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DeamonQueen commented on Chapter 7 on October 11, 2016 03:04pm Liked

hmmm, I'm really conflicted on whether to cheer Buffy and wish she escaped fast or if I should be get captured. For the first one, because well--she's the heroine in this story and we all would want her safe. The second reason though is because I am slightly afraid that if she does escape the story will end.. Hehehe, guess right now I am gonna be hoping that the first one will happen.. Anyway, good luck and hope to see the next chapter soon!!

Author's Response on October 12, 2016 04:51pm

Imagine how conflicted I feel about writing the next chapter! :P

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magnus374 commented on Chapter 7 on October 09, 2016 05:45am

More questions, we do know why the ritual, even if there seems to be more reasons than one. We still don't know what ending the world means, there should be some other meaning to it. There's also the interesting mention of the Children and Ma'at's father. I just have to keep reading.

Author's Response on October 09, 2016 10:42am

I'm trying to answer your questions as quickly as possible, I promise. xD Thanks so much for the review.

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jhiz commented on Chapter 7 on October 08, 2016 04:33pm

Hmm, quite the twist in plot you have there.  Wonder what the secondary reason was for Isfet wanting to off Buffy.

Thanks for the update.

Author's Response on October 08, 2016 10:20pm

Thank you for the review! :)

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Chrissel commented on Chapter 1 on October 04, 2016 01:30pm Liked

Interesting premise for he story! Can't wait to see where you go with it!

Author's Response on October 04, 2016 01:33pm

Thank you! I hope you enjoy the rest of the story! heart

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Kate of Katehall commented on Chapter 6 on October 04, 2016 07:18am Liked

That doesn't sound good 😕I dimly recall Set being the bad guy (and Osiris' brother), who was fighting Osiris for Isis (who was also their sister). Does Isis play a role, too?

I liked your Spike/Faith interaction, these two are probably my favourite characters. Still, can't wait for the Spuffy reunion 🙂 Well done!

Author's Response on October 04, 2016 01:33pm

Thank you, I loved the hint at Spike and Faith being friends in season 7, even though they didn't develop it fully. Thank you for the reviews. :D

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magnus374 commented on Chapter 6 on October 03, 2016 12:53pm

It never made any sense why they had higher thoughts about Angel than Spike, but they did. Of course they haven't figured out that Spike is the other champion.

In my opinion the bad guys always want to rule the world, not end it. Of course the question is what she actually mean by ending the world and of course why? What could it possible give them? 

Author's Response on October 03, 2016 05:28pm

You'll just have to wait until my plot bunnies multiply to find out. devil

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Ubikoctober commented on Chapter 6 on October 03, 2016 04:22am Liked

I'm not convinced, Ma'at doesn't seem to really want the end of the world... Maybe is to save Isfet? 

Great story and the plot is intriguing as well :)

Author's Response on October 03, 2016 11:10am

Shhhh. Don't make my plot bunnies public just yet!

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DeamonQueen commented on Chapter 6 on October 02, 2016 11:52pm Liked

Again, with the interesting.. Really wish chapters were longer. But hey, can't be a chooser if i beg. So I shall simply ask in my humblest formbow that you update in the swiftest way!

 

HAhahaha!haha I am such a drama queen, should've gone for that name instead of deamon... thinking Anyway, great chapter and can't wait for the next one! Update soon!

Author's Response on October 03, 2016 11:04am

I'll update ASAP. :) I'm really enjoying writing again and will be sure to continue. Thanks for the review. :3

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pfeifferpack commented on Chapter 6 on October 02, 2016 11:45pm Liked

Oh dear not good!  Ma'at had my sympathy but not if she plans to end the world.  

They really need to take off the blinders and see that Spike is the Champion they need.  Faith will be handy to hang around the hellmouth while Buffy is gone but Spike is the needed Champion.

Glad Spike understands the problem with Giles and Xander.  He still hopes Giles will turn around in time (great insight on how differently Giles acceptance levels and forgivness levels were with Angel and Spike!).  XAnder is another kettle of fish though.  THe jealousy will always be in the way.

Kathleen

Author's Response on October 03, 2016 11:03am

Yeah, I for one am not a huge Xander fan (which is probably why he isn't in my story). I would probably bash him to death. lol Giles on the other hand, until the last season, I found very understandable. When he tried to kill Spike though I was so upset.

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jhiz commented on Chapter 6 on October 02, 2016 10:59pm

Interesting turn of event on two fronts.  Faith is brought in and Ma'at wanting to end the world.  Two cataclysm in one chapter *grin*.

Author's Response on October 03, 2016 11:00am

lol I guess you can interpret it that way. *wink, wink*

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Nana commented on Chapter 5 on September 30, 2016 04:12pm Liked

Good sex scene, keep them coming.  You are doing very well.

Author's Response on October 02, 2016 06:17pm

Thank you! :) I hope you enjoy further chapters. 

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magnus374 commented on Chapter 5 on September 30, 2016 12:36pm

I liked how Buffy now understand that not every love is the same. We got more interesting information about Ma'at and Isfet. This opens up more possibilities.

Author's Response on October 02, 2016 06:18pm

Thank you. I always thought that was the real issue behind Buffy not realizing she was in love with Spike until the end--was that it didn't feel like the way she loved Angel.

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DeamonQueen commented on Chapter 5 on September 30, 2016 11:15am Liked

More please! I really can't wait for every new chapter! This is starting yo look really, really promising by the minute!

Author's Response on October 02, 2016 06:19pm

Thank you so much for all the reviews. I really appreciate it.

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jhiz commented on Chapter 5 on September 30, 2016 07:24am

Sweet dream.  It makes me wonder if Spike is having dreams too.

Oh, loved the line about comparing all her lovers to Angel and she not realizing that the loves were different but still love.

Hmm, you set up the whole vamp slayer thing.  Personally, I hope that doesn't mean a vamped Buffy but I can see that being a part of the story given your prophesy thingie.  Oh well.  I just don't like vamp buffy... with or without a soul.  Just me though.  Does not make or break a story for me if I am already invested in reading it.

Thanks for the update and you did fine with your first smut scene (*grin*  Wonder if you were as nervous as I was with my first one?)

Author's Response on October 02, 2016 07:25pm

I was so nervous! I was also writing it in a public place and had to keep looking over my shoulder, paranoid someone would know I was writing smut. lol

As far as vamp!Buffy goes, the story is writing itself, so I would promise anything, but I'll keep it in mind how you feel. :) <3

Thank you for the reviews.

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MsXGingerXNinja commented on Chapter 5 on September 30, 2016 02:59am Liked

I love it.

I need more now please heart 

Much love always

Lilly 

Xxxxxxx 

Author's Response on October 02, 2016 07:26pm

Thank you for the review, Lilly. I'll be getting these chapters out as soon as possible! :)

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pfeifferpack commented on Chapter 5 on September 30, 2016 12:46am Liked

Interesting Ma'at was a Slayer.  I wonder that the grand plan is here.  THey seem to be treating Buffy well even with affection.  Hard to believe there is ill intent.

Yes, Buffy never did give anyone else a chance after Angel (and HE was so not good for or to her!).  Spike suffered from it more than Riley because he was rejected as a being not just as a lover/boyfriend.  Buffy never referred to Riley as a thing at least.  Much less a disgusting evil thing even when Riley did disgusting evil acts.

Kathleen

Author's Response on October 02, 2016 07:29pm

Yeah, Angel definitely wasn't good for Buffy. He treated her like a child when she had to make live-or-death decisions on a daily basis.

I hate how Riley was set up to get so much sympathy from Xander in the show and Spike got no sympathy from anyone for the way she treated him. 

Thank you for the reviews! hearts

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Mya222 commented on Chapter 5 on September 29, 2016 11:49pm Liked

Great job, very hot!

hearts

Author's Response on October 02, 2016 07:26pm

*blush* thank you! devil

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magnus374 commented on Chapter 4 on September 28, 2016 11:52am

Interesting to see that the two vampires was called Ma'at and Isfet. It do make sense to have more Egyptian mythology. From the dream it seems like Buffy and Spike was Ma'at and Isfet, maybe in an earlier life or maybe just the  symbolic meaning of them being the dual champions.

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jhiz commented on Chapter 4 on September 27, 2016 08:14pm

Interesting dream.  Love seeing Spike in it.  Thanks for the update (and don't worry on the length, we are happy with what we can get).

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DeamonQueen commented on Chapter 4 on September 27, 2016 07:46pm Liked

Oh, my god, I loved the sight you showed by the end. I shall guess that it is a vision right? Ooh, I am loving this story. It so mysterious and really I loved that it peaked my interest, The Egyptian references are a plus too. Can't wait for the next chapter, good luck! 

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Mya222 commented on Chapter 4 on September 27, 2016 07:01pm Liked

I can't wait to see how you proceed.

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pfeifferpack commented on Chapter 4 on September 27, 2016 06:30pm Liked

Spike is Isfet?  But what of the vampire behind Ma'at earlier?  Look forward to the answer to that.  

I wonder if this is a matter of reincarnation?  Interesting that Buffy has been dreaming the same thing for weeks without knowing who Isfet was until now.  Sounds like a Slayer dream.

So she's among the Egyptian gods in this dream, likely one of them herself.

Kathleen

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DeamonQueen commented on Chapter 3 on September 24, 2016 10:36am Liked

Oooh, very interesting.. I am loving your plot.. More, more, more please! I cannot wait to read more! Great story and really interested to see how this shall go!

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DeamonQueen commented on Chapter 2 on September 24, 2016 10:33am Liked

Hmm, I loved that Giles thanked Spike, it was unexpected too. I just wish that there was a more clearer conversation than that and more Scooby-Spike interaction. Then a bit of Angel jeasy on that particular interaction. Hehehe, bonus points for Dawn interaction too!

Sorry for being such a demanding reader. I simplu tend to supply opinions and ideas cause by the stories I read. Please do not think of it as a bad thing though, I assure you if I speak too much in a review, it means I really liked your story and I want to show my enthusiasm this way. You don't really have to do anything though, since t is you fic! And I shall say that it is a really interesting one! I loved the Egyptian references for one! Although I always thought that Set was spelled as Seth, with an Hthinking. Gonna google it now to see if you mean the same I know.smile

Excited to see how this goes! Gonna read the next one again now too!

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DeamonQueen commented on Chapter 1 on September 24, 2016 10:16am Liked

Real nice start, you got Giles to the foot. I can so see the vampire hating from where I am. So you did good! Although his reason for calling did seemed stupid on his part, I mean there are a lot of witches in the coven besides Willow, so he wouldn't have any use for Wesley on the matter. I hope that you'd specify better in the next few chapters ahead why Wesley was really needed. Some sort of importance that only he could be of use of. This way Giles calling for help would be more believable, of course this is just a suggestion

But aside from that this was a good start. Interest peaked! Great job! Off to the next one now!

Author's Response on September 24, 2016 11:47am

I guess I always assumed the coven was gone once the council was gone. Oops. You found a plot hole. That's what I get for having no beta. lol Thanks for the reviews! <3

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DarkHeart commented on Chapter 1 on September 24, 2016 09:10am Liked

Dramatic start and I like Giles's reaction to both Spike and Harmony.

Author's Response on October 02, 2016 07:31pm

Thank you! I have difficulty writing Giles, because I honestly don't like the way he turned on Spike in the last season. 

Author's Response on October 02, 2016 07:32pm

Thank you! I have difficulty writing Giles, because I honestly don't like the way he turned on Spike in the last season. 

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magnus374 commented on Chapter 3 on September 24, 2016 04:36am

Spike at least should have a bigger chance at being the champion than Angel.

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jhiz commented on Chapter 3 on September 24, 2016 02:22am

I think Spike has a right to be indignant.  I did like his statement about not needing validation.

The evil woman has me intrigued.  Is she also a vamp?

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Sunalso commented on Chapter 3 on September 23, 2016 10:47pm Liked

Apep, eh? Where's Ra when you need him? (Or someone else who might be able to pass for a sun-god...hmm...) I'm very much enjoying the mythological aspects of this story! Thank you and I can't wait for more!

Author's Response on October 02, 2016 07:33pm

Thank you! I love mythology, especially Greek and Egyptian, and have been known to write a lot of it. :)

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Sunalso commented on Chapter 2 on September 23, 2016 10:41pm Liked

I don't think any amount of researching will ultimately be able to keep Spike from doing something rash, lol. Egyptian Gods in Greece, eh? Interesting...

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