Excellent story. I really enjoyed it. Keep writing.
[Report This]I re-read this again and this is still really good! I also thought there was a different plot point in here as well but that must have been a different story.
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I really liked what you did with this and how Buffy not being able to hear actually opened up her world a lot even as it isolated her with the way some people just refused to adapt or work with her. I felt so bad for her that she thinks of Kendra as a friend when Kendra leaves while Kendra thinks she's shallow but is jealous of her. But I liked that she and Faith had a chance to meet and that there was an actual friendship there between them. And I'm definitely glad that she was able to get Xander out of her life because he wasn't making an effort - it sort of seemed like he might try at first but then as time went on, that went out the door.
Spike was fantastic. I loved when the Oracles let Buffy hear his thoughts and it was nothing but pure love while Angel's were all creepy and horrible. It's so great that she got to hear his voice because she had a memory, at the very least, of most of her friends' voices (except the ones she made after she came back of course) and that moment when she heard his voice the first time was touching. Thanks for writing this!
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Utterly masterful! Heavily enjoyed this story! Fantastic piece of work! Xx
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Oh this is fantastic! Gunn you dumby, I love him but Sheesh read the room. I'm so happy Doyle is still alive! And him and Cordelia are in a relationship! Awwww! Of course my fave relationship is as brilliant as ever! I wonder if claims aren't myth? That certainly seemed like foreshadowing but ya never know! Xx
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Hehe. Angel being his usual annoying self. Lorne reading Buffy's aura like DAmN. Love it! Xx
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Spike!! Tell her about her eighteenth! Buffy!! Tell him you've never had sex! Fucking Angel. Gross pedo. Loved this chapter! Xx
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Ooo! This is so good! Can't wait to see her take down the Initiative. Always hated how she never saw how bad they were before they decided to go after her too. Xx
[Report This]Oh Buffy... If only you knew... Spike can't stay away for long! I love this so far! <3 xx
[Report This]And, OMG, I just started another fic with an opening scene from The Replacements and realized Lady Vi’s tearoom came from Spike’s comment at the dump! Nice!
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It was lovely how she could hear his voice in her head at the end. And I appreciated that her hearing wasn’t miraculously restored and that the story was about people who loved her and her amazing self and she didn’t need to have it back because she was awesome just as she was.
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I like Angel’s crew hanging out with Buffy and Spike
And I’m totally looking forward to Angel getting his ass handed to him when he does whatever he’s about to do. I’m going to guess something horrible to Spike?
[Report This]I love Lorne so much! And Doyle getting irritated with Angel was great! Gunn at the end was a nice touch.
[Report This]The whole thread of Buffy being an artist is interesting.
[Report This]I always thought in the later seasons that Anya would’ve been a much better friend for Buffy than Willow and Xander. She had a different perspective and was blunt.
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Nice setup with Buffy being introduced early on to the shades of gray in the demon world as a direct result of her Watcher only seeing her disability. I love that you incorporated the two American Gods characters! And it’s totally in character for Spike to have learned sign language to communicate with her because he’s all about the challenge of a fair fight and, of course, how could he engage her in snarky banter without it? Lol
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A wonderful concept of a story : ) Thanks for sharing~
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Beautiful!!
[Report This]I love this story. Every change in Buffy's life was natural. The way Lorne described her was beautiful and true ♥
[Report This]I love reading this story! Always enjoyable!
[Report This]I love this story it was beautiful
[Report This]I love this story! It's one of those stories you can read over and over and enjoy all the more.
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ha!take that angel! lovely!!
love the twists in this story and the original spark that started everything! very ìnteresting premise and gŕeat development!
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That was a beautiful story! Loved reading it!
[Report This]This story was bloody fantastic. I just found it tonight but couldn't put it down. I loved everything about it.
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Thank you lots for such a beautiful, sweet, and awesome story! It always made me sad how Buffy was betrayed by pretty much everyone in her life, yet she constantly forgave them and they still ended up treating her crappy over and over again. If only she had treated Spike, who treated her better than anyone else in her life once he got past that pesky wanting to kill his third slayer bit, as good as her friends & family then I truly believe she could have been a lot more happier and had the love life she always dreamed of.
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This really was quite lovely. I thought that the premise was very interesting, and you did a fantastic job exploring the changes in Buffy and her relationships. Thank you for a story I really enjoyed reading and will most definitely read again.
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Sequel?????
[Report This]Very lovely story. Buffy being deaf is a twist i never before read in a story. You very convincingly wrote the repercussions it would have for her interactins with her friends and with the demon community.
Very happy about the Xander and Angel bashing. I never liked their bigoted and patronizing ways.
Nice twist with the gem of Amara and the oracles giving Buffy the Claim ritual for Spike and her. I would have prefered the gem magically fixed to Spike.
Hope you will write an other story soon
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