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D1234 commented on Chapter 1 on July 26, 2019 07:51pm Liked

So sweetheart...I’d wish she had told him that night!

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gello5440 commented on Chapter 1 on June 01, 2016 12:27am Liked

OMG so beautiful. In your world I hope they got their happy ending. 

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deepbluejoy commented on Chapter 1 on March 08, 2016 12:14am

I just wanted it to change something...

Author's Response on March 08, 2016 02:02am

It did. This way they got to spend some real time with each other before the end. Because sometimes in life, no matter how many things we do differently, the same outcome is inevitable.

Ps. I wanted to make a short that fit into canon.

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Rihannon commented on Chapter 1 on February 28, 2016 01:51am

Beautiful story, I enjoyed it very much :)

Author's Response on February 29, 2016 02:01pm

Thank you so much Rihannon :D

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djellibabe commented on Chapter 1 on February 27, 2016 07:42pm Liked

 Well that was interesting and different. I look forward to reading any other stories you care to share!

Author's Response on February 29, 2016 02:01pm

Thank you so much! :D I will be start posting a novel length one soon. Although it will be quite different, in both tone and story. 

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All4Spike commented on Chapter 1 on February 27, 2016 04:07pm Liked

Beautiful. Sad and scary and at first, a little confusing, but so beautiful.

Author's Response on February 29, 2016 02:00pm

Thank you! :D The initial confusion was intentional though, I hope most of it was cleared up by the end!

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magnus374 commented on Chapter 1 on February 27, 2016 10:54am

A mystical dream world, it held several creepy scenarios, but for some reason within the creepiness there were apparently healing. It did appaer like nothing really changed, so I'm not sure it did anything good.

Author's Response on March 08, 2016 02:04am

But you said it yourself -- there was healing.

I wanted to make something that fit into canon, and would give them some more time with each other before the inevitable happened. 

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letitia commented on Chapter 1 on February 27, 2016 10:01am

Just loved it

Author's Response on February 27, 2016 12:58pm

Thank you :D

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jhiz commented on Chapter 1 on February 27, 2016 05:58am

The vivid world that Willow and Tara created was lovely and wonderful and the reason for them being there was sad. 

I found the beginning confusing but I am guessing you meant to make is that way.  You were not providing us with more information than Buffy had at the beginning of the dream world endeavor.  You did a great job describing the bloody dress that Buffy was wearing in the alternate world.  It increased the creep factor with the unknown by having her trailing all Spike's blood.

Hmm, made me wonder if Buffy had actually dusted Spike if he would have been dust in the real world.  I am glad that she didn't (of course, we all are *smile*). 

Thank you for sharing this quick little interlude that gave the Slayer yet another nudge in the bumbum to help with her realize her feelings even if she isn't willing to admit them at the time.

Author's Response on February 27, 2016 04:38am

I am a sucker for dropping confusing hints that reveal themselves later. I know a lot of people hate this in writing, and will instantly drop books if they do too much of this. But it's always pushed me to continue reading cause I get so curious about what some parts mean. It becomes a mystery in itself.

Anyways, I do hope it wasn't too confusing however, and that things cleared itself up by the end. Thank you so much for the wonderful review! I really appreciate it :D

jhiz Replied on February 27, 2016 11:21am

Have no fear, you explained it all quite fine by the end. *smile*

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pfeifferpack commented on Chapter 1 on February 27, 2016 02:58am Liked

Lovely look at that night in a different way.

Kathleen

Author's Response on February 27, 2016 02:05am

Thank you Kathleen :D

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nowinlivingcolor commented on Chapter 1 on February 26, 2016 10:38pm Liked

This was really lovely - you captured Buffy especially well. I'm absolutely rereading this one!

Author's Response on February 27, 2016 02:05am

Oh thank you so much! :D

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CupcakeCute commented on Chapter 1 on February 26, 2016 08:51pm Liked

Gah! How much do I love this interlude? Let me count the ways :) The dreamlike and fairy tale imagery is GORGEOUS, of course it was Willow and Tara's world. I love the character exploration here and how well it fits into canon. And the Spuffy!!! I love my otp, especially when they're helping each other and you wrote that beautifully. The Spuffy snuggles and moments that made me fan myself were also sooo good! Amazing work, my friend :D

Author's Response on February 27, 2016 02:04am

AHHH THANK YOU BB. I am so, so happy you like it <3

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