I had to get used to the script format, but that happened suprising fast! I love it! I laughed so hard! This is just so much fun! Made by night![Report This]
Had to stop again. Anya is the best thing I've ever read ever. She had stolen the spotlight. Hell she stole it and ran. No one is getting that spotlight ever again. Brilliant! I'm laughing so hard it hurts.[Report This]
"Blah blah Buffy’s boyfriend is inadequate in a way that’s new and different." I had to stop before the next chapter, and tell you this is my favorite line of anything ever. I laughed so hard![Report This]
It's good she didn't out Spike, everyone would have just shown their asses, except for Dawn who probably would've made everyones ears hurt with her happy squeal. Cute story 💚[Report This]
This is awesome! The format was really fun, played out beautifully on my in-brain TV, and worked so well for the humour.
Thanks for an awesome read :D 💙[Report This]
Awww! This was so lovely! I'm really, really glad that Buffy and Spike had their moment. And I love how Buffy kept it just for them, instead of outing Spike in front of everyone and causing a fuss.
Of COURSE Willow's got to was to do another spell - that girl has problems.
Lovely little fic, thank you so much for sharing.[Report This]
Another really excellent chapter. Your characterisations in this are hilarious, and it's amazing how much the simple action notes help create such a full picture. Loving this.[Report This]
Awww! I love Tara's relationship with Dawn in this. So lovely. And I am not surprised at all at Willow's flippancy over the mess she's made. *shakes head* Great chapter.[Report This]
Oooh! What an interesting beginning! I don't know if I've read a fic written in script format before. This was very well done. Your Anya was hilarious, and I'm looking forward to seeing what happens next.[Report This]
Don’t much see you as the necrophilia type… Except for the... vampire...thing. (clears throat) But besides that.
Haha! He really is talk first think later guy, huh? Good thing Buffy wasn't awake to hear him talking about her sexual proclivities ... she never takes that well.
This was a fun read! I think you did a good job switching between characters and spicing things up with humourous lines, which is pretty crucial in a story that's almost completely made of dialogue. Plus the idea of Buffy and Spike being soulmates is pretty interesting....
Thanks for sharing your story![Report This]
Human feelings are so delicate, but I think I’m finally getting the hang of this comforting business.
...She says, two seconds after hitting Riley with the verbal equivalent of a sledgehammer. Well, she's trying, right? (Her attempt at comforting Riley was seriously hilarious.)[Report This]
I just love Anya in this. She's got that perfect combination of knowledge and disinterest in stupid human problems that has her helping out in the funniest ways.
DAWN: She’s doomed.
Well if she has to depend on those two ... just kidding haha. This made me laugh, maybe because of the pessimism of the person who's closest to Buffy (physically, anyway)? Although it makes sense, considering how pessimistic Buffy had gotten about her relationships in the past few years, that Dawn's views would reflect that.[Report This]
Blah blah Buffy’s boyfriend is inadequate in a way that’s new and different. Blah blah witchcraft. Blah blah sacred duty
This is definitely fun enough to be a trendsetter. The concept's interesting and I think you've executed it competently. The dialogue flows naturally and you've got a good grasp of the characters' voices. I'm on board![Report This]
Don’t much see you as the necrophilia type… Except for the... vampire...thing. Your characterisation of Spike is just spot on. Giggled through all his rambling .
Loved this entire thing. Just wonderful!![Report This]
It’s not stated explicitly in my book, but I’m fairly certain corpses are bad for business. - Seriously, your Anya here is brilliant! I'm in love with her. Really enjoying your take on the meaning of soulmates as well