Not only did he say she was beautiful, but he made her feel that way too. Very cute, and I loved the vivid detail. Told us what his state of mind was like without you having to spell it out for us. Bravo![Report This]
If only they'd had that kind of tenderness in the show! Alas.
Ikr? I wonder how different things would've been if they'd just been honest with their feelings. Thanks!!
so good to have you back! I'm an artist and my minds eye kept "seeing" this take visual form, and the weather/moon here lately have been the perfect embodiment of this night you describe. Just has that look and feel about it. So atmospheric. it sucked me right in.
I really liked the sections...click, inhale, exhale...and how you used them to capture feelings.
Wow! I really appreciate the comment! I'm happy to have successfully "painted" an image in your mind.
And hey! We're both artists!
Some really good descriptive writing in the beginning and then we could see a good moment with Buffy and Spike. I liked seeing them in this good calm moment.
Thank you! And me too, honestly. I was listening to some calming, chill music while writing this so I felt pretty relaxed.