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flootzavut commented on Hurricane on October 07, 2016 08:54pm Liked

"The sight of him with a bag of frozen peas pressed softly to his nose made her chest swell with just a little too much pride."

Aaahhhhh, ily Buffy, never change!

"That girl’s a hurricane."

Oh Spike, you've NO idea...

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magnus374 commented on Hurricane on October 07, 2016 11:25am

Nice to see how Spike saw this. Buffy should probably learn how to apologise, so far she's extremely bad at itbiggrin They have met now, so the drama can unfold.

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loopy commented on Hurricane on October 07, 2016 06:43am Liked

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pfeifferpack commented on Hurricane on October 06, 2016 10:07pm Liked

WOW not very apologetic there Buffy.  You broke the poor guys nose and he didn't do anything to you or Willow (and even acted decently when you hit him).  She needs to eat an entire flock of crows.

Kathleen

Author's Response on October 06, 2016 10:11pm

Lol she'll redeem herself soon! I promise. Thank you for your review. :)

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kimothyschma commented on Mama Bear on October 05, 2016 05:14pm Liked

Great start! I'm intrigued.

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flootzavut commented on Mama Bear on October 05, 2016 02:11pm Liked

Buffy introducing herself via popping Spike in the nose was perfect biggrin

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Amayuscula commented on Mama Bear on October 04, 2016 06:52am Liked

applauseapplause

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magnus374 commented on Mama Bear on October 04, 2016 06:36am

This was a different first meeting for them, I liked it.

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jhiz commented on Mama Bear on October 03, 2016 10:54pm Liked

*snicker* Buffy noticed how attractive Spike was even through her infuriated attitude?  Must be attractive in her book.

Loved Spike's line of passing on the message.  Wonder if that means he will punch Angel in the nose?

Thanks for sharing.  Looking forward to the next chapter.  This looks like fun.

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killjoy commented on Mama Bear on October 03, 2016 10:02pm

Ohhh cool someone took one of my challenges! Great start so far!

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pfeifferpack commented on Mama Bear on October 03, 2016 03:53pm Liked

Nice start.  Big oops on Buffy's part but I think she'll be forgiven fairly easily.

Wonder how he fits in with Liam.  Can't see them as friends but who knows.

Kathleen

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