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vicdave99 commented on Chapter 3 on September 24, 2018 10:34pm

Love thisheart

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Robyn commented on Chapter 3 on September 14, 2018 10:01am Liked

I really hope you decide to continue this story. I find the premise of Spike having full custody and Buffy seeing what Willow did with the spell very interesting. 

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vicdave99 commented on Chapter 3 on June 07, 2018 09:57am Liked

Love. heart

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acekoomboom commented on Chapter 3 on May 02, 2017 03:46pm

 Awwwwwwwww!!! squeeThat is just the cutest thing ever!! You should see how he gets when I call him dad, them helping her through a night terror, Buffy pretending that she never thought yum things about Spike. I so badly want to know where this story is going to go, I love it so much. It makes me feel so many emotions in my heart, and I have the biggest smile ever the whole time I'm reading this story. It is so good!

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acekoomboom commented on Chapter 2 on May 02, 2017 03:29pm

hearts Love, love, love this. Swoon.

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momnesia commented on Chapter 3 on December 23, 2016 09:20am Liked

I re-read this again today. . . . .wish there were more.       I can see so many possible directions for this story!     I truly hope that you will add to it sometime soon.    Thank you for sharing your talent with the rest of us.

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lilypel commented on Chapter 3 on October 16, 2015 03:35am

💙💙💙💜💜💜💙💙💙

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lilypel commented on Chapter 2 on October 16, 2015 03:31am

I can totally tell who the dialogue belongs to.  Quite obvious to me :)  I'm loving this so far!!!

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freakykitten commented on Chapter 3 on April 21, 2015 09:46pm

More please

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lambean commented on Chapter 3 on April 13, 2015 11:08am Liked

I like this slightly less damaged Buffy, how she is welcoming feeling instead of wanting numbness

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lambean commented on Chapter 2 on April 13, 2015 10:56am

Love that she is ok with Spike being Dawns guardian

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lambean commented on Chapter 1 on April 13, 2015 10:49am Liked

So great. I'm excited to read more

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madspuffyfan commented on Chapter 3 on April 12, 2015 03:54pm Liked

Loved it

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zanthinegirl commented on Chapter 3 on April 12, 2015 03:10am Liked

This is really an interesting take. Enjoying it muchly! It does sound like at least Buffy, Spike, and Dawn will be a little bit healthier, though I'm guessing not the scoobies.

Looking forward to more!

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Amayuscula commented on Chapter 3 on April 11, 2015 01:31pm Liked

Applause

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magnus374 commented on Chapter 3 on April 11, 2015 09:20am

This Buffy is more open, and not so closed of. She's damaged by being brought back, but  a healthier healing seems possible.

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MsXGingerXNinja commented on Chapter 3 on April 11, 2015 09:15am Liked

d84;a039;  Love it Thanks to your next chapter Much Love Always Lilly 😘 xxxx

 

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fyreburned commented on Chapter 3 on April 11, 2015 08:14am Liked

Yum is right! And the story is turning out pretty yummy too! 

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acekoomboom commented on Chapter 1 on February 14, 2015 11:21pm

 Aw, well don't be all insecure, it was really good. Big Grin

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GinaBones commented on Chapter 1 on February 14, 2015 07:28pm

Really liking this so far.  And your writing is just fine.  I can follow the conversation well and can tell who is saying what.  Can't wait for more! Applause

I would have loved to have seen Angel's reaction to Spike getting custody of Dawn!!! LOL

Author's Response on February 16, 2015 08:23pm

You know...  I hadn't put much thought into getting Angel involved.  Maybe he doesn't know about Dawn's custody yet?  You've given me ideas...  Thanks for your review!

GinaBones Replied on March 02, 2015 02:20pm

"You know...  I hadn't put much thought into getting Angel involved.  Maybe he doesn't know about Dawn's custody yet?  You've given me ideas...  Thanks for your review!"

Glad to have given you some ideas, and you're welcome! Cheers 

 

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duke6665 commented on Chapter 2 on February 14, 2015 01:55am Liked

i really am loving this so far. hope to read more :) 

Author's Response on February 14, 2015 05:04pm

Thank you!!!

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acekoomboom commented on Chapter 2 on February 13, 2015 10:49pm

 "Is the dialogue confusing?" No, I do not think that it is at all. I have been liking it, actually.

 "Can you tell who is saying what?" Yes, yes I can. Nice work! If I could give you a gold star through here, I so would. But here is what I can give: flowers! Flowers

 "Is everyone else as nitpicky about their own stuff as I am?" No... but that is most likely a bad thing. My stuff would probably be better if I was more nit- picky, but I at least like to think that it is good with out it.

 You are so welcome for reading! I am really liking this story, I always love when Spike takes care of Dawn. Here are some reasons why. 1.)It is a way to Spuffy( yes, I know that one is superficial, but it is cute if you use the correct tone, lol)! 2.)It can really open up a lot of story lines. 3.)It makes Buffy and others see Spike as a person, too. 4.)Sometimes Tara playes Mom, because even though Buffy is now with "dad," she is still her sister. Tara mom and Spike dad? Perfection! 5.)The scoobies hate it! 6.)Giles. That is the only word you need in regard to my liking Spike raising Dawn. "Giles." Red faced, 'good Lord's and all. 7.)Interesting in any Spike and Buffy catagory, a.k.a. cannon, AU, different seasons and episode rewrites, human, anything.

 Anyway, love it! Keep up the good work, and good luck with all of you futur endovers!

Author's Response on February 14, 2015 05:04pm

You totally made my day!  Thank you for the flowers!!  Squee

acekoomboom Replied on February 28, 2017 04:02am

*blush* you are welcome.

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magnus374 commented on Chapter 2 on February 13, 2015 03:52pm

I like Spike living with Dawn, and now Buffy is here. She seems to realize who brought her back. It will be interesting to see how this will go.

I have no trouble with seeing who says what.

Author's Response on February 14, 2015 05:06pm

Should be a strange dynamic, I think.  We'll see!  Thanks for reviewing!

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Amayuscula commented on Chapter 2 on February 13, 2015 12:38pm Liked

Applause

Author's Response on February 14, 2015 05:05pm

So sweet!  You gave me a big smile.  Big Grin

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diebirchen commented on Chapter 2 on February 13, 2015 02:04am

You need a diction/wording beta.  For example, "The smell of decay clung to her clothes" is correct wording.  It's the smell of deay that clings, not the clothes.

Author's Response on February 13, 2015 01:38am

You're right, I totally missed that. I had a friend look it over, but she missed it, too.

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fyreburned commented on Chapter 2 on February 12, 2015 10:12pm Liked

Great! Great beginnings! Please continue! I had no problem following the conversation, or who was speaking, when they switched.

Author's Response on February 13, 2015 01:39am

Thanks!!!  I guess the dialogue thing was just my paranoia.  Glad you liked it!

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madspuffyfan commented on Chapter 2 on February 12, 2015 06:20pm Liked

Loved it

The dialogue is fine & easy 2 follow. If it wasn't we would tell u. Can u make the chapters a bit longer?

Author's Response on February 13, 2015 01:42am

I am working at making my chapters longer, but for some reason they keep winding up right around 1100 words.  Maybe I'll just wait to post until I have two chapters...  Thanks for reviewing!  Glad you're enjoying it.

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stuffandnonsense commented on Chapter 2 on February 12, 2015 06:00pm Liked

Dialogue is not confusing - very clear who's saying what.

Author's Response on February 13, 2015 01:43am

Thanks! I'm definitely paranoid.  ;)

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Sexiespikelover commented on Chapter 1 on February 06, 2015 11:33pm Liked

Yes, please!!!! Please continue!!!!!!! 

Author's Response on February 07, 2015 12:41pm

I definitely will!  I can't believe the responses, I thought this was a one off that no one would read.  Thanks so much for reviewing!!

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MsXGingerXNinja commented on Chapter 1 on February 06, 2015 09:57pm Liked

Please xx

Author's Response on February 07, 2015 12:42pm

Will do!  Thanks for reviewing!

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