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Green commented on Four Colours on November 30, 2019 02:26pm Liked

Glad he believed she loved him. 💚

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Joyce commented on Four Colours on December 01, 2017 08:34am Liked

 

 
Author's Response on December 19, 2017 07:36am

hearts

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OffYourBird commented on Four Colours on March 19, 2017 01:55pm Liked

This popped up under my the Random Story and I'm so glad it did! What an incredibly powerful story to pack into four small paragraphs. Your framing of Spike's journey under "colors" is just brilliant. Gorgeous piece, thank you for sharing!

Author's Response on March 21, 2017 07:22am

Thank you for your lovely review!

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magnus374 commented on Four Colours on September 21, 2016 12:46pm

Great lines to describe why Spike chose those colours, it felt intense and powerful all through to the end.

Author's Response on September 21, 2016 02:46pm

Thank you. He is such a focus of pure white light at the end.

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pfeifferpack commented on Four Colours on September 20, 2016 08:21pm Liked

I really loved this!  Yes even without the amulet and burning to death he had already really been engulfed in white it was that moment that he really ambraced it though.

Lovely.

Kathleen

Author's Response on September 21, 2016 02:47pm

Thanks, Kathleen. In a way he echoes Willow's journey from Red, through black (veiny) to white.

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