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EllenofJordan commented on Chapter 9 - Roast on May 08, 2019 10:16pm Liked

Such a sweet story. I loved it.

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Special Squirrel commented on Chapter 9 - Roast on December 06, 2017 06:59am Liked

Thank you for writing this I really enjoyed reading it 

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ScarlettDuck commented on Chapter 9 - Roast on May 09, 2017 02:16am

Aww, that was very cute, Danielle. I don't feel a bit bad about Harmony or Parker's losses, but pleasantly surprised at how decent Cordy was.

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ScarlettDuck commented on Chapter 8 - Bananas on May 08, 2017 11:01pm

Sweet... they are very adorable together.

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ScarlettDuck commented on Chapter 7 - Horseradish on May 08, 2017 10:54pm

Yay! They finally cleared the air, and Spike doesn't have to do stuff that makes him hate himself.

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ScarlettDuck commented on Chapter 6 - Crackers on May 08, 2017 10:45pm

Guh, heartbreaking. Poor Spike. He doesn't have to hate himself.

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ScarlettDuck commented on Chapter 5 - 7up on May 08, 2017 09:45pm

Oops, poor Buffy... catching an eyeful of naked Spike....

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ScarlettDuck commented on Chapter 4 - Water on May 08, 2017 09:36pm

 Ugh, that's a rough truth, Spike. Sad for him, but totally understand.

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ScarlettDuck commented on Chapter 3 - Toast on May 08, 2017 09:26pm

Hoo, a lot of uncertainty here...

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ScarlettDuck commented on Chapter 2 - Lemonade on May 08, 2017 09:21pm

Oh, boy, that's not much of a confidence builder, is it? 

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ScarlettDuck commented on Chapter 1 - Potatoes on May 08, 2017 08:20pm

Oh, boy, buddy's had a rough patch.

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Call me Vera commented on Chapter 9 - Roast on April 11, 2017 04:51pm

A cute & sweet story with some particularly heartbreaking parts. Great job!

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Elianne commented on Chapter 9 - Roast on September 19, 2016 03:01am Liked

I enjoyed your story a lot..interesting plot, hot scenes and a sharp  writing style..Also i loved your buffy..she maybe going through a lot and be forced to start from scratch but she doesn't loose her confidence, her forward ways and her smart mouth..xander and anya were great characters and the endIng was spot on..

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Elianne commented on Chapter 2 - Lemonade on September 18, 2016 03:29pm Liked

Interesting  and well built so far..i liked the way you took your time building the settings and the tension between them...No rushing through the chapters that would damage  the story..

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Cloongarvin commented on Chapter 9 - Roast on June 15, 2016 12:02am

This is a nice story. I like how the characters are spun off from the BtVS characters we know, yet tell a different story. The story builds logically all the way to the ending, which Carrie sweetly characterizes as their new beginning. Thank you for sharing this.

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fyreburned commented on Chapter 9 - Roast on May 30, 2016 03:14am Liked

Loved it!

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ginar369 commented on Chapter 9 - Roast on May 30, 2016 02:09am Liked

heart

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Sunnydalesis commented on Chapter 9 - Roast on May 30, 2016 01:13am Liked

Great ending! It's good to know that Carrie and Spike are gonna live happily ever after, without Spike pimping himself out anymore!

Now if you'll excuse me, I'm gonna run over Harmony with my Cadillac!

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Rezol87 commented on Chapter 9 - Roast on May 29, 2016 09:47pm Liked

Love it

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DidiSummers commented on Chapter 9 - Roast on May 29, 2016 09:44pm

 Love this story! I'm glad Buffy got her memories back, and the official name change to Carrie fit perfectly to her new life with Spike and baby William. 

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pfeifferpack commented on Chapter 9 - Roast on May 29, 2016 09:21pm Liked

I totally loved this story and this was the perfect ending for it.

I'm glad Parker showed up when he did for so very many reasons.  He disavowed his son in front of witnesses and that's great and Buffy got her memories which is wonderful.  No worrying about her past coming back and causing trouble for them they know it now and it's not a hindrance in any way.

May Xander prosper abundantly.  He's a good "brother".  

Lovely story.  They healed each other and now they are completing one another.

Kathleen

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jhiz commented on Chapter 9 - Roast on May 29, 2016 08:09pm

Sweet story.  I liked the happy ending.  Glad Buffy got her memories back and that she still was happy with where she ended up.

Thank you for sharing!

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fyreburned commented on Chapter 8 - Bananas on May 26, 2016 05:18pm Liked

 Glad you'very added another chapter! Enjoyed this bunches so far.

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pfeifferpack commented on Chapter 8 - Bananas on May 23, 2016 02:19am Liked

Awww poor Spike not used to HIS pleasure mattering.  Carrie is going to fix that in time.

Love how they do love each other .

I haven't mentioned it but the chapter titles are uber clever too.  This one in particular was apt.

Excellent.

Kathleen

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Rezol87 commented on Chapter 8 - Bananas on May 22, 2016 09:40pm Liked

Ooo yes please don't let this be the last chapter! I'm still loving this story and would love so much to see them together some more! Please pretty please!!

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letitia commented on Chapter 7 - Horseradish on May 19, 2016 12:34am

I am glad that they are really going to try and make a go of it.  And I know that Spike has just always wanted to help Xander anyway that he could.  I am just glad that his friend found out what he was doing and didn't make a big deal out of it.  I can't wait to see what happens next if anyone of his previous 'dates' show up at the garage.

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Cryptwarmer commented on Chapter 7 - Horseradish on May 18, 2016 11:36pm Liked

Horseradish indeed! Someone likes it spicy!

If you ever get the inclination, I'd like to see some of those fill in scenes where Xander talks to Carrie, when Carrie discovers on her own that she's pregnant, etc. And when Spike tells Xander how he feels about Carrie. 

As usual, today's chapter got me thinking. In one sense it seems totally improbable that a guy would meet her, let her move in, then be happy to have her stay with the baby...BUT. I know situations (minus the amnesia) where things like this happened! People fall together in so many unexpected ways, and sometimes it's the story right on the knife edge that's so intriguing, because it's riding that line. 

So now we get to find out what Spike is like in the sack and why he has all those repeat customers? 

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Rezol87 commented on Chapter 7 - Horseradish on May 18, 2016 11:00am Liked

*cheering* go Buffy, you tell Spike to drop those skanks! I'm so glad they know about the baby and that Spike is cool with it, and of Course Xander knows about what he's doin. Can't wait for the next chapter.

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kasumi commented on Chapter 7 - Horseradish on May 18, 2016 10:44am Liked

WHOO! Smexy times! 

I like that she got him to stop. Poor Spike. 

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ginar369 commented on Chapter 7 - Horseradish on May 18, 2016 09:49am Liked

YAY! They finally figured some stuff out. Harmony isn't going to be happy. Not at all.

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