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Darkangel16 commented on Chapter 22 on January 05, 2020 01:31am

I enjoyed this story! I love stories with feral Spike

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Penny commented on Chapter 15 on October 15, 2019 01:09am Liked

Ugh, I'm never happy to see Riley show up. Glad Buffy doesn't get all starry eyed over him and that she defends Spike.

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Penny commented on Chapter 22 on October 15, 2019 01:04am Liked

This was great.  Don't know how I've never read anything of yours before,  but I just added all your stories to my bookshelf!

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Penny commented on Chapter 5 on October 14, 2019 10:36pm Liked

Bad Buffy! I loved reading things from feral Spike's perspective. Here's hoping Buffy comes to her senses sooner rather than later.  

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Penny commented on Chapter 2 on October 14, 2019 10:01pm Liked

"Spike nudged a hard, long- what the, oh, thank god, a candle- into her hands" - hilarious! And I want Buffy's job!

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Penny commented on Chapter 1 on October 14, 2019 09:53pm Liked

I adore cuddly, purring, feral Spike. It seems like maybe Buffy does too!

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Joyce commented on Chapter 3 on August 05, 2019 09:10pm

Buffy is getting to appreciate the non verbal aspect of Spike. Will she take it further thinking he is not sentient enough to remember?

 

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madridista89 commented on Chapter 1 on March 10, 2019 11:37am

Whatever is going on with spike is really cute and probably so embarrassing for him later when he is himself again. I‘m a bit confused as of when in canon this takes place? Considering Clem is there I guess season six? So why would buffy be so reluctant to help spike and go to him?

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Priceless commented on Chapter 1 on May 20, 2018 04:35pm Liked

Fun start, looking forward to seeing where it goes

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EllieRose101 commented on Chapter 21 on October 14, 2017 04:16pm Liked

Dawn was over-the-moon about the chip, but uncaring about the soul. – God, I love that girl. She's got her priorities right.

I laughed out loud at the "And the new principal is kinda creepy, but in a hot way. You understand, Buffy” line.

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EllieRose101 commented on Chapter 20 on October 14, 2017 04:05pm

Ah, so there were trials involved in Spike getting his soul back, same a canon. It had sounded like he'd just walked into the cave and was handed it, before. Trials makes more sense. 

I'm glad the chip is out. 

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EllieRose101 commented on Chapter 19 on October 14, 2017 03:27am

Well, at least he wasn't gone long. (Not from the reader's perspective, anyway.) 

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EllieRose101 commented on Chapter 18 on October 14, 2017 03:17am

Oh, Buffy. *sighs* She just had to ruin it, didn't she? 

Interesting that it was the trio who had messed with Spike and made him feral. I wonder what they were trying to do, and why.

...no. Spike's not really going to go to Africa after a soul, is he? 

read read read

Oh, Spike. *pouts* 

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EllieRose101 commented on Chapter 17 on October 14, 2017 03:04am Liked

“When have I ever done anything bad to Spike,” she paused and sighed. “Lately?”

– Good line! Very in-character. 

Woah, WOAH! Did Spike just reply to Buffy? IS SPIKE BACK TO HIMSELF?! 

Oh my god! (I was planning to go to sleep at the end of this chapter, but I can't now. Need to see what happens!)

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EllieRose101 commented on Chapter 16 on October 14, 2017 02:47am

I gotta say, the mental image of Spike's "betrayal" at Buffy breaking his "toy" gnome is seriously adorable. 

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EllieRose101 commented on Chapter 15 on October 14, 2017 02:30am

“Look, what happened between me and Spike, it was a mistake. It hasn’t happened before and I- it won’t happen again.” / “Good thing I got here when I did then.” / Buffy almost laughed. He never was good at reading her.

– wait, I'm confused. Has Buffy changed her mind (again!) or is she just telling Riley what he wants to hear so he'll back off? 

The damn vamp played hot and cold with her and she was his alleged mate... – Spike's the one blowing hot and cold. SPIKE? *shakes head* Seriously, Buffy? 

I'm glad Xander is being 'support-o guy'.

The whole situation between Riley, the eggs, and the "doctor" is still super weird. It made very little sense in canon, when Spike was supposedly the culprit, and even less here when it absolutely couldn't be him.  

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EllieRose101 commented on Chapter 14 on October 12, 2017 01:24am

'They were still in the exploring stage of whatever type of relationship this was...' 

As much as I know the context of Spike loving Buffy before he went all feral, it's still weird to think that she's started a relationship with him while he's like that. 

It brings up a lot of moral questions. Like, can Spike consent to being kissed and touched if he's not himself? 

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EllieRose101 commented on Chapter 14 on October 12, 2017 01:11am

Ugh, Xander. It's bad enough that he's oblivious, but he's mean on top. It's just not necessary. 

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EllieRose101 commented on Chapter 13 on October 12, 2017 01:00am

Well done, Buffy. You finally figured out what was in front of your face. 

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EllieRose101 commented on Chapter 12 on October 12, 2017 12:41am

There's a lot of things Buffy is choosing not to analyse that would probably help her out if she bothered to think about them. I mean, I know she's depressed. I get it. But she's making things worse for herself, and it's frustrating. 

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EllieRose101 commented on Chapter 11 on October 12, 2017 12:30am

'In his bed, alone, Spike laid down, puzzled and frustrated... From under his pillow, he snuck the soft, red fabric his Mate had been wearing the day before and placed it under his head. He couldn’t sleep without smelling her close to him.'

– He is SUCH a sweetie! 

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EllieRose101 commented on Chapter 10 on October 12, 2017 12:14am Liked

Argh, Spike not being able to talk is so frustrating! They need to trust his instincts!! 

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EllieRose101 commented on Chapter 9 on October 12, 2017 12:01am Liked

Yay Feral Spike's POV! 

lol, now Xander's the "smelly one." 

'One could never be certain of what she wanted... then she was touching him and the spot on his arm felt both cold and hot' - That's Buffy in a nutshell. 

'When she led him outside and kissed him, he was thrilled and almost allowed his own selfish needs to override his conscience. But when she pulled away, the smile on her face was manic, her eyes wide and he knew it might be the release she wanted, but it was not what she needed. So instead, he wrapped himself around her, hoping to cocoon her into the safety of his arms where her troubles may not be repaired, but accepted. They could face them together.' - Whoa, Feral Spike is mega insightful! 

'His Mate was an enigma and he wasn’t certain he held the brain power to figure her out.' - Aww, poor Spike! 

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EllieRose101 commented on Chapter 8 on October 11, 2017 09:59am

I snorted at Sweet saying to Xander “You’re useless to me.” Pretty much sums up my feelings on him. It just bugs me that he gets away with summoning demons. If Dawn or Spike really had done it, they'd get so much crap. 

Aha! So the chip still works in his current state after all. Good to know. 

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EllieRose101 commented on Chapter 7 on October 11, 2017 09:03am Liked

Oh, poor Spike. He can't catch a break, even when he is all cuddly. 

He's kinda tame for a feral creature, which I love. 

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EllieRose101 commented on Chapter 5 on October 10, 2017 12:37am Liked

I adore the bit written from Feral!Spike's perspective.

In a lot of ways, it's so simple: Dawn good, stakes bad, Buffy awesome. Everything else confusing and therefore ignored. 

*loves him* 

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EllieRose101 commented on Chapter 4 on October 10, 2017 12:09am Liked

Buffy the Bufferer, stupendous. - *chuckles*

You're doing a good job of capturing Buffy's conflicting feelings. 

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EllieRose101 commented on Chapter 2 on October 09, 2017 10:55pm

Really, she thought, she was just doing her job.

- Sure, Buffy. Surreee. #QueenOfDenial 

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EllieRose101 commented on Chapter 1 on October 09, 2017 10:46pm

Interesting. 

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Cloongarvin commented on Chapter 22 on June 20, 2017 05:11am

Yay, nicely done. This was a pleasure to read. Thank you.

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