story and I'm dying to read more!!

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OffYourBird commented on Chapter 1 on April 22, 2019 12:27pm Liked

YAY Challenge story!! I'm so excited you decided to participate, tempestt, and your author's note just cracked me up.

Faith and Sheila as the main crew is SUCH a cool scene setting, and I love how you've shaped Sunnydale high with this set-up, a world where Buffy has no reason to not be still part of the in-crowd (and unhappy in it). Spike and Faith's first dance was SO much fun, too, with all of Spike's observations and getting to see how being the only One has shaped our Dark Slayer. Love this bunches! I'm super excited for more, and Spuffy's first official meeting! bravo

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magnus374 commented on Chapter 1 on April 22, 2019 12:22pm

 Don't worry a bit of hypocrisy is good for the soul, I have heard😀Seriously though, I don't have any problem with the underage thing but It's good that you warn those who does.

I like this so far. It does make sense that Faith as the Slayer would have different kind of friends, Sheila do seem fitting for her.

Spike's voice looks perfect. He is evil at this time and that can be seen in his thoughts. I like the way he is reasoning and planning, it do make sense in that he wants to protect Dru. Spike is good at reading people and he knew perfectly well what to say in order to get an angry reaction out of Faith, he did notice her emotional weak point.

He didn't see much of Buffy, but he is already fascinated. 

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