I enjoyed your story a lot..interesting plot, hot scenes and a sharp writing style..Also i loved your buffy..she maybe going through a lot and be forced to start from scratch but she doesn't loose her confidence, her forward ways and her smart mouth..xander and anya were great characters and the endIng was spot on..[Report This]
This is a nice story. I like how the characters are spun off from the BtVS characters we know, yet tell a different story. The story builds logically all the way to the ending, which Carrie sweetly characterizes as their new beginning. Thank you for sharing this.[Report This]
I totally loved this story and this was the perfect ending for it.
I'm glad Parker showed up when he did for so very many reasons. He disavowed his son in front of witnesses and that's great and Buffy got her memories which is wonderful. No worrying about her past coming back and causing trouble for them they know it now and it's not a hindrance in any way.
May Xander prosper abundantly. He's a good "brother".
Lovely story. They healed each other and now they are completing one another.
Awww poor Spike not used to HIS pleasure mattering. Carrie is going to fix that in time.
Love how they do love each other .
I haven't mentioned it but the chapter titles are uber clever too. This one in particular was apt.
I am glad that they are really going to try and make a go of it. And I know that Spike has just always wanted to help Xander anyway that he could. I am just glad that his friend found out what he was doing and didn't make a big deal out of it. I can't wait to see what happens next if anyone of his previous 'dates' show up at the garage.[Report This]
Horseradish indeed! Someone likes it spicy!
If you ever get the inclination, I'd like to see some of those fill in scenes where Xander talks to Carrie, when Carrie discovers on her own that she's pregnant, etc. And when Spike tells Xander how he feels about Carrie.
As usual, today's chapter got me thinking. In one sense it seems totally improbable that a guy would meet her, let her move in, then be happy to have her stay with the baby...BUT. I know situations (minus the amnesia) where things like this happened! People fall together in so many unexpected ways, and sometimes it's the story right on the knife edge that's so intriguing, because it's riding that line.
So now we get to find out what Spike is like in the sack and why he has all those repeat customers?[Report This]