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magnus374 commented on Chapter 4 on March 03, 2016 04:52pm

 we can see how jelous Buffy is over Spike's connection with Dawn. What happened her with Dawn also brought up many issues and worries for Buffy. When she's scared she gets angry which also makes Spike angry. They have a lot they need to work out.

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madspuffyfan commented on Chapter 4 on March 03, 2016 05:48am Liked

Loved it

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acekoomboom commented on Chapter 4 on March 03, 2016 12:21am

 I hate you. Love you too. It fits so well.

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acekoomboom commented on Chapter 3 on March 03, 2016 12:04am

 Dawn is WHAT? Is it a side effect from having Spike possesses her, or is was she really turned, what is happening? By the way, that possession thing was SO freaking cool. Spike did not even mean to at first. So awesome! That's my favorite part so far by a longshot. It was THAT good. The insecurity pissing contest I am mad at you thig was a bit awkward but very realistic for those two bozos. Got to love 'em! I liked that he was so mad at her vut still did not drink enough because he knew she would not want him to. Really cute.

 This guide gig has some real potential for crazy, and I am anxious to see which path you take. Stupid Willow, running away. Even more stupid Xander, blaming everything on Spike all of the time. Stupid amulet, not letting them go back!

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acekoomboom commented on Chapter 2 on March 02, 2016 11:49pm

 Aw, poor Dawn... the fact that they can conjure up whatever they want is cool. I do not like that demon looking guy, bossing our Spuffy around. Not cool! The whole guid thing though, double aw! I just do not think Biffy or Spike could be satisfied sitting back and letting others do the work. I guess that we shall see. Joyce giving sweet hugs and words, and hot chocolate being given, I could tear up. I wonder who else they will summon to this place. Will Spike's Mom show up, or Ford, or Jenny? What will happen?

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acekoomboom commented on Chapter 1 on March 02, 2016 11:33pm

  Mmh, Spike goodness. I loved the way Buffy restated the exatct same thing she had said but slower, more pungent. I love you. She needed to know that he knew. His okay, I love you too, now leave, was beautiful and heartbreaking. That beginning part was so good. SO GOOD. I like the visual aid the phones give to that big, blank space of a place. It adds a bit of structure, a pop of color, and it really helps my mind see what is going on with the characters. I can not believe that Buffy would not keave him to die. I like that this purgatory ish place is not like her heaven. It would be too much if they both had to get ripped away from heaven. Why was there weird white noise? Could someone else feel/ see/ hear them while the phone was off of the hook? How and why is Dawn calling? What is happening to her? Does tike pass differently wherever they are? I have so many questions, and I can not wait to read on and find out more!

 My one and only critic is that you used 'this' instead of "this." Other than that, everything was great and enjoyable and I am pumped for more. Great work!

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jhiz commented on Chapter 4 on March 02, 2016 09:43pm

hmm, bummer... would have thought they had grown beyond the abusive thing *shrug*  Oh well...

Interesting picture you drew of Dawn accidentally killing someone and Spike easing her through the blood-sucking so that she could return from game-face.

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jhiz commented on Chapter 3 on March 02, 2016 09:36pm

hmm, I would think the game face was from sharing an essence with Spike... maybe?


I hope Giles survives.


I can totally see everyone melting down and yelling at each other so much and pointing fingers so that they are not actually accomplishing anything.


Glad to see that Spike gets the premise of the guidance job.  Bet Buffy will still try to break the rules.  She never did follow direction well *giggle*.

Author's Response on March 02, 2016 07:40pm

YES! The essence thing was right, I didn't want to outright say it because when I'm reading fanfics, I like to make my own assumptions, it becomes more obvious in the next chapter xx

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jhiz commented on Chapter 2 on March 02, 2016 09:25pm

Again... lovely bit of smut at the end there.

Happy that Buffy and Spike got to have Joyce join them in their new world they can create with their clear thoughts.  Sounds a bit boring for a more than a bit though.  Just gotta say, man, even death doesn't get them out of duty?  That has to suck but great way to add a new type of torture on our favorite heroes.

Author's Response on March 02, 2016 07:33pm

Let's be honest, when are they ever going to get any peace? May as well make it as comfy as possible lol x 

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jhiz commented on Chapter 1 on March 02, 2016 09:11pm

*laugh*  How horny do you have to be to just ignore the weird place and jump your lover even though you have no clue where, what, why or how you are somewhere?

Great smut session though.

Loved your description of Spike yanking at his hair while attacking himself in disgust for causing what he thought was Buffy's loss of life.

Author's Response on March 02, 2016 07:15pm

All they are is horny when they're not being ridiculously soft with eachother or fighting eachother! X Thank you x 

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fyreburned commented on Chapter 2 on February 03, 2016 01:32am Liked

Didn't expect any of this to happen! Quite a twist. Wss Joyce actually with them? Or just a construct like the Revello Drive house? Enjoyed!

Author's Response on February 03, 2016 05:37pm

Joyce is with them, they have the power to 'conjure' up their surroundings 

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magnus374 commented on Chapter 3 on February 01, 2016 02:21pm

There would off course be several issues awoken in the situation they are in. The way this with Dawn works is both scary and stressful for them. I like how it is written.

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Sunalso commented on Chapter 3 on February 01, 2016 11:41am Liked

Ugh- Buffy needs to get over herself, lol. Not that she's ever good at that- but instead of being happy that her sister was able survive she was jealous she wasn't the one to help her the most! Maybe Joyce can talk some sense into her... 

Author's Response on February 01, 2016 12:53pm

YES! As much as I loved Buffy as a character she irritated me a lot sometimes x

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Sunalso commented on Chapter 2 on January 29, 2016 07:27pm Liked

I don't know why- but that 'send me a sign' at the end made me so sad. 

I love this story- happiness and sadness mixing together so well. 

Author's Response on January 29, 2016 05:37pm

Thank you. <3 

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magnus374 commented on Chapter 2 on January 29, 2016 01:33pm

Hearing that from Dawn was a scary experience and of course Buffy found a way to blame herself for every possible badness. A good thing that they got some answers then. This is a special scenario, it will be good to see how this guiding thing works for them.

I also liked that we saw Buffy's anger at the Scoobies. 

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crazyjane commented on Chapter 2 on January 29, 2016 04:57am Liked

Poor Dawn, hope she gets a sign soon....Great update.

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madspuffyfan commented on Chapter 2 on January 28, 2016 07:34pm Liked

Loved it

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magnus374 commented on Chapter 1 on January 28, 2016 03:41pm

A good emotional moment when Buffy wouldn't leave him. We could also see how scared Spike was when he thought she was dead. His guilt and sorrow was strong. Then they had this great moment wherever they are. The mystical phonecall at the end, brings a lot of questions.

Author's Response on January 28, 2016 06:42pm

Thank you so much, your comments are always so insightful and usefulapplause

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Onlyabrit commented on Chapter 1 on January 28, 2016 10:24am Liked

Great start....looking forward to where you are going to go with this

Author's Response on January 28, 2016 06:42pm

Thank you! squeexxx

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fyreburned commented on Chapter 1 on January 28, 2016 06:15am Liked

OK, I'm hooked... Time to get a fix for my Post-Chosen cravings! Yay!

Author's Response on January 28, 2016 06:41pm

readheartsqueexxxx

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-Ash- commented on Chapter 1 on January 28, 2016 05:20am

I woke up from a bad dream so I decided to read some fanfic. And OMG I need to have nightmares more often. I am so glad I came across this story. Obsessed with it. Update soon? Yes? Yay!  

Author's Response on January 28, 2016 06:41pm

Chapter 2 up, will try and update at least 3 times a week so every other day as I have time at the moment to fully commit to it write<3 xxx

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lambean commented on Chapter 1 on January 28, 2016 01:31am Liked

Great first chapter. You totally made me cry.   Loved the ending. Can't wait to read more

Author's Response on January 28, 2016 06:40pm

I cried a bit writing it I can't lie to you, it was so much fun but still so emotional too. bravoxx

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moonlight88 commented on Chapter 1 on January 27, 2016 11:50pm

Review wanted? MOAR PLEASE. read heart I love this fic already^^ flowers You got me curious about where they are. Heaven? Another place... A peaceful dimension? Held in some dimension within the amulet? Where are theyyyyyyy? :p 

p.s. *cuddles Spike*

Author's Response on January 28, 2016 06:40pm

Chapter 2 up darling! Thank you so much! applausexxxx

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kfocht commented on Chapter 1 on January 27, 2016 10:44pm

 Wow! Got me waiting for more! Hot, steamy, romance, love, suspense and a cliffhanger I think you covered everything . Just hope you have chapter 2 ready lol.

 

Author's Response on January 28, 2016 06:38pm

Thank you, I'm so happy you liked it, it means so much squeexxxx

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cathainsheart commented on Chapter 1 on January 27, 2016 10:37pm Liked

writeheartEXCELLENT  but need more

Author's Response on January 28, 2016 06:38pm

Thank you, I'm going to try and update every day / every other day Xxxx Ch2 is up smile

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