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Beaufale commented on Chapter 16 on September 22, 2018 04:26am

Hoping this is still a WIP and not a RIP but even if it is I am so happy I got the chance to read this. It’s seriously well written and the characters are perfect 

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Cloongarvin commented on Chapter 16 on August 14, 2017 07:02am

I like this story. The notion that she'd be a bit different after being connected to the first Slayer and after sipping Dracula's blood makes sense. And that being turned might, among other things, cause her to lose some of her human sanctimoniousness and also to be able to see the good in Spike. I'm glad to see Lawson; he has such potential as a character. 

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pfeifferpack commented on Chapter 16 on August 03, 2017 08:43pm Liked

LOVE you bringing Lawson in and likely on the right side. He can help not only against Angelus and Darla but also Glory. Maybe he can even stick around and be part of their family. He should surprise Giles since he's been doing catch and release by choice!

Loved that whole walk down memory lane by Lawson. Spike gave him good skills that he is still using. He has valuable information now. Love how smart he's playing it! He will be a valuable ally too. His military background might come in handy. Great that he wants no part of Angelus and the rest and glad he decided to hunt down Spike and get the low down from him...he clearly trusts Spike.

Looks like the group are all settling in and getting ready for battle. 

Lawson had been like him. Or maybe like him if Spike had never been under Angelus's tutelage. Rape and torture had never interested the boy I believe that is true. I think Spike wouldn't have sunk to the depths he did had he not had to "learn" from Angel and Darla.

I think Spike got some information just seeing how Lawson made no moves on Willow and Tara (who are clearly idiots walking about after sunset with Angelus on the loose! The two who could shove that soul back in him would be major targets!)

Great update.

Kathleen

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Rkf22 commented on Chapter 16 on August 03, 2017 03:49pm

Excellent work can't wait for more 

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Nyxella commented on Chapter 16 on August 03, 2017 03:15pm Liked

Ooh. So far so good. biggrinheartheartsapplause

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Chrissel commented on Chapter 16 on August 03, 2017 01:39pm Liked

Glad to see Lawson! They need more allies if they're going to fight the forces Angelus has amassed against them!

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magnus374 commented on Chapter 16 on August 03, 2017 12:26pm

 Lawson was such a wasted character in the show. It's great seeing him here and I really do like what I am seeing. It will be good for Buffy and Spike to have another vampire they can talk to.

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magnus374 commented on Chapter 15 on July 23, 2017 05:17am

 This  showed us that Angel and Angelus is one and the same. He had some very Angelus like thoughts and then some guilt. Darla had a good idea for bringing Angelus back, and it worked

Good to see everyone prepairing for the Angelus situation. The things Xander said was good, the things can start them getting close together. Buffy saying that she isn't the same was another great thing. She wouldn't be the same and it's better that everyone realise that.

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pfeifferpack commented on Chapter 15 on July 23, 2017 01:12am Liked

Not going to be good for Spike and Buffy with Angelus out an about. 

The only possible lucky thing would be if somehow Glory, Angelus and Darla destroy each other!

It's a great idea for them all to be in the same house until they sort out Angelus and Darla at the very least. 

I can understand Buffy forgiving Xander but it is a great thing that Xander apologized. It's also good that all of them, even Xander now, seem to accept Spike's place at Buffy's side.

Nice.

Kathleen

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Rkf22 commented on Chapter 15 on July 23, 2017 12:51am

Excellent work can't wait for more 

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Chrissel commented on Chapter 14 on July 17, 2017 06:22pm Liked

Spike has hopefully thoroughly disillusioned Buffy about Angel now - long overdue for her! 

Evil cliffhanger! Angelus is back?!?

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Chrissel commented on Chapter 13 on July 17, 2017 06:20pm Liked

So the differences are super-slayer related. Interesting!

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Chrissel commented on Chapter 12 on July 17, 2017 06:18pm Liked

Interesting to see the effects of sunlight on Buffy's new condition. And it looks like Willow is starting to process what's happened to Buffy now. Hopefully she'll end up an ally rather than an enemy!

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lambean commented on Chapter 14 on July 16, 2017 11:20pm Liked

I'm loving this I can't wait for more 

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lambean commented on Chapter 11 on July 16, 2017 07:52pm Liked

Great chapter I was so worried about her reaction to the shrine.  Thank you for making it nearly painless. This is a wonderful story so far 

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lambean commented on Chapter 3 on July 16, 2017 05:48pm

This is wonderful so far

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lambean commented on Chapter 2 on July 16, 2017 05:11pm Liked

Wow. That was painfully sad for Spike to wAtch that happen

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pfeifferpack commented on Chapter 14 on July 16, 2017 04:21am Liked

Oh God as if Glory isn't bad enough! Yeah Darla would get her boy back if possible. Wonder how she managed it?

Have a baaaaad feeling things are going to get very ugly quite soon.

Spike is so sweetly protective of Buffy.

Glad Willow is coming around at least.

Kathleen

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pfeifferpack commented on Chapter 13 on July 16, 2017 04:02am Liked

Yeah I think it's better for them to be at Revello Drive until Glory is dealt with. Glad she asked Joyce first and intended for Spike to go there too. 

Giles is not dealing with this very well. He blames himself (he and Spike but Spike isn't wallowing). Buffy can do the vision quest and maybe Giles can be given the boot in the butt he needs. Xander is bad enough right now.

Poor insecure Spike couldn't stop himself from begging her not to leave him. weep

Nice hot sex scene. Their first time together was passionate. I'm so glad she said the words first though. That is what he craves more than sex.

Kathleen

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Chrissel commented on Chapter 11 on July 16, 2017 03:49am Liked

Giles has a lot to deal with here just like the others. Hopefully the promise of research will keep him from wallowing to deeply! 

Buffy is rightly annoyed by that shrine but not letting it drive a wedge between her and Spike thank goodness. Angel must be so disappointed! What an ass!

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Chrissel commented on Chapter 10 on July 16, 2017 03:45am Liked

Love that Spike and Buffy are really bonding and sharing stories now. 

Poor Xander, it's nice that he's working out his issues but it's still going to be difficult for him to deal with everything!

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pfeifferpack commented on Chapter 12 on July 16, 2017 02:51am Liked

I like how you are having Buffy, Spike and everyone else muddle through trying to figure out just what Buffy's new situation truly is. The Council had their take on it and it was not right for the most part. I doubt Spike thought through much of it merely enjoyed the increase in power and strength he woke with. The others all have to unlearn things they thought were fact then try to learn what the real deal is.

Meanwhile there is Glory to be dealt with.

Buffy needs to check her what her limits are especially as she intends to continue as Slayer and will still be protecting Dawn.

Excellent update.

Kathleen

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Chrissel commented on Chapter 9 on July 15, 2017 11:25pm Liked

Angels an ass and a pervert! I can't believe he pocketed the panties!  

And Xander's not dealing - again not a surprise, but I wish he would have asked first and staked later. He cold see that Dawn and Joyce were fine so staking was really an over reaction.

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Chrissel commented on Chapter 8 on July 15, 2017 10:16pm Liked

 

So Angel is an idiot and Spike is a sweetie. Can't say eithe of those surprise! biggrin

Looking forward to the Scooby reactions!

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Chrissel commented on Chapter 7 on July 15, 2017 10:13pm Liked

So they're beginning to see the differences in her from a normal vampire. It'll be interesting to see where you take that! Also nice to see her opening up to Spike with her feelings and giving him a chance!

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Chrissel commented on Chapter 6 on July 15, 2017 09:01pm Liked

Nice to see them so glad to see Spike as well as Buffy! The reunion with Joyce and Dawn went very well. Can only hope the Scooby one goes that good!

Ugh! Angel is an ass as usual. 

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Chrissel commented on Chapter 5 on July 15, 2017 08:58pm Liked

Joyce and Dawn are grieving but hopefully not for long.  

The part where he showed her how to shake off her face was cute! 

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Rkf22 commented on Chapter 14 on July 15, 2017 08:05pm

Excellent work can't wait for more 

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Chrissel commented on Chapter 4 on July 15, 2017 06:55pm Liked

 Interesting to see the changes in her even with the soul. And the gang must have just missed them! That's probably a good thing for now. They need time to acclimate to the new situation first. Xander is clearly going to be a problem for them. He just has too much baggage to overcome to handle this.

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Chrissel commented on Chapter 3 on July 15, 2017 06:47pm Liked

It must have been torture for Spike to have to hang there waiting for Buffy to rise and not knowing what she would be like.  Thank goodness she kept her soul through the change! 

And then he was able to escape and stake Dru. One threat down, but they have a long road ahead of them!

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