Intriguing. Though the changes make it seem like it's a sequel to another story.
I jump right into the middle but, the more you get into it, the more the backstory to the changes are explained and explored.
I’m glad also that Buffy came clean with background info for Joyce. Still find it hard to believe that she did not explain the Hellmouth.
Isn’t the new place surrounded by demons? Kind of risky for public sex with the slayer in my honest opinion.[Report This]
I suppose as a vampire, some of Spike’s qualities would become more apparet. I was going to disagree initially from a human perspective. The older I get, the more patient I get. Time is just time. Not in such a hurry to get things done.
Putting one’s impatience into useful actions is of the good. Good thing that the aroma overruled the hormones in this case.
What the heck happened here?! It happened so fast and I put it on both of them.[Report This]
I'm rather happy you decided to add the epilogue. It shows them all accepting and Buffy and Spike happy and secure. A true HEA if ever there was one!
Joyce is like all mom's when their baby grows up but she is handling it just right (finally).
Glad you mentioned Sunshine.
Loved the whole story. Nicely tied up in a way that leaves a wide grin on this reader. Buffy gets a GOOD birthday!
A nice epilogue...I like how they all accepted the relationship in your reality. This also means that Buffy won’t have to share a dorm room with a demon undercover or fall victim to Sunday’s gang, when she starts college.
Lovely story.[Report This]
I'm among those who didn't notice a 'complete' tick, so I'm delighted to see this update of an epilogue.
It really is a perfect ending with our Spuffy pair stepping into the future as an acknowledged - and accepted - loving couple.
Thank you.[Report This]
I can see Spike going around picking up things looking on the clock then try to wait another moment untill he looks again. He does have thought things out. He knows that he has to let Buffy do things without him, they can't be all about just each other. He is planning to have other things to do, good.
It was good to see Buffy and Joyce talking, this gave Joyce a better understanding of Buffy's life.
We seems to be leaving Buffy and Spike at a good place, the ending line was really goid.[Report This]
Wonderful chapter and sad that the story is over, maybe someday it will continue but it left off at a beautiful place. They're in love 💕. 💚
You know what? Most people don’t seem to have realised this story is now complete. I might write an epilogue just to wrap things up even more.