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Puppet commented on under the night sky they rested. on January 19, 2020 09:44am

You're definitely a great writer, but I found this a little too descriptive and it kinda made the message of the story get muddled. But I would for sure read other things from you :)

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Connie_3D commented on under the night sky they rested. on September 18, 2019 03:50pm Liked

It's all about the sum total of the moments in this snippet.  For most of their history, Spuffy had so few of them. But oh, my, the sum total of these few moments show, they add up! Nicely done.

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Meavepagan commented on under the night sky they rested. on August 26, 2019 11:50am Liked

Excellent story 

  I really  liked it.   I would absolutely love for there to be more.

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srbeaver commented on under the night sky they rested. on March 03, 2019 05:48pm Liked

I love tender moments between Buffy and Spike.

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acekoomboom commented on under the night sky they rested. on May 05, 2018 03:30pm

 Not only did he say she was beautiful, but he made her feel that way too. Very cute, and I loved the vivid detail. Told us what his state of mind was like without you having to spell it out for us. Bravo!

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MichelleZed commented on under the night sky they rested. on October 07, 2017 10:30pm

 If only they'd had that kind of tenderness in the show! Alas.

Author's Response on October 08, 2017 12:07am

Ikr? I wonder how different things would've been if they'd just been honest with their feelings. Thanks!! 

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Cryptwarmer commented on under the night sky they rested. on September 21, 2016 05:32pm Liked

so good to have you back! I'm an artist and my minds eye kept "seeing" this take visual form, and the weather/moon here lately have been the perfect embodiment of this night you describe. Just has that look and feel about it. So atmospheric. it sucked me right in.

I really liked the sections...click, inhale, exhale...and how you used them to capture feelings. 

Author's Response on September 21, 2016 05:51pm

Wow! I really appreciate the comment! I'm happy to have successfully "painted" an image in your mind. 

And hey! We're both artists! 

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magnus374 commented on under the night sky they rested. on September 20, 2016 01:59pm

Some really good descriptive writing in the beginning and then we could see a good moment with Buffy and Spike. I liked seeing them in this good calm moment.

Author's Response on September 20, 2016 07:39pm

Thank you! And me too, honestly. I was listening to some calming, chill music while writing this so I felt pretty relaxed.

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Mya222 commented on under the night sky they rested. on September 20, 2016 07:49am Liked

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pfeifferpack commented on under the night sky they rested. on September 20, 2016 01:36am Liked

Nice one shot.  You set the mood well.  They had much in common really.

Kathleen

Author's Response on September 20, 2016 07:38am

Thank you! :) 

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LavenderBlue commented on under the night sky they rested. on September 20, 2016 12:09am

Lovely.

Author's Response on September 20, 2016 07:37am

<3

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jhiz commented on under the night sky they rested. on September 19, 2016 10:53pm

They always seem to have a connection.  Nicely captured in this moment.  Thanks.

Author's Response on September 20, 2016 07:37am

Thank you. :)

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