I am glad to read Wesley/Winifred story. This is his time to help Buffy/Spike. Now I get it, Angel dusted for real, not a dream and he was brought back according to the contract. His job now is to sign paperwork that Gunn bringing to him. Glad that Lorne got out too from WR&H. Giles is still Giles hating Spike.[Report This]
Buffy spirit/soul still ties to Spike indefinitely. However, it seems like it is eating Spike. So he fees like Buffy not acting like herself. I still couldn't wrap my mind Buffy enjoying Spike body while in his body.. haha. Now she knows. Giles is still anti-Spike by telling people he is insane and have to be careful around him. He better not trying to kill Spike again while Buffy is still in Spike.[Report This]
I am glad with their friendship with Wes and Fred. They didn't involve much with what is going on with WR&H since it is an evil law firm. With Buffy there Spike is all doom and gloom. I guess he is feeling bad that Buffy becoming ghostie like him. It is funny that Buffy is more fun than Spike. The situation definitely changes.[Report This]
I loved this story! Some constructive feedback - sometimes the plot was a little hard to grasp, especially in the shifting corporeality of Buffy. It was hard to follow when she was getting stronger or weaker, how she moved, etc. I think a few more concrete details thrown in would help. It felt like, as the reader, the plot's thread would get temporarily lost, but then would come back (albeit fuzzy) if you reread a passage or just moved on.
Ok so now that feedback has been given, you have to know I gobbled the story up! Loved that you saved Fred, especially. You're an awesome writer!![Report This]
This is such a beautifully written story! I'm left satisfied with HEA all around (Wes and Fred, Angel and Andrew, Gunn, relations that can be mended,etc etc), wanting more (yay sequel), and eager to re-read the next time I need it[Report This]
Loved this fic, from the title to the last paragraph. Love that Buffy didn’t abandon Spike on the Hellmouth, that Fred was saved, that Giles finally acknowledged Spike. The ghostly togetherness was fascinating. I can not see Angel accepting the demotion to Andrew’s assistant/protector, but perhaps you will deal with that in the next story. Naming the last chapter “Not Fade Away” was brilliant, a balm for the disappointment and sadness that name generated in many Spuffy lovers. Great job![Report This]