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Marie516 commented on Dancing on December 10, 2020 01:38am

Absolutely beautiful. I feel like Spike’s “voice” is pretty spot on. 

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Green commented on Dancing on November 01, 2019 07:26am Liked

Beautiful story and beautifully written but makes my 💔. 💚

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Priceless commented on Dancing on March 25, 2018 07:08pm Liked

Sweet and romantic, loved it

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Aislenn commented on Dancing on March 26, 2017 04:26pm Liked

The touch of self reproach and lack of feeling worthy all mixed in with the love and want to give happiness that Spike mulls over here makes for quite a cocktail. Also the banner is just lovely. Thanks for the ficlet!

Author's Response on November 22, 2017 04:11pm

I think I probably need to reupload all my banners *facepalm* thanks, photobucket! You wouldn't credit how long that banner took me, but I was pleased with the end result so I'm happy you liked it. AND the story, of course. The first Spuffy story I ever wrote, but it might still be my favourite. Thank you!

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purrmonster commented on Dancing on January 28, 2017 07:34am Liked

:dreamy sigh:  Lovely heart

Author's Response on March 04, 2017 05:55pm

blushbiggrinblow_kiss First piece of Buffy fanfic I ever wrote, but I think it may still be my favourite. Thank you! flowers

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cat5 commented on Dancing on December 29, 2016 09:04pm Liked

Just lovely.

Author's Response on January 16, 2017 06:11pm

Thank you! This was the first Buffy story I ever wrote, but I think it might still be my favourite heart

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EllieRose101 commented on Dancing on December 05, 2016 09:49pm Liked

Not like, loveheart

Very touching. 

Author's Response on December 06, 2016 11:47am

blushblow_kiss This was the first Buffy story I ever wrote - I'm still very fond of it! Thank you for the review flowers

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slaymesoftly commented on Dancing on September 01, 2016 10:58pm Liked

This was lovely. I'm so glad it popped up on the home page. :)

Author's Response on September 02, 2016 04:16am

Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it. It was the first Spuffy I ever wrote and remains one of my favourites, so it makes me happy others like it too biggrin

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Rabbit_moon1 commented on Dancing on August 31, 2016 06:24am Liked

This was gorgeous, insightful writing!  

Wonderful premise to show the internal musings of Spike's thoughts the night he held Buffy in his arms during Touched.  That was an incredibly important and special night for Spike.  

I love how you wrote Spike, forever and always a poet, his thoughts soft, lyrical, and full of gentle musings for his beloved Slayer.  I truly understand now why he chose to sacrifice himself to help "the girl" that he loves so selflessly. 

I loved this! heart

Author's Response on August 31, 2016 07:23am

blushbiggrin what a lovely review! This totally made my morning, you know biggrin

Strange to say, I actually started this story before I watched Touched; I had this image in my head of Spike watching S7 Buffy and in his mind thinking back to S2 Buffy, and it wouldn't leave me alone so I wrote a few paragraphs without really knowing where it fit in the grand scheme of things. Then I saw Touched for the first time and went ohhhhhhhh, now I have a place for this to live.

I love that we know Spike is a poet, it gives so much leeway to wax lyrical in his head, and it makes so much sense for his character. I think even before the soul, and even when he was trying to hide it, Spike had the heart of a poet and a romantic. It's a lovely, contrary juxtaposition on the whole punk rocker exterior heart It's really satisfying to dig down into that side of him.

I'm delighted you enjoyed the story so much, and thanks for letting me know blow_kiss

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nojiri23 commented on Dancing on July 09, 2016 08:25pm Liked

 lovely. just

Author's Response on July 11, 2016 09:47am

Thank you! hearts

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djellibabe commented on Dancing on July 07, 2016 02:23pm Liked

 So lovely, it's just a shame I know what happens next. You could change that if you fancied writing a follow up!

Author's Response on July 08, 2016 08:09am

Thank you! And ya know, never say never... wink

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magnus374 commented on Dancing on June 27, 2016 12:07pm

I like what we saw of Spike's thoughts. The way he is thinking about Buffy fits that time.

Author's Response on June 27, 2016 04:16pm

Thank you! :D

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Convi commented on Dancing on June 26, 2016 08:16pm Liked

That was a beautiful look into Spike's headspace that night!  Very nicely done!

Author's Response on June 27, 2016 09:02am

Thank you! :D

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medievalchic commented on Dancing on June 26, 2016 08:02pm Liked

Awww!  This is so sweet!  It fits him perfectly.

Author's Response on June 27, 2016 09:02am

Thank you! :D

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annamatte commented on Dancing on June 26, 2016 07:20pm Liked

Beautifully written! Spike’s characterization is perfect and I loved his thoughts.

Author's Response on June 27, 2016 09:03am

Thank you! I always imagine he must have had a lot on his mind that night. His evident surprise that Buffy wanted to be held by him is sweet and heartbreaking.

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pfeifferpack commented on Dancing on June 26, 2016 06:44pm Liked

This was not only bloody good it was totally lyrical!  

You stepped into his mind at that point in time perfectly and didn't miss a nuance.  It is so easy to understand why he was willing to burn in the hellmouth, ,why he didn't ask for more.

Just perfection!


Author's Response on June 27, 2016 09:13am

What's funny about this story is that it didn't start as a Touched story - I hadn't even seen the episode when I started it. It started from a gifset of that moment in School Hard that I saw as I was watching the end of S7. Seeing the way Spike watched Buffy in that first ever moment compared to the relationship they had formed during S7 (which was absolutely taking me apart pretty much every episode) was so fascinating to me, and my muse went "Ohhhhhh..." I scribbled down a few paragraphs of Spike seeing Buffy then versus now, and I wasn't sure of the situation of the 'now', I just knew it would be different, regardless of what they were doing, and I couldn't not write it.

And then I watched Touched, and that little speech of Spike's, and that moment of intense vulnerability from Buffy... and then I knew that was the home for those paragraphs, and wrote the rest of the story. It's funny how a story that ended up being so specific to that moment started before I'd even seen it. My muse is weird! (Also, I LOVE S7 SPUFFY SO MUCH!)

Thank you for the lovely review, which gave me the warm fuzzies :D

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