Goodness, that one escalated. Might be my favorite of the bunch! This was a cool exercise, thanks for sharing with us.
Hee, glad you enjoyed! And thank you very much for gifting me with all these comments. ^^
Yeah, THAT sure sounds like Spuffy. Under most circumstances, Spike, you’re going to want to go with Eviseration.
Yay, I'm glad it sounded like Spuffy to you! :)
This one didn’t catch me so well as the others, though that’s the nature of blackout poetry. Some work beautifully. Some beautiful lines just don’t hang together as well.
Thanks, I really appreciate your honest opinion! <3 This one was when I first tried the format.
Oh. My. Joss, you dirty boy! And how brilliant of you to ferret out his true message (>wink<). And it fits with their relationship, too, of Buffy being the dom to Spike's submissive.
Oh yeah, I'm all about authorial intent... ;)
Glad you thought it fit them, and thank you!
Wow! Intense! Those last few lines... really? He wrote them in that order? Now I have to go look at that script. (Lucky Spike.)
In the AO3 copy of this work, there are screenshots of the scripts with the relevant bits highlighted. I probably could have done that here, but didn't realize I could.
And thank you for all your comments! I'm enjoying them so much. :)
Yeah, this works for right after she comes back... I can see her staring at herself in the bathroom mirror, horrified and pained at where she is again... Continuing, when she thought she was done. Think this is my favorite so far.
Thank you very much! This is one of the less popular ones, so I'm especially thrilled it spoke to you.
Oh, I like this one! These lines work really well... specially those last three lines. A beautiful summary of vampire love.
Woot! I'm so glad you've been enjoying these. :)
I wonder if you'd like this other NSFW Spuffy poem, "Coming Like Dying" by Moose. It's a little bit like this one perhaps, but there's more of it & also it's a classic. It's on my mind because I only discovered it last week.
I just read it. Wow. I liked it, so I opened the link to more Moose, and there's a lot there, including other poems. I bookmarked it so I can read it later. Thank you! Now I really have to do my homework - I am the worst student ever, haha.
Cool! Kick that homework's butt from me. :)
LOL not at all what the original script had in mind but NICELY done. (I'd love to see the face of the scriptwriter reading this blackout LOL).
I love this project!
Nicely selected phrases and sentences. Love how you are making Spuffy of all these scripts. This one was especially daring, Spuffy sex and of the kinky variety.
Thank you! <3
Bwhahahaha, I wouldn't mind seeing Joss's face either. :)
Yesss I love it!! This is the pegging blackout fic we didn't know we needed.
:))) Thank you very much! I was sitting here blinking my way blearily into the morning of January 2nd, and you made the widest smile bloom on my face. Have a good year! <3
Eee, oh what an absolutely *delightful* surprise to find on New Years Day! I couldn't be more excited to find that THE TRUNK (hee) and accoutrements made its way through 'verses.
And you are so utterly brilliant at pulling these together - I love the mix of tenderness and playfulness and violence that this portrays, along with a hysterically Spuffy mix of love and exasperation ("I want you. Only you. Hold still! You're not helping.")
The fun is definitely just beginning
Yay!!! I'm so glad you liked. Thank you so much for the thoughtful comment. <33
"The fun is definitely just beginning"
- The fun of 2019? Absolutely! *g*
Hah! Well, I was referring to Spuffy's fun in this chapter ("Freeing himself, he'd say the fun is just beginning."), but absolutely for 2019, as well!