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infinitecrisis commented on A Change Would Do You Good on April 01, 2021 05:04pm Liked

It would be nice if both of them from two universe merged.

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infinitecrisis commented on The other woman on April 01, 2021 04:52pm Liked

 Always wonder what happened to the other more bitchy buffy.

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Fancyflautist commented on A Change Would Do You Good on June 14, 2019 08:57am Liked

God, I want more of this!! I want to see them get to happy claimed Spuffy with her believing in his love for her. Gah, I hope you update this eventually! 

Thanks for sharing <3

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gabelou1991 commented on A Change Would Do You Good on January 01, 2019 01:00pm

Buffy a souhaité être Buffy intéressant.

Je peux le comprendre Buffy l'autre il l'a connu plus longtemps et il partage quelque chose de.grand .

Author's Response on January 02, 2019 12:45pm

Merci beaucoup pour le commentaire.

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Green commented on A Change Would Do You Good on August 04, 2018 03:04pm Liked

Really good. Buffy getting to see her mom after all this time, wow.  💚

Author's Response on August 19, 2018 10:02am

Thank you, and yes, I thought that would be a good thing.

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pfeifferpack commented on A Change Would Do You Good on August 04, 2018 03:42am Liked

This should be interesting. This is such a different Buffy, her relationships will be vastly changed.

Wonder where his Buffy is. Well, this one IS his but not.

Poor Spike was fully expecting that the Buffy from his original timeline would not love him. He was prepared. It has to give him comfort knowing he is loved there too.

Excellent update.

Kathleen

 

Author's Response on August 19, 2018 10:02am

Thank you very much and I hope I manage to do it justice from here on too.

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Meavepagan commented on A Change Would Do You Good on August 03, 2018 04:56pm Liked

I absolutely love this so far.  more  soon please?

Author's Response on August 19, 2018 10:01am

Thank you, I'll try to see how the muse feels.

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magnus374 commented on A Change Would Do You Good on August 03, 2018 08:14am

There was no way to know how the wish would be fulfilled. So comicverse Buffy has been transported to this reality. I suppose that this reality Buffy has been moved to the comicverse then. It is indeed a very special situation to explain. 

I like that you continued this story.

Author's Response on August 19, 2018 10:00am

Thank you. Yes, it's a switch, but there might be some twists ahead. Also it's not exactly comics-verse, as I haven't read the comics, but it'll be close enough.

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magnus374 commented on The other woman on August 03, 2018 08:03am

I had to read this again when I saw a new chapter, so I could remember all the little things.

Author's Response on August 19, 2018 09:58am

Glad to have you on board.

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Pencilcomet commented on A Change Would Do You Good on August 03, 2018 06:36am Liked

heart

Author's Response on August 19, 2018 09:57am

Thank you.

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Pencilcomet commented on The other woman on August 03, 2018 06:26am Liked

heart

Author's Response on August 19, 2018 09:57am

:)

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Chosenname commented on A Change Would Do You Good on August 03, 2018 02:27am Liked

“Before I tell you my story…” He swallowed and tried to ignore the gaping hole he could feel widening in his stomach. “Can you just tell me if you love me?”  You know that question has been burning a hole in his psyche for a long, long time. He came back in time without any idea of where he stood with her, and no matter what he has carved out for himself here, the past was still there, haunting the back corners of his mind.

“He tells me everything.” She ducked down to capture his gaze. “And I tell him everything too. No secrets, no half-truths, no exceptions. That’s how we make it work.”  Wow - terribly mature and impressive. You know Spike is wondering exactly how *he* was able to get past all of the seemingly insurmountable obstacles of the past/future time (darn confusing time-travel, lol) and find himself in such a stable relationship with Buffy.

The Buffy from this time doesn't seem to be conscious of the blending though. I wonder if she is simply being suppressed by the alternate Buffy, or if she might be experiencing a taste of the other timeline?

Author's Response on August 19, 2018 09:56am

More things will be explained as things progress. Thank you for the review.

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Chosenname commented on The other woman on August 03, 2018 01:36am Liked

Ouch - Poor Buffy, but at the same time poor Spike!  He has obviously been totally open with her about his life experiences prior to traveling back in time, which is good, but has definitely left them both with excess emotional baggage. She IS Buffy, she IS the Slayer, but at the same time, a person is shaped by his or her experiences. This Buffy is not the same as the Buffy Spike originally fell in love with. That is not necessarily a bad thing, but it is a fact. His subconscious, dreaming self is probably confused and trying to make sense of the meshing of two different realities. Buffy meanwhile feels like she is competing with her own ghost. You can tell from her words that she is disgusted with her other self, and that even though she has done/experienced none of the things she has been told about, she still feels guilt over the actions of Other!Buffy. She also is at a loss to understand the pull that Spike feels to that broken version of her.

I love that Spike doesn't try to placate her, or talk his way out of it. He doesn't deny his past or his present. He wants to comfort her, but he also wants her to understand. In his mind, I think, the two Buffy's are one and the same, just different sides of the same coin. Spike loves with his whole heart, and that love covers both of them. 

The vengeance wish is certainly going to make things interesting... 

Author's Response on August 19, 2018 09:55am

Thank you for the very insightful review. What you said is exactly what I was trying to convey, so I'm glad it's what shone through.

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Micrindle23 commented on A Change Would Do You Good on August 02, 2018 10:04pm Liked

Its very cool, but way wiggy to think about 2009 being 9 years ago!

Author's Response on August 19, 2018 09:52am

I know, right? Thank you for the review.

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Micrindle23 commented on The other woman on August 02, 2018 09:53pm Liked

Oh- I didn't  see the bit with the vengeance demon the first time I read this. Makes much more sense now. Also didn't notice the time travel part, which is my favorite part, was just reading though these because I was reading all your work!

Author's Response on August 19, 2018 09:18am

Thank you very much. I'm glad it makes more sense now, and if you wait some, there will be more.

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vicdave99 commented on A Change Would Do You Good on August 02, 2018 06:04pm Liked

This I love. 

Author's Response on August 19, 2018 09:16am

Thank you.

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Spikelover88 commented on A Change Would Do You Good on August 02, 2018 04:52pm Liked

Great chapter can't wait till the next one 

Author's Response on August 19, 2018 09:16am

It might be a while. The ideas are there, the story is mapped out, but the muse is focused on other things. Thank you for the review.

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Joyce commented on The other woman on September 02, 2017 01:13pm Liked

Wow.

Author's Response on September 30, 2017 03:10pm

Thanks

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Cupcakes525 commented on The other woman on July 06, 2017 10:36pm Liked

Oh my goodness that was great! I can't wait to see wait happens. I feel so bad for Buffy. It has to be really confusing to feel jealous of oneself. 

Author's Response on September 30, 2017 03:10pm

Thank you, I know what you mean. There's a sequel idea bugging me lately, so maybe I'll post it someday.

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purrmonster commented on The other woman on June 23, 2017 09:23pm Liked

Oh, how sad! that she thinks that way, and poor Spike - how do you assure her?  WOW.  And, UH OH!  Wishes never turn out well.  eek.   She could end up hating him again half the time with the other Buffy being fused with her.   I hope for the best!  

Author's Response on September 30, 2017 03:03pm

It all depends on what version of Buffy gets merged in. If all things go as planned, I'll be exploring the ramifications soon.

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pfeifferpack commented on The other woman on June 23, 2017 06:57pm

I can see Buffy being jealous of herself like this. Poor Spike loves ANY version of her though. That granted wish is likely to really cause trouble for both of them.

Really unique take on time travel.

Kathleen

Author's Response on September 30, 2017 03:02pm

Thank you very much. I've got a sequel in the works. Shhh. :)

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pfeifferpack commented on The other woman on December 04, 2016 04:45am

Oooo I really loved this one!  It's true that we are who we are because of all we experience.  It might be nice to think of going back and stopping all the pain but we wouldn't be the same people (maybe not even as good or happy).  There are consequences and this points that out nicely.

Clever to not make it clear from the start that it's Buffy less all the trauma.

Stellar story.

Kathleen

Author's Response on May 20, 2017 06:28pm

Thank you very much Kathleen. It basically wrote itself one morning. I guess it had something to do with my thinking I wouldn't change anything in my past because I was afraid it would lead to me not meeting my wife.

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Convi commented on The other woman on April 08, 2016 09:19am Liked

Oh. Oh! I don't know what I was expecting but that wasn't it and I love it! 

Author's Response on April 15, 2016 03:42pm

Glad to hear it!

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djellibabe commented on The other woman on December 05, 2015 03:37am

I liked that. It certainly left me thinking!

Author's Response on April 15, 2016 03:41pm

Glad to hear it!

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ScarlettDuck commented on The other woman on September 25, 2015 04:20pm Liked

Ooh, heartbreaking and lovely. Nice misdirection in there, and I like the hopeful bit at the end.

Author's Response on April 15, 2016 03:41pm

Thank you very much.

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SoaringClaws commented on The other woman on September 22, 2015 06:05pm

Dang! That got really deep, really fast. I wondered why Spike's new girlfriend sounded so much like Buffy, so good job on the voice there. Love the complications from time travelling. I've always thought the same thing, that one of them going back to make things better would alter the other so much... 

Author's Response on April 15, 2016 03:40pm

The more someone goes back into the other's timeline, the bigger the changes, in my opinion. Anyway, glad you liked!

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Charlie Aome commented on The other woman on September 19, 2015 03:35am

Oh you devious devious man lol. Great job Hun. I kept going back and forth wondering which way it would turn. I enjoyed the ride.  Good job. 

Author's Response on April 15, 2016 03:38pm

Thank you.

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magnus374 commented on The other woman on September 14, 2015 03:07pm

This was done well. We got to see what happens after a time travel, when the changes are done. When the future is changed, so is the persons in it. Interesting to see Buffy being jelous of a different version of herself. They wouldn't be the same person, so the jelousy and complicated feelings do make sense.

Author's Response on April 15, 2016 03:37pm

Thank you, and I'm glad you liked my story and my premise.

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pfeifferpack commented on The other woman on September 14, 2015 03:01am Liked

Oh oh!  Wishes rarely work out well.  

It would be in character for Bufy to be jealous of herself LOL.  Poor Spike can't win can he?  Gets a Buffy who loves and accepts him only to have her pissed that he fell in love with a previous incarnation of herself.  SHe needs therapy in a major way LOL.

YAY a new story.  I like it a lot.

Kathleen

Author's Response on April 15, 2016 03:36pm

I agree, and I'm really glad you liked it.

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Sigyn commented on The other woman on September 14, 2015 02:27am

Odd. Distinctly odd, which equals original, and thus interesting. You've made me go "hm." So. Well done.

Author's Response on April 15, 2016 03:36pm

Thank you very much.

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