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angelic_amy commented on Chapter 1 on April 02, 2020 12:44am Liked

This was so wonderfully creative! I thought I'd already this, but no complaints for having found it now. Thanks for sharing!

Author's Response on April 02, 2020 03:26am

I still blush every time I'm reminded of it 😂 And now's a good time to find something fun, I think :)

Thanks so much 💙

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ScarlettDuck commented on Chapter 1 on February 05, 2020 01:56pm Liked

Love the poem adaptation and the illustrations! 

Author's Response on April 01, 2020 08:02pm

Thank you! *queue blushing*

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Sigyn commented on Chapter 1 on October 25, 2019 03:12am Liked

Oh my goodness, that was amazing. Clever and hot and cute and such great art, and... I’d give a lot for there to me more fics like this. 

Author's Response on October 26, 2019 04:22am

*blushes and fangirls*  Thank you so much 💙

And so would I! I keep hoping someone would be inspired to outdo this ;)

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sweetprincipale commented on Chapter 1 on September 15, 2019 06:26am

That was like the best thing EVER. I applaud the author and artist, you have extreme talent. Just wow.

Sweet

Author's Response on October 03, 2019 03:04pm

/squees wildly squee

Thank you so much, so glad you enjoyed 💙

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all_choseny commented on Chapter 1 on June 20, 2019 05:27pm

This was amazing! I loved it. I think this is my new favorite Christmas story lol. 

Author's Response on June 21, 2019 03:28am

Hehe, I'm so glad :D Such fun!

It was my way of breaking the smut-writing barrier 😂

Thank you 💙

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Blackoberst commented on Chapter 1 on April 17, 2019 10:36am Liked

The sketches are good  and I'm sure practice will make perfect with time. Loved the re-write of the poem. 

Author's Response on April 18, 2019 03:46am

Thank you! Reception definitely encouraging me to keep at it :D

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MiseEnPlace commented on Chapter 1 on April 10, 2019 11:41am Liked

Brava! *claps, claps, claps* You are brave and talented! I like what you did with the poem - I laughed out loud at certain lines ("...that asshole" and a few other lines.) And oh, my! Naked in the back seat with handcuffs! Whew! I was kind of afraid to look at this at first, but the drawings were tastefully erotic and not hard core. 

Author's Response on April 11, 2019 05:02am

Thank you! It was a scary jump to take. And I still dodged around a few bits lol. But the reception's been so encouraging.
So glad you enjoyed it, thanks so much! :D

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KillerSnotMonster commented on Chapter 1 on April 04, 2019 11:41am Liked

Oh I never read this! How fun! :-) I especially like the drawing where their foreheads are touching. Nice work.

Author's Response on April 04, 2019 10:25pm

Much fun :D That's my favourite one too, they're so sweet 💙

Thanks so much, lovely! 💙💜

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BluStar11 commented on Chapter 1 on February 12, 2019 10:23pm Liked

I am in the Christmas spirit once more. Thanks for sharing!

Author's Response on March 14, 2019 08:05pm

Yah! Thank you so much for letting me know <3

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thewiggins commented on Chapter 1 on January 27, 2019 09:29am Liked

 Kinda of funny reading this in January, but it was really cute regardless! I enjoyed the art and the playful tone of the poem.

Author's Response on March 14, 2019 08:05pm

Yah! Thank you so much :D

It's never the wrong time for some Christmas fun ;)

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FandomsOfAGrrrl commented on Chapter 1 on January 26, 2019 01:24am Liked

this was AWESOME!!!! lol

Author's Response on January 26, 2019 04:34am

Yah! Thank you so much 💘

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ScarlettDuck commented on Chapter 1 on December 26, 2018 06:34pm

Absolutely adorable smutty Christmas fic.

Author's Response on December 30, 2018 09:16pm

Thanks! So glad you enjoyed it 💜

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malika585 commented on Chapter 1 on December 25, 2018 01:16pm

Wow. The drawings were good too- Not porn like, but sexy. 

Author's Response on December 25, 2018 02:51pm

Thank you 💜

I was aiming for a softer eroticism than the porny words suggest ;)

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holetoledo commented on Chapter 1 on December 16, 2018 12:03am

Oh my lawd I am enamored by everything about this

Author's Response on December 16, 2018 01:23am

Thank you! hearts

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Double Dutchess commented on Chapter 1 on December 14, 2018 03:51am

I loved this! Playful and gentle and beautiful and hot; wonderful combination of poetry and artwork.

Author's Response on December 15, 2018 09:48pm

Oh it's such a relief to know it's being enjoyed, and the right moods are coming across :D 

Thanks so much! 💙💜

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OffYourBird commented on Chapter 1 on December 13, 2018 08:43pm Liked

Oh my gosh, I was so giddy to see that you'd replied to the Christmas challenge. And I was doubly giddy to learn that it included adult artwork!

Honestly, I lost it at the second line (after cheering that you took on a MUCH improved version of The Night Before Christmas). Not a creature would settle, especially that asshole haha

Also, Spike HANDCUFFED IN A CAR WITH JEANS UNZIPPED? *frantically fans self* 

OKAY IT GOT HOTTER *drags over kiddie pool*

I just love your art style here! There's something so sexy about sketched lines. (and naked Spuffy, of course innocent)

This poem was hysterical and sweet and perfectly "bad" enough devil I loved every single line!!! bravo

Author's Response on December 13, 2018 09:33pm

Yah :D So glad you like 💜

I never would have decided to add handcuffs, but I needed some sort of toy to appear for the line and they seemed like an innocuous option. But then there was the look on his face, and the eager submission, and the constant consent to the game in knowing he'd have to try to not break them...yeah I need more bondage play smut now.

And I thought I'd be dispassionately sketching no worries, but when I got to the completely non-explicit foreheads together one the context/loving intimacy got to me and I needed a few buckets of icy water too 😂

Merry Christmas 💙

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Green commented on Chapter 1 on December 13, 2018 01:28am Liked

This is utterly and truly amazing. Everything about it is magnificent, such a beautiful brain you have. 😍💚

Author's Response on December 13, 2018 04:44am

Thank you! 💙

I was so worried it would be too far out there. But I like it, so ooh I'm just so happy other people do too 💘

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Penny commented on Chapter 1 on December 12, 2018 08:46pm Liked

 This is fantastic!

Author's Response on December 13, 2018 04:41am

Thanks, glad you like it 💜 

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Behind Blue Eyes commented on Chapter 1 on December 12, 2018 07:44pm Liked

Brilliant!  Thanks for sharing

Author's Response on December 13, 2018 04:40am

Thank you! 💙💜

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srbeaver commented on Chapter 1 on December 12, 2018 05:53pm Liked

 Awesome and hot!!

Author's Response on December 13, 2018 04:40am

Thank you! 💙💜

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thenewbuzwuzz commented on Chapter 1 on December 12, 2018 01:48pm Liked

Awwwww. :) What a fabulous idea! The "sweet berry" line might be my favorite -- great image, and it folds so smoothly into the form, too. ^^

And thank you for the links!

Author's Response on December 12, 2018 02:07pm

Yah! I didn't want to use 'cherry' from the original, it has such overtones of misogynistic views of virginity. A sweet little berry is much more fitting ;)

Enjoy the links! I'm eagerly awaiting your version now :D 

Thank you 💜💙

thenewbuzwuzz Replied on December 12, 2018 02:24pm

Ah, well. Can I get away with writing a different sex-themed Spuffy poem? 

Author's Response on December 12, 2018 02:25pm

YAS! Please do 😍

thenewbuzwuzz Replied on December 12, 2018 02:27pm

<3

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magnus374 commented on Chapter 1 on December 12, 2018 12:48pm

 You did really well here. The way we could recognise the original poem even though the content was completely different was very well done indeed. The poem had the right "voice" to have been Spike. The art was great and erotic, the style of the text and the colours was great. I have nothing but praise to say.

Author's Response on December 12, 2018 01:36pm

Yah :D The similarity remaining to the original text cracks me up lol. 

And erotica is what I was hoping for, something more tender below the smutty surface. 

Thanks so much lovely 💜 💙 

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Badwolfjedi commented on Chapter 1 on December 12, 2018 11:29am Liked

I told you everyone would love it - and I didn’t even see the art beforehand. You truly have a unique and special talent! As Kathleen said, I also totally hear Spike’s voice in this drooldevil

Thanks for sharing!!flowersbravo

Author's Response on December 12, 2018 01:31pm

Thanks so much 💙 I muchly appreciate your boost of encouragement to put this out there. 

I was blushing like a schoolgirl and totally thought about just sharing the text 😂 But I'd promised pictures, so I womaned up eventually and did it. 

And yah for managing characterisation! I was trying to cram some sense of smitten loving admiration into the carnal humour. 

Thank you 💜

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Priceless commented on Chapter 1 on December 12, 2018 08:45am Liked

Loved it!  The drawings were amazing too. You have so much talent, thank you for sharing bravo

Author's Response on December 12, 2018 01:19pm

Thank you! So glad you enjoyed it and let me know :yah: 💙

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slaymesoftly commented on Chapter 1 on December 12, 2018 07:56am Liked

Brilliant!  Congrats to you and all your encouragers. Merry Christmas indeed!

Author's Response on December 12, 2018 01:18pm

Thank you! So glad you like it 💜 💙 

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angelbeat commented on Chapter 1 on December 12, 2018 05:28am Liked

applausebowThank you. I loved it!

Author's Response on December 12, 2018 01:17pm

Thank you so much for letting me know! :squee: 💜

Author's Response on December 12, 2018 01:17pm

Thank you so much for letting me know! :squee: 💜

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pfeifferpack commented on Chapter 1 on December 12, 2018 03:59am Liked

BRILLIANT!!!!  Love the illustrations (gorgeous) and the parody/poem. Love your choice of font and color. Every choice just spot on.

Witty and clever and I can just hear Spike with every line. 

You are so very creative.  So glad you share.

Really excellent.

Kathleen

Author's Response on December 12, 2018 01:16pm

Thank you! It was so much fun to make, just so happy and relieved that it's fun for everyone else now too :D 

Thanks so much lovely 💜 💙 

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Pencilcomet commented on Chapter 1 on December 12, 2018 03:51am Liked

This is brilliant. Some parts made me giggle and the artwork is lovely. 

Author's Response on December 12, 2018 01:13pm

Yah :D I've had a blushing giggle on my tongue every time I think of it 😂

Thank you 💜

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Rebcake commented on Chapter 1 on December 12, 2018 03:13am Liked

What a fun, festive, funny romp! Thanks for taking the leap and sharing it with us!

Author's Response on December 12, 2018 01:09pm

Thank you! So glad you enjoyed 💜💙

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vicdave99 commented on Chapter 1 on December 12, 2018 03:08am Liked

heart snerk!

Author's Response on December 12, 2018 01:09pm

💜💙

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