This was so wonderfully creative! I thought I'd already this, but no complaints for having found it now. Thanks for sharing!
I still blush every time I'm reminded of it 😂 And now's a good time to find something fun, I think :)
Thanks so much 💙
Oh my goodness, that was amazing. Clever and hot and cute and such great art, and... I’d give a lot for there to me more fics like this.
*blushes and fangirls* Thank you so much 💙
And so would I! I keep hoping someone would be inspired to outdo this ;)
Brava! *claps, claps, claps* You are brave and talented! I like what you did with the poem - I laughed out loud at certain lines ("...that asshole" and a few other lines.) And oh, my! Naked in the back seat with handcuffs! Whew! I was kind of afraid to look at this at first, but the drawings were tastefully erotic and not hard core.
Thank you! It was a scary jump to take. And I still dodged around a few bits lol. But the reception's been so encouraging.
So glad you enjoyed it, thanks so much! :D
Oh I never read this! How fun! :-) I especially like the drawing where their foreheads are touching. Nice work.
Much fun :D That's my favourite one too, they're so sweet 💙
Thanks so much, lovely! 💙💜
Kinda of funny reading this in January, but it was really cute regardless! I enjoyed the art and the playful tone of the poem.
Yah! Thank you so much :D
It's never the wrong time for some Christmas fun ;)
I loved this! Playful and gentle and beautiful and hot; wonderful combination of poetry and artwork.
Oh it's such a relief to know it's being enjoyed, and the right moods are coming across :D
Thanks so much! 💙💜
Oh my gosh, I was so giddy to see that you'd replied to the Christmas challenge. And I was doubly giddy to learn that it included adult artwork!
Honestly, I lost it at the second line (after cheering that you took on a MUCH improved version of The Night Before Christmas). Not a creature would settle, especially that asshole
Also, Spike HANDCUFFED IN A CAR WITH JEANS UNZIPPED? *frantically fans self*
OKAY IT GOT HOTTER *drags over kiddie pool*
I just love your art style here! There's something so sexy about sketched lines. (and naked Spuffy, of course )
This poem was hysterical and sweet and perfectly "bad" enough I loved every single line!!!
Yah :D So glad you like 💜
I never would have decided to add handcuffs, but I needed some sort of toy to appear for the line and they seemed like an innocuous option. But then there was the look on his face, and the eager submission, and the constant consent to the game in knowing he'd have to try to not break them...yeah I need more bondage play smut now.
And I thought I'd be dispassionately sketching no worries, but when I got to the completely non-explicit foreheads together one the context/loving intimacy got to me and I needed a few buckets of icy water too 😂
Merry Christmas 💙
This is utterly and truly amazing. Everything about it is magnificent, such a beautiful brain you have. 😍💚
Thank you! 💙
I was so worried it would be too far out there. But I like it, so ooh I'm just so happy other people do too 💘
Awwwww. :) What a fabulous idea! The "sweet berry" line might be my favorite -- great image, and it folds so smoothly into the form, too. ^^
And thank you for the links!
Yah! I didn't want to use 'cherry' from the original, it has such overtones of misogynistic views of virginity. A sweet little berry is much more fitting ;)
Enjoy the links! I'm eagerly awaiting your version now :D
Thank you 💜💙
Ah, well. Can I get away with writing a different sex-themed Spuffy poem?
YAS! Please do 😍
You did really well here. The way we could recognise the original poem even though the content was completely different was very well done indeed. The poem had the right "voice" to have been Spike. The art was great and erotic, the style of the text and the colours was great. I have nothing but praise to say.
Yah :D The similarity remaining to the original text cracks me up lol.
And erotica is what I was hoping for, something more tender below the smutty surface.
Thanks so much lovely 💜 💙
I told you everyone would love it - and I didn’t even see the art beforehand. You truly have a unique and special talent! As Kathleen said, I also totally hear Spike’s voice in this
Thanks for sharing!!
Thanks so much 💙 I muchly appreciate your boost of encouragement to put this out there.
I was blushing like a schoolgirl and totally thought about just sharing the text 😂 But I'd promised pictures, so I womaned up eventually and did it.
And yah for managing characterisation! I was trying to cram some sense of smitten loving admiration into the carnal humour.
Thank you 💜
BRILLIANT!!!! Love the illustrations (gorgeous) and the parody/poem. Love your choice of font and color. Every choice just spot on.
Witty and clever and I can just hear Spike with every line.
You are so very creative. So glad you share.
Thank you! It was so much fun to make, just so happy and relieved that it's fun for everyone else now too :D
Thanks so much lovely 💜 💙