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MiseEnPlace commented on Act One, Scene Two: In Which The Scoobies Panic and A Lurker Listens In on May 24, 2020 02:45pm Liked

I love Anya in this chapter. They should have always listened to the 1000-year-old ex-demon.

 

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spikeisthebigbad commented on Act Two, Scene Two: In Which The Playing Field Changes and a New Competitor Wins It All on April 07, 2020 03:00am

I had to get used to the script format, but that happened suprising fast! I love it! I laughed so hard! This is just so much fun! Made by night!

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spikeisthebigbad commented on Act One, Scene Two: In Which The Scoobies Panic and A Lurker Listens In on April 07, 2020 02:49am Liked

Had to stop again. Anya is the best thing I've ever read ever. She had stolen the spotlight. Hell she stole it and ran. No one is getting that spotlight ever again. Brilliant! I'm laughing so hard it hurts. 

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spikeisthebigbad commented on Act One, Scene One: In Which Willow Attempts To Help Buffy With Her Relationship Problems And... Kinda Succeeds? on April 07, 2020 02:44am

"Blah blah Buffy’s boyfriend is inadequate in a way that’s new and different." I had to stop before the next chapter, and tell you this is my favorite line of anything ever. I laughed so hard! 

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Green commented on Act Two, Scene Two: In Which The Playing Field Changes and a New Competitor Wins It All on December 03, 2019 05:55am Liked

It's good she didn't out Spike, everyone would have just shown their asses, except for Dawn who probably would've made everyones ears hurt with her happy squeal. Cute story 💚

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Green commented on Act Two, Scene One: In Which Buffy's Soulmate Proves Elusive on December 03, 2019 05:14am Liked

Yeah Riley you're delusional if you think she'll stay with you now.💚

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Green commented on Act One, Scene Two: In Which The Scoobies Panic and A Lurker Listens In on December 03, 2019 05:02am Liked

So Spike was listening in. I do really like this, I can see it happening in my head. 💚

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Green commented on Act One, Scene One: In Which Willow Attempts To Help Buffy With Her Relationship Problems And... Kinda Succeeds? on December 03, 2019 04:46am Liked

Definitely different but I liked it. 💚

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Twinkles commented on Act Two, Scene Two: In Which The Playing Field Changes and a New Competitor Wins It All on October 30, 2019 08:07pm Liked

 This is awesome! The format was really fun, played out beautifully on my in-brain TV, and worked so well for the humour. 

Thanks for an awesome read :D  💙

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Joyce commented on Act Two, Scene Two: In Which The Playing Field Changes and a New Competitor Wins It All on June 17, 2019 11:45am

This was cute! Glad that a major blow out was averted. Only we know the truth.

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Joyce commented on Act Two, Scene One: In Which Buffy's Soulmate Proves Elusive on June 17, 2019 11:38am

 I guess Owen really got on Angel’s nerves LOL.  

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Joyce commented on Act One, Scene One: In Which Willow Attempts To Help Buffy With Her Relationship Problems And... Kinda Succeeds? on June 17, 2019 11:25am Liked

I only know bits of Latin roots and Latin used at church (Catholic) but I got the gist of the spell.

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Snowbells commented on Act Two, Scene Two: In Which The Playing Field Changes and a New Competitor Wins It All on June 03, 2019 11:50am

This is so fun! The screenplay format works well here and all the dialogue is spot-on

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Anaelyssa commented on Act Two, Scene Two: In Which The Playing Field Changes and a New Competitor Wins It All on April 28, 2019 07:29am Liked

 Nicely written. Play format mildly annoying, but also kind of awesome and unique.

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angelic_amy commented on Act Two, Scene Two: In Which The Playing Field Changes and a New Competitor Wins It All on April 14, 2019 03:16am Liked

Awww! This was so lovely! I'm really, really glad that Buffy and Spike had their moment. And I love how Buffy kept it just for them, instead of outing Spike in front of everyone and causing a fuss. 

Of COURSE Willow's got to was to do another spell - that girl has problems.

Lovely little fic, thank you so much for sharing. 

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angelic_amy commented on Act Two, Scene One: In Which Buffy's Soulmate Proves Elusive on April 14, 2019 03:10am Liked

Another really excellent chapter. Your characterisations in this are hilarious, and it's amazing how much the simple action notes help create such a full picture. Loving this. 

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angelic_amy commented on Act One, Scene Two: In Which The Scoobies Panic and A Lurker Listens In on April 14, 2019 03:07am Liked

Awww! I love Tara's relationship with Dawn in this. So lovely. And I am not surprised at all at Willow's flippancy over the mess she's made. *shakes head* Great chapter. 

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angelic_amy commented on Act One, Scene One: In Which Willow Attempts To Help Buffy With Her Relationship Problems And... Kinda Succeeds? on April 14, 2019 03:03am Liked

Oooh! What an interesting beginning! I don't know if I've read a fic written in script format before. This was very well done. Your Anya was hilarious, and I'm looking forward to seeing what happens next. 

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Holi117 commented on Act One, Scene Two: In Which The Scoobies Panic and A Lurker Listens In on August 23, 2018 08:25pm Liked

Awe, again, really liking the scripty format 

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Holi117 commented on Act One, Scene One: In Which Willow Attempts To Help Buffy With Her Relationship Problems And... Kinda Succeeds? on August 23, 2018 08:20pm Liked

Oooh I really like the set up you’ve done. Also, hilarious character section at the top! 

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Snowbells commented on Act Two, Scene Two: In Which The Playing Field Changes and a New Competitor Wins It All on November 20, 2017 11:11am Liked

Well-written Anya is hard to find and awesome to read. I liked Spike’s talk with himself a lot, too. 

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Special Squirrel commented on Act Two, Scene Two: In Which The Playing Field Changes and a New Competitor Wins It All on October 10, 2017 03:18pm Liked

I love the play aspect of this story. It was so adorable! Thank you for writing it I really enjoy reading it!! applause

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Catryona commented on Act Two, Scene Two: In Which The Playing Field Changes and a New Competitor Wins It All on September 21, 2017 11:24am Liked

Don’t much see you as the necrophilia type… Except for the... vampire...thing. (clears throat) But besides that.

Haha! He really is talk first think later guy, huh? Good thing Buffy wasn't awake to hear him talking about her sexual proclivities ... she never takes that well.

This was a fun read! I think you did a good job switching between characters and spicing things up with humourous lines, which is pretty crucial in a story that's almost completely made of dialogue. Plus the idea of Buffy and Spike being soulmates is pretty interesting....

Thanks for sharing your story!

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Catryona commented on Act Two, Scene One: In Which Buffy's Soulmate Proves Elusive on September 21, 2017 11:16am Liked

Human feelings are so delicate, but I think I’m finally getting the hang of this comforting business.

...She says, two seconds after hitting Riley with the verbal equivalent of a sledgehammer. Well, she's trying, right? (Her attempt at comforting Riley was seriously hilarious.)

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Catryona commented on Act One, Scene Two: In Which The Scoobies Panic and A Lurker Listens In on September 21, 2017 11:03am Liked

I just love Anya in this. She's got that perfect combination of knowledge and disinterest in stupid human problems that has her helping out in the funniest ways.

XANDER: Riley.

WILLOW: Angel.

DAWN: She’s doomed.

Well if she has to depend on those two ... just kidding haha. This made me laugh, maybe because of the pessimism of the person who's closest to Buffy (physically, anyway)? Although it makes sense, considering how pessimistic Buffy had gotten about her relationships in the past few years, that Dawn's views would reflect that.

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Catryona commented on Act One, Scene One: In Which Willow Attempts To Help Buffy With Her Relationship Problems And... Kinda Succeeds? on September 21, 2017 10:57am Liked

Blah blah Buffy’s boyfriend is inadequate in a way that’s new and different. Blah blah witchcraft. Blah blah sacred duty

LOL!

This is definitely fun enough to be a trendsetter. The concept's interesting and I think you've executed it competently. The dialogue flows naturally and you've got a good grasp of the characters' voices. I'm on board!

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OffYourBird commented on Act Two, Scene Two: In Which The Playing Field Changes and a New Competitor Wins It All on July 26, 2017 09:15pm Liked

Don’t much see you as the necrophilia type… Except for the... vampire...thing. haha Your  characterisation of Spike is just spot on. Giggled through all his rambling .

Loved this entire thing. Just wonderful!! applausebravo

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OffYourBird commented on Act Two, Scene One: In Which Buffy's Soulmate Proves Elusive on July 26, 2017 09:10pm Liked

Yay, Spike!! Thank goodness for Dawn getting him on the list!

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OffYourBird commented on Act One, Scene Two: In Which The Scoobies Panic and A Lurker Listens In on July 26, 2017 09:07pm Liked

It’s not stated explicitly in my book, but I’m fairly certain corpses are bad for business.haha Seriously, your Anya here is brilliant! I'm  in love with her. Really enjoying your take on the meaning  of soulmates as well

 

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OffYourBird commented on Act One, Scene One: In Which Willow Attempts To Help Buffy With Her Relationship Problems And... Kinda Succeeds? on July 26, 2017 07:01pm Liked

This is hysterical so far! Love Anya's voice (the blah blahs had me rolling) and the framing  is so much fun!

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