I hope you are able to continue with your stories. I would love to read more!
[Report This]Thanks for the warning. Very brutal, poor Buffy. Guess they didn't add "till death us do part", in the wedding vows, till much later. The scoobies must be in a tizzy, wondering where she is. Well done, thank you for sharing.
[Report This]That was fast, didn't think Buffy would be in their hands already. Is Spike the master here, I wonder? Very well done, great work.
[Report This]Love the twist with in the sires. Does this mean that Dru is not crazy since Angelus did not sire her? Can't wait to find out. This is a very interesting story. Thanks for posting it here.
[Report This]Can't wait to see where everyone fits in to your story. Nice switch with Drusilla being his sire, I like it. Another good and exciting chapter.
[Report This]My first story of yours. Love a good historical Spuffy story and this seems to be a good one. The death of Angel is always an excellent first chapter, not for her son of course. Hope I can catch up tonight. Well done
[Report This]A very dangerous plan. It must also be really horrible for Buffy, all the memories that will follow her constantly in this place.
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Buffy is lucky or Spike is that they didn't just dust him for what he did but then again Dru wouldn't get to have her fun in torture.
[Report This]The spell at least told Buffy that he's alive even if his situation isn't good. They managed to have a bit of a talk, nice to see. A banner for this story, that's nice.
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Poor Spike, I hope they end up doing something about that clan. Figure a way to destroy them.
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Again we can see the pain Buffy has suffered. She does feel guilt over Spike but I can't blame Giles for not wanting her try to save him. Returning there could be emotionally damageing for her.
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Buffy you need to tell them about the tracker. NOW
[Report This]A fitting chapter name. Through the friends eyes we could see the damage that Buffy had suffered and also hear it in her voice later. It was painful to see, but written well.
[Report This]Really glad Spike got her out of there. I hope nothing bad happens to him. Can't wait to see how Buffy copes with all that has happened.
[Report This]In his small comments and gestures we can see that Spike is starting to feel deeply for Buffy. He did what he could to soften this horrible situation for her. Now she is out at least, but this will leave a mark upon her.
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Now they have met. Buffy felt thst she could trust him, a good thing, otherwise she should be worried that it's a trap.
[Report This]We learned some about Spike. We can see the plans he's making with the others to help Buffy. They of course don't trust him like that, but they do need him for this.
Also some more of Buffy's horrible situation.
[Report This]Aww. Spike and Buffy meet are it was really a sweet moment. Love that she refused to let him be tortured, understandable after what she has gone through.
Can't wait to see the rescue. I have a feeling that things will not go as planned
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This was indeed heavy with violence, but it does point out how horrible the situation is for Buffy.
It was good seeing the others work to save her and now William is here.
[Report This]The glimpse from the past showed us that things weren't so good between her and Angel as the earliest chapter seemed to say.
Now it's time for the real badness to begin.
[Report This]I want to let you know, I skimmed most of this chapter. It was hard to read.
I did like the parts with Dawn and Giles. I hope that we see more of them later, Dawn seems so capible and I always love that.
It also looks like Spike has entered the fray. Hopefully they will band together and save Buffy soon
I understand what I've written can be hard to read for some people which is why I added the warnings. I can be quite graphic in my writing. Sometimes I connect better with the characters better if I know exactly what's happening so it comes out in my writing and I apologize ahead of time for anyone bothered by the chapters. Hence why I added the warnings.
I will say, yes you definitely get to see more of Dawn and Giles interacting and the gang interacting in general. Dawn also plays a bigger role in this story than my other stories. It just doesn't show until a little bit later.
Also, this is probably the most graphic that the story is going to get, if that helps. I'm guilty of putting my characters through the ringer and bringing them back. But this is more than likely as violent and graphic as it is going to get.
More emotional pain for Buffy. We already know that it's not true that there's nothing of the human left in a vampire, but we also knows that sometimes a vampire is just a monster after the turning. Not sure which is Angelus problem.
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OMG, Angel has returned, he's a vampire and a douche! Oh the joy of this world. Awesome update girl. I really and truly can't for Spike to make an appearance to help Buffy heal. I also can't wait for a Spike and Buffy HOT moment. Please add more soon
[Report This]Ouch. Angel is such a duche, no matter the time Era
[Report This]Again we could see Buffy's pain so clearly written. She did create a new life for her with her friends, the pain is still there of course but she did as well as she could. Then we had this really painful moment at the end, a destruction of good memories.
[Report This]A good desciption in the beginning of the chapter. We could see her pain so clearly, losing her man and child, poor Buffy.
This is a different scenario, but interesting to read.
[Report This]Awesome story so far girl. Man, my heart is breaking for Buffy. Even in the Historical time she just can't seem to catch a break. I'm honestly on pins and needles waiting for Buffy and Spike to meet. Maybe he can help Buffy's heart heal and so her that he is soulmate instead of Angel. I can't wait for more. I would love to see HOT moment between these two in near future. Please add more soon
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