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Dontia commented on Oneshot on February 09, 2020 02:13am Liked

This is a cool story.

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Chosenname commented on Oneshot on August 13, 2019 10:39am Liked

Hooray for random story generators! This little tidbit was the perfect way to start my day. 

I love this! I love how *real* it felt and how easily it flowed from the less deadly (for Buffy anyway) ending of the Glory arc. It was fun watching her emerge from that famous Egyptian river inch by dripping inch, and I loved the hopeful note you ended on. So if it feels wrong to you…penis curse offer is still open. But if you’re just worried about what other people think, then don’t be. You get to make the rules for your life. Exactly!

Oh, and I love how you pointed out the world isn't perfect, but it never stopped turning. Willow still has some hang-ups, obviously. She is stressed that she nearly lost Tara and she doesn't ever want to be that vulnerable again. (Still, a correspondence course on “the Deeper Magicks” is probably not the best way to hone her skills, lol.) Xander and Anya are still pushing themselves way too far, way too fast, and there is still likely to be fallout. Dawn is still Dawn, and Giles still has issues. Not everything is cotton candy fluffy, but it doesn't have to be. I love the moment that Buffy realizes that 'wrong' is in the eye of the beholder and that her happiness is important, too. 

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TammyPreston commented on Oneshot on May 26, 2019 09:26am Liked

If things had gone this way, we wouldn't have had the disastrous season 6.

I don't think it will come a day I'll be able to cope with all the issues of season 6, but that's me.

However, I love you story. Utterly believable Buffy's perspective.

She totally sounds like her.

Author's Response on May 26, 2019 09:49am

Thanks! Glad it rang true for you.

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NickaML commented on Oneshot on March 15, 2019 04:25pm

Loved jt

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OffYourBird commented on Oneshot on July 11, 2018 02:28pm Liked

You write such beautiful S6 fix-its! I want to wrap up this entire thing in a gigantic happy Spuffy hug. It is exactly what I might hope could happen sans resurrection - Willow not off the deep end, Spuffy affection not tinged in self-hatred, and everything dipped in acceptance and family. It's wonderful.

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Coraxes commented on Oneshot on September 24, 2017 11:52am Liked

First of all, I didn't realize this was you!!  I checked out your stuff 'cause you left a review and then realized.  Usernames, man.

Actual fic talk:  This was really, really cute.  It's the kinda thing I could easily see going down in S6 if Buffy hadn't died, with her still in denial but more open to talking about it and not quite as weighed down.  I laughed out loud at some of the cuts ("At least this was just kissing"/"Okay so Buffy didn't ACTUALLY sleep with him"); you really got that ironic, TV-ish feeling down.  And the talk with Willow was really nice.

Overall--great job!

Author's Response on September 26, 2017 05:36pm

I knowww, I wish I could change this username to fit with my others. I held onto the "Mix" component of an online nickname for a long time, until I lost touch with nearly everyone who'd ever called me that and I thought I could finally drop it.

And thank you so much!! I'm so glad you liked it. I'm a big sucker for happy AU S6 stuff, as much as I love the canon suffering.

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Aislenn commented on Oneshot on March 31, 2017 12:01pm Liked

I wish we'd have seen it go this way! I appreciate supportive and encouraging Willow, wish we'd have gotten that in show too!

Author's Response on April 06, 2017 01:54pm

Aww! Thank you :) 

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Mya222 commented on Oneshot on September 21, 2016 07:00am Liked

Sweet.heart  

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DarkHeart commented on Oneshot on September 03, 2016 04:20pm Liked

That made me smile.  It was funny all the way through and sweet at the end.   I really like the idea that Buffy could trust her feelings and not care what others might think.  Willow's advice was great.  That was a lovely exploration of what might have happened between them if the Scoobies weren't around to interfere. 

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flootzavut commented on Oneshot on August 26, 2016 04:18pm Liked

I read this before over on AO3, stumbled across it again tonight. Still like it a lot! hearts

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Joyce commented on Oneshot on August 25, 2016 03:42pm Liked

The best thing thing about this fic is that you really have the Buffy slanguage down and mangled Buffy style! Cute!

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Rabbit_moon1 commented on Oneshot on August 23, 2016 11:36pm Liked

This was so good!  You had Buffy's voice down perfectly, and all her little denial mind-games, too!  So funny!  Your word-play with the word "friendliness" had me laughing out loud!  (Oh Buffy!  You are the queen of denial!)

It was nice to see Willow being her best friend again.  I think if Buffy had been able to get past her fear of rejection by her friends, Willow would have stepped-up and been there for her.   

Thanks for sharing!  I loved the happy Spuffy ending!

 

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Kellydofc commented on Oneshot on August 23, 2016 01:51pm Liked


 

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djellibabe commented on Oneshot on July 14, 2016 06:03pm Liked

 Just what I needed! Bloody brilliant!

Author's Response on July 15, 2016 11:54pm

Thank you so much!

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ginar369 commented on Oneshot on July 12, 2016 09:25am Liked

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Convi commented on Oneshot on July 11, 2016 09:12pm Liked

Awwww!  That was so sweet to have non-judgemental Willow remind her that she has the right to make her own decisions!  (Also, loved the buildup in the beginning with the "nope, not gonna happen again."....thought process.  So Buffy!)

Yay for giving it a shot at the end!

Author's Response on July 11, 2016 10:21pm

Thank you! Glad you enjoyed!

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pfeifferpack commented on Oneshot on July 11, 2016 08:29pm Liked

Really loved this so much!  I wish at least her girlfriends had made this clear to her.  She shouldn't have cared what they thought but since she did (or at least she did after the whole Angel/Angelus disaster) it would have saved everyone so much pain if she had the green light.  Spike had earned it in canon during the Glory battle and that summer after and in this story even if Buffy didn't die he earned it in a different way.

Excellent.

Kathleen

Author's Response on July 11, 2016 10:20pm

Thank you so much! Absolutely, and I think regardless Buffy shouldn't have had to worry about them disapproving. Unfortunately...

pfeifferpack Replied on July 11, 2016 10:25pm

I always thought that since she was so strong in supporting her romance with Angel even in spite of comments from Giles and Xander only to have them "proven right" she put more weight on their opinions from then on.  She stuck by her guns and people died and so she lost all confidence in her own evaluation regarding her love life.  She didn't really see how different Spike was from Angelus chalking up any differences to the chip.  She needed to stop taking all the blame (or letting the others imply it was hers to take) for Angelus but that takes maturity.

They all judged Spike through the lens of Angelus and never saw the real individual at all.

k

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EllieRose101 commented on Oneshot on July 11, 2016 05:30pm Liked

Not that she was planning on being eaten any time soon. - *giggles* 

that gross and totally unsexy smirk - Oh, yeah right, Buffy. You protest too much. 

Gahhh, how Buffy's "friendliness" followed by excuses and running off must make Spike ache. I can practically feel it on his behalf. 

Yay for the warm fuzzy ending! *swoons* 

Author's Response on July 11, 2016 05:44pm

I'm glad you liked it! :D 

EllieRose101 Replied on July 11, 2016 06:09pm

Not like, LOVE! 

Big, huge, love!! 

I have the biggest dose of the feels right now. 

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DreamScape99 commented on Oneshot on July 11, 2016 02:48pm

This was fantastic! It had me laughing out loud. biggrin

Author's Response on July 11, 2016 03:10pm

Yay! That's so wonderful to hear!

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magnus374 commented on Oneshot on July 11, 2016 02:07pm

It was good, following how their relationship evolved. Buffy was of course clinging to some denile. She needed that little talk with Willow, hearing someone say that it's okey to feel this way, it's her life.

This ended well and had a good feeling to it, nice story.

Author's Response on July 11, 2016 02:08pm

Thank you! :)

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Wonder and Ashes commented on Oneshot on July 11, 2016 01:55pm

“Maybe he got it confused with his bland personality.” - Best. Line. Ever. haha 

Loved this. biggrin

Author's Response on July 11, 2016 02:08pm

Thank you so much! I had fun with that one ^^

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Cryptwarmer commented on Oneshot on July 11, 2016 01:36pm Liked

Sweet and sexy in such a fun, gentle, yummy way! 

Author's Response on July 11, 2016 01:54pm

Thank you! So glad you enjoyed :)

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