Thanks for the warning. Very brutal, poor Buffy. Guess they didn't add "till death us do part", in the wedding vows, till much later. The scoobies must be in a tizzy, wondering where she is. Well done, thank you for sharing.[Report This]
In his small comments and gestures we can see that Spike is starting to feel deeply for Buffy. He did what he could to soften this horrible situation for her. Now she is out at least, but this will leave a mark upon her.[Report This]
Aww. Spike and Buffy meet are it was really a sweet moment. Love that she refused to let him be tortured, understandable after what she has gone through.
Can't wait to see the rescue. I have a feeling that things will not go as planned
I want to let you know, I skimmed most of this chapter. It was hard to read.
I did like the parts with Dawn and Giles. I hope that we see more of them later, Dawn seems so capible and I always love that.
It also looks like Spike has entered the fray. Hopefully they will band together and save Buffy soon
I understand what I've written can be hard to read for some people which is why I added the warnings. I can be quite graphic in my writing. Sometimes I connect better with the characters better if I know exactly what's happening so it comes out in my writing and I apologize ahead of time for anyone bothered by the chapters. Hence why I added the warnings.
I will say, yes you definitely get to see more of Dawn and Giles interacting and the gang interacting in general. Dawn also plays a bigger role in this story than my other stories. It just doesn't show until a little bit later.
Also, this is probably the most graphic that the story is going to get, if that helps. I'm guilty of putting my characters through the ringer and bringing them back. But this is more than likely as violent and graphic as it is going to get.
More emotional pain for Buffy. We already know that it's not true that there's nothing of the human left in a vampire, but we also knows that sometimes a vampire is just a monster after the turning. Not sure which is Angelus problem.[Report This]
OMG, Angel has returned, he's a vampire and a douche! Oh the joy of this world. Awesome update girl. I really and truly can't for Spike to make an appearance to help Buffy heal. I also can't wait for a Spike and Buffy HOT moment. Please add more soon[Report This]
Again we could see Buffy's pain so clearly written. She did create a new life for her with her friends, the pain is still there of course but she did as well as she could. Then we had this really painful moment at the end, a destruction of good memories.[Report This]