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pfeifferpack commented on Chapter 4 on August 13, 2016 02:07am Liked

I wonder what sentient life there might be in this dimension?  How did the portal open?  So many unanswered questions.  

Nice beginning of world building here.  Well done.

Kathleen

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pfeifferpack commented on Day Two on August 13, 2016 02:02am Liked

The way to a Slayer's heart is clearly through her stomach LOL.

Kathleen

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pfeifferpack commented on Day One on August 13, 2016 01:56am Liked

Interesting that Spike was asleep.  Wonder what he was dreaming?

Kathleen

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pfeifferpack commented on Prologue on August 13, 2016 01:51am Liked

OH I love a good portal story.  Hoping this will soon get your muse back to wanting to finish it!

Kathleen

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Blue Eyes2 commented on Chapter 4 on January 12, 2015 09:53pm

Never show weakness.  I feel bad for the kill though especially the traumatized one that froze.  

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magnus374 commented on Chapter 4 on January 12, 2015 03:37pm

I like that she hunted the animals, and enjoyed doing it.

Author's Response on January 12, 2015 05:52pm

Thanks!

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All4Spike commented on Chapter 4 on January 12, 2015 01:41pm Liked

And we have the beginnings of willing co-operation, if not trust. Squee

 

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AGriffinWriter commented on Chapter 4 on January 11, 2015 09:26pm

Super cute - their playful banter and word-play and Spike's innuendos, haha. And that poor alien deer-thingies didn't stand a chance.

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cathainsheart commented on Chapter 4 on January 11, 2015 06:44pm

good more please

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AGriffinWriter commented on Day Two on January 06, 2015 03:17am

I chuckled at 'that was almost logical.' Spike's got more brains than most of the Scoobies give him credit for - granted, he doesn't always use it, but you definitely make a good point about his instincts and stuff helping him last over a hundred years.

Ha! Food charms the Slayer! I guess they could also roast the giant pig-thingy.

Author's Response on January 06, 2015 10:31am

I'm glad you're enjoying it! ^^

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AGriffinWriter commented on Day One on January 06, 2015 03:12am

He he he he cactus demons! That earned a laugh from me.

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AGriffinWriter commented on Prologue on January 06, 2015 03:08am

Oh, a nice hook of a prologue to draw us in. I shall happily read on.

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magnus374 commented on Day Two on January 05, 2015 01:55pm

And now they willvwork together, nice.

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cindylou commented on Prologue on January 05, 2015 11:38am

Flowers

 

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All4Spike commented on Day Two on January 05, 2015 11:19am Liked

Yay! Spike to the rescue!  Applause

 

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Blue Eyes2 commented on Day Two on January 05, 2015 10:44am Liked

I always thought food was a way to a man's stomach.  I am so glad a truce has begun. 

Author's Response on January 05, 2015 09:05am

Haha, but I think we've seen on the show how much Buffy loves her food ;)

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nojiri23 commented on Day Two on January 05, 2015 04:22am Liked

Big Grin

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nepalichik commented on Prologue on January 04, 2015 10:07pm Liked

Really intrigued with this story and where it could go.  Love B's internal dialogue about Spike.  

Author's Response on January 04, 2015 11:23pm

I'm glad you're enjoying it so far, and thanks for the feedback!

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All4Spike commented on Day One on January 03, 2015 08:21pm Liked

Silly, Buffy. You should have woken Spike and negotiated another truce until you could get home. Wonder what Spike's doing.....

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All4Spike commented on Prologue on January 03, 2015 08:09pm Liked

Ooh, that's new! Fascinating! Must go to next chapter.............

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nojiri23 commented on Day One on January 03, 2015 05:02pm Liked

Read

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magnus374 commented on Day One on January 03, 2015 08:08am

She did think her situation through in a good way.

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Wonder and Ashes commented on Day One on January 03, 2015 06:28am

Still very intriguing. Hopefully Spike will wake up and catch up to her...

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Blue Eyes2 commented on Day One on January 03, 2015 03:25am

I can't believe she just left Spike there sleeping.  It just seems wrong.  

Author's Response on January 03, 2015 10:46pm

I'm sorry it didn't feel in character for you! To me, it made the most sense with where Buffy was in relation to Spike (she kind of helped him in 3x8 and hasn't seen him since, but she's having trust issues because of Angel).

Blue Eyes2 Replied on January 09, 2015 11:46pm

Im sorry, I didn't explain myself well.  Character wise, I agree you were spot on.  I'm saying in the my Spuffy loving mind it was wrong of her.  I mean what if something like a giant sand worm ate him while he was asleep, unaware. But yes, out of the two possibility Buffy would consider staking him or leaving him you chose well.

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cindylou commented on Prologue on January 02, 2015 09:22pm Liked

Big Grin

 

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victoria2 commented on Prologue on January 02, 2015 06:14pm Liked

OOOh...I can tell....this one's gonna be good!  More please?

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Blue Eyes2 commented on Prologue on January 02, 2015 05:06pm

I'm curious as to who did this and why.  Spike being there and having saved her life already although temporarily is a great start to a truce situation I'm sure.

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nojiri23 commented on Prologue on January 02, 2015 11:23am Liked

Oooh, that was a nasty cliffhanger!  Great beginning....   Read

Author's Response on January 02, 2015 11:29am

Thank you, I'm glad you liked it!

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TieDyeJackson commented on Prologue on January 02, 2015 10:45am Liked

I thought this was a fluffy one-shot when I saw it in my email. Plus reading it first thing in the morning while tired had me literally saying WTF repeatedly ... update soon, the situation as a whole makes me need it now.

Author's Response on January 02, 2015 11:28am

Aww, I'm sorry! I'll update as soon as possible.

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bridgetha commented on Prologue on January 01, 2015 11:02pm

Very interesting. Please update soon and often.

Author's Response on January 01, 2015 09:16pm

I'll do my best!

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