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madspuffyfan commented on Lord Have Mercy on May 07, 2018 01:44pm Liked

Loved it

Author's Response on May 09, 2018 10:33am

Thanks dear, next chapter is here

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MrsTattooedButterfly commented on Lord Have Mercy on May 07, 2018 01:15pm Liked

scared shocked

Author's Response on May 09, 2018 10:35am

Hi babe, next chapter is up 

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magnus374 commented on Lord Have Mercy on May 07, 2018 12:37pm

 I often use the word intense about chapters but this was very intense. I really liked the "exorcism, that long and powerful ritual. And what use is a god if it's a humble one😀 

It worked and Buffy and Spike is here, they still had to abort Glory's dimension baby. We have to hope Buffy and Spike will get time to heal physical and emotional from everything they have been through.

I also liked that they could exorcise Glory.

Author's Response on May 09, 2018 10:34am

Thanks Magnus. Next chapter before epilogue is here

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MrsTattooedButterfly commented on Goodness on May 07, 2018 12:22pm Liked

read

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All4Spike commented on Lord Have Mercy on May 07, 2018 07:20am Liked

Oh, wow!

 

Author's Response on May 09, 2018 10:36am

Next one is up:)

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Pencilcomet commented on Lord Have Mercy on May 07, 2018 05:19am Liked

That was wild from start to finish.

Author's Response on May 09, 2018 10:36am

 The next chapter is up, Pencilcomet! 

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Mikkalenko commented on Lord Have Mercy on May 06, 2018 08:36pm

Well alrighty then. That was gross lol. Great chapter. Glad buffy and spike are back. Kinda like the idea of excersising Glory. 

Looking forward to more. 💗

Author's Response on May 09, 2018 10:37am

Lol sorry about the grossness. I enjoy gore alot more than what is normal.

Next chapter is up 

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MrsTattooedButterfly commented on Differences on May 06, 2018 01:18pm Liked

read

Author's Response on May 06, 2018 08:05pm

I'm glad you're enjoying, babe. The next chapter is here

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All4Spike commented on Goodness on May 06, 2018 07:11am Liked

Oh boy. As soon as one person is rescued, they're off to find another.

But Spike and Buffy need you... now!

Author's Response on May 06, 2018 08:04pm

I've answered their call

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magnus374 commented on Goodness on May 06, 2018 06:02am

Buffy and Spike are wasting away they need to be rescued soon. Now we have Connor involved too. I wonder if the death of Angel is making his memories slowly returning? 

Glory has been busy, a lot of people getting captured and tortured she must starting to be desperate.

Author's Response on May 06, 2018 08:04pm

Perhaps she'll get what's coming to her

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pfeifferpack commented on Goodness on May 06, 2018 02:46am Liked

Well, this isn't a good turn of events. 

Buffy fed Spike, kinda, but they are both still screwed. 

Agatha is saved...maybe. Same with the Father. 

Connor is in on the action now as well. 

Glory is completely off the spool. 

Now the vehicle is useless.

Tara is proving quite resourceful though and I love Willow acknowledging the true power of Tara's brand of magic.

Excellent and active chapter.

Kathleen

Author's Response on May 06, 2018 03:15am

 sorry. I update on my phone sometimes and the screen is small so I start typing the first place I see. I edited f you'd like to give it a re-read 

pfeifferpack Replied on May 06, 2018 03:38am

Ahh re-read and now it is much tighter with the transition from the hospital. 

I made the jump even with the formatting oops.

 

Kathleen

Author's Response on May 06, 2018 04:19am

I'm glad all the components were there for you to do that 😂

Author's Response on May 06, 2018 11:57am

I accidentally gave you a sneak peak of the following chapter 😭😂

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Mikkalenko commented on Goodness on May 06, 2018 02:46am

So I’m confused. I feel like there’s a chunk missing. One second they are in the hospital with Agatha and the next they are back in the cavern and falling to their deaths. :/ 

Otherwise great chapter. I’m glad Tara was able to inadvertently teach willow something with the window. 

Author's Response on May 06, 2018 03:14am

 sorry. I update on my phone sometimes and the screen is small so I start typing the first place I see. I fixed it if you'd like to give it a re-read 

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vicdave99 commented on Goodness on May 06, 2018 02:18am Liked

heart

Author's Response on May 06, 2018 02:45am

That was quick! :p

Author's Response on May 06, 2018 03:15am

 sorry. I update on my phone sometimes and the screen is small so I start typing the first place I see. I fixed it if you'd like to give it a re-read 

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MrsTattooedButterfly commented on The Trouble With Bodies and Time on May 06, 2018 12:29am Liked

weep

Author's Response on May 06, 2018 02:35am

 Look at you all caught up! 

 the next chapter is here

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MrsTattooedButterfly commented on Apocalypse...Not Now. on May 06, 2018 12:16am Liked

shocked applause

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MrsTattooedButterfly commented on Sloppy on May 06, 2018 12:06am Liked

scared

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MrsTattooedButterfly commented on Connecting on May 05, 2018 11:56pm Liked

drool

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MrsTattooedButterfly commented on Prelude to Power on May 05, 2018 11:49pm Liked

applause

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MrsTattooedButterfly commented on In Life and In Death on May 05, 2018 11:40pm Liked

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All4Spike commented on Differences on May 05, 2018 11:06am Liked

Poor starving Buffy & Spike. weep

Poor Faith.

And the Scoobies plus A.I. personnel to the rescue!

But did they have to involve Riley? Phooey.

Love the Magic School Bus trip... (I had to google that reference, never came across it before)

Author's Response on May 06, 2018 02:37am

It's a television show from my childhood. It was the most educational cartoon I have ever known. My parents bribed me with action figures at the toy store just so that I would get good grades. It worked fantastically

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magnus374 commented on Differences on May 05, 2018 06:33am

 Not a good situation for Buffy and Spike, getting starved like that must be awful. It must also have been awful to get to see all that food just to get it taken away. It felt like a classic bit of torture, a bit like with Tantalus.

With the use of magic, science and math it seems like Buffy and Spike can be saved, I liked how Xander was here. Riley has his issues, but he was actually useful. 

Author's Response on May 06, 2018 02:38am

Yes, interesting that he can manage to be useful even as he's being a complete dumbass. I feel like he could have done more of that during season 4

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Dance_of_pales commented on Differences on May 05, 2018 05:52am Liked

"He never knew how Buffy could effortlessly lift a full grown human, let alone the monsters she fought." And that is part of the reason nobody likes you. They tell you the facts, they give you proof of the facts, they show you the facts in action in multiple, repeatable scenarios, yet you STILL refuse to accept any version of the world save the one you were fed by an evil Psycho bitch. GET A FUCKING CLUE, RILEY.

Author's Response on May 06, 2018 02:40am

Yeah, but he doesn't want to get a fucking clue. He just wants to remain in this world where everything is trying to invalidate him because it allows him to feel offended by something no matter the fact that it's the wrong thing to feel offended by

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pfeifferpack commented on Differences on May 05, 2018 03:37am Liked

Buffy and Spike are in dire circumstances. The positive side of their predicament is that they have no desire to make love much less make babies. 

A rather nasty bit of torture having that table laden with goodies only to have it all be lost. Glory is getting desperate. Wish there was a way to just send her home without causing any other harm. She's not going to give up until she's back there.

Magic and science (with a nice side of math) make a great combination. I love that Xander is far from stupid here. He even remembered enough of what Spike had said to be helpful. 

LOL Willow would be surprised (they all would) by the things Spike knows and understands. 

“Respect makes all the difference.” He narrowed his eyes at The Finns. “Perhaps all forms of the military should take heed of that.” Yay, Von. Speak truth to the dolt. I should be nicer since Riley and Sam did come through with the vehicle.

Excellent update.

Kathleen

Author's Response on May 06, 2018 02:41am

I think in the television series they made Xander look to be like the standard bible thumper. But it didn't allow him much character development and I felt like it was unfair to his character

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Fraggleshrew commented on Differences on May 05, 2018 02:59am Liked

Finally got caught up with this epic (I was only 30 chapters behind!). It's a proper rollercoaster saga and I love it's complexity. Will try for chapter by chapter reviews from now on...

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Author's Response on May 06, 2018 02:42am

Don't you hate when you're only 30 chapters behind? You couldn't have possibly missed anything 😂

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MrsTattooedButterfly commented on The Curse of Prometheus on May 05, 2018 12:46am Liked

shocked

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MrsTattooedButterfly commented on Gratitude on May 05, 2018 12:24am Liked

bow

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nmcil commented on Uncertainty on May 04, 2018 11:38pm

Excellent with how you connected Anya and Margaret and I really glad that Anya at least has a chance to return and carry on with her life.  

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nmcil commented on Turning Point on May 04, 2018 11:01pm Liked

I like your Anya treatment very much in this story - especially this chapter she has connected in a impactful way with being a human again - even if she did go back to being a vengeance demon. 

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Pencilcomet commented on Differences on May 04, 2018 10:30pm Liked

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Author's Response on May 06, 2018 02:43am

Thanks babe. The new chapter is up

Author's Response on May 06, 2018 02:43am

Thanks babe. The new chapter is up

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Mikkalenko commented on Differences on May 04, 2018 10:19pm

Best. Chapter. Yet. 

Love how Xander tries to make a funny and it turned out to be exactly what was needed. Don’t get me wrong I feel really bad for Spuffy right now. But I love the magic school bus lol. 

Looking forward to more. I’m hoping it’s a rescue chapter next. 

Author's Response on May 06, 2018 02:44am

Oh my gosh isn't the Magic School Bus so fantastic? It's like the fun version of Wikipedia. These kids nowadays don't have anything to feed their imagination. Wow, that just made me feel so old

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