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FandomsOfAGrrrl commented on Chapter 21: Beljoxa's Eye on September 03, 2018 04:36am Liked

I enjoyed reading the story. Any chance of it being finished elsewhere? or updated soon? Good writing!

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magnus374 commented on Chapter 21: Beljoxa's Eye on January 25, 2016 01:00pm

What a horrible choice, death or mortality, either way he lose.

Author's Response on January 27, 2016 01:29am

Not really. He would lose his immortality, yes. But if he would choose to be mortal again... he would be with Buffy for sure and they would not have to worry about her growing old and he stayed young forever 

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magnus374 commented on Chapter 20: Higher Power on January 24, 2016 07:51am

Giles can still be really blind sometimes, thinking that Angel is better than Spike, you don't really see then.

Author's Response on January 24, 2016 12:42pm

Giles never really liked Spike ya know... from the series, he was always unsure of Spike and his ways and how he was a killer with the chip. When he tried to set him up with Principal Wood to get him killed and it back fired. Giles just have to get over Buffy's decision with wanting to be with Spike

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magnus374 commented on Chapter 19: A Ray of Hope on January 23, 2016 09:14am

I do enjoy to read when Angel actually is acting like a good person. I also enjoy him being a bad one but that is more common, s this is good.

Author's Response on January 23, 2016 03:02pm

I'm glad that you enjoyed seeing Angel come back to help. I brought him in the story to come help them, since he became owner of Wolfam and Heart. Giles had the big idea that Angel could help with this situation. 

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magnus374 commented on Chapter 18: "I'm Gonna Shanshu Tonight" on January 22, 2016 03:30pm

It was good seeing everyone trying to get some answers about why Spike was in a coma. I don't like the answer though. Becoming human is a step backwards, the only thing worse would be if he became a "normal" human. If so I hope they can find Dru and make him right again.

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magnus374 commented on Chapter 17: Give it Time on January 22, 2016 03:24pm

It seems like Xander's wish didn't have any dangerous consequences,  D'Hoffryn was in a good mode it seems. 

Author's Response on January 22, 2016 09:39pm

D'Hoffryn is never really in a bad mood. Just depends on the situations and events that takes place. 

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magnus374 commented on Chapter 16: The Eternal Exchange on January 21, 2016 03:40pm

Xanders wish to D'Hoffryn could have big and horrible consequences,  but it could go well too I suppose.  The cliffhanger makes me wonder what Spike was planning?

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magnus374 commented on Chapter 15: Spike's Plan on January 21, 2016 03:34pm

Involving D'Hoffryn could be a good thing or a bad thing, it's a plan at least.

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magnus374 commented on Chapter 14: Unlocking the Past Part Two on January 21, 2016 03:30pm

So deidra was the flower person at Woodstock and turned and dumped. That explains things " hell has no fury as a woman scorned".

Author's Response on January 22, 2016 01:27am

Yeah she had a 'good' time with partying and it resulted in her being turned and seeing how crazy Deidra was and how clingy... Spike took off from her and yeah, she became upset over this

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magnus374 commented on Chapter 13: Unlocking the Past Part One on January 21, 2016 03:24pm

It was interesting seeing that she was taking part in the witch trials and later taken in by D'Hoffryn,  I liked that part, Anyanka couldn't be newly turned though. 

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pfeifferpack commented on Chapter 14: Unlocking the Past Part Two on January 20, 2016 11:33pm Liked

So she was turned by Spike and clearly had and still has a thing for him.  I kind of feel sorry for her in a way.  THe first time he was all caught up in Dru and now it's Buffy.  Never room for Deidre.

KAthleen

Author's Response on January 21, 2016 12:46pm

With the events that had took place within the story... there was no time for Deidra at all. She wanted him and still wants him but Spike already had a 'crazy' one in his life and that was Dru lol

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magnus374 commented on Chapter 12: Mount Up on January 20, 2016 02:37pm

It was not one of Buffy's best ideas, luckily Spike managed to round up the troops. They could need a lot of fighters to free Buffy this time.

Author's Response on January 20, 2016 12:45pm

Nope not a good decision on Buffy's part at all, I agree. But you will see some major twists and turns that takes place coming up in the next chapters. 

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magnus374 commented on Chapter 11: Decisions on January 20, 2016 02:32pm

Everyone is on edge and the tension is really thick. Willow acts fast it seems. If Kennedy hadn't behaved liked that I would have felt bad for her.

Author's Response on January 20, 2016 12:44pm

Willow had to make a fast choice with the events that took place with Oz coming back in the picture and plus with how Kennedy behaved to make everyone upset with her. I never liked Kennedy, so thats why I chose to do that in my story. 

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magnus374 commented on Chapter 10: Destiny on January 19, 2016 03:53pm

We have learned a bit more about the ritual then. Now everyone knows about Spike and they may not like it but they will at least try to be supportive. Oz is back too, I don't really like the idea of him not being a werewolf anymore, that part was sad, but it was good to see him.

Author's Response on January 19, 2016 06:16pm

Everyone will need to get used to Spike if they do truly care for Buffy and her feelings about him. If they can't accept it, then they can't really accept Buffy, ya know? And yes Oz is back... I never was a big fan of Kennedy so I chose to bring back one of the main characters that I liked being there for Willow. Tara is number one, but since she is dead, Oz was a close second. And I chose Oz not being a werewolf anymore because in the show he wanted to get it under control and he soon left the show... so I brought it in my story that he finally found a way to control it and the end result was him being mortal again. 

magnus374 Replied on January 20, 2016 12:19pm

I understand your reasoning about Oz but I have never liked when someone turned human again, to me it makes them less.

Author's Response on January 20, 2016 12:42pm

It was a twist that I wanted to add to my story since in the show he was destined to 'control' the beast, ya know. So that's why I put in mine that his control over the beast was him being human again for Willow. To show her that he indeed has changed for her and came back to her.

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magnus374 commented on Chapter 9: What Ritual? on January 19, 2016 03:44pm

A sad thing about Willy, he was a bit of a slime but I did like him. Interesting to see more about the ritual and the dagger.

Author's Response on January 19, 2016 06:13pm

Yes it was a very sad thing about Willy. At times he was a slime when it came down to saving his own butt, but indeed sad. There is plenty more of the ritual soon to come :) 

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magnus374 commented on Chapter 8: With Love Comes Heartache on January 17, 2016 09:26am

Xander being back just made the telling thing that much more complicated. I acctually felt a bit bad for Xander. She did tell them at lest, they will just have to deal with it.

Author's Response on January 17, 2016 11:59am

It did make it difficult for Buffy to fully tell them about Spike since Xander being back in the picture and his feelings that he always had toward Buffy... but if they truly cared for her... all of her friends would understand

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magnus374 commented on Chapter 7: Something Wicked This Way Comes on January 17, 2016 09:16am

They both has such deep issues with love and their feelings as we can clearly see here.

Author's Response on January 17, 2016 11:58am

Indeed we can Big Grin

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magnus374 commented on Chapter 6: The Encounter on January 17, 2016 09:11am

Again we can see Buffy's fear of letting her feelings be known, but we can also see some self respect from Spike, that's good.

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magnus374 commented on Chapter 5: Temptation on January 17, 2016 09:05am

This have given Buffy a lot to think about. There were also some interaction I liked.

Author's Response on January 17, 2016 11:57am

I'm glad that you are liking my story and the interactions I have within it

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magnus374 commented on Chapter 4: New Vampire in Town on January 16, 2016 10:11am

Buffy still has her problemmwith figuring out what she wants.

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magnus374 commented on Chapter 3: Who is the Slayer? on January 16, 2016 10:06am

Buffy knows more of the danger now, but not that much. I suppose it's Clemmshe will seek out.

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magnus374 commented on Chapter 2: Queen Deidra on January 16, 2016 09:59am

We have seen the big bad for this story then, I suppose. ?

It was good that Buffy let her sorrow be known.

Author's Response on January 16, 2016 02:58pm

No we have not seen this big bad yet. It is a whole new thing happening as if the real series never ended and Sunnydale was never destroyed 

magnus374 Replied on January 17, 2016 07:13am

I just asumed that Deidra would be that but just a minor bad then.

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magnus374 commented on Chapter 1: The Scent of Pain on January 16, 2016 09:53am

It was good seeing Clem and he did gave Buffy something to think about.

Author's Response on January 16, 2016 02:56pm

Indeed he did hun :) i do hope you have been enjoying it so far. More will be coming soon

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