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Snowlight commented on Chapter 1 on March 12, 2019 04:20am

More,please. 

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Green commented on Chapter 1 on March 12, 2019 12:49am Liked

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OffYourBird commented on Chapter 1 on March 12, 2019 12:44am Liked

Oh gosh, this is gorgeously aching. A perfect capture of the layered levels of yearning and denial that Buffy was mentally working with.

Author's Response on March 12, 2019 11:57am

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Twinkles commented on Chapter 1 on March 11, 2019 11:47pm Liked

Ye gads, this is delicious 😍 *drools hopelessly* *fans self*

The imagery is so intense, and it's all so feels, gah I just love it. Thank you so much 💜💙

Author's Response on March 12, 2019 11:56am

Thank you so much for your kind comment!

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pfeifferpack commented on Chapter 1 on March 11, 2019 09:42pm Liked

This is such a great piece showing her inner conflict in S6. What she craves vs what she feels she SHOULD feel. What she needs vs what she's convinced herself she should want.

You capture Spike too, his real needs and wants vs what he settles for.

She knows the truths. She knows what she wants, need and also exactly what Spike does truly feel and she fights hard to ignore all of what she knows, settles for much less. She denies herself as much as she denies the truth. 

Nice and hot too as you describe their play so well.

Excellent one-shot. Bittersweet really. They could have had it all, so much more than she allowed herself.

Kathleen

Author's Response on March 11, 2019 11:07pm

Thank you so much for your thoughtful response! I’m so glad you enjoyed.

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Blackoberst commented on Chapter 1 on March 11, 2019 07:19pm Liked

That was beautiful and sad. I kinda love and hate season 6 for that, but I guess that's what we're supposed to do. 

Author's Response on March 11, 2019 11:06pm

Thank you!

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srbeaver commented on Chapter 1 on March 11, 2019 02:00pm Liked

 You captured how they felt at that time in their relationship. Good story.

Author's Response on March 11, 2019 02:17pm

Thank you!

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magnus374 commented on Chapter 1 on March 11, 2019 01:29pm

This seems right for Buffy at the time. Her mixed feelings and denial is clear to see. How she doesn't want to want Spike, but want him she does. How she claims she doesn't trust him but wants the thrill of not being in charge.

There was great, passion and desperation in this.

Author's Response on March 11, 2019 01:35pm

Thank you!

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EllieRose101 commented on Chapter 1 on March 11, 2019 01:22pm Liked

I loved this. 

It’s raw and could so totally be them. 

Very true to character. 

Author's Response on March 11, 2019 01:23pm

Thank you! <3

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sue commented on Chapter 1 on March 11, 2019 01:04pm

Now that’s the Slayer of season six.  When he had mentioned the word ‘crave’ he could never have imagined the extent........ or the thoughts that it inspired...... thank you for this short and very sharp piece.

Author's Response on March 11, 2019 01:10pm

Thank you for the comment! So glad this rang true for you.

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