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pfeifferpack commented on Chapter 4 - Consequences on February 21, 2020 02:27am Liked

I know I read this before but, like all your stories, it was a pleasure to re-read any number of times.

This was so bittersweet. It felt so realistic. Yes, Spike would do what he felt was the best for her even at the cost of his own heart.

Excellent.

Kathleen

Author's Response on February 21, 2020 07:01pm

Thank you, Kathleen. I'm glad it worked for you. It was a bit of an experiment.

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gabelou1991 commented on Chapter 4 - Consequences on February 05, 2020 05:59am

Magnifique. 

Author's Response on February 05, 2020 03:53pm

Merci.

 

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gabelou1991 commented on Chapter 3 Not The Way We Were on February 05, 2020 05:54am

Faire revenir riley a été une bonne idée cela reste un personnage de btvs mais le scénario et surtout avec une femme a été le clou de buffy ici les oeufs ne sont pas canon pour moi .

Qu'il viennent seul est une  bonne chose dans mon livre car cela montre qu'il tient encore à buffy mais buffy ne sait rien de ses activités à sunnydalle avant de partir car en faisant ce qu'il a fait à mis en danger sa famille.

Demandait à willow est intéressant mais je pense que buffy ne lui faisait plus confiance à un certain point.

Author's Response on February 05, 2020 11:05pm

I'm glad it rang true to you. Thanks for reading and commenting.

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gabelou1991 commented on Chapter 2 Tell it to Someone Who Cares on February 05, 2020 05:42am

Le dire a spike est parfait car cest le seul qui n'aurait rien dit les autres a part peut-être dawn aurait réagit. 

Ici xander est naïf.

Author's Response on February 05, 2020 11:06pm

Yes, he was the only one it was safe to tell. And Xander has just been given a big problem to deal with, hasn't he?  Thanks for reading.

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Lou commented on Chapter 4 - Consequences on January 29, 2020 05:18pm Liked

So sad but beautifully done.

Author's Response on January 29, 2020 08:15pm

Thank you. :)

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Lou commented on Chapter 3 Not The Way We Were on January 29, 2020 03:41pm Liked

Smashing - a fitting welcome back for ... ugh!

Author's Response on January 29, 2020 08:16pm

LOL  Don't we wish!

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Lou commented on Chapter One -Someone Will Pay on January 29, 2020 03:31pm Liked

Just how Giles would have been!

Author's Response on January 29, 2020 08:17pm

I'd like to think so.  Thanks for reading!

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HebiC commented on Chapter 4 - Consequences on January 27, 2020 05:40pm Liked

Well, that hurt.  But I liked it.  Worrisome.

Author's Response on January 28, 2020 09:30am

 Thanks. I'm not sure how my fiddling with the format brought it to anyone's attention, but I'm glad you liked it.

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srbeaver commented on Chapter 4 - Consequences on January 27, 2020 04:08pm Liked

So sad but a very good story.

Author's Response on January 28, 2020 09:31am

Thank you.

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srbeaver commented on Chapter 3 Not The Way We Were on January 27, 2020 04:01pm Liked

Wow, I love this. I always thought Riley had sit Spike up with the whole eggs and the Doctor bit. 

Author's Response on January 28, 2020 09:31am

Yay. I'm glad you found it believable.

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srbeaver commented on Chapter 2 Tell it to Someone Who Cares on January 27, 2020 03:48pm Liked

Xander can be such a jerk at times. In fact the majority of the time.

Author's Response on January 28, 2020 09:32am

Alas. Thanks for reading!

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srbeaver commented on Chapter One -Someone Will Pay on January 27, 2020 03:23pm

Awesome chapter and I love how Buffy wanted Spike and not the Scoobies.

Author's Response on January 28, 2020 09:33am

Thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed it.

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Angelsheart1 commented on Chapter One -Someone Will Pay on December 26, 2018 04:19am

Story #1 Thank you for writing a good Giles.  So happy he was there when Buffy was resurrected.  Even better when he brought Spike back in so he could finish cleaning and bandaging Buffy's hands.  Happy he was going to contact a coven in regards to Willow's misuse of magic.

Story #2 Of course Xander is pissed at the fact she told Spije but not at the fact they ripped her out of heaven.

Story #3 Glad Buffy stuck it to Riley and embraced Spike.

Story #4 That was just mean.  Poor Spike and Dawn.

Author's Response on December 26, 2018 08:51pm

Thanks for reading.  I think things might have gone very differently if Giles had been there. But he wasn't... hence we have 2, 3, and 4. :)

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MythMagykFae commented on Chapter One -Someone Will Pay on December 06, 2017 11:03pm Liked

Wonderful set of short stories! I teared up at the last one...

Author's Response on December 07, 2017 06:35pm

Thank you. It was a wonderful set of prompts.

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Queenfish commented on Chapter One -Someone Will Pay on February 26, 2017 09:08am Liked

Brilliant stories - all of them. Thank you.

Author's Response on February 26, 2017 01:02pm

I'm glad you enjoyed them. Thanks for telling me so. :)

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madspuffyfan commented on Chapter One -Someone Will Pay on November 01, 2016 02:57pm Liked

Loved them. Did you write any longer fics to these?

Author's Response on November 01, 2016 03:11pm

No, I don't think I expanded on any of them.  I'm not sure how many of them could be expanded, but I should take a look I guess in case I find myself in need of a bunny someday.  I'm glad you liked them. :)

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jhiz commented on Chapter One -Someone Will Pay on September 04, 2016 08:18am

Those really cover the gambit from happy cathartic fluff to grim, grieving darkness. 

Great arrogence conveyed with both Willows anf with Riley.  

If only Giles had been more effective at the start like you created, then I bet Buffy would not have had such a hard time of it.

Author's Response on September 04, 2016 08:31am

Thank you.  In poor Giles's defense, in canon he wasn't there when they resurrected Buffy.  But yes, I think he would have been able to handle it a little better.

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Elianne commented on Chapter One -Someone Will Pay on August 21, 2016 05:54am Liked

i enjoyed your stories alot..thank you for sharing them! the last one left me crying in the middle of the day and in desperate need of demon exorcisibg music in order to be able to get on with the things i actually had planned for the day..i loved it, but i'm glad it didn't happened that way in canon..it was heartbeaking enough as it was..on the other hand interesting parallel to buffy killing angel, and i guess i wouldn't quite put it past the buffy writers as an intermezzo..the first was close enough to canon to even fit in joss's version if you ask me with a lovely tender spuffy twist..loved giles supporting spike and trying to show willow the mistakes of her ways..and the one with riley was what every spuffy fan would have wanted..:)

Author's Response on August 21, 2016 10:09am

I'm glad you enjoyed them. Thank you for telling me so. :)

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DarkHeart commented on Chapter One -Someone Will Pay on August 20, 2016 02:17am Liked

Wow.  They all read like scenes that could have happened (well except for the third one - Joss would never have allowed that) and that last one is incredibly powerful.   Obviously it's the third one I like best though!

Author's Response on August 20, 2016 10:42am

Thanks. The prompts were amazing and they stories just invented themselves. :)

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gello5440 commented on Chapter One -Someone Will Pay on August 07, 2016 03:57pm Liked

Every one unique, touching---simply smashing. Love your work.

Author's Response on August 07, 2016 06:30pm

Thank you. :)

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ginar369 commented on Chapter One -Someone Will Pay on August 04, 2016 12:48pm Liked

heart

Author's Response on August 04, 2016 02:18pm

smile

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Rkf22 commented on Chapter One -Someone Will Pay on August 04, 2016 12:05pm

Great work would love to see them all

Author's Response on August 04, 2016 02:18pm

Thank you.

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All4Spike commented on Chapter One -Someone Will Pay on August 04, 2016 11:08am Liked

I still wish that you'd continue Someone will pay.... write

Author's Response on August 04, 2016 02:21pm

I was looking at these as I posted them and thinking there were a couple that could have been expanded or sequeled. I'll have to take another look at them after I finish the current wip.

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magnus374 commented on Chapter One -Someone Will Pay on August 04, 2016 06:51am

I really liked Giles in the first part, the thing he did and said.

The second one gave Xander something to think about.

In the third we could see a Buffy who was clearly over Riley and we had the nice happy ending we all want.

In the last one we had this really creepy feeling with one part of sorrow, the ending line brought a lityle light into it though.

Author's Response on August 04, 2016 08:53am

Very different feels for all of them. The prompts were wonderful.

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djellibabe commented on Chapter One -Someone Will Pay on August 04, 2016 02:35am Liked

Good gracious me! All different, all brilliant!

Author's Response on August 04, 2016 08:54am

Thank you!

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pfeifferpack commented on Chapter One -Someone Will Pay on August 04, 2016 12:54am Liked

Each of these are excellent.  The first was one that made me happy.  Wish Giles HAD been there and it had gone this way.  The last was so damned sad but ultimately quite what they should have expected and it could easily have happened.

All so very good.

Kathleen

Author's Response on August 04, 2016 08:54am

Thank you. The prompts were wonderful - such fun to work with. 

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Kellydofc commented on Chapter One -Someone Will Pay on August 03, 2016 10:58pm Liked

The 1st story was bittersweet. The 2nd was sad. The 3rd was uplifting and happy.  The 4th was gut wrenching. 

Author's Response on August 04, 2016 08:55am

Thank you. :)

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