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sweetprincipale commented on Part II: Stamped With Love on August 19, 2019 07:06pm

Well this is off to a rollicking adventurous start. I am slightly confused on one thing. When did Spike get Slayer blood? was that supposed to have happened during the engagement spell?

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sweetprincipale commented on Part I: Invitation on August 19, 2019 06:40pm

 Quite the start. Dawn and Spike have a sweet yet realistic relationship here.

 

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Kittenshift17 commented on Part IV: Buffy's Secret on April 12, 2019 08:03am

Ooooh, that was hot hot hot hot hot! I loved it. Brilliant chapter.

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Kittenshift17 commented on Part III: Three Exits Back on April 12, 2019 07:51am

They're adorable together and I love them 

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Kittenshift17 commented on Part II: Stamped With Love on April 12, 2019 07:43am

I love it. The chaos that ensues whenever the Scoobies get an eyeful of Spuffy is hilarious.

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Kittenshift17 commented on Part I: Invitation on April 12, 2019 07:30am

Great opening chapter. Thanks for writing. 

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subchan commented on Epilogue: 'Twas the Night Before Christmas on November 07, 2018 05:18pm Liked

that was absolutely magical! I loved it! You did a fantastic job. The smut was hot. Spike was sweet. I laughed and teared up just a bit at the end. 

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ScarlettDuck commented on Epilogue: 'Twas the Night Before Christmas on February 13, 2018 01:22pm

A very cute fluffy holiday tale.

Could use some strict editing... Tenses skip back and forth between past and present, even within a paragraph sometimes, and sequences of events are a little sloppy in some places...

Like in one spot, Buffy is topless, then a bit later answers the door to Giles and others with no mention of getting dressed. One assumes she took care of that, but it's a little jarring to read.

In the chapter before this one, Spike's belt hits the floor, then he does something else, and then throws his belt to the floor. 

Just needs a little cleanup. But otherwise, very sweet fluff.

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ScarlettDuck commented on Part XII: Merry Christmas Buffy on February 13, 2018 01:11pm

Spike really takes care of her.

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ScarlettDuck commented on Part XI: Shining Star on February 13, 2018 12:57pm

Some lovely Christmas fluff here.

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ScarlettDuck commented on Part X: Cookie Dough and Chocolate Chips on February 12, 2018 01:12pm

 They are very sweet together.

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ScarlettDuck commented on Part IX: The Cure on February 10, 2018 05:25pm

Ooh, that was a bit of a twist.

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ScarlettDuck commented on Part VIII: Life Line on February 10, 2018 05:19pm

 Well, wonder where Drusilla is. Or maybe Angel could do.

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ScarlettDuck commented on Part VII: The Five Senses on February 10, 2018 05:08pm

Well that's a specific, and bad, poison.

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ScarlettDuck commented on Part VI: Anywhere But Here on February 10, 2018 04:51pm

Well yeah, that was probably not the best car to put the blood in.

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ScarlettDuck commented on Part V: All I Want Is You on February 10, 2018 04:19pm

Well, that was an unpleasant encounter.

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ScarlettDuck commented on Part IV: Buffy's Secret on February 10, 2018 03:53pm

Ok, Buffy got un-stupid for a moment. Can it last? 

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ScarlettDuck commented on Part III: Three Exits Back on February 10, 2018 03:42pm

Buffy is so mixed up.

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ScarlettDuck commented on Part II: Stamped With Love on February 09, 2018 03:45pm

Oh, Buffy. Lighten up a little.

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ScarlettDuck commented on Part I: Invitation on February 08, 2018 05:06pm

Buffy's a goner for sure.

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nmcil commented on Epilogue: 'Twas the Night Before Christmas on December 23, 2017 01:40am

Totally neat epilogue - very good way to end your Christmas story.

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nmcil commented on Part XI: Shining Star on December 23, 2017 12:28am

love the history of Spike's family life that you created - it rings like something that would be true for him.  Another wonderful chapter.  

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nmcil commented on Part X: Cookie Dough and Chocolate Chips on December 23, 2017 12:11am

beautiful chapter - wonderful re-working of the cookie dough idea - 

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nmcil commented on Part VIII: Life Line on December 22, 2017 09:18pm

great use of the Sire's Blood for cure premise - hopefully Angel might be a substitute.

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nmcil commented on Part V: All I Want Is You on December 22, 2017 08:40pm

Exciting ending - great chapter.

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nmcil commented on Part I: Invitation on December 21, 2017 11:32pm Liked

Be nice spending time reading your story - it's one of the Christmas stories I come back to I'm glad it's not a short work - gives me plenty to enjoy and it gave you a work longer enough to let your explore your characters and the story you wanted to write with plenty of page space. 

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Jhill commented on Epilogue: 'Twas the Night Before Christmas on November 04, 2017 02:35pm Liked

Aww, this was absolutely fluffy and I loved the adorable ending.

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Angelsheart1 commented on Epilogue: 'Twas the Night Before Christmas on October 29, 2017 04:06am

Sweet!

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MythMagykFae commented on Epilogue: 'Twas the Night Before Christmas on September 05, 2017 10:00pm

What a lovely story! I adore the ending, and that Santa is the one who put the letters in place. (:

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Synefred commented on Epilogue: 'Twas the Night Before Christmas on May 23, 2017 11:14pm Liked

OMG loved it! Such a sweet story! Thank you for posting!

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