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Fluffypuppy commented on First time for everything on November 28, 2019 12:25pm

Indeed a first time for everyone 

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deepbluejoy commented on First time for everything on October 24, 2019 07:42pm

Writer's block blows. Hope we both can escape its grip and write torrents of fabulousness! Glad for every morsel.

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LilyRose9 commented on First time for everything on October 14, 2019 12:56am

Woo! Love how Xander actually stops and listens, and Willow learns there are consequences to all actions. They're definitely the demon police though lol! And Spike as Master of the Town is always a fantastic read. Love this chapter! Happy writing!

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duke6665 commented on First time for everything on September 24, 2019 03:39am Liked

Willow’s eyes got even bigger. “Why would she want vengeance on us?”

Willow shook her head. “But I didn’t mean for any of that to happen. 

THIS right here was always her problem.. I am not guilty or at fault for any of the bad because I DIDN'T MEAN FOR IT TO HAPPEN. So you should not blame me or be mad. Its the one thing I truly hated about Willow. 

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tfranco99 commented on First time for everything on September 23, 2019 12:32pm Liked

It was so worth!! I love this story!!! I love to see Anya having the treatment she deserves!! Pleaaaaaaase more 

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Snowbells commented on First time for everything on September 23, 2019 12:59am Liked

This was worth the wait! I’m so happy to read more adventures in the verse where people listen to Anya

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Anaelyssa commented on First time for everything on September 22, 2019 07:52am Liked

Don't really remember what came before (would have to reread), but a good chapter.

Nice to see Willow being held responsible.

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deepbluejoy commented on First time for everything on September 22, 2019 06:14am

Glad this is back!

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JustWriter commented on First time for everything on September 21, 2019 03:07pm Liked

Well, the first part was a bit awkward for me to read, but I'm glad that you updated at all. The rest was well worth the wait. Things are happening and advancing. Xander met the new member, forming his opinion of her without prejudice. Anya is doing something that will fulfill her. And the Initiative is coming to an end sooner or later. Please let it be sooner, it's annoying when Adam takes the stage, mostly because Maggie was so much more compelling as a villain and they did the whole Frankenstein's monster better with the pair of brothers in high school. And there's so many interesting characters they could rescue if the takedown ends up being sooner. (I'm only making suggestions you don't have to follow.)

Author's Response on September 21, 2019 04:24pm

I'm not sure why the first bit was awkward for you, but I can assure you that there will be no Adam. This will be a strictly 'Maggie as a bad guy' story. The way I'm thinking is that she's gonna be a lot more aggressive about upgrading her troops using 'demon steroids' as opposed to going all 'doctor Frankenstein' out of nowhere. 

JustWriter Replied on September 23, 2019 01:56am

Dunno if this makes sense, but I felt awkward because it felt like I shouldn't be invading certain private parts of their relationship. I'm floundering attempting to explain it any further than that.

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Divaslayer69 commented on First time for everything on September 21, 2019 12:08pm Liked

Awesome chapter 16, I loved it.

Dani

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pfeifferpack commented on First time for everything on September 21, 2019 09:23am Liked

 He did one of his 'I'm orally fixated, ask me how' moves with his tongue, and Buffy felt the need to shift in place. Okay, so some of his oral fixation had transferred to her, but really, who could blame her? LOL That's the best description of his tongue moves I've read. 

they never want to understand one simple thing: power comes with sacrifice. You know it. The previous Slayer gave her life so you could have this power. I died to get mine.  Lots of wisdom there. Good phrasing, great insight. They’re sacrificing both the demons, and their humanity to get the power they crave. Yes, yes, yes! This is just what the Initiative was doing and what made it so very evil. It was nothing like what Buffy and her calling was about, killing demons to protect humans. It was a quest for power and it caused them to lose the better part of their humanity in the quest.

 “Because the spell you cast for me let the vampire version of yourself cross into this world. The victims she made, and the vampires she created, are our fault. So Sandy being a vampire is on us.”  Yup! I always hated that Riley lured Sandy and staked her in canon. 

 When did they become the demon police, exactly? Actually, in my mind that is exactly what Buffy's real job has always been. Demons can't be dealt with by human laws and courts. The Slayer is the policing agency for the demon world. If the demon is killing or in other ways needing to be removed, the Slayer does it... judge, jury and if needed executioner. It's not her job to eliminate all demons.

I love where you are taking this, taking them.

Excellent update and yes, worth the wait.

Kathleen

 

 

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magnus374 commented on First time for everything on September 21, 2019 07:46am

 It was a good chapter. Both Buffy and Xander are made to see that humans has to be harmed sometimes and evil doesn't became less evil just because humans is doing it. I loved Spike's attitude. 

I like the idea they have for a business, I like that concept.

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Fluffypuppy commented on First time for everything on September 21, 2019 01:30am

Novel idea of counselling rather than being a magic shop 

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Hexah commented on First time for everything on September 20, 2019 08:39pm

Thanks for the update. 

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fyreburned commented on First time for everything on September 20, 2019 08:35pm Liked

Glad to see the update!

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All4Spike commented on First time for everything on September 20, 2019 06:20pm Liked

Lovely little tête-à-tête between Buffy & Spike.

Oh, Sandy. I never thought of her as a possibility for Xander's damsel in distress. But she's right. Anya and Willow's spell was responsible for her being turned. 

And Xander has a very opportune little epiphany

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vicdave99 commented on First time for everything on September 20, 2019 06:08pm

Loved it. 

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Angelsheart1 commented on First time for everything on September 20, 2019 05:58pm Liked

Great chapter!  Can't wait to read more!

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Esotericat commented on First time for everything on September 20, 2019 05:40pm Liked

Delighted to see a new chapter!  Look forward to more.

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Rkf22 commented on First time for everything on September 20, 2019 05:25pm

Excellent work can't wait for more 

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spikedreamer commented on First time for everything on September 20, 2019 05:14pm Liked

blow_kiss Oh, Gott....JJJJJAAAAA... es geht weiter.

Spikedreamer

 

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fandoms_mess commented on First time for everything on September 20, 2019 05:03pm Liked

I loved this! I found the part with Buffy and Spike playing who can turn the other on more really playful and funny. I just generally really love them in this fic. It was a really great chapter.

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Spikelover88 commented on First time for everything on September 20, 2019 05:00pm Liked

Great chapter can't wait till the next one 

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Connie_3D commented on Next time on September 11, 2019 04:51pm Liked

I have to say, this chapter might be beta-less, but it is entirely equal to any chapter I have read in this work or the others that you have posted.  And I say this with authority, as I have read them all, repeatedly.  Meaning, I'm having a hard time seeing where you need a beta.  Your work stands on its own.

Now I am enjoying what you did with the characters, most especially Anya and Spike.  You have taken their worst traits and used them to give us open, interesting characters.  So, instead of tamping them down, you have allowed them to shine in a more positive light. 

And having Spike inform Buffy, in so many words, that she should not be comparing him to a soul having Angel was spot on.  This, in itself, is something that a lot of fanfic pieces forgets to take into account, as many continually and repeatedly allow the Angel/Spike comparison to stand unchallenged and few take the trouble to do, what you did, and highlight the difference in comparing a rubber-band soul having vampire with a soulless one.  

I have to also say that most overlook Anya or use her for comic relief.  In allowing Anya to shine, you have also made it possible for the entire Scooby Gang to become more acquaintance with honesty and truth.  So, I am loving this Anya.

One day, I hope to see you return to this work, and with or without a beta, give us the remaining drama and scenes to reach the ending you had planned.  Given the way you have ingeniously twisted cannon, I simply cannot figure out how you planned to end it.

Note:  This is at least my five reading of this work, and I discover new tidbits every time I read it, meaning, it is so good, it stands the test of time.  Thanks for all the hard work and time you invested, it shows.

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gabelou1991 commented on Cold by now on April 28, 2019 05:05am

J'aime beaucoup continu.

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gabelou1991 commented on Next time on April 28, 2019 04:32am

J'aime beaucoup ce chapitre j'aime les pensées de Willow qui sont exactes pour tous ce qu'elle a fait elle a perdu ce statut j'aime bien harmony qui est plus intelligente que ça 

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gabelou1991 commented on Couple of hours on April 28, 2019 04:24am

 J'aime bien mais donc Buffy protrpr les violeurs et autres meurtriers.

C'est un peu dommage.

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TheWickedTruth89 commented on Cold by now on April 27, 2019 10:38am Liked

Great chapter, I can't wait to see more.

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Anaelyssa commented on Cold by now on April 25, 2019 08:29pm Liked

Loving it so far. Anya has been a very positive influence.

Riley/Harmony is an interesting pairing. I hope they work out.

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Anaelyssa commented on Take me to your leader on April 25, 2019 06:00pm Liked

Great first chapter.

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