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Snowlight commented on Sisterly Bonding on May 20, 2020 01:25am

Comeback. I want to know what happens.  Is that selfish?

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moonbeams commented on Sisterly Bonding on February 24, 2020 02:42am Liked

I love Dawn and Buffy together :)

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Joyce commented on Sisterly Bonding on June 03, 2019 12:20pm

I like that this conversation took place while doing somethinng mundane like shopping. Wonder how Buffy will pay for that glass though?

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Joyce commented on A Hairy Conversation on June 03, 2019 12:15pm

My metabolism did not go at age 30. I think it happened in my mid 50s.

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Connie_3D commented on A Routine Slay on May 22, 2019 02:41pm Liked

The retail therapy was just what was needed to give Dawn and Buffy a little bonding time. The test will come in with Joyce's need forsurgery and the angst level will shoot through the roof.  Then Riley and his blood-hoes are going to throw his whines into the mix.  It just hit me, Dawn said Spike helped with the Queller, but wasn't that after Joyce had her surgery and came home. Damn it.  Did I zone out and piece an event.  It was so cute that Spike took off after wolfie to give her a break. That's the good thing about writing your own fiction, you get to choose what to highlight and what to skip over.  It will be interesting to see where you head next with this one.

Author's Response on May 27, 2019 02:51pm

Hello!  Thank you for reading!  I have to admit that I did some skipping around in the season arc.  I didn't want to commit to rewriting each episode painstakingly so I glossed forward to a later part in the season.  Past the queller demon and the break up.  Hence, the retail therapy.  Confession: I really don't like writing Riley's character at all.  I hope the time jump wasn't too confusing.  Maybe I should add that to an author's note at the beginning.

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kimothyschma commented on Sisterly Bonding on April 12, 2019 08:11am Liked

I really like the dialogue you did here, it's really cute and funny.

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gabelou1991 commented on A Hairy Conversation on January 23, 2019 06:22pm

Pour moi l'idée même quune tueuse veux mourrm disons que c'est faux .

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gabelou1991 commented on A Routine Slay on January 23, 2019 05:31pm

Cela ressemble a un défi que j'ai lu, disons que moi, Buffy n'est pas invincible mais ils ont fait en sorte qu'elle le.croit

 

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Penny commented on Sisterly Bonding on January 15, 2019 07:45pm Liked

Love the Dawn crush on Spike, and really excited to see how Buffy reacts to her declaration of Spike's feelings. Obviously she's shocked,  and we know she's not going to be thrilled about it. I'd like to see her start watching him more closely... looking for the signs (like she does in canon), but being a bit more awkward around him.  Or you could just have her jump his bones.  I'm always ok with that option!

Again, enjoying both this story and your skill as a writer. Hope you're able to post an update soon :)

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Penny commented on Returning Home on January 15, 2019 07:38pm Liked

Wow,  I'd never guess you're a first time author. This is really good... both the story and your writing. Congrats on your first fic! I look forward to reading more. 

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pfeifferpack commented on Sisterly Bonding on January 14, 2019 06:53pm Liked

Love Dawn going for punk rock like her crush Spike. Like how she drops the bomb on Buffy here. 

Lovely update.

Kathleen

 

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Spikelover88 commented on Sisterly Bonding on January 14, 2019 07:07am Liked

Great chapter can't wait till the next one 

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SpindleKitten commented on A Particular Pain on January 14, 2019 05:20am Liked

Spike not only didn't ask for anything, but actually refused the offer of money for saving her. Obviously, since we know he loves her, but it should at least give Giles pause for thought.

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SpindleKitten commented on A Routine Slay on January 14, 2019 05:16am Liked

Yup. That is exactly how it should have happened. Spike saving the day and Riley nowhere to be seen. 

I love that she instinctively trusts that she is safe with him, even though he could probably drain her through the wound in her abdomen without setting off the chip.

A good start.

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nepalichik commented on Sisterly Bonding on January 14, 2019 12:19am Liked

partyparty  Yeah for an update!  I can't imagine how hard it is to get stuck with a story as I mostly of the reading vAriety, but glad you aren't throwing in the towel. Hang in there!   This is a great story!

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magnus374 commented on Sisterly Bonding on January 13, 2019 09:50am

It was nice to see some bonding between the sisters, they do need that. Buffy do have a point in what she is saying about Spike.

And now Buffy is told that Spike likes her, let's see how she reacts now.

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CrazyCatLady402 commented on Sisterly Bonding on January 13, 2019 09:47am Liked

heartheartheart

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All4Spike commented on Sisterly Bonding on January 13, 2019 09:06am Liked

Gotta love a little retail bonding - with apt reference to a mutual tendency for using the five-finger discount.

And Dawn lets the cat spitting and scratching out of the bag.....

 

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Melissanelson1975 commented on Sisterly Bonding on January 13, 2019 06:31am Liked

It was good, I’m glad you’re posting to it again. I really like this story.

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Green commented on Sisterly Bonding on January 13, 2019 06:07am Liked

💚

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victoria2 commented on Sisterly Bonding on January 13, 2019 12:07am Liked

Glad to see this one updated.  I'm looking forward to seeing how you build on their relationship.  Good chap.

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vicdave99 commented on Sisterly Bonding on January 12, 2019 09:15pm Liked

heart

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Joyce commented on I Wish They All Could Be on September 28, 2018 07:42pm

The best line was the TK0 one but I like fighting metaphors anyways.

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Saravi Boo commented on Returning Home on May 24, 2018 09:40pm

 This bit.

(“Do you think we should send him flowers or something? I guess a fruit basket won’t work in his case. Vampires don’t eat fruit, do they?”

“No,” Buffy said sharply, “They eat people. And we can’t send a people basket to Spike.”

“He couldn’t eat a people basket anyway,” Dawn said as she now sucked the last droplets of the smoothie from her glass, “Chip and all.”)

That conversation cracked me up. Sounded like something that could have come straight off the show. Well done with your characterization.

 

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drpyser commented on A Hairy Conversation on May 12, 2018 08:23pm

Loving it, keep going!

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madspuffyfan commented on A Hairy Conversation on May 12, 2018 03:47pm Liked

Loved it

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Green commented on A Hairy Conversation on May 09, 2018 08:50am Liked

Really liked it, love it when they just sit, talk and bond like friends. Pulls then closer.  💚

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Toften commented on A Hairy Conversation on May 09, 2018 06:02am Liked

I like the emphasis on the age difference. So often in canon, the writers let us forget how old Spike was. It matters. 

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Toften commented on I Wish They All Could Be on May 09, 2018 05:51am Liked

Gads, Riley. Take the neander down a notch, or she'll put you through a wall. rant

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Toften commented on Resolve on May 09, 2018 05:44am Liked

sad2 Mom worry.

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