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Twinkles commented on Chapter 8 on December 04, 2019 01:06am Liked

Duh. Slayer. The magic and physicality are probably inseparable.

- Love this, so fitting. 

And the whole story 💜 Off to read the oneshots now :D 

Thank you 💙

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Twinkles commented on Chapter 7 on December 04, 2019 01:01am Liked

 “Doin’ that in case you have something important to say, not for your wordplay and blather. And not for any more bleedin’ spells. You try that shite, I kill you myself. At least my pain will be temporary.”

- Really love this, can hear it perfectly 💜

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Twinkles commented on Chapter 6 on December 04, 2019 12:55am Liked

who would be – in the corner snickering at her, most likely, or glowering at her for hurting Buffy like this. 

Accurate. 

I know I said it before, but I really love your Willow voice. The way it incorporates all the different angles of her decision making. 

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Twinkles commented on Chapter 5 on December 04, 2019 12:49am Liked

Was it when you got all soul-y and ate a bunch of rats or was it when you came back to Sunnydale and started doing Drusilla right under his nose?”

- Most excellent point, Dawnster.

if I had a dollar for every time the guy threatened to kill me, I wouldn’t have any dollars because he would have stolen them.”

- I love this 😂 Brilliant.

Thank you 💙 

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Twinkles commented on Chapter 4 on December 03, 2019 11:26pm Liked

Aww, now you've managed to tease out a thread of sympathy in me for Willow, which is near impossible, so, well done :D 

Shit? Shit what? I am so glad this fic is already complete so I'm not stuck screaming at the screen where the next chapter button goes.

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Twinkles commented on Chapter 3 on December 03, 2019 11:19pm Liked

"Wait…these aren’t apocalypse-time research donuts are they? Because if so, I want no part of them.”

- Hehe, love it. 

Before her fall, he seemed to be softening up, like an old picture that had gone fuzzy.

- Love this, it's a brilliant, perfectly fitting image for that period :D

And after…he’d been so sad and empty. Lifeless. 

- Oof, and now I'm all feels.

I'm so full of curious about what Buffy’s experienced since the spell, burning with it...

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Twinkles commented on Chapter 2 on December 03, 2019 07:54pm Liked

Love what she saw and thought of it :D

And damn, she could have grabbed that thought to do something sensible and non-magical like actually talking to Buffy, but of course , she's Willow. 

probably end up making Xander fall in love with Spike instead.

- Haha, it so would.

But uh oh. I don't see anything she casts going much better...

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Twinkles commented on Chapter 1 on December 03, 2019 04:43am Liked

only in this case she’s the one missing something, and it’s kinda her will to live. Okay, down that road the bad thoughts live.

- This is fantastic, love the bouncing rhythm.

Ooh, spell-vision landscape is wonderfully described :D 

I'm so hooked now.

Thank you 💙 

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Twinkles commented on Prologue on December 03, 2019 04:33am Liked

 Love your Willow-voice, it feels so right. And ominous, with the having of a plan and all. Must read on...

Thank you 💙 

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Joyce commented on Chapter 8 on June 05, 2019 11:30am

Glad to see that Willow finally gets the meaning of “ Rank, arrogant amateur”. (BTW, that is one of the best delivered lines in canon!)

 

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Joyce commented on Chapter 7 on June 05, 2019 11:22am

My guess is a certain someone has interfered with the metaphorical rope.

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Joyce commented on Chapter 6 on June 05, 2019 11:15am

It really would be nice if Willow could just magically reach mental maturity.

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Joyce commented on Chapter 5 on June 05, 2019 11:08am

it’s hilarious that Spike came up with toard or grog legs. He probably is not hip to Willow’s fear.

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Joyce commented on Chapter 4 on June 05, 2019 11:00am

This chapter ending sounds pretty ominous. Hoping it’s not as bad as it seems.

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Joyce commented on Chapter 3 on June 05, 2019 10:52am

OK, what is up with Buffy? Is this a repel the magic doer thingie?

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Joyce commented on Chapter 2 on June 05, 2019 10:43am

OK, what physically is in “a pinch of good intentions”? And how will she cover it up? Or will she sucked into it?

Again with magic agent under a pillow. Tara knows about the Will Be Done spell. If Buffy starts acting out of character, that will probably alert Tara.

That last sentence. Ego much?

 

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Joyce commented on Chapter 1 on June 05, 2019 10:18am

I was wondering if Willow even did the mind reading thing. In canon, there were only a few uses when needed. Wouldn’t put it past Willow to be so intrusive.

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Joyce commented on Prologue on June 05, 2019 10:05am

Magic is such an integral part of Willow for good or not. I just cannot envision her ever being without it if it hurts Tara.

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thenewbuzwuzz commented on Chapter 8 on October 05, 2017 03:28pm Liked

Annd it got deep and all tied in to canon. Nice!

Author's Response on October 06, 2017 10:18am

Thank you for all your reviews!! I'm glad you enjoyed the story :D 

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thenewbuzwuzz commented on Chapter 7 on October 05, 2017 03:21pm Liked

“Pshh, I’m totally experienced with fire. You should have seen me after you and Xander – well. You know. I burned a lot of stuff.” Point. :)

"Oh, Spike, always so pleasant and misogynistic when he’s worried" XD

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thenewbuzwuzz commented on Chapter 6 on October 05, 2017 03:15pm Liked

Cordy!! Lovely AtS Cordy! heart

Love the parallel between Buffy and the Bot (Willow trying to upgrade).

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thenewbuzwuzz commented on Chapter 5 on October 05, 2017 03:07pm Liked

Dawn was glorious! heart

"She’s actin’ like a bloody fledge – only in the moment, not thinkin’ about any consequences." Haha, oh, that. Inhibitions are sometimes useful, huh. :D

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thenewbuzwuzz commented on Chapter 4 on October 05, 2017 02:59pm Liked

Loved Buffy's conversation with Giles. It was strange. biggrin And oddly healthy-shaped? I mean, absolute zero brooding or stewing. Life goals.

"he claps his hands together. “Just the witch I was hoping to see.” Uh oh. He only does that when he’s nervous." - great detail ^^

Nice cliffie. smile

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thenewbuzwuzz commented on Chapter 3 on October 05, 2017 02:48pm Liked

"pig out before shopping so we wouldn’t buy clothes that were too small" excellent attitude

"Before her fall, he seemed to be softening up, like an old picture that had gone fuzzy." Eeee, I love this image! yay

"She simply says, “I don’t want to talk to you.”" OH yeah. Anxiety-free Buffy has no time for politeness...

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thenewbuzwuzz commented on Chapter 2 on October 05, 2017 02:40pm Liked

Awesome conversation with Xander! ^^

That... sounded like white magic! By PURE CHANCE, has Willow really hit on something that doesn't mess with Buffy's free will? biggrin

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thenewbuzwuzz commented on Chapter 1 on October 05, 2017 02:30pm Liked

Ooh, I like all the magic stuff, all of it! heart

"they haven’t exactly had a lot of alone time what with the singing and betrayal" what a line! :))

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thenewbuzwuzz commented on Prologue on October 05, 2017 02:23pm Liked

Huh, I hadn't noticed that this story was a thing that happened.

 

This has wacky Willow fiasco written all over it! biggrin

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Catryona commented on Chapter 8 on October 05, 2017 12:23am Liked

Oh, huh. So that's why the spell didn't break ... I wonder if Buffy was holding onto it because she sort of knew that when it broke she'd feel the weight of the things that she'd done while under the spell? But while she was still under the spell she couldn't care about what she was doing. Interesting.

Well, things could have ended much, much worse than they did. I think that went pretty well! And I'm definitely going to check out those other oneshots.

Thanks for sharing your story!

Author's Response on October 06, 2017 10:17am

Thank you for all your kind and helpful reviews! I'm glad you enjoyed the story and yeah, I did try to end things in a slightly better place than where they started :)

Catryona Replied on October 21, 2017 01:19pm

You're welcome! ^^

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Catryona commented on Chapter 7 on October 05, 2017 12:17am

Ooooh boy. Poor Willow. It's good that she's working so hard to fix her mistake, but I have a feeling that she's going to be in the doghouse for a while.

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Catryona commented on Chapter 6 on October 05, 2017 12:10am Liked

So maybe try not to be evil, okay?

Haha! Cordelia was delightful in this chapter. And maybe now that Willow's been warned, and things have turned out so badly, she'll really do what Tara asks?

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