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magnus374 commented on Chapter 8 - Spilled on June 03, 2016 02:18pm

Angelus is playing his games, this is of course deeply disturbing for Buffy. The good part is that she and Spike seems to really knowwhere they have each other and are admitting their feelings, that was nice.

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acekoomboom commented on Chapter 7 - Into the Abyss on May 12, 2016 05:53am

 What?!?!?! I did not see that coming! Angelus is back and Buffy does not want him. Is he going to find out about Spike and Buffy? I do wish that Buffy would tell Willow about Spike, they could have the cutest conversations. "...which she used to impale one of his first edition dusty old demon books he had left lying on the table." Haha! Giles assumed that he could leave that lying there and it would all be okay? Oh, how long will Drusilla be in town I wonder. It was nice to see Spike take care of Buffy, and have him remember doing that with Drusilla. Very cute.

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moonlight88 commented on Chapter 7 - Into the Abyss on May 10, 2016 08:47pm Liked

*throws Angel into a vat of holy water* That's for scaring Buffy the way you did. rant thwap

 

So glad that Spike found Buffy before she became a meal, he'll take the best care of her and calm her down... make her feel safe again. But Angel's soul is gone so Spike's really gonna have to step up and make sure Angelus' head games don't get to her too much.

Xander, stop trying to make 'fetch' happen! It isn't going to happen. thwap 

Author's Response on May 10, 2016 06:12pm

That last part of the comment was fab. Xbiggrin

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magnus374 commented on Chapter 7 - Into the Abyss on May 10, 2016 07:40pm

It was nice reading Buffy's thoughts.  We can see that she is confused and a bit unsure about her feelings and how to explain them. The meeting with Angel was an intense one. A good thing Buffy is scared for him considering what we saw later.

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Amayuscula commented on Chapter 7 - Into the Abyss on May 10, 2016 06:38pm Liked

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ginar369 commented on Chapter 7 - Into the Abyss on May 10, 2016 05:54pm Liked

I hope what Dru meant was that she wouldn't let Angelus hurt Buffy. Buffy is the sunshine right?

Author's Response on May 10, 2016 03:07pm

Yes, in a way. I haven't decided fully what Drusilla's motives are. She is the sunshine, you're right. But, I don't want to let anything out yet ;)

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magnus374 commented on Chapter 6 - Forbidden on May 09, 2016 12:04pm

Buffy seems a lot better this chapter, not even a bad word for what Spike did. She was ready to kill Angel for things he did in the past, but she doesn't have any problem with Spike. The way she acts does seem a bit strange. I think it was good that she didn't kill Angel. The way she think so differently about them makes me curious. I did like how Buffy teased Spike.

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acekoomboom commented on Chapter 6 - Forbidden on May 09, 2016 04:02am

 Oh, it was so good! They are sneaking around but now no Angel to give me the guilty feelings. It is so sexy, so scandalous, so intimate. I am enjoying how their relationship is developing: Buffy is testing him in so many ways and Spike is holding onto his evil side for as long as he can. This is so good! Their passion is palpable, and thrilling. Did Buffy tell Xander and Willow that she had been slaying?

 Seeing your contrast of Angel and Spike is really nice. Even when they kiss her it is so different. Spike sees her as an equal and Angel sees her as a child, you are highlighting all of the right things. Such good work!

 Glad to see that Joyce and Buffy are still okay. Will Buffy's mom meet her new boyfriend anytime soon, or will it be after Joyce finds out and they can have that amazing "don't I know you," conversation again! Or Joyce could be the only one in Buffy's life that knows about her lover boy. So many possibilities! I really liked the update and this whole story. I am so looking forward to unlocking all that this story has to offer.

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acekoomboom commented on Chapter 5 - Spinning on May 09, 2016 03:43am

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acekoomboom commented on Chapter 5 - Spinning on May 06, 2016 10:10pm

 That was so good! Buffy already has a death wish in this fic? I did not see that coming. Bonus points for a plot twist. Spike had his fangs in her, her beautiful victorian self, and he stopped. He picked her up and took her where, a motel? He did not kill her or take advantage of her in any way. He talked to her, was angry with her, and let some walls down for her. Buffy is changing him, and they are both so confused by what they are feeling. The chapters are so short, I want more! There are so many ways that this could go. Will they run away together and travel the world slaying? WIll they stay there and tell everyone else to stick it? Will Spike become part of the group and help Buffy heal for all of the scars that she already has from her duties? Oh, my mind is giddy with excitment!

Author's Response on May 08, 2016 04:24pm

Your reviews always inspire me. Thank you for your support. X

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acekoomboom commented on Revelations on May 06, 2016 09:51pm

read Oh, had to reread for the update. So ready!

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Amayuscula commented on Chapter 5 - Spinning on May 06, 2016 06:10pm Liked

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magnus374 commented on Chapter 5 - Spinning on May 06, 2016 03:25pm

 Spike is very confused about his feelings for Buffy, he doesn't want to kill her but he want to want it. Buffy has lost a lot of blood but she is also in a very bad place emotionally. 

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ginar369 commented on Chapter 5 - Spinning on May 06, 2016 01:17pm Liked

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moonlight88 commented on Chapter 5 - Spinning on May 05, 2016 11:35pm Liked

I love this fic already. flowers Spike's so taken with her. hearts heart

Oh, Angellllll... Come let's play 'Pin The Broody Git'. innocent thwap

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acekoomboom commented on Revelations on April 08, 2016 07:30pm

Oh, that is so like our poor Spike, thinking that he wants to kill her when he just wants to love her. What is not like Spike, though, is not being able to figure out what is going on with this Halloween stuff. Is he to distracted to be his usual intuative self? I liked the little snipit of Drusilla that we got in here. That in y our story sires can mentally speak to their vamps, that is cool. How is Spike going to act when he finds a dumbed down, Victorian slayer? I can not wait to find out.

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acekoomboom commented on Consequences on April 08, 2016 07:08pm

 A secret love affair behind Angel's back? I wish I did not.love it so much, but it is so thrilling. They are so flirty and sexy and ohh la la. It is so cute that Buffy thought that he was good. She was so shocked that he was not only a bad guy, but he had come there to kill her. Her relationship with Angel is even more dysfunctional in this fic than it is in the show. How did you manage that cool twist? She does not communicate with him enough to tell him how she feels about him stepping over bounds, and she feels no shame at all for cheating on him. So crazy. And where the heck does Angel get off thinking that he can torture any guy that flirts with Buffy? I would be so pissed at his controlling weird boyfriend routine. Why is Buffy not more mad at him? Why did she not tell him off for trying to take her duties so that she could not run into Spike? Why is she not standing up for herself? Is Buffy going to tell Willow about this? I can not wait to find out what happens. t 

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magnus374 commented on Revelations on March 22, 2016 05:18pm

Again we can see them worry over why they are feeling like they do.

We can see that wathever affected Spike seems to have stopped doing so, or something else is acting. I suppose this is happening in the moment Ethan is casting the spell. I just have to wait and see.

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magnus374 commented on Consequences on March 21, 2016 10:54am

Non of them understand the connection and the feelings they suddenly have. From the title I though it had to do with their demon parts, but their interaction is so soft, so sweet. It must be something more that is affecting them.

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Sunnydalesis commented on Consequences on March 20, 2016 07:02pm Liked

I am definitely liking this fic, but as much as I love how Buffy and Spike are getting along, things are moving a bit too fast for them. Is there a reason the two of them are so drawn to each other that I don't know about? Otherwise, you have a seriously awesome fic.

Author's Response on March 20, 2016 04:14pm

You'll find out ;)

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magnus374 commented on Sunnyhell P2 on March 18, 2016 04:21pm

I do think that Spike would have been jelous of Angelus bacause of Dru, but that doesn't really matter. 

Spike's thoughts when he sees Buffy feels right. She is a good looking young girl, dressed in a sexy way.  Any man would think something like that and Spike's evil status makes it even more likely. There's something drawing them towards each other and when they are spending time together, softer feelings will evolve.

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MsXGingerXNinja commented on Sunnyhell P2 on March 18, 2016 08:49am Liked

Hooked xxx

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acekoomboom commented on Sunnyhell P2 on March 17, 2016 08:13pm

 I love their adorable flirting, and she is being so forward. It is great! Making me get all excited. I have no idea where you might be taking this, and that is a good thing. I love to be surprised. I think it shows that you are a good writer, when you have good plot twists that no one say coming. Shows your originality and creativity.


 Spike and Buffy are being super sexy, but will it end well? Can it? I honestly do not think that Buffy will tell Angel. I mean, is Spike not kind of the other man at the moment? But maybe she will tell him, because she has no cheated or done anything wrong. I must wait and see.

Author's Response on March 17, 2016 05:22pm

Thank you so much for your kind words! It means a lot! X 

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Cryptwarmer commented on Sunnyhell P2 on March 17, 2016 07:50pm Liked

Thank Helllmouth...for little girls...for little girls become Slayers everyday...Thank Hellmouth for little girls...They slay you in the most delightful way...

Spike is singing a tune as old as time itself...fallin' for a cute young thing! Such fun!

Author's Response on March 17, 2016 05:22pm

hahahaha, love this review! You hit the nail on the head he's so delightfully kinky lol! Thank you X 

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magnus374 commented on Sunnyhell P1 on March 17, 2016 04:49pm

The connection between Buffy and Spike was clearly seen. They both acted differently from how they normally wood. Something is drawing them together. The chapter end was a good reminder that Spike may not want to hurt Buffy for now, but he's still an evil vampire with no problem about killing.

Author's Response on March 17, 2016 05:22pm

Thank you! X

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acekoomboom commented on Sunnyhell P1 on March 17, 2016 04:39am

 This idea is amazing! That sedy Spuffy dance, oh yeah, I fould get used to that. It was something that is so not Buffy, and I think that is why it worked so well. He is making her act in a way other than the way she usually does, and this is after just one meeting. It was not even a meeting! I look forward to reading more, keep it up!

 Drusilla really would enjoy being treated so pourly, and that is so fundamentally sad. I feel for her, especially with "Cursed," circulating this site right now. Spike and Drusilla are done, but I hope that he is not this, like, okay with it. One hundred years of blind and absolute devotion needs to be cried over a bit more than tjis, cause more serious consequences, you know? I am definitely ready to see where you take his journey of getting over Dru.

 Spike rolls into town and dances with a beautiful girl that he is enamored by, makes the slayer blush and tingle, AND he one ups his grandsire. He is on a roll so far! So clever of you. But seriously, their secy dance was too good. Picturing the swaying up on each other, seeing their eyes lock when she turned around, imagining all of the possibilities this opens up... wow. I am really, really excited about this opening chapter. I see good things in this story's future. Bravo on you!

Author's Response on March 17, 2016 11:51am

Wow, that is the most detailed and helpful review I have ever received! Thank you so much xxx

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Rezol87 commented on Sunnyhell P1 on March 16, 2016 09:08pm Liked

Good start. Like it and look forward to more, the only thing I suggest is shorter paragraphs maybe.

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madspuffyfan commented on Sunnyhell P1 on March 16, 2016 06:59pm Liked

Loved it

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