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ginar369 commented on Chapter 1 on May 09, 2016 01:06pm Liked

If you decide to write more of this I'm in! Willow messed up a spell? No! LOL So Buffy got does of slayer when Willow did that spell. On top of what she already had. That's my take at least. What did Spike set up for her? What about Dawn? Loved it.

Author's Response on May 13, 2016 12:19am

Hmmmm well .... can't say due to spoilers ...... it's taken me all week trying to work out what to do with Dawn. I think I know and you'll just have to see to find out. *cue evil laugh*

ginar369 Replied on May 13, 2016 12:20am

I meant to say an extra dose of slayer.

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spuffy forever commented on Chapter 1 on May 09, 2016 01:18am

Hello congratulations for your first fiction. It was well written.

i was cativated by your spin of the spell elevating Buffy, would like to see more.

Author's Response on May 09, 2016 12:18am

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djellibabe commented on Chapter 1 on May 08, 2016 10:53am Liked

 That was a great first fic! I would happily read more by you! And I would be happy to beta if you need someone!

Author's Response on May 09, 2016 12:18am

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DidiSummers commented on Chapter 1 on May 08, 2016 04:38am Liked


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Author's Response on May 09, 2016 12:17am

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beauty commented on Chapter 1 on May 07, 2016 12:49pm

 What are Willow and Giles planning?

Chains torn free?

I do hope you write more.

Author's Response on May 09, 2016 12:17am

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All4Spike commented on Chapter 1 on May 07, 2016 11:37am Liked

Intrigued....

{edit}

Dammit, just saw from other reviews that it's a one-shot. I want to know what Buffy does next!

Author's Response on May 07, 2016 09:16am

I'll let you in on a little secret, but don't tell anyone ... I plan on writting more. A series of connected one shots. I Just don't know how long in between each. blush Hoping not years.

All4Spike Replied on May 07, 2016 10:14am

Thank you! hug

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magnus374 commented on Chapter 1 on May 07, 2016 11:19am

 This short piece held power. It is a very good set up for a longer story.

Author's Response on May 07, 2016 09:17am

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Convi commented on Chapter 1 on May 07, 2016 10:48am Liked

with Buffy all the chains binding a slayer to the earth had finely been torn free

I want to know what this means :)  

Very intriguing piece!  I'd love to see where else this could go!

Author's Response on May 07, 2016 09:17am

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Cloongarvin commented on Chapter 1 on May 07, 2016 09:10am

This is an evocative and interesting piece. It presents us with a puzzle, regarding what she is planning to do, yet is drawn as a clear and self-contained scene. That's something even experienced writers don't always pull off. Congrats.

Author's Response on May 07, 2016 09:19am

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Aderyn Du commented on Chapter 1 on May 07, 2016 07:04am

A very interesting one shot, with a doozy of a premise for something longer. And dyslexia can be murder just for daily life (my dad and sister both have dyslexia); that just having the will to write when suffering from it means that you're made of stern stuff. Thanks for sharing your story with us.

Author's Response on May 07, 2016 04:28am

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maarella commented on Chapter 1 on May 07, 2016 05:51am

I really liked this little one shot.  Short, interesting and a bit evocative.  Gives rise to all sorts of ideas.  I'd love to see you expand upon this idea.  I am very curious about just what it means that Buffy is no longer bound by the earth and also what she is going to do so that people learn and she changes everything.  I liked this so much that I went to see what else you had written and noticed that this was your first posted story.  Very good.  Congrats!

Author's Response on May 07, 2016 03:00am

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Destructosummers commented on Chapter 1 on May 07, 2016 05:40am Liked

Congratulations love! This is such a fantastic one-shot and could easily pave the way for more chapters too (fun and games sounds very mysterious!!) 

Author's Response on May 07, 2016 02:59am

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spikes_heart commented on Chapter 1 on May 07, 2016 04:03am

Congratulations, sweetie. I remember the very first thing I posted... barely a drabble. I was so nauseous and sweaty from fright. But I did it, and you did it, and that's just the first step in the long slide into multi-chaptered fanfic.

Interesting little set up piece you've written. It holds promise, if you choose to expand it.

Author's Response on May 07, 2016 01:05am

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ncatt commented on Chapter 1 on May 07, 2016 03:32am

flowers

Author's Response on May 07, 2016 12:50am

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jhiz commented on Chapter 1 on May 07, 2016 02:56am

A simple scene that can be seen as complete unto itself but also can be the groundwork for a grand adventure.

Not bad on the self beta.  Regards was the only thing I noticed.

Thank you for sharing bravely (without having someone else read it first *grin*).

Author's Response on May 07, 2016 12:03am

Thanks I will be honset I did get my mother to check the spelling first because I'm dis .. dys . my spelling suxs. :p flowers

jhiz Replied on May 07, 2016 02:59am

Mine too and I don't have an excuse other than, well, it just stinks *grin*

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-Carrie-Ann- commented on Chapter 1 on May 07, 2016 02:50am Liked

That was sweet, well done!

Author's Response on May 07, 2016 12:04am

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pfeifferpack commented on Chapter 1 on May 07, 2016 02:28am Liked

Oh my...they don't learn.  They needed to listen to Buffy just as she admits they should have listened to Spike.

Nicely done.

Kathleen

Author's Response on May 06, 2016 11:31pm

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