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TeamEricNSookie commented on One-Shot on April 06, 2021 07:25pm

Well THAT just happened.  Lol 😋

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bmerb commented on One-Shot on February 13, 2021 03:50pm Liked

Ahh delicious porn w/out plot

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JCCx commented on One-Shot on August 09, 2020 11:15pm Liked

No one can write a sexy moment quite like Sunalso!

Author's Response on November 25, 2020 08:48pm

Thank you so much! 

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Ginger commented on One-Shot on December 27, 2019 11:28pm

Well, wasn't this delicious. I, too, love Lovers Walk. In my head canon it marks the moment Buffy takes the first step away from her past (Angel) towards her future (Spike). When she says she violently dislikes him, sex is the subtext. Angel is the third wheel. He may stick around for a few more months but he's already history. :-)

Author's Response on January 04, 2020 05:43pm

Angel is so history! Thank you so much for the read and review! 

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Twinkles commented on One-Shot on October 20, 2019 06:03am Liked

 So delicious 😋

Love it, thank you 💙

Author's Response on October 25, 2019 03:02pm

I’m so glad you enjoyed! d84;a039;😃

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ScarlettDuck commented on One-Shot on May 30, 2019 02:29pm

I love this so much. Silly, hot, and unbelievable that it's so plausible. Magic.

Author's Response on June 01, 2019 12:26am

Thank you so much! I’m glad you enjoyed the crazy ;-)

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subchan commented on One-Shot on August 21, 2018 06:26pm Liked

Wow! that was pretty hot!

Author's Response on August 21, 2018 06:29pm

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deepbluejoy commented on One-Shot on August 20, 2018 05:59am

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Author's Response on August 21, 2018 06:29pm

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Megan commented on One-Shot on July 10, 2018 07:04am Liked

 Well that was an incredibly hot little read.  I might be fanning myself for a little while after that! Love that Spike was so carried away with his misery he didn't even know what he was doing until he was doing it.  Quite the reward for the both of them.

Author's Response on July 10, 2018 08:10am

:-D :-D I really enjoy Lover's Walk because Buffy's just so over everything the entire episode and Spike's the biggest dork...and if Angel hadn't been hovering I swear Spike and Buffy would have been all over each other! (Like when she's "threatening" him with the wooden spoon. Her free hand spends most of its time on his belly...what you're looking for is just a little lower, Buffy ;-) So it didn't take much prodding for me to get them hot and heavy! 

Thank you for the read and review! 

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SzmattyCat commented on One-Shot on May 01, 2018 07:10am Liked

*Absurdly* funny beginning... Love this story to itty-bitty, sexy, giggle-inducing bits!

Author's Response on May 01, 2018 08:27am

I'm so glad you enjoyed! :-D :-D

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acekoomboom commented on One-Shot on April 30, 2018 12:23pm

 Oh my goodness!! That was freaking hilarious. How he was complaining and drunkenly venting, and all of the sudden Buffy was into it - his soft hair of all things, that was just amazing - and he smelt it, and it was on. When he was covered in her juices, all over his face, and saying that Dru was crazy for saying he was covered in the Slayer BAWHAHAHAHAHA!!! I was not expecting this fic to be so funny. I like that it did feel like dirty, casual alley sex. It wasn't romanticized at all. He was talking random stuff while eating her out. He came on her breast, and only one of them at that. He didn't even have her help, he just pumped himself off looking at her. Classic drunken alley stuff! The vibe of it all was cohesive. Imagine how this could have affected Something Blue! Cuz I could totally see them ignoring the fact that this happened when he comes to them with a chip in his head, and they only argue or bicker tersly about it when no one else is around. And then the spell goes off and they are getting married, and bam, they talk about it in a ridiculous lovey- dovey way and say all of the subconscious atrration stuff they did not even know they felt. Omg, I want a follow up one shot! It would be so amazing. I really enjoyed this read!

Author's Response on April 30, 2018 02:37pm

Yay! I'm so glad you really got what I was going for with this little fic. Neither of them were really quite thinking straight and it led to a lot more than either one intended to do, and it most certainly wasn't sweet, lol. Picking this thread up during Something Blue would be hilarious- I'm sure Giles would hear a lot MORE stuff he really didn't want to when Spike and Buffy start reminiscing about "that one time"! 

Thank you so much for the read and review! 

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Bekah_Leigh commented on One-Shot on March 17, 2018 01:39pm Liked

One of my favorite episodes, too! I mean, I'm just a fanatical Spuffy fan, but I always thought there was more going on under the surface throughout this episode. The interaction between the two of them demonstrated a certain level of connection, in my opinion. ;) This fic is a great exploration of that! I love how even in the midst of fulfilling their repressed fantasies, they kept saying "No idea what Dru could have possible meant." Delightful touch!

Author's Response on March 17, 2018 01:42pm

Hee! I'm glad you enjoyed. That episode just makes me want to reach through the screen and smush them together, and Angel can wander off and fall down a well or something. Thank you for the read and review! 

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Queenfish commented on One-Shot on March 12, 2018 05:04pm Liked

Really hot and amusing - how great is that!!!!

Author's Response on March 13, 2018 02:33pm

Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed! 

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Cupcakes525 commented on One-Shot on March 10, 2018 12:40am Liked

I so dearly wished that there was more to this! Great one shot. Very hot!

Author's Response on March 12, 2018 11:06am

Thank you! There so could be more, which is why I titled it how I did, lol ;-) 

Cupcakes525 Replied on March 12, 2018 03:41pm

Well in that case I am very excited for that possibility!

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relurker commented on One-Shot on January 19, 2018 07:24am

You have a way of making porn work! Kudos!

This kind of unthinkable behaviour should not be so appealing, should not run so smooth, but it does. 

(I reached an age where porn per se is kind of boring, but not yours. Cheers!)

Author's Response on January 23, 2018 11:20pm

Haha! I've had some practice now ;-) 

 

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ScarlettDuck commented on One-Shot on January 15, 2018 08:52pm Liked

 Oh, wow, that was fun. And begging for a sequel. No way Spike let's that just sit.

Author's Response on January 16, 2018 02:23pm

There's no way! (hence: "Beginnings" biggrin )

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NickaML commented on One-Shot on January 03, 2018 04:56am

Well that saddest as hell

Author's Response on January 03, 2018 12:18pm

Saddest? I can assure you neither Buffy or Spike were sad, lol. Thank you for the read and review! 

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Amasirol commented on One-Shot on January 01, 2018 12:54pm Liked

Not sure how I missed this story the first time around but this is a seriously hot interlude. I wish this happened in Lover’s Walk. It would’ve been a seriously great relief of tension for a second-starved S3 Buffy! 

Author's Response on January 02, 2018 10:08am

I'm glad you caught and Yay! Thank you! Poor so-over-it Buffy could have certainly used a little relief by the time Lover's Walk rolled around, lol. 

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MoonstruckHeroine commented on One-Shot on December 27, 2017 01:37pm Liked

Loved this! Also, happy birthday!

Author's Response on December 27, 2017 01:43pm

Thank you! And I'm very glad you enjoyed!

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thenewbuzwuzz commented on One-Shot on December 23, 2017 01:40am Liked

“Mostly about how I tasted like ashes and was covered in you. You! The Slayer! Can you believe that?” Hahahahahaaa, Spike does denial like nobody's business. That was hilarious! biggrin

"until Buffy wanted to pull her hair out and stuff it down Spike’s throat just so he’d shut up for at least five seconds" *snerk*

"If you want to shag a bloke, shag a bloke.” *snicker* Words to live by!

Author's Response on December 26, 2017 03:24pm

Drunk!Spike's on autopilot, lol. 

Both my and Gort sort of think Spike would LIKE her shoving her hair down his throat... ;-) 

Spike is very practical about some things ;-)

Thank you for the read and review!  

thenewbuzwuzz Replied on December 26, 2017 11:23pm

"Both my and Gort sort of think Spike would LIKE her shoving her hair down his throat" NOW THAT YOU MENTION IT... *nods* (I think he might like the idea of it more than the actual process, but you never know. :D)

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swifthorse commented on One-Shot on December 20, 2017 12:02pm Liked

Omg, this is great! When I started reading the story I couldn't figure out how you were going to get to all the porn but I should have known - If anyone could do it, it'd be Sunalso!!

The transition from consoling to oral sex was just amazing. They're both kind of stuck on their past-significant others but, hey, what can you do when you have chemistry? I saw hints that Buffy was giving off a positive scent to Spike too, so they know they (subconsciously, at least) both want one another. 

And, after that hot scene, I doubt Spike will be thinking about anyone other than Buffy for a long time. ;) He's probably going to just end up sticking around Sunnydale. Lol, poor Buffy's going to have to hide from Angel for a long time if she want's to keep this little tryst a secret. You won't hear me complaining about that. We could all do with a little less Angel, haha. 

Thanks so much for sharing this! You're an absolute beast, being able to pop this story out during such a tough time. I wish you and your family all the best. <3 If you guys need anything, feel free to pm me.

Author's Response on December 26, 2017 03:08pm

Hahaha! No problem getting the smut worked in, lol. 

Poor Buffy was a little lost because she was getting turned on in a way that was new for her, and drunk!Spike didn't even put together exactly what he was doing, lol. His Id was totally in control ;-) Not that either one completely minded, in the end! 

Spike will probably TRY to leave, but I doubt he'll get too far! 

I like imaging Angel getting back and Buffy and Spike just being gone and he's standing there like: what happened? Where's everybody? 

I actually wrote this in November but was saving it for Spuffy Appreciation Week. Thank you for all the well wishes and support during this rough December!

:-D

 

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EllieRose101 commented on One-Shot on December 19, 2017 05:56pm Liked

Guhh! Could I maybe, like, pay you a great deal of money for more of this? Like an entire rewrite of all the seasons from here, with this as the starting point? I need it for... reasons. 

Author's Response on December 26, 2017 02:45pm

Lol!! I keep hoping I'll win the lottery and can just spend my days writing fic ;-) Thank you for the read and review!

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theblueeyedvampire commented on One-Shot on December 18, 2017 08:08pm Liked

Damn, that was hot. A+. Totally agree that Lover's Walk is by far the best episode in season 3 (Band Candy is the runner up, in my humble opinion). blow_kiss

Author's Response on December 26, 2017 02:33pm

Band Candy is so much fun too! I really like the wishverse episode as well. So much wonderful potential :- D 

Thank you so much for the read and review! 

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gill commented on One-Shot on December 18, 2017 07:45pm Liked

Wow. Thanks for this fun number. This is also one of my favorite episodes. Definitely the best of season 3.

Author's Response on December 26, 2017 02:27pm

Thank you! It really is such a fun episode! :-D

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Rabbit_moon1 commented on One-Shot on December 18, 2017 06:48pm Liked

Great one-shot!  Hot, sexy fun! drool

Lovers Walk is one of my favorite episodes!  Drunk and heartbroken Spike is such a delight to watch in that episode, and you've captured him and Buffy brilliantly. 

You have such a talent for writing humor.  I really laughed out loud at their verbal sparing.  But, underneath the snark, (and the hot sex) there was something, just a subtle glimpse of realization between the two of them.  I would love to see a continuation of his story.  Pleeeeeeze?

As always excellent! Thanks for sharing! heart

Author's Response on December 21, 2017 03:35pm

Thank you! 

Lover's Walk is such a fun episode! 

I could see this continuing on sometime in the future (if I ever have two free seconds!) 

I really appreciate the read and review :-D

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Babyzekat commented on One-Shot on December 18, 2017 06:30pm Liked

That was awesome!

Author's Response on December 21, 2017 03:28pm

Thank you! 

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pfeifferpack commented on One-Shot on December 18, 2017 05:30pm Liked

Oh yeah this works perfectly dealing with all that UST. Just as in Halloween when Buffy was laid out on the table and the subtext of UST was there so too it was clear when Buffy had Spike down on her mom's table. There was heat there aplenty.

I love how organic their hot encounter was. Spike burying his head in Buffy's lap fits the episode to a tee. Her arousal and his acting on it as if on auto-pilot are also not a stretch. Yeah she would have been pretty sexually frustrated by then. No love life because she was still all twisted up by Angel but no physical anything because of Angel's curse would have made for one frustrated teen. Yeah I can see this happening and her being pretty confused in the aftermath.

Naturally Spike (when sober) will have plenty to think about. What happened just proved what Dru already pointed out. He is fixated on Buffy. Now he's had a taste of her and liked it even more than he imagined he won't be able to deny it for long.

Love how Buffy had a moment of clarity too.  Angel. Who was her…what was he exactly? Was he anything at all now? No, no he is not. That nice penis of Spike's has been a magic wand who broke the spell enough to show her there could be more.

Lovely hot alley sex. He got her off a couple of times and, yeah, she did need it! He'll have the memory of his come all over her pretty titties to wank to until he can return and step this up further. I doubt Buffy will avoid having Spike feature in her fantasies either.

LOL I can hear Spike so clueless about what Dru meant by Buffy being all over him while covered in her juices. Buffy is so droll in how she responds LOL.

Yeah she needs to shower AND avoid Angel for a while. Spike's right...he'd smell Spike all over her for a while. Somehow I can't work up any sympathy for the ponce.

Hot and yummy treat. I love Lover's Walk too (great insight that no one EVER questioned if Spike did/could love Dru...only when it because Buffy did anyone even think that Spike could not love).

Delightful fic.

Kathleen

edited to add: Yeah I would love this expanded on too. It is perfectly finished as is but I love the dynamic and am greedy enough to want more.

Author's Response on December 21, 2017 03:28pm

(I swear they spend an awful lot of time looking at each other this episode, lol) 

I made myself giggle with Spike just blabbing away and going after Buffy without even questioning it. Like "oh, hey, candy"...and then you've eaten the whole box before you know it. 

Buffy tried to resist temptation...but the stupid vampire made it so difficult. :-P

I don't "get" a lot of the Bangel is S3...because it seems like it's based on a relationship they never really had? I.E. "Remember this wonderful thing we had?" that never really existed. There's a lot of malarky about physical relationship stuff as well...like Angel has to go away because Buffy is just too damned tempting. (UGH, SERiOUSLY? ORIGINAL SIN MUCH?) And the sexual undertones really bug me. So anytime I can use sex as something positive for Buffy, I most certainly do. And if her finding release with Spike wakes her up, then good on her...it's a wake up call for Spike, too. DUDE! You might be more over Dru than you thought...

It'd be fun to have him return in HLOD with a lot more interest in Buffy (i.e. fightings not what he's thinking once he's got that ring...) 

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spikedreamer commented on One-Shot on December 18, 2017 04:43pm Liked

Tolle Story......schreiib bittttteeeee weiter.

Oh, das ist der Teil wo Xander, meine arme Cordy betrog, gib ihr Angel, dafürinnocent(Nur mein Wunschdenken)

Egal, ob und wie es weiter geht...wiedermal toll geschrieben.

Gruß Spikedreamer

Author's Response on December 21, 2017 03:10pm

Poor Cordy! Since this is an AU we can at least say she doesn't get hurt by falling ;-) (I don't know if her breaking up with Xander is a bad thing) thinking

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annamatte commented on One-Shot on December 18, 2017 04:26pm Liked

Great one shot! It was funny and hot. I loved it.

Author's Response on December 21, 2017 03:07pm

Thank you! I'm so glad you enjoyed! 

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Green commented on One-Shot on December 18, 2017 04:22pm Liked

 Loved it but MORE please !!! It's a lonely story, needs some buddies ;)

Author's Response on December 21, 2017 03:07pm

Lol, poor little lonely one shot! I'm so glad you enjoyed! 

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