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jhiz commented on Chapter 1 on August 14, 2016 04:43pm

hmm, nice to see Dawn do something that isn't self-motivated.  Wonder if that telegram recipient will actually respond?

Author's Response on August 15, 2016 07:18am

Thank you for commenting. Much appreciated.

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pfeifferpack commented on Chapter 1 on March 27, 2016 01:46pm

Yes I'd certainly read more!

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Lou commented on Chapter 1 on March 27, 2016 09:27am Liked

Good do see Dawn giving some much needed help.

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pfeifferpack commented on Chapter 1 on March 26, 2016 07:09pm Liked

I love this one.  Usually it's going back in time but this is just as effective...maybe moreso.  

Excellent!

Kathleen

Author's Response on March 27, 2016 06:54am

Thank you. Your opinion always important to me.  I've been asked to continue this story - what do you think?

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All4Spike commented on Chapter 1 on March 24, 2016 04:42pm Liked

Oh, so sad. I wonder who sent the chocolates and why?

Well done Dawn. You've done the one thing guaranteed to bring Spike, and hopefully  prevent the bitter, lonely version of Buffy she saw.

I appreciate this is a one-shot, but I'd really like to see The Reunion and both Buffy and Spike realising that Dawn has set them up... and being happy and thankful for it!

Author's Response on March 27, 2016 06:55am

Thank you for reading and commenting.  I might do a little follow up to this story - mind you, my follow ups often turn into vast sagas!  And, of course, I never said who Dawn sent the telegram to!

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djellibabe commented on Chapter 1 on March 24, 2016 03:12pm

 You so have to write a sequel! I need a happy ending!

Author's Response on March 27, 2016 06:54am

Well, I'm definitely thinking about it!

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fyreburned commented on Chapter 1 on March 24, 2016 12:03am Liked

Thank goodness for Dawn's sneaky interventional act! Liked this bunches.

Author's Response on March 24, 2016 05:24am

Delighted you liked it. Thank you for commenting.

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momnesia commented on Chapter 1 on March 23, 2016 05:04pm Liked

Great; that is if Buffy doesn't send him packing again.   Why doesn't she ever realize just how horribly she treated him?    Buffy would never be that snarky or rude to Angel or Riley, and they both gave Buffy plenty of reason to act that way.  But not Spike; he was there for her until she pushed him away permanently; she knew the amulet was dangerous -- she didn't want Angel to wear it, and Spike heard her tell Angel to go back to LA in case the First wasn't stopped in Sunnydale.   To me, this telegraphed loud and clear to Spike, that Angel was still Buffy's "one true love", and that Spike was expendable.     I feel that Spike would have felt that Buffy would not have missed him, and so he would decide NOT to run to her once he was able to.    His last words to Buffy summed up exactly how Spike really felt; he thought she only said "I love you" to soften the blow of rejection.   

I really liked this story, and would like to read more.  I will check back for updates.

Author's Response on March 24, 2016 05:24am

Thank you for commenting. Your views are interesting.  I had no plans to write more of this story, but things could change in the future!

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magnus374 commented on Chapter 1 on March 23, 2016 03:36pm

Seeing the clearly unhappy Buffy in the future would of course lead to Dawn trying to make some changes. A simple solution is offten the best, a message like that will make Spike seek out Buffy, which will lead to them talking.

Author's Response on March 24, 2016 05:23am

I really hope so!  Thanks for reading.

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