Comments For A Bite in Time
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Green commented on Chapter 1 on March 02, 2020 06:21am Liked

Brownies are a cure for lots of things 😁. 💚

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angelic_amy commented on Chapter 1 on October 02, 2019 09:04am Liked

Hahaha! This was so funny! For something so short, you really captured a nice little moment. Thanks for sharing. 

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Sonea commented on Chapter 1 on May 13, 2018 08:11pm Liked

I love how chill they are about it, "oh, he has no memory beyond 1893, here, have some brownies." "Oh, brownies are a cure for memory loss. Hmm, seems legit."

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Bekah_Leigh commented on Chapter 1 on March 10, 2018 03:49pm Liked

A very fun moment, and insight into Spike's inner human who Buffy never got to see. Great job!

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Badwolfjedi commented on Chapter 1 on February 26, 2018 02:27pm Liked

Oh my goodness. Magic tellies and brownies. Such wonders William is seeing lol. Cute ending as well. 

Thanks for sharing. 

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KayleeDiane commented on Chapter 1 on March 14, 2016 06:44pm Liked

Brownies are the key to everything! This was hilarious, loved it!

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AGriffinWriter commented on Chapter 1 on December 27, 2015 05:44pm

A very cute little fic, and perfect for the two chosen holidays! Lovely!

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acekoomboom commented on Chapter 1 on December 27, 2015 01:56am

 Hahaha, what was in that brownie? Did Willow make them? This was so short and adorable! Do they tell Spike about it? This was so open ended, but in a good way. I enjoyed it greatly. At least Buffy could tell a difference. Barley a vampire William was actually funny and cute and aw! Kudos for this one, very many bravos.

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Rabbit_moon1 commented on Chapter 1 on December 26, 2015 07:28pm Liked

Very cute story!  And who doesn't love brownies?

I had to laugh; Buffy is always shoving something into Spike's mouth.  *snicker*

I can see that this premise has the potential to be a good jumping off place for a longer story.  *hint-hint*

 

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no_promises commented on Chapter 1 on December 26, 2015 11:02am

I've heard of brownies that can make you forget your name.  

/snicker

This story made me smile  >  thanks  😊

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Amasirol commented on Chapter 1 on December 24, 2015 02:53am Liked

Chocolate cake vs brownies? Brownies every time! Spike sure feels the same way 

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Crimsinsky commented on Chapter 1 on December 20, 2015 10:47pm

Very cute premise

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VampyreLover commented on Chapter 1 on December 18, 2015 11:04pm

Brownies and chocolate should be the cure to all ailments.  Funny little fic.  Quite enjoyable.

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jhiz commented on Chapter 1 on December 18, 2015 08:21am

What a glorious day too.  Brownies... the evil destroyer of diets everywhere *giggle*

Cute confused and stressed Spike.  I liked Buffy's eye roll over his vamp status.

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Sigyn commented on Chapter 1 on December 18, 2015 04:05am

That was cute. Very cute indeed. Glad it was so easily cured!

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EmilytheSlayer323 commented on Chapter 1 on December 18, 2015 01:28am Liked

Brownies are the best things ever. I enjoyed reading this. :)

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Ashinthe commented on Chapter 1 on December 18, 2015 12:34am Liked

Wow, you really managed to make quite a positive impression on me in a very short amount of space! This is a fabulous little fic, one might even be tempted to call it bite sized ;). I love the concept of combining Brownie and Time Traveler day together. It's a pretty original take on a post Something Blue fic for Spike to lose his memory and be in vintage William the Bloody mode!- I really loved it! You could do a long fix with that idea that I think would be fabulous too, but this was still wonderful. Using the brownie as a cure was an inspired and tidy way to wrap up this short fic. The fact that it was Buffy who showed it into his mouth to shut him up is just classic Buffy! That was probably my favorite part, although it was hard to choose with so many wonderful moments! 

This is such a fun and light hearted entry for the holiday challenge,  thanks for sharing it with us :). 

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wintersstorm commented on Chapter 1 on December 17, 2015 10:25am Liked

Brilliant!!

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magnus374 commented on Chapter 1 on December 17, 2015 04:35am

I liked how Spike reacted to this without his memories, this was a good little piece.

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alive_or_dead commented on Chapter 1 on December 16, 2015 09:58pm Liked

Ahaha that was hilarious!!! I can actually see that happening! :D

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lambean commented on Chapter 1 on December 16, 2015 07:05pm

Cute way to meet the challenge. I also like that it gave Buffy a little glimpse of William. Hopefully she will be curious enough to want to know more

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anatas commented on Chapter 1 on December 16, 2015 04:12pm Liked

I like it,  it's a nice fluffy story. Yep, the magical properties of Brownies are worth investigating. Roll eyes

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