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Jtsplash commented on Part III: String Theory - Epilogue on July 24, 2020 03:12pm Liked

OMG! All finished, cried at the end! Loved dawn! Loved Spuffy! This was an amazing story! I have no other words - I could not put it down!

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Jtsplash commented on Part III: String Theory - Prologue on July 22, 2020 03:10pm Liked

Omg. I haven’t been able to put this down. Not usually a fan of stories where people go back in time to “fix it” but this is just so good. And I’m gutted to be at part III. Heartbroken for the Buffy and spike in the original future and loving the little drops of sludgy so far! Just perfect!

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crazycanuck44 commented on Part III: String Theory - Epilogue on July 01, 2020 04:23pm Liked

Wow! What an absolute epic.  I can't believe I'd missed reading this one before now.  This was wonderfully plotted and your characters all showed believable growth while staying true to their voices from the show.  Thank you so much for writing this, it was a treat to read.

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goldseadragon commented on Part III: String Theory - Epilogue on April 05, 2020 11:19pm

Love this story so much! Thank you.

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JANAB commented on Part III: String Theory - Epilogue on November 23, 2019 12:52pm

cheersheart

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Sublimewish commented on Part I: (Non)Compossibility - Prologue on September 21, 2019 10:51pm

Impressive characterization and good build up to the end.  Great story!

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aleyhastone commented on Part III: String Theory - Epilogue on September 02, 2019 09:47am

I honestly don't have words for how impressive this fic is. Thank you for writing it. 💜

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Saranac commented on Part II: The Butterfly Effect - Chapter 10 on July 31, 2019 10:26pm

In the comics Dawns keyness was explored and she did eventually master the ability to travel through dimensions at will. There was actually a pretty heated fight between buffy and spike over dawns safety and future when she started using the ability, very reminiscent to the anger buffy and spike showed in season 7s Get It Done. 

 

Loving this 👍

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ScarlettDuck commented on Part III: String Theory - Epilogue on July 20, 2019 06:50pm

This was really well crafted. Brilliant plotting, and the characterizations are incredibly well done.

For ease of reading for a very literal reader like me, a very picky beta to go over this would be good. Some simple typos and mixed up homonyms (faze/phase, stationery/stationary, mac/mack, chic/chick, etc) in there that are little jarring. Still, the writing is pretty incredible, so that is minor nitpicky stuff.

Great work. Hope to see more Spike stories from you! 

Author's Response on January 18, 2020 11:04pm

Not often on this site these days, but I stopped in today and just wanted to thank you. I think you reviewed every chapter, which is so unusual for a fully complete fiction. Loved seeing your reactions. Yes, a lot of typos and places my fingers disobeyed my brain, and my brain auto corrected when I was editing. It's driving me nuts as I'm rereading it myself. But it's so much work to go back and edit already published chapters...

Author's Response on January 18, 2020 11:04pm

Not often on this site these days, but I stopped in today and just wanted to thank you. I think you reviewed every chapter, which is so unusual for a fully complete fiction. Loved seeing your reactions. Yes, a lot of typos and places my fingers disobeyed my brain, and my brain auto corrected when I was editing. It's driving me nuts as I'm rereading it myself. But it's so much work to go back and edit already published chapters...

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ScarlettDuck commented on Part III: String Theory - Chapter 29 on July 20, 2019 06:00pm

Always liked Spike and Dawn's relationship. This is really nice.

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ScarlettDuck commented on Part III: String Theory - Chapter 28 on July 20, 2019 03:53pm

I love Bruce. Also love that Buffy saw newly souled and miserable Spike.

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ScarlettDuck commented on Part III: String Theory - Chapter 27 on July 20, 2019 03:21pm

 Love their attitudes in fight.

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ScarlettDuck commented on Part III: String Theory - Chapter 26 on July 20, 2019 02:57am

Ugh, gutting with all the suspense.

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ScarlettDuck commented on Part III: String Theory - Chapter 25 on July 20, 2019 02:29am

Well, the scary stuff starts.

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ScarlettDuck commented on Part III: String Theory - Chapter 24 on July 20, 2019 01:53am

Angel can be such an ass.

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ScarlettDuck commented on Part III: String Theory - Chapter 23 on July 20, 2019 01:21am

Looks like Buffy got a lot smarter.

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ScarlettDuck commented on Part III: String Theory - Chapter 22 on July 20, 2019 12:49am

Oh, Buffy, can you be any more insensitive? 

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ScarlettDuck commented on Part III: String Theory - Chapter 21 on July 20, 2019 12:24am

I mean, I.understand waiting for orgasms, but kissing can be nice and just mean affection, which they already share. Waiting for smooching seems a bit priggish.

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ScarlettDuck commented on Part III: String Theory - Chapter 20 on July 19, 2019 09:32pm

Yeah, this is a good direction.

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ScarlettDuck commented on Part III: String Theory - Chapter 19 on July 19, 2019 08:10pm

Wow. Hope Buffy has a vibrator because she's about to explode.

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ScarlettDuck commented on Part III: String Theory - Chapter 18 on July 19, 2019 07:43pm

The progress is great. Good to see some stubborn characters learn.

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ScarlettDuck commented on Part III: String Theory - Chapter 17 on July 19, 2019 06:29pm

Good progress, Buffy. Keep it up.

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ScarlettDuck commented on Part III: String Theory - Chapter 16 on July 19, 2019 06:01pm

Good for Buffy. Facing this stuff is so hard for her.

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ScarlettDuck commented on Part III: String Theory - Chapter 15 on July 19, 2019 05:37pm

Well, the Troika can be trouble, but hopefully getting involved my set them on the right path.

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ScarlettDuck commented on Part III: String Theory - Chapter 14 on July 19, 2019 05:13pm

Oh, this is Spike at his best. Angel is a prat. Hope Buffy really gets this.

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ScarlettDuck commented on Part III: String Theory - Chapter 13 on July 19, 2019 04:50pm

Ugh, so glad Buffy is giving him a chance.

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ScarlettDuck commented on Part III: String Theory - Chapter 12 on July 19, 2019 04:21pm

Oh, god. Poor Dawn. There was no right thing for her to do.

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ScarlettDuck commented on Part III: String Theory - Chapter 11 on July 19, 2019 04:19pm

Yeah, hard to believe Dawn forgot the date....

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ScarlettDuck commented on Part III: String Theory - Chapter 10 on July 19, 2019 03:52pm

Nice to see this Buffy not being such an irredeemable ass to Spike.

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ScarlettDuck commented on Part III: String Theory - Chapter 9 on July 19, 2019 03:24pm

Spike is a smarty. Hope Buffy smartens up.

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