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Mya222 commented on Chapter 12 - Savior on February 27, 2017 07:00am

I hope you are able to continue with your stories.  I would love to read more!

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Verda commented on Chapter 4 - The Begining on May 23, 2016 01:23am

Thanks for the warning. Very brutal, poor Buffy. Guess they didn't add "till death us do part", in the wedding vows, till much later. The scoobies must be in a tizzy, wondering where she is. Well done, thank you for sharing.

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Verda commented on Chapter 3 - Angelus on May 23, 2016 12:21am

That was fast, didn't think Buffy would be in their hands already. Is Spike the master here, I wonder? Very well done, great work.

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Verda commented on Chapter 2 - Angel on May 22, 2016 11:18pm

Love the twist with in the sires. Does this mean that Dru is not crazy since Angelus did not sire her? Can't wait to find out. This is a very interesting story. Thanks for posting it here.

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Verda commented on Chapter 2 - Angel on May 22, 2016 09:00pm

Can't wait to see where everyone fits in to your story. Nice switch with Drusilla being his sire, I like it. Another good and exciting chapter.

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Verda commented on Chapter 1 - Your Destiny on May 22, 2016 08:52pm

My first story of yours. Love a good historical Spuffy story and this seems to be a good one. The death of Angel is always an excellent first chapter, not for her son of course. Hope I can catch up tonight. Well done

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magnus374 commented on Chapter 12 - Savior on February 26, 2016 07:00pm

A very dangerous plan. It must also be really horrible for Buffy, all the memories that will follow her constantly in this place.

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Blue Eyes2 commented on Chapter 11 - He's Alive on February 23, 2016 10:56pm Liked

Buffy is lucky or Spike is that they didn't just dust him for what he did but then again Dru wouldn't get to have her fun in torture.

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magnus374 commented on Chapter 11 - He's Alive on February 23, 2016 04:45pm

The spell at least told Buffy that he's alive even if his situation isn't good. They managed to have a bit of a talk, nice to see. A banner for this story, that's nice.

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Blue Eyes2 commented on Chapter 10 - Broken on February 21, 2016 09:37pm Liked

Poor Spike, I hope they end up doing something about that clan. Figure a way to destroy them.

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Amayuscula commented on Chapter 10 - Broken on February 21, 2016 05:12pm Liked

applause

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magnus374 commented on Chapter 10 - Broken on February 21, 2016 02:12pm

Again we can see the pain Buffy has suffered. She does feel guilt over Spike but I can't blame Giles for not wanting her try to save him. Returning there could be emotionally damageing for her.

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Blue Eyes2 commented on Chapter 9 - The Damage on February 17, 2016 09:31pm Liked

Buffy you need to tell them about the tracker. NOW

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magnus374 commented on Chapter 9 - The Damage on February 16, 2016 04:10pm

A fitting chapter name. Through the friends eyes we could see the damage that Buffy had suffered and also hear it in her voice later. It was painful to see, but written well.

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spiked_love commented on Chapter 8 - Spring Equinox on February 14, 2016 02:39pm

Really glad Spike got her out of there. I hope nothing bad happens to him. Can't wait to see how Buffy copes with all that has happened.

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magnus374 commented on Chapter 8 - Spring Equinox on February 14, 2016 08:43am

In his small comments and gestures we can see that Spike is starting to feel deeply for Buffy. He did what he could to soften this horrible situation for her. Now she is out at least,  but this will leave a mark upon her.

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Amayuscula commented on Chapter 7 - The Preparations on February 12, 2016 08:05pm Liked

applause

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magnus374 commented on Chapter 7 - The Preparations on February 12, 2016 06:08pm

Now they have met. Buffy felt thst she could trust him, a good thing, otherwise she should be worried that it's a trap.

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magnus374 commented on Chapter 6 - Spike on February 12, 2016 04:51pm

We learned some about Spike. We can see the plans he's making with the others to help Buffy. They of course don't trust him like that, but they do need him for this.

Also some more of Buffy's horrible situation.

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spiked_love commented on Chapter 7 - The Preparations on February 12, 2016 11:03am

Aww. Spike and Buffy meet are it was really a sweet moment. Love that she refused to let him be tortured, understandable after what she has gone through. 

Can't wait to see the rescue. I have a feeling that things will not go as planned

 

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magnus374 commented on Chapter 5 - Power And Control on February 11, 2016 03:00pm

This was indeed heavy with violence, but it does point out how horrible the situation is for Buffy. 

It was good seeing the others work to save her and now William is here.

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magnus374 commented on Chapter 4 - The Begining on February 11, 2016 02:53pm

The glimpse from the past showed us that things weren't so good between her and Angel as the earliest chapter seemed to say.

Now it's time for the real badness to begin.

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spiked_love commented on Chapter 5 - Power And Control on February 11, 2016 10:16am

I want to let you know, I skimmed most of this chapter. It was hard to read. 

I did like the parts with Dawn and Giles. I hope that we see more of them later, Dawn seems so capible and I always love that.

It also looks like Spike has entered the fray. Hopefully they will band together and save Buffy soon

Author's Response on February 11, 2016 08:49am

I understand what I've written can be hard to read for some people which is why I added the warnings. I can be quite graphic in my writing. Sometimes I connect better with the characters better if I know exactly what's happening so it comes out in my writing and I apologize ahead of time for anyone bothered by the chapters. Hence why I added the warnings.

 

I will say, yes you definitely get to see more of Dawn and Giles interacting and the gang interacting in general. Dawn also plays a bigger role in this story than my other stories. It just doesn't show until a little bit later. 

Author's Response on February 11, 2016 08:52am

Also, this is probably the most graphic that the story is going to get, if that helps. I'm guilty of putting my characters through the ringer and bringing them back. But this is more than likely as violent and graphic as it is going to get.

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magnus374 commented on Chapter 3 - Angelus on February 10, 2016 03:21pm

More emotional pain for Buffy. We already know that it's not true that there's nothing of the human left in a vampire, but we also knows that sometimes a vampire is just a monster after the turning. Not sure which is Angelus problem.

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Amayuscula commented on Chapter 3 - Angelus on February 10, 2016 07:36am Liked

applause

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Spikes_angel commented on Chapter 2 - Angel on February 09, 2016 09:48pm Liked

OMG, Angel has returned, he's a vampire and a douche! Oh the joy of this world. Awesome update girl. I really and truly can't for Spike to make an appearance to help Buffy heal. I also can't wait for a Spike and Buffy HOT moment. Please add more soon

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spiked_love commented on Chapter 2 - Angel on February 09, 2016 06:07pm

Ouch. Angel is such a duche, no matter the time Era 

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magnus374 commented on Chapter 2 - Angel on February 09, 2016 03:37pm

Again we could see Buffy's pain so clearly written. She did create a new life for her with her friends, the pain is still there of course but she did as well as she could. Then we had this really painful moment at the end, a destruction of good memories.

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magnus374 commented on Chapter 1 - Your Destiny on February 08, 2016 03:13pm

 A good desciption in the beginning of the chapter. We could see her pain so clearly, losing her man and child, poor Buffy. 

This is a different scenario, but interesting to read.

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Spikes_angel commented on Chapter 1 - Your Destiny on February 08, 2016 01:06pm

Awesome story so far girl. Man, my heart is breaking for Buffy. Even in the Historical time she just can't seem to catch a break. I'm honestly on pins and needles waiting for Buffy and Spike to meet. Maybe he can help Buffy's heart heal and so her that he is soulmate instead of Angel. I can't wait for more. I would love to see HOT moment between these two in near future. Please add more soon

 

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