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GillO commented on One-Shot on November 29, 2020 01:56pm Liked

Poor boy. So bad, so soon.

 

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ScarlettDuck commented on One-Shot on January 18, 2020 03:31pm

Poor Spike. Maybe he should go see if he could help alleviate her cramps...

Author's Response on May 02, 2020 11:35am

Hee! He really should! 

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Priceless commented on One-Shot on January 15, 2020 04:42pm Liked

Wonderful. Funny and dirty and sweet, just like Spike. 

Author's Response on May 02, 2020 11:35am

Thank you so much! 

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DarkHeart commented on One-Shot on November 17, 2019 02:56pm Liked

Answered my own question.  You can do anything.  You made periods sexy.

Author's Response on November 17, 2019 04:32pm

Ha! When writing a vampire... heart Thank you for the read and review! 

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Connie_3D commented on One-Shot on September 21, 2019 02:45am Liked

Ahh, so the warm, rich scent of Slayer's blood was the reason for the hand trail down his chest to prominently frame his bulge.  Looks like that headache might be more caused by his inability to get all parts of himself in alignment.  Demon wants to fuck her. William wants to write sonnets.  Spike fluctuates between the two and knowing it is damn wrong.  Would give anyone a headache.

Author's Response on September 23, 2019 10:38am

Poor guy! He's rather confused ;-) Thank you so much for the read and review! 

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Joyce commented on One-Shot on August 30, 2019 02:36pm

Spike is a bit too flammable to be so nonchalant about the placement of his ciggies.

Always love it when Spike’s inner duality is shown.

Author's Response on September 23, 2019 10:37am

I'm glad you enjoyed! 

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subchan commented on One-Shot on August 21, 2018 06:48pm Liked

Lmao. Loved it!

Author's Response on August 21, 2018 07:18pm

Thank you! 

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ScarlettDuck commented on One-Shot on March 29, 2018 01:07pm Liked

Oh, man. Boy, do I want Spike to act on these feelings.

Author's Response on April 05, 2018 06:26am

Maybe when she's just a tad older ;-)

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OffYourBird commented on One-Shot on January 04, 2018 03:40pm Liked

Oo, I can't believe I missed this gem! Poor, mixed up Spike biggrin Love the struggle between William and demon - both in obvious favor of doing all sorts of things that are decidedly not killing Buffy.

Author's Response on January 04, 2018 03:48pm

Spike's always a bit of a mess over the girl, lol. I think William and Demon (er, William and the demon ;-) aren't going to let Spike be at peace on this one ever again! 

Thank you for the read and review! 

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HCB commented on One-Shot on January 04, 2018 02:58pm Liked

That was hilarious and oddly disturbing. Very well written either way. I love the idea of William and the demon in his head all of the time. Brilliant.sweet Sorry, we didn't have a menstruating slayer smilie so that will have to do.

Author's Response on January 04, 2018 03:46pm

Thank you!

Poor Spike, he's already so twisted around over her!  (I might have borrowed William and Demon from Thing of Doom for a cameo here). 

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-Carrie-Ann- commented on One-Shot on October 08, 2017 03:53pm Liked

Ha! Your head would hurt more thinking like that. Loved it! X

Author's Response on October 09, 2017 11:00am

Thank you! Poor Spike really is a mess! 

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Queenfish commented on One-Shot on October 06, 2017 09:28pm Liked

Poor Spike.... so confused. Good story, liked it very much.

Author's Response on October 09, 2017 10:59am

He's never going to be the same! 

Thank you! heart

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aloradanon1 commented on One-Shot on October 03, 2017 01:28pm Liked

Hehe, poor Spike. Happy Spikeversary! 

Author's Response on October 09, 2017 10:58am

He's never going to be the same!

Thanks for the read and review aloradonon1! flowers

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Cupcakes525 commented on One-Shot on October 03, 2017 12:56am Liked

Lol, poor dirty old Spike.  Great one- shot. Its always very amusing to see Spike's man and demon sides both agree with each other when it comes to Buffy. Thanks for sharing with us!applause

Author's Response on October 08, 2017 11:23pm

He's totally a goner already! (and of course I see William and Demon dragging poor Spike kicking and screaming where they want him to go, lol ;-) 

Thanks for the read and review! 

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_BiteMeSpike_ commented on One-Shot on October 02, 2017 04:38am Liked

"as his demon half bent the Slayer over the same desk to shag the hell out her. William, oddly enough, seemed just fine with that, even as the demon’s hips churned, coating its prick and the girl’s thighs with her dark blood."

Loved this! drool

Author's Response on October 08, 2017 11:21pm

Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed my little tiny bit of craziness to mark the day! hearts

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swifthorse commented on One-Shot on October 01, 2017 08:53am Liked

What a PERFECT fic! :D I love this interpretation of School Hard so much! I also love the basically!canon idea that Buffy was on her period during the episode - no wonder Spike ended up obsessed. ;) 

The imagery is vivid, just like in the episode, and I LOVE it! I also love the back and forth between the William and Demon sides - they're both done for at this point. XD Also, I love how, together, they're falling for all aspects of Buffy. 

...even as the demon’s hips churned, coating its prick and the girl’s thighs with her dark blood. < This line stands out to me. Menstruation fics often clean up the mess or keep it hidden, whereas you're letting it stand out to the viewer. It's a very strong image and I love it. 

She could be our heaven. <He's a goner! A goner in the best possible way. Aww, Spike, you're too sweet... but it is for your own good in the end. ;) 

Wonderful fic! Amazing work fitting it writing the story into your schedule - thank you for it! It's an automatic fave! :D

Author's Response on October 08, 2017 11:20pm

I really get a kick of thinking that all his earliest memories of her are steeped in the scent of her blood. I might be weird...

Poor Spike doesn't know what to do with himself, since most of his brain has decided she's the bee's knees...

With the menstruation I wanted to do the opposite of the episode and instead of being coy, bring it right out in the open. He's a damn vampire, it's blood, I don't think he's going to mind where it's coming from ;-) 

His mind made itself up without him! Again! Damn it! 

Thank you! I was very glad to be able to come up with a last minute thing to mark the day! hearts

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Gort commented on One-Shot on October 01, 2017 07:08am Liked

I will never turn down an opportunity to read more William and Demon antics. I love how tender Spike is with Dru here, even while he's completely in the throes of a Buffy-crisis! He's totally a goner. Thanks for sharing your amazing brain with us :) 

Author's Response on October 08, 2017 11:15pm

I seriously can't get rid of them. They live in my brain and demand to be written about, lol. I'm glad you caught that detail, he takes care of those he loves, even when he's feeling like he's being turned upside down and inside out. 

Thank you for putting up with all my craziness! 

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juggler commented on One-Shot on September 30, 2017 12:00pm Liked

Well I loved that. Thanks.

Author's Response on October 08, 2017 11:14pm

Thank you! heart

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bewildered commented on One-Shot on September 29, 2017 11:29pm Liked

This is delicious. Excellent Spike characterization, and the sexiness feels like it fits right into canon. Hot and sweet and a yummy harbinger of Spuffy to Come. thank you!

Author's Response on October 08, 2017 11:11pm

I might be a little biased but I can only see them as being on a collision course! Thank you so much for the read and review! heart

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pfeifferpack commented on One-Shot on September 29, 2017 10:25pm Liked

Always love Spike being aware of the attraction early. He did subconsciously ... I fully believe that. 

Yeah good thing that Dru was asleep because his head wouldn't be the only thing hurting.

Yeah her being mid cycle would drive vampires wild. Of course they never mentioned that at all. I can see both Spike's demon and his human side being already more than a little in love with Buffy (completely in lust).

Loved it.

Kathleen

Author's Response on October 08, 2017 11:09pm

I imagine the attraction (for both of them) was swirling beneath the surface long before either of them was ready for it. 

I'm surprised the series, which obliquely references menstruation in this episode...never does so again. Think of all the things they did approach...but menstruation was just a bridge too far even though half of the population has had to deal with it frequently :( 

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MichelleZed commented on One-Shot on September 29, 2017 08:32pm

 How are you doing all this writing? You're like on fire right now.

It was the perfect length for me to read while I am wasting time trying to write a speech. I have so many feels about School Hard! It really does feel magical like you describe here... Spike is blown away by her. I love to watch it.

Author's Response on October 08, 2017 11:05pm

I love the physically of the episode, both Spike and Buffy's and Angel spends most of his time disappearing and being useless. And neither of them was ever the same afterward! 

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ahuli commented on One-Shot on September 29, 2017 08:09pm Liked

This is a great little scene. Poor guy got hit by more than an axe but doesn't realize how doomed he is. 

Author's Response on October 01, 2017 11:28pm

Thank you! He's a goner for sure! heart

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jadeunicorn commented on One-Shot on September 29, 2017 07:06pm

awesome short story! thank you!

Author's Response on October 01, 2017 11:28pm

Thank you! biggrin

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EllieRose101 commented on One-Shot on September 29, 2017 05:59pm Liked

Tehe. Nice (and naughty). 

devil

Author's Response on October 01, 2017 11:27pm

Spike certainly down with the second one, anyway! heart Thank you for the read and review! 

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Sigyn commented on One-Shot on September 29, 2017 05:45pm Liked

Ooooh... Poor Spike. Yeah, he's already smitten, and there isn't a prayer. Not a prayer. He'll never get back on track, not with this one. You can deal with her monthlies... daily. If she'd give you half a chance...

Yeah. You should have killed her faster, Spike. It's already too late now. heart

Author's Response on October 01, 2017 11:26pm

He's a goner for sure!

Thank you for the read and review Sigyn! flowers

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magnus374 commented on One-Shot on September 29, 2017 03:20pm

 Spike was indeed never the same after seeing Buffy. She did wake the William part of him. 

I liked the little tenderness we saw with Dru, even as evil he could be very sweet. 

Author's Response on September 29, 2017 04:37pm

I think he genuinely loved Dru (and Dru him, just that she was terrible at showing it in the ways he needed her to), but the poor guy was a goner from the moment he laid eyes on Buffy! biggrin

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Fraggleshrew commented on One-Shot on September 29, 2017 02:43pm Liked

 Lovely little drop into School Hard canon... Really like Spike trying to keep  control of both his human and demon sides so unsuccessfully... And William colluding with Demon. That'd escalated fast all right.

 devil

Author's Response on September 29, 2017 04:32pm

I don't Spike has ever had that much control where Buffy is concerned, certainly not over what his subconscious thought of her! And he was a goner from when he first laid eyes on her! biggrin

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Gitsy commented on One-Shot on September 29, 2017 02:12pm Liked

Love this so much. 

Author's Response on September 29, 2017 04:30pm

Thank you! Poor Spike is already such a goner! 

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rana commented on One-Shot on September 29, 2017 01:15pm Liked

Cute.

Author's Response on September 29, 2017 01:16pm

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purrmonster commented on One-Shot on September 29, 2017 12:47pm Liked

Yes, it's VERY likely she was.... Xander going Buffy's purse and readily finds a tampon, and then Spike saying, "Fe, fi, fo fum, I smell the blood of a nice ripe...girl."

 
Author's Response on September 29, 2017 01:05pm

They do everything but explicitly say it. 

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