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gabelou1991 commented on Out. For. A. Walk....Spike on May 13, 2022 09:46am Liked

J'adore son homologue comparer les mec entre eux sur leur taille angel je ne pense pas qu'elle sache réellement sa taille étant comme elle était avec parker et riley oui mais cela n'est pas une preuves. 

Et j'aime beaucoup même si buffy avec riley se laisse un peu faire. 

Author's Response on May 13, 2022 12:39pm

Je pense que nous apprenons de toutes nos relations, si nous nous laissons faire. Nous pouvons les laisser nous nuire, ou nous pouvons tirer la leçon dans nos relations ultérieures. Riley a joué un rôle important dans la croissance personnelle de Buffy, et je respecte cela, même si je n'aimais pas beaucoup son personnage. Merci d'avoir commenté !

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Dynamite commented on Out. For. A. Walk....Spike on March 13, 2021 03:33am Liked

The inner monologue is spot on! 

Author's Response on March 15, 2021 12:18pm

Thank you, glad you enjoyed it. 

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Meavepagan commented on Out. For. A. Walk....Spike on October 20, 2019 09:10pm Liked

I simply loved this story.   What a shame it is a one shot.  There are so many possibilities that you could take it to.  Oh well maybe someday you will add a sequel. 

Author's Response on October 22, 2019 02:49pm

Thank you! Glad you enjoyed this one Every once in a while a short one comes to me. hearts

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Holi117 commented on Out. For. A. Walk....Spike on August 31, 2018 01:01am Liked

Omg loved this.... gahh this totallyneeded to be a lot longer! Would love to have seen a s5 buffy prowling and lusting after spike, doing the stalking and chasing haha! 

Author's Response on September 11, 2018 09:15am

HaHa, your comment gave me the weirdest idea...what if Buffy did with her crush, what Spike did with Harmony...he had Harmony pretend to be the slayer. Can you imagine Buffy slyly getting Riley to pretend he was a certain vampire for some sexy role play. I mean how hilarious could that be? Not quite in the tone of this story, but still maybe worth exploring. 

Glad you liked this one. I think it would be fun to explore Buffy's deeper/secret feelings about Spike a bit more. I know that I've had times I was physically attracted to someone that I didn't much like as a person, and the interesting internal conflict that arose from that.

Holi117 Replied on September 11, 2018 09:25am

Haha! Oh wow, yes! Her sneakily getting riley to dress in more black, be a bit more rough and bitey haha... “can you do an english accent? Asking for a friend!!” 😂

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Joyce commented on Out. For. A. Walk....Spike on October 11, 2017 05:49pm Liked

Oh yeah! Spike caught up to her when she was most aroused and I’m thinking he did that on purpose. Good job with the lead in.

Author's Response on October 12, 2017 09:32am

Haha, he could probably "smell" an opportunity! Thanks for taking the time to read and review!

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moonlight88 commented on Out. For. A. Walk....Spike on May 29, 2016 04:44am Liked

I really enjoyed reading this^^

 

Buffy really invited comments from Spike, she knows he loves to get under her skin whenever he can. lol. Mmm... barefoot Spike. Bet his hair was a little touseled too. hearts drool So many thoughts in Buffy brain but thoughts of Spike are too delicious to be kept away. innocent

Author's Response on May 29, 2016 06:50am

Thanks for the review, I'm glad you liked it! I agree, thoughts of Spike are way to delicious to ignore. No doubt he had a little bed head going on too, in the good way...sigh.

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DeamonQueen commented on Out. For. A. Walk....Spike on April 26, 2016 05:43pm Liked

Ooh, you tease! What the heck was that?! Evil! Pure evil! That's what you are.devil

I mean I really thought she was gonna have sex with him.*even though I know it'd be completely off character, but still--* I mean she was talking about her weird attraction to vamps and then--urgh! Evil! Just evil!devil

Anyway, ranting aside, this was a good fic.*it just had an unexpected ending that I didn't like, but that's all* It was nicely written and I loved the simplicity of the two characters here. with Buffy thinking about her life and relationship with Riley and Spike doing normal human stuff like grocery shopping. Heh, it was nice. So overal you did a great job! Thanks for sharing this fic. 

Author's Response on April 26, 2016 06:29pm

A few people have suggested that this one ended too soon...or at least begs for a sequel. But...it just wasn't the time...yet. So much of the problems between Spuffy had to do with timing...sigh. Besides, you know Harm will only do a three way if it's boy, boy, girl, or Charlize Theron! 

Glad it got under your skin, that's a good thing right? I always appreciate and love your reviews! I have several projects on the burner, hopefully I'll have something to post soon that won't leave you hanging...well, and that won't leave them hanging either. lol!

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Era Dubois commented on Out. For. A. Walk....Spike on April 16, 2016 09:29am Liked

Very well done. I'm not even all that squicked by the cuddle kitten. The inner monologue was great and I don't know why I always forget the funny farm sore spot. Thank you so much for sharing.

Author's Response on April 16, 2016 09:25am

Glad you liked it. I love these characters, and how real they are in spite of them living in a supernatural world. So much to work with as a writer. And I wanted to try my hand and addressing powerful emotions but having them played out in a subtle way. Plus, who doesn't want to see Spike with bed head in the moonlight...

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djellibabe commented on Out. For. A. Walk....Spike on February 21, 2016 04:47pm Liked

 Ooh, that was good! I'd be happy to know what happens next!

Author's Response on February 21, 2016 12:25pm

Glad you liked it! Thanks for reviewing. Enough people have been wondering what happens next..so maybe I'd better figure it out...thinking

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Spikeswp commented on Out. For. A. Walk....Spike on February 19, 2016 03:31am

I really enjoyed it! Liked the characterizations, would definitely read a continuation of this story. 

Author's Response on February 19, 2016 07:11pm

Glad you liked it and thank you for taking the time to review. I'll have to think about what might happen next...and decide if I want to stay in canon or let them have fun.

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Blue Eyes2 commented on Out. For. A. Walk....Spike on February 17, 2016 04:51am Liked

I love the fact that she is so curious that she even considers it, but I agree Harmony - a big no. But to watch Spike in action with his -- skills. Mmmmm

Author's Response on February 16, 2016 10:00pm

Thanks for the review! I can definitely see how Buffy might want to take a peek. Poor Buffy...didn't have anyone to write Spuffy fan fiction for her...sigh. Aren't we the lucky ones? We can peek all we want with no consequences! 

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magnus374 commented on Out. For. A. Walk....Spike on February 16, 2016 08:01pm

I enjoyed seeing Buffy's thoughts wandering, just like they do in real life. It seemed clear that Buffy enjoys having a boyfriend more than she enjoys the boyfriend. Naturally when she's hunting she is thinking about vampires and of course Spike, since he is one of the more personal vampires. I liked how she thought about him when she was watching him. We can see that she's acctually tempted of his offer even if she doesn't want to be.

Author's Response on February 16, 2016 02:04pm

Thanks for taking the time to review. I know there have been times when I liked the idea of a thing better than the thing itself. Poor Riley. Glad you liked it. What do you think was the thing she found most tempting? There were so many factors involved. Is she tempted by Spike, or more by something in herself? 

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Carrie Vinca commented on Out. For. A. Walk....Spike on February 16, 2016 07:47pm Liked

What! You can't just leave it there!  Sigh....

Author's Response on February 16, 2016 01:59pm

rolleyes1 I'll see if I can figure out what happens next....Maybe some night when Harm is out with her friends...

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Gaia-VoidMother commented on Out. For. A. Walk....Spike on February 16, 2016 05:08pm Liked

I want MORE of this. Tiny gods woman, why are you leaving it here???

Author's Response on February 16, 2016 10:48am

Yey! Glad you like it...so it's back to the drafting board! hi ho, hi ho...off to Spuffy land I go!

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All4Spike commented on Out. For. A. Walk....Spike on February 16, 2016 04:46pm Liked

I can so see this happening as a 'missing scene', except that I'm not sure that Spike would care enough about Harmony to go have his smoke outside.

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Author's Response on February 16, 2016 10:47am

Good point! But...he might want a few minutes free of her "Blondie Bearing" him to death? lol. Maybe I need to write one where Buffy's curiosity gets the best of her and she plays an actual voyeur! Naughty peeping Buffy!

All4Spike Replied on February 16, 2016 10:57am

Now, there's a thought... wink

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anatas commented on Out. For. A. Walk....Spike on February 16, 2016 12:38pm

Nice one-shot. 

Yes, I can easily see Buffy checking how slay-proof her clothes are. 

Author's Response on February 16, 2016 05:56am

Thanks! Luck for Buffy there is a good dry cleaner in town. If they can get mustard out they can probably handle vamp dust as well!

anatas Replied on February 16, 2016 07:09am

:-D

 

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FlightsofFancy commented on Out. For. A. Walk....Spike on February 16, 2016 05:53am Liked

I really enjoy your style. So snappy! And Buffy is a delight, perky and badass and that weird blend of little girlish/all woman-insightful that she can be. 

The Riley parts cracked me up. You have a good feel for all these characters it seems.

No sexy times here between them but I really liked feeling their curiosity. You paint such a sexy picture of Spike. I love the word unbelted for his pants. 

Great little Fic! Will be keeping an eye out for more stories by you:)

Author's Response on February 15, 2016 10:58pm

Thanks for taking the time to review and tell me what you like about it. Helps me SO much when I am editing my pieces. Spike sort of paints a sexy picture of himself...he makes me job so easy. lol. 

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Amasirol commented on Out. For. A. Walk....Spike on February 16, 2016 04:16am Liked

It's quite amazing how much you were able to tantalize without going R or beyond. It lays the foundation for a pre-The Gift Buffy to imagine Spike as a potential lover in her subconscious self to act upon it lost-resurrection. This probably changed as "cuddle kitten" got off the initiative drugs and simply became as weak as a kitten. I think this night out was Buffy being a very girly slayer. I liked it because it was a bit different.

Author's Response on February 15, 2016 10:05pm

Thanks.  So much of the sexy is in the seduction not the mechanics, and curiosity is a big part of it. I like the idea that we, as readers, can be seduced by the same things that are attracting Buffy to Spike. 

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fyreburned commented on Out. For. A. Walk....Spike on February 16, 2016 04:02am Liked

Liked it! Wish there would be a sexy sequel to it! 

Author's Response on February 15, 2016 09:59pm

Glad you liked it. I'll see what I can do!

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pfeifferpack commented on Out. For. A. Walk....Spike on February 16, 2016 02:28am Liked

Enjoyed this a lot.  The pull is clearly there, the interest even if it's unspoken...unacknowledged.  Riley never did it for her on any level and Harmony was a placeholder intended to fill his subconscious yearning for Buffy.  You managed to convey all of that.  Nice.

Kathleen

Author's Response on February 15, 2016 09:59pm

Thanks for reviewing! Glad to know that the things I'm trying to hit on are coming across. Sometimes we just hang out in "good enough" relationships until we feel safe or reckless enough to make the leap. 

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