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listenheremister commented on Chapter Seven on September 26, 2020 02:41pm Liked

Ohhhh my poor babehs!!!

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listenheremister commented on Chapter Two on September 26, 2020 02:20pm Liked

Daaaaamn  this is hitting ALL THE FEELS awesome read

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Jos771 commented on Epilogue on September 06, 2019 05:22pm

I really enjoyed this story. Thank you for sharing!!!

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Kasia commented on Chapter One on July 28, 2019 07:14pm

Intriguing. Though the changes make it seem like it's a sequel to another story.

Author's Response on July 28, 2019 07:35pm

I jump right into the middle but, the more you get into it, the more the backstory to the changes are explained and explored. 

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Melissanelson1975 commented on Epilogue on July 11, 2019 05:58pm Liked

So good

Author's Response on July 11, 2019 06:02pm

Thank you! 

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Joyce commented on Epilogue on July 11, 2019 09:45am

Nice epilogue and sneaky Joyce who knew what was coming. Glad that all the Scoobies came round too.

 

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Joyce commented on Chapter Twenty on July 11, 2019 09:35am

I’m glad also that Buffy came clean with background info for Joyce. Still find it hard to believe that she did not explain the Hellmouth.

Isn’t the new place surrounded by demons? Kind of risky for public sex with the slayer in my honest opinion.

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Joyce commented on Chapter Nineteen on July 11, 2019 09:11am

So that was the errand. I was wondering what errands Spike would carry out in the daytime.

I’m with Spike Clarity is so much better than mixed signals.

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Joyce commented on Chapter Eighteen on July 11, 2019 08:55am

It’s a good thing that Spike had enough control to not automatically run into Buffy’s room.

Talk with Joyce upcoming?

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Joyce commented on Chapter Seventeen on July 11, 2019 08:30am

I suppose as a vampire, some of Spike’s qualities would become more apparet. I was going to disagree initially from a human perspective. The older I get, the more patient I get. Time is just time. Not in such a hurry to get things done.

Putting one’s impatience into useful actions is of the good. Good thing that the aroma overruled the hormones in this case.

What the heck happened here?! It happened so fast and I put it on both of them.

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JustWriter commented on Epilogue on July 10, 2019 07:36pm Liked

 Are you leaving room for a sequel? Cruciamentum and the Initiative?

Author's Response on July 10, 2019 09:03pm

I don’t have any sequels planned, but I wouldn’t say one is completely impossible at some point in the future.

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Robyn commented on Epilogue on July 10, 2019 12:31pm Liked

Thank you for the story .  I really enjoyed it. 

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Lou commented on Epilogue on July 10, 2019 08:34am Liked

I do love a happy schmaltzy ending - this was fun.

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firegoddess commented on Epilogue on July 10, 2019 07:46am Liked

 Great story - really enjoyed reading it!  Thank you for writing this sweet, fun tale!

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Joyce commented on Chapter Sixteen on July 09, 2019 09:20pm

Wow! Xander really went there! Hoping Buffy had some glaring darts in her eyes while keeping her voice even after that.

Way to introduce a conflict! Hee hee.

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Joyce commented on Chapter Fifteen on July 09, 2019 09:10pm

Yay for insightful Oz! And still Xander is dumbfounded when the truth is put before him.

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Angelsheart1 commented on Epilogue on July 09, 2019 08:33pm Liked

That was sweet!  Thank you for writing more!  Loved reading this story!

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pfeifferpack commented on Epilogue on July 09, 2019 07:12pm Liked

I'm rather happy you decided to add the epilogue. It shows them all accepting and Buffy and Spike happy and secure. A true HEA if ever there was one!

Joyce is like all mom's when their baby grows up but she is handling it just right (finally). 

Glad you mentioned Sunshine. 

Loved the whole story. Nicely tied up in a way that leaves a wide grin on this reader. Buffy gets a GOOD birthday!

Kathleen

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Green commented on Epilogue on July 09, 2019 06:12pm Liked

😍 awww love it 💕💚

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Fluffypuppy commented on Epilogue on July 09, 2019 03:46pm

Lovely way to say goodbye to this universe 

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D1234 commented on Epilogue on July 09, 2019 02:30pm Liked

A nice epilogue...I like how they all accepted the relationship in your reality. This also means that Buffy won’t have to share a dorm room with a demon undercover or fall victim to Sunday’s gang, when she starts college.

Lovely story.

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magnus374 commented on Epilogue on July 09, 2019 02:10pm

This was a sweet ending. Now they are in an established relationship and everyone seems to be happy for them, very nice.

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deepbluejoy commented on Epilogue on July 09, 2019 12:59pm

what a lovely little coda.  I knew you were done, but this is just the cake with the spike fingers surrounding them...  you know what I'm saying... happy times!

Thank you!

Blue

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All4Spike commented on Epilogue on July 09, 2019 12:53pm Liked

I'm among those who didn't notice a 'complete' tick, so I'm delighted to see this update of an epilogue.

It really is a perfect ending with our Spuffy pair stepping into the future as an acknowledged  - and accepted - loving couple.

Thank you.

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Pencilcomet commented on Epilogue on July 09, 2019 11:49am Liked

I was definitely one of the people who didn't realize the story was over! That's sad. This is a lovely ending.

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Spikelover88 commented on Epilogue on July 09, 2019 11:43am Liked

Great story 

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deepbluejoy commented on Chapter Twenty on July 08, 2019 02:54pm

lovely!

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All4Spike commented on Chapter Twenty on July 08, 2019 02:03pm Liked

Good to see Buffy opening up to her mother. She didn't do that enough, under the impression she was 'protecting' her.

And they both said The Words! Awesome!

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magnus374 commented on Chapter Twenty on July 08, 2019 02:02pm

I can see Spike going around picking up things looking on the clock then try to wait another moment untill he looks again. He does have thought things out. He knows that he has to let Buffy do things without him, they can't be all about just each other. He is planning to have other things to do, good. 

It was good to see Buffy and Joyce talking, this gave Joyce a better understanding of Buffy's life.

We seems to be leaving Buffy and Spike at a good place, the ending line was really goid.

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Green commented on Chapter Twenty on July 08, 2019 09:41am Liked

Wonderful chapter and sad that the story is over, maybe someday it will continue but it left off at a beautiful place. They're in love 💕. 💚

Author's Response on July 08, 2019 10:32am

You know what? Most people don’t seem to have realised this story is now complete. I might write an epilogue just to wrap things up even more. 

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