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All4Spike commented on Part III: String Theory - Epilogue on March 04, 2021 07:04am

I've spent the last few days thoroughly enjoying a re-read of this magnificent epic.

Fell in love with it all over again...

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Miral commented on Part III: String Theory - Epilogue on February 25, 2021 05:08pm

Thank you. This has been an amazing ride. 

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Tuius commented on Part III: String Theory - Epilogue on February 23, 2021 02:20am Liked

This was really good. Thank you for sharing it. 

 

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EvieConn commented on Part II: The Butterfly Effect - Chapter 2 on February 21, 2021 03:33pm Liked

Oooooooo clever!!!! Didn’t see it coming and love it! Hooked, late to the party but I’m hooked xx

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PRationality commented on Part III: String Theory - Epilogue on January 28, 2021 11:47pm Liked

 Quite enjoyable - I always love Spike & Dawn friendships or Spike & Joyce moments, so I was happy it was here. I'm glad that for Dawn the important thing was that the people she loved did not become these cold hard things so distant. For OG Dawn Willow, Giles, Anya and Xander (plus Spike and Tara) they were her family as much as Buffy. So I get why she went back. And boy howdy making her the twin instead of a younger bratty sister was a great move!

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PuellaPulchra commented on Part III: String Theory - Epilogue on December 06, 2020 01:39pm

Like to think he goes and get's his soul anyway. Stories where he doesn't are fine but I prefer it when he does. 

This story was epic. I especially like the parts that deal with the Spike&Dawn friendship.  

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PuellaPulchra commented on Part II: The Butterfly Effect - Chapter 9 on December 04, 2020 07:09pm

Best friend! SPIKE CALLED DAWN HIS BEST FRIEND! YES! I LOVE THIS SO MUCH!

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PuellaPulchra commented on Part I: (Non)Compossibility - Chapter 18 on December 04, 2020 09:37am

Aww! Spike calming down as he realizes that Dawn is sad and then comforting her is the BEST THING EVER! 

 

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PuellaPulchra commented on Part I: (Non)Compossibility - Chapter 11 on December 04, 2020 12:55am

SPIKE AND DAWN'S RELATIONSHIP IS AMAZING! 

I also love how Spike is slowly but surely (and at this point almost completely) warmed up to Dawn.

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PuellaPulchra commented on Part I: (Non)Compossibility - Chapter 4 on December 03, 2020 10:36pm

"And believed without a doubt that he (or some version of him) cared for her.

"For some reason it was very important to him to keep her feeling that way"

YES! I LOVE THIS! HE'S STARTING TO CARE FOR DAWN! I LOVE THIS SO MUCH!

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Jtsplash commented on Part III: String Theory - Epilogue on July 24, 2020 03:12pm Liked

OMG! All finished, cried at the end! Loved dawn! Loved Spuffy! This was an amazing story! I have no other words - I could not put it down!

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Jtsplash commented on Part III: String Theory - Prologue on July 22, 2020 03:10pm Liked

Omg. I haven’t been able to put this down. Not usually a fan of stories where people go back in time to “fix it” but this is just so good. And I’m gutted to be at part III. Heartbroken for the Buffy and spike in the original future and loving the little drops of sludgy so far! Just perfect!

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crazycanuck44 commented on Part III: String Theory - Epilogue on July 01, 2020 04:23pm Liked

Wow! What an absolute epic.  I can't believe I'd missed reading this one before now.  This was wonderfully plotted and your characters all showed believable growth while staying true to their voices from the show.  Thank you so much for writing this, it was a treat to read.

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goldseadragon commented on Part III: String Theory - Epilogue on April 05, 2020 11:19pm

Love this story so much! Thank you.

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JANAB commented on Part III: String Theory - Epilogue on November 23, 2019 12:52pm

cheersheart

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Sublimewish commented on Part I: (Non)Compossibility - Prologue on September 21, 2019 10:51pm

Impressive characterization and good build up to the end.  Great story!

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aleyhastone commented on Part III: String Theory - Epilogue on September 02, 2019 09:47am

I honestly don't have words for how impressive this fic is. Thank you for writing it. 💜

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Saranac commented on Part II: The Butterfly Effect - Chapter 10 on July 31, 2019 10:26pm

In the comics Dawns keyness was explored and she did eventually master the ability to travel through dimensions at will. There was actually a pretty heated fight between buffy and spike over dawns safety and future when she started using the ability, very reminiscent to the anger buffy and spike showed in season 7s Get It Done. 

 

Loving this 👍

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ScarlettDuck commented on Part III: String Theory - Epilogue on July 20, 2019 06:50pm

This was really well crafted. Brilliant plotting, and the characterizations are incredibly well done.

For ease of reading for a very literal reader like me, a very picky beta to go over this would be good. Some simple typos and mixed up homonyms (faze/phase, stationery/stationary, mac/mack, chic/chick, etc) in there that are little jarring. Still, the writing is pretty incredible, so that is minor nitpicky stuff.

Great work. Hope to see more Spike stories from you! 

Author's Response on January 18, 2020 11:04pm

Not often on this site these days, but I stopped in today and just wanted to thank you. I think you reviewed every chapter, which is so unusual for a fully complete fiction. Loved seeing your reactions. Yes, a lot of typos and places my fingers disobeyed my brain, and my brain auto corrected when I was editing. It's driving me nuts as I'm rereading it myself. But it's so much work to go back and edit already published chapters...

Author's Response on January 18, 2020 11:04pm

Not often on this site these days, but I stopped in today and just wanted to thank you. I think you reviewed every chapter, which is so unusual for a fully complete fiction. Loved seeing your reactions. Yes, a lot of typos and places my fingers disobeyed my brain, and my brain auto corrected when I was editing. It's driving me nuts as I'm rereading it myself. But it's so much work to go back and edit already published chapters...

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ScarlettDuck commented on Part III: String Theory - Chapter 29 on July 20, 2019 06:00pm

Always liked Spike and Dawn's relationship. This is really nice.

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ScarlettDuck commented on Part III: String Theory - Chapter 28 on July 20, 2019 03:53pm

I love Bruce. Also love that Buffy saw newly souled and miserable Spike.

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ScarlettDuck commented on Part III: String Theory - Chapter 27 on July 20, 2019 03:21pm

 Love their attitudes in fight.

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ScarlettDuck commented on Part III: String Theory - Chapter 26 on July 20, 2019 02:57am

Ugh, gutting with all the suspense.

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ScarlettDuck commented on Part III: String Theory - Chapter 25 on July 20, 2019 02:29am

Well, the scary stuff starts.

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ScarlettDuck commented on Part III: String Theory - Chapter 24 on July 20, 2019 01:53am

Angel can be such an ass.

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ScarlettDuck commented on Part III: String Theory - Chapter 23 on July 20, 2019 01:21am

Looks like Buffy got a lot smarter.

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ScarlettDuck commented on Part III: String Theory - Chapter 22 on July 20, 2019 12:49am

Oh, Buffy, can you be any more insensitive? 

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ScarlettDuck commented on Part III: String Theory - Chapter 21 on July 20, 2019 12:24am

I mean, I.understand waiting for orgasms, but kissing can be nice and just mean affection, which they already share. Waiting for smooching seems a bit priggish.

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ScarlettDuck commented on Part III: String Theory - Chapter 20 on July 19, 2019 09:32pm

Yeah, this is a good direction.

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ScarlettDuck commented on Part III: String Theory - Chapter 19 on July 19, 2019 08:10pm

Wow. Hope Buffy has a vibrator because she's about to explode.

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