If you decide to write more of this I'm in! Willow messed up a spell? No! LOL So Buffy got does of slayer when Willow did that spell. On top of what she already had. That's my take at least. What did Spike set up for her? What about Dawn? Loved it.
Hmmmm well .... can't say due to spoilers ...... it's taken me all week trying to work out what to do with Dawn. I think I know and you'll just have to see to find out. *cue evil laugh*
I meant to say an extra dose of slayer.
Dammit, just saw from other reviews that it's a one-shot. I want to know what Buffy does next!
I'll let you in on a little secret, but don't tell anyone ... I plan on writting more. A series of connected one shots. I Just don't know how long in between each. Hoping not years.
This is an evocative and interesting piece. It presents us with a puzzle, regarding what she is planning to do, yet is drawn as a clear and self-contained scene. That's something even experienced writers don't always pull off. Congrats.
A very interesting one shot, with a doozy of a premise for something longer. And dyslexia can be murder just for daily life (my dad and sister both have dyslexia); that just having the will to write when suffering from it means that you're made of stern stuff. Thanks for sharing your story with us.
I really liked this little one shot. Short, interesting and a bit evocative. Gives rise to all sorts of ideas. I'd love to see you expand upon this idea. I am very curious about just what it means that Buffy is no longer bound by the earth and also what she is going to do so that people learn and she changes everything. I liked this so much that I went to see what else you had written and noticed that this was your first posted story. Very good. Congrats!
Congratulations, sweetie. I remember the very first thing I posted... barely a drabble. I was so nauseous and sweaty from fright. But I did it, and you did it, and that's just the first step in the long slide into multi-chaptered fanfic.
Interesting little set up piece you've written. It holds promise, if you choose to expand it.
A simple scene that can be seen as complete unto itself but also can be the groundwork for a grand adventure.
Not bad on the self beta. Regards was the only thing I noticed.
Thank you for sharing bravely (without having someone else read it first *grin*).
Thanks I will be honset I did get my mother to check the spelling first because I'm dis .. dys . my spelling suxs. :p
Mine too and I don't have an excuse other than, well, it just stinks *grin*